Comments received on poems by Lorna
God\'s Mistake
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Lorna, I hope that I am not hear on earth to see it.
February 19th, 2018 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Lorna, I hope that I am not hear on earth to see it.
February 19th, 2018 01:06
God\'s Mistake
dusk arising said:
I really am a big fan of the \'less is more\' school of poetry and yours here today is a gem Lorna. Goes into my favs
February 18th, 2018 21:37
dusk arising said:
I really am a big fan of the \'less is more\' school of poetry and yours here today is a gem Lorna. Goes into my favs
February 18th, 2018 21:37
God\'s Mistake
Michael Edwards said:
I am so sorry to have to agree with you Lorna - sadly the evil in this world has been driven by man and his mistaken beliefs and ego - and I guess it will ever be thus. Great poem.
February 18th, 2018 10:43
Michael Edwards said:
I am so sorry to have to agree with you Lorna - sadly the evil in this world has been driven by man and his mistaken beliefs and ego - and I guess it will ever be thus. Great poem.
February 18th, 2018 10:43
God\'s Mistake
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
There is a lot of TRUTH in what you say . We are fortunate to live on Planet Earth which is the only LIVING PLANET in the Solar System ~ and possibly the MILKY WAY. Life on Earth is kept in EQUALIBRIUM by Natural Cycles ~ Powered by the SUN. Water Cycle ~ Nitrogen Cycle ~ Carbon Cycle ~ Oxygen cycle etc. The Flora & Fauna are part of these cycles and before the Industrial Revolution ~ Nature mined the CO2 content of the Atmosphere at 250ppm it is now 400ppm (and rising !) This has caused the ambient temperature to rise from 15 to 16C and sea level to rise by 6 inches due to melting of the ice caps etc and the oceans are polluted by PLASTIC to the detriment of Marine Life. The \"Vicious Little Virus with the Big Ego\" is only a minute fraction of \"Life on Earth\" but the damage He causes is a billion times more ! Not content to live as a \"BUSHMAN\" ~ in harmony with Nature ~ he morphed into \"HITECHMAN\" and is slowly killing Planet Earth and there is nowhere else for us to GO ! MAN has increased CO2 ~Ambient Temperature ~ Cut down Forests ~ Increased Desserts ~ Concreted over arable land ~ and reversibly polluted the ~ atmosphere ~ the hydrosphere and the biosphere ! If you have GREAT-GRANDCHILDREN ~ CRY FOR THEM NOW ~ because by 2100 most of Planet Earth will not be fit for the projected Human Population of 16 Billion ~ I rest my case ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 18th, 2018 08:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
There is a lot of TRUTH in what you say . We are fortunate to live on Planet Earth which is the only LIVING PLANET in the Solar System ~ and possibly the MILKY WAY. Life on Earth is kept in EQUALIBRIUM by Natural Cycles ~ Powered by the SUN. Water Cycle ~ Nitrogen Cycle ~ Carbon Cycle ~ Oxygen cycle etc. The Flora & Fauna are part of these cycles and before the Industrial Revolution ~ Nature mined the CO2 content of the Atmosphere at 250ppm it is now 400ppm (and rising !) This has caused the ambient temperature to rise from 15 to 16C and sea level to rise by 6 inches due to melting of the ice caps etc and the oceans are polluted by PLASTIC to the detriment of Marine Life. The \"Vicious Little Virus with the Big Ego\" is only a minute fraction of \"Life on Earth\" but the damage He causes is a billion times more ! Not content to live as a \"BUSHMAN\" ~ in harmony with Nature ~ he morphed into \"HITECHMAN\" and is slowly killing Planet Earth and there is nowhere else for us to GO ! MAN has increased CO2 ~Ambient Temperature ~ Cut down Forests ~ Increased Desserts ~ Concreted over arable land ~ and reversibly polluted the ~ atmosphere ~ the hydrosphere and the biosphere ! If you have GREAT-GRANDCHILDREN ~ CRY FOR THEM NOW ~ because by 2100 most of Planet Earth will not be fit for the projected Human Population of 16 Billion ~ I rest my case ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 18th, 2018 08:54
The Cold Moon (February)
Caring dove said:
i really love this! :-) and i love the moon x
February 18th, 2018 06:35
Caring dove said:
i really love this! :-) and i love the moon x
February 18th, 2018 06:35
Achtung Spitfire!
Caring dove said:
interesting how you have given a plane \'\' a red dress\'\' and you refer to the plane as \'\' she\'\' i love how you have referred to the plane.. as a strong and deadly woman lol
February 18th, 2018 06:23
Caring dove said:
interesting how you have given a plane \'\' a red dress\'\' and you refer to the plane as \'\' she\'\' i love how you have referred to the plane.. as a strong and deadly woman lol
February 18th, 2018 06:23
God\'s Mistake
Caring dove said:
god , if there is a god, he has nothing to do with the way human beings are .. unfortunately mankind is messed up .. i guess he wanted to create a nice world ... maybe he did but in the end , its the people who have ruined it with their big egos, their greed, false sense of superiority and evilness... i dont really have a belief in god but i guess he would want to have created a nice place of kindness . i don\'t know
February 18th, 2018 06:15
Caring dove said:
god , if there is a god, he has nothing to do with the way human beings are .. unfortunately mankind is messed up .. i guess he wanted to create a nice world ... maybe he did but in the end , its the people who have ruined it with their big egos, their greed, false sense of superiority and evilness... i dont really have a belief in god but i guess he would want to have created a nice place of kindness . i don\'t know
February 18th, 2018 06:15
God\'s Mistake
Caring dove said:
hi lorna .. a well expressed poem here...\'\' man is a viscious little virus \'\' wow, thats such a strong and powerful line.. you know i kind of agree with you there, mankind , humanity , there is so much evil in this world, and it never seems to go away ! great write lorna.. i feel sad that i have to live in a world full of so much hatred, evil and cruelty , its not right , never has been
February 18th, 2018 06:11
Caring dove said:
hi lorna .. a well expressed poem here...\'\' man is a viscious little virus \'\' wow, thats such a strong and powerful line.. you know i kind of agree with you there, mankind , humanity , there is so much evil in this world, and it never seems to go away ! great write lorna.. i feel sad that i have to live in a world full of so much hatred, evil and cruelty , its not right , never has been
February 18th, 2018 06:11
God\'s Mistake
orchidee said:
This is so Lorna, and not just when people are being nasty. I don\'t see it as a mistake, though I understand what you mean. It\'s all in God\'s plan of salvation, though we do not have infinite wisdom, as He does. Oh, and as I do too (well 99% of the time? lol).
February 18th, 2018 05:57
orchidee said:
This is so Lorna, and not just when people are being nasty. I don\'t see it as a mistake, though I understand what you mean. It\'s all in God\'s plan of salvation, though we do not have infinite wisdom, as He does. Oh, and as I do too (well 99% of the time? lol).
February 18th, 2018 05:57
Old Love - No Regrets (RK)
dusk arising said:
Really like the way you have ended this. Those lines in themselves are really magic.
February 17th, 2018 09:00
dusk arising said:
Really like the way you have ended this. Those lines in themselves are really magic.
February 17th, 2018 09:00
Self Torment - Specialite de la Maison
Laura🌻 said:
A great write, Lorna!
I can relate to what
you wrote! Wondering
and questioning myself...
...many years ago. No longer necessary...I’m glad to say! Enjoyed the read! Enjoy your day!
~Laura~
February 16th, 2018 08:04
Laura🌻 said:
A great write, Lorna!
I can relate to what
you wrote! Wondering
and questioning myself...
...many years ago. No longer necessary...I’m glad to say! Enjoyed the read! Enjoy your day!
~Laura~
February 16th, 2018 08:04
Self Torment - Specialite de la Maison
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Great poet Lorna!!
February 16th, 2018 06:57
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Great poet Lorna!!
February 16th, 2018 06:57
Self Torment - Specialite de la Maison
Lorna said:
It\'s not \"him\" - It\'s \"everyone\"! ha ha. I do try to laugh at myself - this is definitely regressive behavior! Should add that I was with the man I chose because it didn\'t matter to him what I did! Bridget Jones: I like you just the way you are!
February 16th, 2018 06:19
Lorna said:
It\'s not \"him\" - It\'s \"everyone\"! ha ha. I do try to laugh at myself - this is definitely regressive behavior! Should add that I was with the man I chose because it didn\'t matter to him what I did! Bridget Jones: I like you just the way you are!
February 16th, 2018 06:19
Self Torment - Specialite de la Maison
FredPeyer said:
Great poem Lorna. Just be yourself, judging from the way you write, you are one heck of a lady and don\'t need to worry about anything you do. If he does not like it....his loss!
February 16th, 2018 05:58
FredPeyer said:
Great poem Lorna. Just be yourself, judging from the way you write, you are one heck of a lady and don\'t need to worry about anything you do. If he does not like it....his loss!
February 16th, 2018 05:58
My Red Arrow
Caring dove said:
interesting lorna .. i love the idea of the red arrow soaring through the air
February 16th, 2018 03:19
Caring dove said:
interesting lorna .. i love the idea of the red arrow soaring through the air
February 16th, 2018 03:19
Just for You
FredPeyer said:
Your beautiful poem paints a very loving and tender picture and does say a lot between the lines. Well done!
February 15th, 2018 15:24
FredPeyer said:
Your beautiful poem paints a very loving and tender picture and does say a lot between the lines. Well done!
February 15th, 2018 15:24
Just for You
Laura🌻 said:
A meaningful and
beautiful write, Lorna!
Pure love and
tenderness!
~Laura~
February 15th, 2018 11:54
Laura🌻 said:
A meaningful and
beautiful write, Lorna!
Pure love and
tenderness!
~Laura~
February 15th, 2018 11:54
Just for You
Michael Edwards said:
Such a super poignant write - great work Lorna.
February 15th, 2018 11:28
Michael Edwards said:
Such a super poignant write - great work Lorna.
February 15th, 2018 11:28
Just for You
Fay Slimm. said:
Superb poetry here Lorna - must put this appealing few lines into my faves. - -- have never read better - first class writing.
February 15th, 2018 05:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Superb poetry here Lorna - must put this appealing few lines into my faves. - -- have never read better - first class writing.
February 15th, 2018 05:45
Just for You
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LORNA ~ I work with a lot of students with SPECIFIC NEEDS and it is very rewarding. My Maternal Grandfather was BLIND so i can empathise ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BROTHERLY HUGS ~ BRIAN @@@
February 15th, 2018 05:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LORNA ~ I work with a lot of students with SPECIFIC NEEDS and it is very rewarding. My Maternal Grandfather was BLIND so i can empathise ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BROTHERLY HUGS ~ BRIAN @@@
February 15th, 2018 05:44
My Red Arrow
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful illustration of Your LOVE for us All ! I love the Native American culture ~ love the picture \"CUPID pull back your BOW\" ................ ! I have written a POEM on the HAVSUPAI TRIBE who live 10 miles into The Grand Canyon but its publication coincided with that awful Helicopter tragedy so I will post it next week ~ OK Yours as always ~ Valentine HUGS ~ BRIAN @@@
February 14th, 2018 11:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful illustration of Your LOVE for us All ! I love the Native American culture ~ love the picture \"CUPID pull back your BOW\" ................ ! I have written a POEM on the HAVSUPAI TRIBE who live 10 miles into The Grand Canyon but its publication coincided with that awful Helicopter tragedy so I will post it next week ~ OK Yours as always ~ Valentine HUGS ~ BRIAN @@@
February 14th, 2018 11:27
My Red Arrow
Heather T said:
Let\'s hope our targets are worthy of full quivers! Love this little beauty.
February 14th, 2018 07:55
Heather T said:
Let\'s hope our targets are worthy of full quivers! Love this little beauty.
February 14th, 2018 07:55
My Red Arrow
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a fresh and vibrant approach to Valentine\'s Day dear Lorna - I love the punch of those final two lines.
February 14th, 2018 06:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a fresh and vibrant approach to Valentine\'s Day dear Lorna - I love the punch of those final two lines.
February 14th, 2018 06:23
No Way to Kiss a Country Man
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"If He kisses like Country ~ He is Country\" Thanks for sharin\' LORNA ! I love the Appalachians ~ the few remaining Ole Timers with their Blue Grass an\' banjo pickin\' etc. But be quick they are a dyin\' breed ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 13th, 2018 15:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"If He kisses like Country ~ He is Country\" Thanks for sharin\' LORNA ! I love the Appalachians ~ the few remaining Ole Timers with their Blue Grass an\' banjo pickin\' etc. But be quick they are a dyin\' breed ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 13th, 2018 15:34
Too Bad She Died - She Made Lovely Pickles
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Beautiful....nice to read!!
February 13th, 2018 12:19
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Beautiful....nice to read!!
February 13th, 2018 12:19
Too Bad She Died - She Made Lovely Pickles
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, those women were wonderfully strong in the most difficult of times.
February 13th, 2018 09:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, those women were wonderfully strong in the most difficult of times.
February 13th, 2018 09:05
Too Bad She Died - She Made Lovely Pickles
Lorna said:
Thank you Laura! This picture is just one I found to represent a real person.... she could do anything! Someone who had grown up in the Depression years. Glad it reminded you of your grandmother - their lives were probably harder but I still think better in many ways... that might just be romantic fancy though.
February 13th, 2018 07:18
Lorna said:
Thank you Laura! This picture is just one I found to represent a real person.... she could do anything! Someone who had grown up in the Depression years. Glad it reminded you of your grandmother - their lives were probably harder but I still think better in many ways... that might just be romantic fancy though.
February 13th, 2018 07:18
Too Bad She Died - She Made Lovely Pickles
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
What a woman! A sweet
write...and I love pickles!
Beautiful pic. She looks like
my great grandmother who
lived on a farm and taught
my mom to can fresh
tomatoes! This tradition
is still going on in our
family! Thank you for
sharing!
~Laura~
February 13th, 2018 07:07
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
What a woman! A sweet
write...and I love pickles!
Beautiful pic. She looks like
my great grandmother who
lived on a farm and taught
my mom to can fresh
tomatoes! This tradition
is still going on in our
family! Thank you for
sharing!
~Laura~
February 13th, 2018 07:07
There is Only Love
ron parrish aka wordman said:
nature is where the peace is,the fresh air,the beautiful sky displays,apple pie and love
February 12th, 2018 18:26
ron parrish aka wordman said:
nature is where the peace is,the fresh air,the beautiful sky displays,apple pie and love
February 12th, 2018 18:26
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