Comments received on poems by Lorna
The Worm Moon (March)
Michael Edwards said:
Great write Lorna and well conceived but sadly the poor old moon has as yet to warm the ground enough to encourage the worms to start their cycle . More like a Worm-in-Waiting moon Lol
March 1st, 2018 02:16
Michael Edwards said:
Great write Lorna and well conceived but sadly the poor old moon has as yet to warm the ground enough to encourage the worms to start their cycle . More like a Worm-in-Waiting moon Lol
March 1st, 2018 02:16
Dancing in the Kitchen With the Day
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, dancing in the kitchen can be so therapeutic, as is this poem.
March 1st, 2018 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, dancing in the kitchen can be so therapeutic, as is this poem.
March 1st, 2018 01:38
Dancing in the Kitchen With the Day
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna (the dancing queen),
You made “Whistle While You Work” so mundane! I like your version better...dancing while we cook! 👩🍳! Delicious! Keep dancing 💃🏻 my friend! I’m dancing off to make the next meal 🥘!
~Laura~
February 28th, 2018 11:26
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna (the dancing queen),
You made “Whistle While You Work” so mundane! I like your version better...dancing while we cook! 👩🍳! Delicious! Keep dancing 💃🏻 my friend! I’m dancing off to make the next meal 🥘!
~Laura~
February 28th, 2018 11:26
Dancing in the Kitchen With the Day
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LORNA ~ for such a HAPPY POEM ! The best Rhythm is always the \"Rhythm of Life\" Rhythmic hugs ~ BRIAN @@@@@@@ KEEP DANCING !
February 28th, 2018 06:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LORNA ~ for such a HAPPY POEM ! The best Rhythm is always the \"Rhythm of Life\" Rhythmic hugs ~ BRIAN @@@@@@@ KEEP DANCING !
February 28th, 2018 06:00
Dancing in the Kitchen With the Day
Michael Edwards said:
And burn the toast al presto - great fun write.
February 28th, 2018 05:09
Michael Edwards said:
And burn the toast al presto - great fun write.
February 28th, 2018 05:09
Still I Am Walking
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Lorna - thank you.
February 28th, 2018 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Lorna - thank you.
February 28th, 2018 01:48
Still I Am Walking
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
This is one of the best writings I’ve read! Absolutely Profound my dear lady! Kudos!
~Laura~
February 27th, 2018 22:06
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
This is one of the best writings I’ve read! Absolutely Profound my dear lady! Kudos!
~Laura~
February 27th, 2018 22:06
Still I Am Walking
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic... Forever walking. Thank you
February 27th, 2018 12:41
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic... Forever walking. Thank you
February 27th, 2018 12:41
Still I Am Walking
orchidee said:
You won\'t be walking if you fall off that cliff in the pic! A good write Lorna.
February 27th, 2018 06:23
orchidee said:
You won\'t be walking if you fall off that cliff in the pic! A good write Lorna.
February 27th, 2018 06:23
Still I Am Walking
Michael Edwards said:
Bravo - what a super piece of work and such a great message(s) - you write some exceptional pieces Lorna.
February 27th, 2018 06:04
Michael Edwards said:
Bravo - what a super piece of work and such a great message(s) - you write some exceptional pieces Lorna.
February 27th, 2018 06:04
In Defense of the Realm
dusk arising said:
Biding ones time until the feeling is right..... some people would call it \'romancing an idea\' ..... others \'once bitten, twice shy\'.
I\'d call it succinct and very good.
February 26th, 2018 15:31
dusk arising said:
Biding ones time until the feeling is right..... some people would call it \'romancing an idea\' ..... others \'once bitten, twice shy\'.
I\'d call it succinct and very good.
February 26th, 2018 15:31
In Defense of the Realm
Fay Slimm. said:
A stunning verse of mysterious allure dear Lorna. - first class writing.
February 26th, 2018 12:46
Fay Slimm. said:
A stunning verse of mysterious allure dear Lorna. - first class writing.
February 26th, 2018 12:46
In Defense of the Realm
myself and me said:
I am not sure the ramparts will keep us safe, but they sure keep others away. Wonderful piece to read.
February 26th, 2018 08:54
myself and me said:
I am not sure the ramparts will keep us safe, but they sure keep others away. Wonderful piece to read.
February 26th, 2018 08:54
In Defense of the Realm
Accidental Poet said:
Not easy trusting people these days Lorna, but I agree it\'s easier here at MPS. I think that\'s because here at MPS we\'re all poets with respect for each other. Great write Lorna.
February 26th, 2018 08:32
Accidental Poet said:
Not easy trusting people these days Lorna, but I agree it\'s easier here at MPS. I think that\'s because here at MPS we\'re all poets with respect for each other. Great write Lorna.
February 26th, 2018 08:32
In Defense of the Realm
Poetic25 said:
Nicely penned Lorna, so much said in such a short piece. Nice to let the \'drawbridge down\' and open up in when it feels comfortable
Michael :)
February 26th, 2018 05:40
Poetic25 said:
Nicely penned Lorna, so much said in such a short piece. Nice to let the \'drawbridge down\' and open up in when it feels comfortable
Michael :)
February 26th, 2018 05:40
In Defense of the Realm
FredPeyer said:
Lorna, this is a great poem. So many people are exactly like that and you expressed it very eloquently. A beautiful poem about the human condition, where each stanza could actually stand on its own, but as Michael said, are much better together.
February 26th, 2018 05:14
FredPeyer said:
Lorna, this is a great poem. So many people are exactly like that and you expressed it very eloquently. A beautiful poem about the human condition, where each stanza could actually stand on its own, but as Michael said, are much better together.
February 26th, 2018 05:14
In Defense of the Realm
Michael Edwards said:
Brilliant - even better with the second verse - this is a real gem - big thanks for posting it here.
February 26th, 2018 04:47
Michael Edwards said:
Brilliant - even better with the second verse - this is a real gem - big thanks for posting it here.
February 26th, 2018 04:47
The Renaissance Lover
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
A great read to tuck myself into bed with! I enjoyed the music and the visuals that went along with it! Have a good night!
~Laura~
February 25th, 2018 22:44
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
A great read to tuck myself into bed with! I enjoyed the music and the visuals that went along with it! Have a good night!
~Laura~
February 25th, 2018 22:44
The Renaissance Lover
dusk arising said:
Then carry us off to a far off land,
To accompanying strains of a ten piece band,
Ask not why we follow you still,
Tis the spirit inside and our steadfast will!
sorry i just had to join in with this jolly jaunt, i enjoyed it so much.
February 25th, 2018 11:47
dusk arising said:
Then carry us off to a far off land,
To accompanying strains of a ten piece band,
Ask not why we follow you still,
Tis the spirit inside and our steadfast will!
sorry i just had to join in with this jolly jaunt, i enjoyed it so much.
February 25th, 2018 11:47
The Renaissance Lover
Accidental Poet said:
Beautifully written with beautiful music to accompany it. Thanks for sharing Lorna.
February 25th, 2018 08:35
Accidental Poet said:
Beautifully written with beautiful music to accompany it. Thanks for sharing Lorna.
February 25th, 2018 08:35
The Renaissance Lover
Poetic25 said:
Lorna,
A lovely little piece, capturing your emotions. A wonderful tale
Michael :)
February 25th, 2018 07:39
Poetic25 said:
Lorna,
A lovely little piece, capturing your emotions. A wonderful tale
Michael :)
February 25th, 2018 07:39
The Renaissance Lover
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - loud applause for this melodious start to my Sunday morning along with sweet words of rhyming poetry - a finely wrought appeal accorded to a renaissance lover who yearns for his lady - - thanks for sharing both image and charming tune too Lorna
February 25th, 2018 05:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - loud applause for this melodious start to my Sunday morning along with sweet words of rhyming poetry - a finely wrought appeal accorded to a renaissance lover who yearns for his lady - - thanks for sharing both image and charming tune too Lorna
February 25th, 2018 05:15
The Renaissance Lover
Michael Edwards said:
A real beauty to lift us all on a Sunday - super work Lorna
February 25th, 2018 04:57
Michael Edwards said:
A real beauty to lift us all on a Sunday - super work Lorna
February 25th, 2018 04:57
The Renaissance Lover
FredPeyer said:
You and Kat are early risers, and I am staying up late. But before I turn in I just wanted to let you know how beautiful this poem is.
February 25th, 2018 04:38
FredPeyer said:
You and Kat are early risers, and I am staying up late. But before I turn in I just wanted to let you know how beautiful this poem is.
February 25th, 2018 04:38
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