Comments received on poems by Lorna



If They Dare!
Laura🌻 said:

This is a great one, Lorna!
I didn’t read the comment
before I read your verse!
I thought it was about you
or some other individual
buying some sort of blade
at a local store for protection!

Then I read your comments.
You certainly surprised me!
Anacondas!!! I can’t even
watch the movie ANACONDA!
Your brother is very brave!
More power to him!

~Laura~

March 4th, 2018 10:49

If They Dare!
Michael Edwards said:

And if you were my sister I\'d laugh with you as I\'m sure he would too - such a fun write.

March 4th, 2018 06:54

If They Dare!
Poetic25 said:

Lorna
I would forgive you if you were my sister haha, a lovely little poem with a touch of humour
Michael :)

March 4th, 2018 06:16

Phoenix from the Ashes
Goldfinch60 said:

I can understand exactly where you are coming from Lorna, my wife has dementia and it is progressing very swiftly.
You are so right that writing poetry does help a great deal.

March 4th, 2018 01:15

Phoenix from the Ashes
kevin browne said:

your writing has raised a lot of memories. I frequent my local hospital on a regular basis because I have chronic pancreatitis and I have met plenty of elderly people beside me who were suffering with altimeters disease and the story they used to tell me were truly inspirational. through the day they didn\'t appear so stressed but during the night they became really active and mischievous. I\'m sorry to read your situation though. my heart goes out to you.

March 3rd, 2018 08:56

Phoenix from the Ashes
Laura🌻 said:

Oh my dear Lorna...
This is a sad one! I can empathize with you! My aunt was afflicted with that debilitating disease! It’s horrible for the afflicted and for those of us that witness it and are helpless in the sense that we cannot make them better! We witness and suffer along with the afflicted! Seeing your mom and now your husband with the disease is a lot to bear! Stay strong my friend! Prayers and love are on your way!

~Laura~

P.S.-A great pic to illustrate your write!

March 3rd, 2018 07:53

Phoenix from the Ashes
Michael Edwards said:

My heart goes out to you Lorna - a dreadful problem - And a super write.

March 3rd, 2018 07:17

Phoenix from the Ashes
orchidee said:

A sensitive write Lorna. Of you or someone else?

March 3rd, 2018 06:11

Phoenix from the Ashes
Lorna said:

Oh Fay - isn\'t it sad...... it always hits me around 3 a.m............. thanks for your lovely comment as always - they are always so warm - I try to express myself in comments but \"dry up\" - maybe I should just write a poem in the comment box!

March 3rd, 2018 05:32

Phoenix from the Ashes
Fay Slimm. said:

Oh Lorna such heart-wrenching read of what can happen when health fails and you spell it out so well in this short but powerful verse.

March 3rd, 2018 05:24

Still I Am Walking
Leisa Niamh said:

Very heart warming.

March 3rd, 2018 05:24

The Last Honourable Man
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for this tribute to Robert Mueller ~ He is a CHRISTIAN and indeed an Honorable MAN ! TRUMP is not an Honorable Man and has much to fear from Men like Mueller ! Robert was Director of the FBI (2001 - 13) but Trump did not want to reappoint him in 2017. He now leads the Special Counsel Investigation of \"Russian Interference in the 2016 USA elections !\" He is in our PRAYERS ~ AMEN Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN

March 2nd, 2018 05:37

The Last Honourable Man
Michael Edwards said:

A great tribute Lorna

March 2nd, 2018 03:49

Dancing in the Kitchen With the Day
FredPeyer said:

What a wonderful poem! I wonder if anybody in the world ever wrote something about dancing in the kitchen! A delightful read, Lorna, very well done!

March 2nd, 2018 01:32

The Worm Moon (March)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks LORNA ~ In S E England we are still on Snow Alert ! The SNOW keeps the soil warm and insulated ~ but they are all staying under the sheets. Worms are cherished in the UK because they aerate and mix the SOIL and receive no fee ~ Thanks to MOTHER NATURE ~ AMEN ~ Spring Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@

March 1st, 2018 11:24

The Worm Moon (March)
FineB said:

Thank you Lorna,

An enchanting poem. I loved the picture too!

Super write.

Keep writing
FineB

March 1st, 2018 10:18

The Worm Moon (March)
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,
Those poor worms. They’re trying so hard to worm their way through the snow! They need some warmth! Nice pic to accentuate your enjoyable write!

~Laura~

March 1st, 2018 07:44

The Worm Moon (March)
orchidee said:

Good write Lorna. Aww we never got a full moon at all in UK in February. 28 days, and the last one was end of January. Maybe two full moons in March - not checked me diary yet though.

March 1st, 2018 03:05

The Worm Moon (March)
Lorna said:

We are starting to see a little progress here Michael! But I\'m sure winter isn\'t finished with us yet.... Song should read: \"I\'ll be looking for the worms, but I\'ll be seeing you!!!!\"

March 1st, 2018 02:20

The Worm Moon (March)
Michael Edwards said:

Great write Lorna and well conceived but sadly the poor old moon has as yet to warm the ground enough to encourage the worms to start their cycle . More like a Worm-in-Waiting moon Lol

March 1st, 2018 02:16

Dancing in the Kitchen With the Day
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write, dancing in the kitchen can be so therapeutic, as is this poem.

March 1st, 2018 01:38

Dancing in the Kitchen With the Day
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna (the dancing queen),
You made ā€œWhistle While You Workā€ so mundane! I like your version better...dancing while we cook! šŸ‘©ā€šŸ³! Delicious! Keep dancing šŸ’ƒšŸ» my friend! I’m dancing off to make the next meal 🄘!

~Laura~


February 28th, 2018 11:26

Dancing in the Kitchen With the Day
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks LORNA ~ for such a HAPPY POEM ! The best Rhythm is always the \"Rhythm of Life\" Rhythmic hugs ~ BRIAN @@@@@@@ KEEP DANCING !

February 28th, 2018 06:00

Dancing in the Kitchen With the Day
Michael Edwards said:

And burn the toast al presto - great fun write.

February 28th, 2018 05:09

Still I Am Walking
Goldfinch60 said:

What a wonderful write Lorna - thank you.

February 28th, 2018 01:48

Still I Am Walking
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,
This is one of the best writings I’ve read! Absolutely Profound my dear lady! Kudos!

~Laura~

February 27th, 2018 22:06

Still I Am Walking
HomelessCrippleTroll said:

:)

February 27th, 2018 17:09

Still I Am Walking
Poetic Dan said:

Fantastic... Forever walking. Thank you

February 27th, 2018 12:41

Still I Am Walking
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Great ....I am speechless.!

February 27th, 2018 10:02

Still I Am Walking
orchidee said:

You won\'t be walking if you fall off that cliff in the pic! A good write Lorna.

February 27th, 2018 06:23



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