Comments received on poems by Lorna
In Defense of the Realm
Poetic25 said:
Nicely penned Lorna, so much said in such a short piece. Nice to let the \'drawbridge down\' and open up in when it feels comfortable
Michael :)
February 26th, 2018 05:40
Poetic25 said:
Nicely penned Lorna, so much said in such a short piece. Nice to let the \'drawbridge down\' and open up in when it feels comfortable
Michael :)
February 26th, 2018 05:40
In Defense of the Realm
FredPeyer said:
Lorna, this is a great poem. So many people are exactly like that and you expressed it very eloquently. A beautiful poem about the human condition, where each stanza could actually stand on its own, but as Michael said, are much better together.
February 26th, 2018 05:14
FredPeyer said:
Lorna, this is a great poem. So many people are exactly like that and you expressed it very eloquently. A beautiful poem about the human condition, where each stanza could actually stand on its own, but as Michael said, are much better together.
February 26th, 2018 05:14
In Defense of the Realm
Michael Edwards said:
Brilliant - even better with the second verse - this is a real gem - big thanks for posting it here.
February 26th, 2018 04:47
Michael Edwards said:
Brilliant - even better with the second verse - this is a real gem - big thanks for posting it here.
February 26th, 2018 04:47
The Renaissance Lover
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
A great read to tuck myself into bed with! I enjoyed the music and the visuals that went along with it! Have a good night!
~Laura~
February 25th, 2018 22:44
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
A great read to tuck myself into bed with! I enjoyed the music and the visuals that went along with it! Have a good night!
~Laura~
February 25th, 2018 22:44
The Renaissance Lover
dusk arising said:
Then carry us off to a far off land,
To accompanying strains of a ten piece band,
Ask not why we follow you still,
Tis the spirit inside and our steadfast will!
sorry i just had to join in with this jolly jaunt, i enjoyed it so much.
February 25th, 2018 11:47
dusk arising said:
Then carry us off to a far off land,
To accompanying strains of a ten piece band,
Ask not why we follow you still,
Tis the spirit inside and our steadfast will!
sorry i just had to join in with this jolly jaunt, i enjoyed it so much.
February 25th, 2018 11:47
The Renaissance Lover
Poetic25 said:
Lorna,
A lovely little piece, capturing your emotions. A wonderful tale
Michael :)
February 25th, 2018 07:39
Poetic25 said:
Lorna,
A lovely little piece, capturing your emotions. A wonderful tale
Michael :)
February 25th, 2018 07:39
The Renaissance Lover
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - loud applause for this melodious start to my Sunday morning along with sweet words of rhyming poetry - a finely wrought appeal accorded to a renaissance lover who yearns for his lady - - thanks for sharing both image and charming tune too Lorna
February 25th, 2018 05:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - loud applause for this melodious start to my Sunday morning along with sweet words of rhyming poetry - a finely wrought appeal accorded to a renaissance lover who yearns for his lady - - thanks for sharing both image and charming tune too Lorna
February 25th, 2018 05:15
The Renaissance Lover
Michael Edwards said:
A real beauty to lift us all on a Sunday - super work Lorna
February 25th, 2018 04:57
Michael Edwards said:
A real beauty to lift us all on a Sunday - super work Lorna
February 25th, 2018 04:57
The Renaissance Lover
FredPeyer said:
You and Kat are early risers, and I am staying up late. But before I turn in I just wanted to let you know how beautiful this poem is.
February 25th, 2018 04:38
FredPeyer said:
You and Kat are early risers, and I am staying up late. But before I turn in I just wanted to let you know how beautiful this poem is.
February 25th, 2018 04:38
Having To Let You Go
dusk arising said:
Letting go of such small wonders as you list enables us to greet the beauty we encounter as we travel onward to who knows where. Loving the world around us and those here who we love today enrich our lives and build our loving personality. People along the way say goodbye to us too.
February 24th, 2018 15:18
dusk arising said:
Letting go of such small wonders as you list enables us to greet the beauty we encounter as we travel onward to who knows where. Loving the world around us and those here who we love today enrich our lives and build our loving personality. People along the way say goodbye to us too.
February 24th, 2018 15:18
Having To Let You Go
FredPeyer said:
Lorna, your poem is a gem. It is filled with gentleness, love, and regret. The emotions come through between the lines. It says, yes, we have to say goodbye, but we have the memories, we have experienced something beautiful, like that flower, that smile, that moon. Even though we will walk alone, the memories will be with us every step. Beautiful poem!
February 24th, 2018 14:06
FredPeyer said:
Lorna, your poem is a gem. It is filled with gentleness, love, and regret. The emotions come through between the lines. It says, yes, we have to say goodbye, but we have the memories, we have experienced something beautiful, like that flower, that smile, that moon. Even though we will walk alone, the memories will be with us every step. Beautiful poem!
February 24th, 2018 14:06
Having To Let You Go
Michael Edwards said:
That\'s a lovely work and so is your addition to Kat\'s Fusion poem - great work.
February 24th, 2018 07:15
Michael Edwards said:
That\'s a lovely work and so is your addition to Kat\'s Fusion poem - great work.
February 24th, 2018 07:15
Having To Let You Go
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Lorna.
Meanwhile - you mean me? You saying goodbye to me! I\'m not going. I\'ll stay for ever, but I\'ll sing for ever too! Can ya bear it?! You\'ll be wishing you had said goodbye to me! heehee.
February 24th, 2018 07:12
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Lorna.
Meanwhile - you mean me? You saying goodbye to me! I\'m not going. I\'ll stay for ever, but I\'ll sing for ever too! Can ya bear it?! You\'ll be wishing you had said goodbye to me! heehee.
February 24th, 2018 07:12
Having To Let You Go
Fay Slimm. said:
Filled with anguish of heart as loss gets nearer these words sink so deeply - - hoping this sad verse is not from experience Lorna
February 24th, 2018 05:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Filled with anguish of heart as loss gets nearer these words sink so deeply - - hoping this sad verse is not from experience Lorna
February 24th, 2018 05:48
Having To Let You Go
Wallace said:
Love the poem and love the drawing.
So mystical.
February 24th, 2018 05:44
Wallace said:
Love the poem and love the drawing.
So mystical.
February 24th, 2018 05:44
Having To Let You Go
Poetic25 said:
Lorna
just a beautiful piece about loss, with a subtle flow that threads a heart-felt message
much warmth
Michael :)
February 24th, 2018 05:29
Poetic25 said:
Lorna
just a beautiful piece about loss, with a subtle flow that threads a heart-felt message
much warmth
Michael :)
February 24th, 2018 05:29
Having To Let You Go
Laura🌻 said:
A sad but beautiful write, Lorna!
I am with her every day. I see the clock that tics and tocs. She says she’s ready, but I am not!
~Laura~
February 24th, 2018 04:57
Laura🌻 said:
A sad but beautiful write, Lorna!
I am with her every day. I see the clock that tics and tocs. She says she’s ready, but I am not!
~Laura~
February 24th, 2018 04:57
The Sailor\'s Farewell
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write with great imagery.
February 24th, 2018 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write with great imagery.
February 24th, 2018 01:22
The Sailor\'s Farewell
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
A beautiful nostalgic(for me)visual and write!
A bit sad, but also hopeful!
~Laura~
February 23rd, 2018 11:55
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
A beautiful nostalgic(for me)visual and write!
A bit sad, but also hopeful!
~Laura~
February 23rd, 2018 11:55
The Sailor\'s Farewell
Jamie said:
Very imageful (c. M.E.) indeed. Speaks of the sailor in all of us and the many voyages we must take. Thanks for sharing this, Lorna
February 23rd, 2018 11:03
Jamie said:
Very imageful (c. M.E.) indeed. Speaks of the sailor in all of us and the many voyages we must take. Thanks for sharing this, Lorna
February 23rd, 2018 11:03
The Sailor\'s Farewell
Michael Edwards said:
Very imageful (just invented that word (c) ) and a fine write Lorna
February 23rd, 2018 10:44
Michael Edwards said:
Very imageful (just invented that word (c) ) and a fine write Lorna
February 23rd, 2018 10:44
The Sailor\'s Farewell
Fay Slimm. said:
The art of leaving behind things of the past put so succinctly in this lovely verse - thank you for sharing both image and words with us Lorna.
February 23rd, 2018 07:32
Fay Slimm. said:
The art of leaving behind things of the past put so succinctly in this lovely verse - thank you for sharing both image and words with us Lorna.
February 23rd, 2018 07:32
The Sailor\'s Farewell
Lorna said:
Sadly that\'s true isn\'t it............
February 23rd, 2018 07:10
Lorna said:
Sadly that\'s true isn\'t it............
February 23rd, 2018 07:10
The Sailor\'s Farewell
Nicholas Browning said:
Strangely calming, as if it\'s saying that no matter what happens or where you go in life, you must move on.
Nice.
February 23rd, 2018 07:04
Nicholas Browning said:
Strangely calming, as if it\'s saying that no matter what happens or where you go in life, you must move on.
Nice.
February 23rd, 2018 07:04
Aye! That\'s Us Away!
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, I was sailing with you.
February 23rd, 2018 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, I was sailing with you.
February 23rd, 2018 01:34
Aye! That\'s Us Away!
Michael Edwards said:
Great write Lorna - the worst part of travel is always returning to reality.
February 22nd, 2018 09:10
Michael Edwards said:
Great write Lorna - the worst part of travel is always returning to reality.
February 22nd, 2018 09:10
Aye! That\'s Us Away!
Christina8 said:
That\'s a very good poem! Great imagination. Love the rhymes.
February 22nd, 2018 07:20
Christina8 said:
That\'s a very good poem! Great imagination. Love the rhymes.
February 22nd, 2018 07:20
Aye! That\'s Us Away!
orchidee said:
Aww, and then it was all over. Too soon?! Good write L.
February 22nd, 2018 06:54
orchidee said:
Aww, and then it was all over. Too soon?! Good write L.
February 22nd, 2018 06:54
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