Comments received on poems by Lorna
Aquarius Lost
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. I don\'t go along with \'The Age of.......\' thingys though!
Meanwhile - you don\'t want no Age of Aquarius. It will be torment, cos I shall sing the song of that title! \'Sing\' being the dreaded word! heehee.
March 9th, 2018 09:32
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. I don\'t go along with \'The Age of.......\' thingys though!
Meanwhile - you don\'t want no Age of Aquarius. It will be torment, cos I shall sing the song of that title! \'Sing\' being the dreaded word! heehee.
March 9th, 2018 09:32
Aquarius Lost
Lorna said:
Thanks Laura - but like Kurt\'s message today, it just make you feel so sad and helpless.........
March 9th, 2018 07:30
Lorna said:
Thanks Laura - but like Kurt\'s message today, it just make you feel so sad and helpless.........
March 9th, 2018 07:30
Aquarius Lost
Lauraš» said:
Wow, Lorna!
Spot on, my friend!
An awesome commentary delivered by your poem and by your āpoetās commentsā!
A Brilliant Write! That pic is precious!
~Laura~
March 9th, 2018 07:26
Lauraš» said:
Wow, Lorna!
Spot on, my friend!
An awesome commentary delivered by your poem and by your āpoetās commentsā!
A Brilliant Write! That pic is precious!
~Laura~
March 9th, 2018 07:26
The Sound of You
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
She speaks and the sound of her voice
Is so sweet the Birds hush their singing
And the voice I hear falling on my ear
Within my Heart is ringing ...........
Love the sentiment in your Poem Lorna and it mirrors what I feel when I hear Angela\'s voice on the phone etc when we are separated ~ I melt ! And it is reciprocated whenever he hears mine ! That\'s the Story of ~ That\'s the Glory of LOVE ~ Brotherly Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@
March 8th, 2018 11:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
She speaks and the sound of her voice
Is so sweet the Birds hush their singing
And the voice I hear falling on my ear
Within my Heart is ringing ...........
Love the sentiment in your Poem Lorna and it mirrors what I feel when I hear Angela\'s voice on the phone etc when we are separated ~ I melt ! And it is reciprocated whenever he hears mine ! That\'s the Story of ~ That\'s the Glory of LOVE ~ Brotherly Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@
March 8th, 2018 11:43
The Sound of You
Poetic25 said:
Lorna,
A lovely little piece of writing.
\" Your voice is my heart\"
beautiful
Michael :)
March 8th, 2018 11:30
Poetic25 said:
Lorna,
A lovely little piece of writing.
\" Your voice is my heart\"
beautiful
Michael :)
March 8th, 2018 11:30
The Sound of You
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. You mean the voice of my singing. Erm, it can apply here, if adjusted:
* You hear it (you hear me singing) and it causes you to lose the will to live
* You hear it screeching, and it torments you from within
* Yep, it channels itself into your brain-box, and you\'re cursed cos ya can\'t get rid of the sound of it! heehheehee.
March 8th, 2018 11:00
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. You mean the voice of my singing. Erm, it can apply here, if adjusted:
* You hear it (you hear me singing) and it causes you to lose the will to live
* You hear it screeching, and it torments you from within
* Yep, it channels itself into your brain-box, and you\'re cursed cos ya can\'t get rid of the sound of it! heehheehee.
March 8th, 2018 11:00
The Sound of You
Lauraš» said:
Wow, Lorna!
So powerful and
heartfelt! The words
demand to be heard
and the visual enhances
the plea! A great write!
~Laura~
March 8th, 2018 08:24
Lauraš» said:
Wow, Lorna!
So powerful and
heartfelt! The words
demand to be heard
and the visual enhances
the plea! A great write!
~Laura~
March 8th, 2018 08:24
The Five Senses
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write I could smell the bacon - three rashers please.
March 7th, 2018 13:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write I could smell the bacon - three rashers please.
March 7th, 2018 13:57
The Five Senses
themerrypapist said:
Thank you for taking me back to the Sunday brunches of childhood.
March 7th, 2018 13:06
themerrypapist said:
Thank you for taking me back to the Sunday brunches of childhood.
March 7th, 2018 13:06
The Five Senses
orchidee said:
Thanks Lorna. Argghh - would me singing drive the senses crazy, send them into a torment, some hideous downward spiral, etc?! Dunno - depends if ya got ear plugs in. lol.
March 7th, 2018 09:30
orchidee said:
Thanks Lorna. Argghh - would me singing drive the senses crazy, send them into a torment, some hideous downward spiral, etc?! Dunno - depends if ya got ear plugs in. lol.
March 7th, 2018 09:30
The Five Senses
Ivory said:
What delicious piece of writing.
I enjoyed reading this with my morning coffee š
March 7th, 2018 08:27
Ivory said:
What delicious piece of writing.
I enjoyed reading this with my morning coffee š
March 7th, 2018 08:27
The Five Senses
FineB said:
Hi Lorna,
A lovely poem expressing the joy of home comforts and the power of our senses!
Thanks
Keep writing
FineB
March 7th, 2018 07:51
FineB said:
Hi Lorna,
A lovely poem expressing the joy of home comforts and the power of our senses!
Thanks
Keep writing
FineB
March 7th, 2018 07:51
The Five Senses
Lauraš» said:
Youāve made me so
hungry, Lorna!
Iāve got to go to get
myself some breakfast
for lunch...pronto!
I enjoyed your clean
and tasty poem with
all the fixings!
~Laura~
March 7th, 2018 06:44
Lauraš» said:
Youāve made me so
hungry, Lorna!
Iāve got to go to get
myself some breakfast
for lunch...pronto!
I enjoyed your clean
and tasty poem with
all the fixings!
~Laura~
March 7th, 2018 06:44
The Five Senses
Michael Edwards said:
Takes me back to my childhood - formica worktops, aluminium saucepans, an old stove - thanks for the memories Lorna - a really enjoyable read.
March 7th, 2018 06:33
Michael Edwards said:
Takes me back to my childhood - formica worktops, aluminium saucepans, an old stove - thanks for the memories Lorna - a really enjoyable read.
March 7th, 2018 06:33
Too Cold For Anything
w c said:
I too long for spring. I thank God it\'s springing!
March 6th, 2018 20:08
w c said:
I too long for spring. I thank God it\'s springing!
March 6th, 2018 20:08
Too Cold For Anything
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - an apt finalƩ to your your expressive outcry against this wintery interlude Lorna. A warm read to take the edge off the cold temperature here.
March 6th, 2018 09:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - an apt finalƩ to your your expressive outcry against this wintery interlude Lorna. A warm read to take the edge off the cold temperature here.
March 6th, 2018 09:57
Too Cold For Anything
Poetic25 said:
Lorna
a wonderful reflection of how you feel with winter!
I think I speak many of us, let the spring unfold quickly:)
MIchael
March 6th, 2018 07:50
Poetic25 said:
Lorna
a wonderful reflection of how you feel with winter!
I think I speak many of us, let the spring unfold quickly:)
MIchael
March 6th, 2018 07:50
Too Cold For Anything
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. The UK had a taste last week, but not as severe as yours.
March 6th, 2018 06:49
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. The UK had a taste last week, but not as severe as yours.
March 6th, 2018 06:49
A Touch of Frost
Lauraš» said:
Hindsight is 20/20, Lorna!
A fine reflective write!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
March 6th, 2018 05:16
Lauraš» said:
Hindsight is 20/20, Lorna!
A fine reflective write!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
March 6th, 2018 05:16
Too Cold For Anything
Lauraš» said:
Love that ending, Lorna!
Iām with you...
āLetās choke The seasonal visiting villainā. Enough is enough already!
Stay warm!
~Laura~
March 6th, 2018 04:24
Lauraš» said:
Love that ending, Lorna!
Iām with you...
āLetās choke The seasonal visiting villainā. Enough is enough already!
Stay warm!
~Laura~
March 6th, 2018 04:24
A Touch of Frost
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, going back can sometimes be frightening but it can also be wonderful.
March 6th, 2018 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, going back can sometimes be frightening but it can also be wonderful.
March 6th, 2018 01:45
A Touch of Frost
Poetic25 said:
Lorna,
A short piece of reflection, but written with so much said
Well done
Michael :)
March 5th, 2018 12:09
Poetic25 said:
Lorna,
A short piece of reflection, but written with so much said
Well done
Michael :)
March 5th, 2018 12:09
A Touch of Frost
Michael Edwards said:
Always scary revisiting the past - great write Lorna
March 5th, 2018 07:38
Michael Edwards said:
Always scary revisiting the past - great write Lorna
March 5th, 2018 07:38
A Touch of Frost
Lorna said:
Thanks LG...... the past can be both wonderful and sad at the same time can\'t it...........
March 5th, 2018 05:40
Lorna said:
Thanks LG...... the past can be both wonderful and sad at the same time can\'t it...........
March 5th, 2018 05:40
If They Dare!
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Lorna, sounds like he is a good brother in spite of his \'gravitas\'.
March 5th, 2018 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Lorna, sounds like he is a good brother in spite of his \'gravitas\'.
March 5th, 2018 02:10
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