Comments received on poems by Lorna
The Sound of You
smallest_stars said:
You created a beautiful little gem that speaks to me and many others! A lovely write!
March 10th, 2018 11:01
smallest_stars said:
You created a beautiful little gem that speaks to me and many others! A lovely write!
March 10th, 2018 11:01
The Dark That Never Leaves
Michael Edwards said:
Still a few prehistoric dawns in our house 0 fine work Lorna.
March 10th, 2018 10:17
Michael Edwards said:
Still a few prehistoric dawns in our house 0 fine work Lorna.
March 10th, 2018 10:17
The Dark That Never Leaves
Accidental Poet said:
True Lorna, but we\'ve come a long way from those prehistoric dawns. Excellent write as always.
March 10th, 2018 07:34
Accidental Poet said:
True Lorna, but we\'ve come a long way from those prehistoric dawns. Excellent write as always.
March 10th, 2018 07:34
Aquarius Lost
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Lorna, I remember the sixties and that time of freedom and interaction with each other was beautiful. The hippies had it right - Make love, not war.
March 10th, 2018 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Lorna, I remember the sixties and that time of freedom and interaction with each other was beautiful. The hippies had it right - Make love, not war.
March 10th, 2018 01:24
Aquarius Lost
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"O YES ~ I remember it well ~ I think !\" Today it\'s \"The Age of Mysterious\" and alas no ending Sight ! Yours BRIAN !
March 9th, 2018 15:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"O YES ~ I remember it well ~ I think !\" Today it\'s \"The Age of Mysterious\" and alas no ending Sight ! Yours BRIAN !
March 9th, 2018 15:29
Aquarius Lost
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I particularly like these lines....
\"Youths whose youth is gone
But not so far as youth of now
All corporate gagged and bound\"
Is that \'Newtown\' Bucks County?
March 9th, 2018 10:21
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I particularly like these lines....
\"Youths whose youth is gone
But not so far as youth of now
All corporate gagged and bound\"
Is that \'Newtown\' Bucks County?
March 9th, 2018 10:21
Aquarius Lost
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. I don\'t go along with \'The Age of.......\' thingys though!
Meanwhile - you don\'t want no Age of Aquarius. It will be torment, cos I shall sing the song of that title! \'Sing\' being the dreaded word! heehee.
March 9th, 2018 09:32
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. I don\'t go along with \'The Age of.......\' thingys though!
Meanwhile - you don\'t want no Age of Aquarius. It will be torment, cos I shall sing the song of that title! \'Sing\' being the dreaded word! heehee.
March 9th, 2018 09:32
Aquarius Lost
Accidental Poet said:
Have to agree with Laura in that you\'ve hit the nail squarely on the head with this perfectly description of the late 60s when \"Flower Power\" was everything. I was ten years old in the Summer of Love. And I remember life back then. And it is sad that the children of today have a tough road ahead of them. We do need another Age of Aquarius.
March 9th, 2018 07:52
Accidental Poet said:
Have to agree with Laura in that you\'ve hit the nail squarely on the head with this perfectly description of the late 60s when \"Flower Power\" was everything. I was ten years old in the Summer of Love. And I remember life back then. And it is sad that the children of today have a tough road ahead of them. We do need another Age of Aquarius.
March 9th, 2018 07:52
Aquarius Lost
Lorna said:
Thanks Laura - but like Kurt\'s message today, it just make you feel so sad and helpless.........
March 9th, 2018 07:30
Lorna said:
Thanks Laura - but like Kurt\'s message today, it just make you feel so sad and helpless.........
March 9th, 2018 07:30
Aquarius Lost
Lauraš» said:
Wow, Lorna!
Spot on, my friend!
An awesome commentary delivered by your poem and by your āpoetās commentsā!
A Brilliant Write! That pic is precious!
~Laura~
March 9th, 2018 07:26
Lauraš» said:
Wow, Lorna!
Spot on, my friend!
An awesome commentary delivered by your poem and by your āpoetās commentsā!
A Brilliant Write! That pic is precious!
~Laura~
March 9th, 2018 07:26
The Sound of You
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
She speaks and the sound of her voice
Is so sweet the Birds hush their singing
And the voice I hear falling on my ear
Within my Heart is ringing ...........
Love the sentiment in your Poem Lorna and it mirrors what I feel when I hear Angela\'s voice on the phone etc when we are separated ~ I melt ! And it is reciprocated whenever he hears mine ! That\'s the Story of ~ That\'s the Glory of LOVE ~ Brotherly Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@
March 8th, 2018 11:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
She speaks and the sound of her voice
Is so sweet the Birds hush their singing
And the voice I hear falling on my ear
Within my Heart is ringing ...........
Love the sentiment in your Poem Lorna and it mirrors what I feel when I hear Angela\'s voice on the phone etc when we are separated ~ I melt ! And it is reciprocated whenever he hears mine ! That\'s the Story of ~ That\'s the Glory of LOVE ~ Brotherly Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@
March 8th, 2018 11:43
The Sound of You
Poetic25 said:
Lorna,
A lovely little piece of writing.
\" Your voice is my heart\"
beautiful
Michael :)
March 8th, 2018 11:30
Poetic25 said:
Lorna,
A lovely little piece of writing.
\" Your voice is my heart\"
beautiful
Michael :)
March 8th, 2018 11:30
The Sound of You
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. You mean the voice of my singing. Erm, it can apply here, if adjusted:
* You hear it (you hear me singing) and it causes you to lose the will to live
* You hear it screeching, and it torments you from within
* Yep, it channels itself into your brain-box, and you\'re cursed cos ya can\'t get rid of the sound of it! heehheehee.
March 8th, 2018 11:00
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. You mean the voice of my singing. Erm, it can apply here, if adjusted:
* You hear it (you hear me singing) and it causes you to lose the will to live
* You hear it screeching, and it torments you from within
* Yep, it channels itself into your brain-box, and you\'re cursed cos ya can\'t get rid of the sound of it! heehheehee.
March 8th, 2018 11:00
The Sound of You
Lauraš» said:
Wow, Lorna!
So powerful and
heartfelt! The words
demand to be heard
and the visual enhances
the plea! A great write!
~Laura~
March 8th, 2018 08:24
Lauraš» said:
Wow, Lorna!
So powerful and
heartfelt! The words
demand to be heard
and the visual enhances
the plea! A great write!
~Laura~
March 8th, 2018 08:24
The Five Senses
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write I could smell the bacon - three rashers please.
March 7th, 2018 13:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write I could smell the bacon - three rashers please.
March 7th, 2018 13:57
The Five Senses
themerrypapist said:
Thank you for taking me back to the Sunday brunches of childhood.
March 7th, 2018 13:06
themerrypapist said:
Thank you for taking me back to the Sunday brunches of childhood.
March 7th, 2018 13:06
The Five Senses
orchidee said:
Thanks Lorna. Argghh - would me singing drive the senses crazy, send them into a torment, some hideous downward spiral, etc?! Dunno - depends if ya got ear plugs in. lol.
March 7th, 2018 09:30
orchidee said:
Thanks Lorna. Argghh - would me singing drive the senses crazy, send them into a torment, some hideous downward spiral, etc?! Dunno - depends if ya got ear plugs in. lol.
March 7th, 2018 09:30
The Five Senses
Ivory said:
What delicious piece of writing.
I enjoyed reading this with my morning coffee š
March 7th, 2018 08:27
Ivory said:
What delicious piece of writing.
I enjoyed reading this with my morning coffee š
March 7th, 2018 08:27
The Five Senses
FineB said:
Hi Lorna,
A lovely poem expressing the joy of home comforts and the power of our senses!
Thanks
Keep writing
FineB
March 7th, 2018 07:51
FineB said:
Hi Lorna,
A lovely poem expressing the joy of home comforts and the power of our senses!
Thanks
Keep writing
FineB
March 7th, 2018 07:51
The Five Senses
Lauraš» said:
Youāve made me so
hungry, Lorna!
Iāve got to go to get
myself some breakfast
for lunch...pronto!
I enjoyed your clean
and tasty poem with
all the fixings!
~Laura~
March 7th, 2018 06:44
Lauraš» said:
Youāve made me so
hungry, Lorna!
Iāve got to go to get
myself some breakfast
for lunch...pronto!
I enjoyed your clean
and tasty poem with
all the fixings!
~Laura~
March 7th, 2018 06:44
The Five Senses
Michael Edwards said:
Takes me back to my childhood - formica worktops, aluminium saucepans, an old stove - thanks for the memories Lorna - a really enjoyable read.
March 7th, 2018 06:33
Michael Edwards said:
Takes me back to my childhood - formica worktops, aluminium saucepans, an old stove - thanks for the memories Lorna - a really enjoyable read.
March 7th, 2018 06:33
Too Cold For Anything
w c said:
I too long for spring. I thank God it\'s springing!
March 6th, 2018 20:08
w c said:
I too long for spring. I thank God it\'s springing!
March 6th, 2018 20:08
Too Cold For Anything
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - an apt finalƩ to your your expressive outcry against this wintery interlude Lorna. A warm read to take the edge off the cold temperature here.
March 6th, 2018 09:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - an apt finalƩ to your your expressive outcry against this wintery interlude Lorna. A warm read to take the edge off the cold temperature here.
March 6th, 2018 09:57
Too Cold For Anything
Poetic25 said:
Lorna
a wonderful reflection of how you feel with winter!
I think I speak many of us, let the spring unfold quickly:)
MIchael
March 6th, 2018 07:50
Poetic25 said:
Lorna
a wonderful reflection of how you feel with winter!
I think I speak many of us, let the spring unfold quickly:)
MIchael
March 6th, 2018 07:50
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