Comments received on poems by Lorna



Angels at the Diner
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,
Love this write! It makes
me feel like getting in the
car and find a diner for
some delicious blueberry
pancakes drowned in maple
syrup! Yummy!
~Laura~


February 8th, 2018 05:37

Angels at the Diner
ForeverJesus7 said:

I like it. There are a lot of places that make breakfast, lunch, and dinner, but none of them except for mom, are better than diners.
Ah, the simple times.
Persistence is key

February 8th, 2018 05:29

Angels at the Diner
Accidental Poet said:

Such a tragedy of the school shootings. Love the old diners. There\'s a few up here in southeastern Massachusetts, one I know of has a 1950s theme to it. And the food is always delicious. And the deserts! You can\'t leave without having a chocolate cake or apple pie. To die for. Great write Lorna.

February 8th, 2018 05:16

Sliding Through the Intersection With You
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 7th, 2018 09:50

Sliding Through the Intersection With You
Laura🌻 said:

Thank God for that protective arm! Glad you’re ok, Lorna! Great write and visual!

~Laura~

February 7th, 2018 07:00

Sliding Through the Intersection With You
Poetic25 said:

Sounds like a lucky escape! You pictured this really well.
Michael 😊

February 7th, 2018 06:57

The Rain Wants Me
dusk arising said:

The sky is crying, the streets full of tears.
Seems a voice whispers, solely for my ears.

just an inspired thought from reading your piece thank you.

February 6th, 2018 17:43

The Rain Wants Me
Lorna said:

Thunder!!! Even better than rain............ and isn\'t it great that we share nature no matter where we are!

February 6th, 2018 06:26

The Rain Wants Me
orchidee said:

Good write Lorna. You got a brolly there?! The hail wanted me the other day here, and got me! Ouch! Like little stones it is.

February 6th, 2018 05:56

Damn Why Can\'t I Forget
Goldfinch60 said:

Super emotive write.

February 6th, 2018 01:49

Damn Why Can\'t I Forget
Lorna said:

Thank you everyone........

February 5th, 2018 15:44

Damn Why Can\'t I Forget
TrystanBehm said:

I felt the words deep inside me when reading this. Very powerful. Great write! Thanks for sharing!

February 5th, 2018 15:14

The Horse in the Lilac Bushes
Lorna said:

Good! If I can make you smile........!

February 4th, 2018 08:26

Of All the Hearts in All the Towns in All the World
Fay Slimm. said:

Such a touching pathos to these brave words dear Lorna - -love never falters though dark creeps through doors - keep holding that younger hand close and hearing those old Casablanca words.Thank you so much for sharing what is a blessed memory of that movie\'s effect and now in my favourites.

February 3rd, 2018 17:49

Of All the Hearts in All the Towns in All the World
FredPeyer said:

Lorna, this poem is beautiful! I had to read it a few times, and each time it grew on me.

February 3rd, 2018 15:26


Of All the Hearts in All the Towns in All the World
Lorna said:

My rough tough manly man used to choke up over this movie.......well, we both did. Thanks Kat!

February 3rd, 2018 08:48

Of All the Hearts in All the Towns in All the World
ForeverJesus7 said:

Ah yes, Casablanca, the producer of some of the most famous lines in history. I love that movie. Humphrey Bogart is the man.

I think this may be the start of a beautiful friendship Lorna.
Persistence is key


February 3rd, 2018 07:08

Paint Your Wagon
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha - -this read left me with a wide smile Lorna - - sometimes we wish we could have the best of two males but choices made we know the faithful ones are the right catch. A great title too.

February 2nd, 2018 14:20

Paint Your Wagon
TrystanBehm said:

I love this - so simple and succinct, but the emotion and thought process behind the experience of the words - complicated. Awesome write!

February 2nd, 2018 09:41

Paint Your Wagon
Lorna said:

I\'ll let you in on a secret - one would have been \"fun\" in the short term but he wouldn\'t have stayed true......... God forbid you ever got a wrinkle with that one!!! But he was lovely!

February 2nd, 2018 08:19

The Cold Moon (February)
Michael Edwards said:

Super work - bring on the series Lorna

February 1st, 2018 12:21

The Cold Moon (February)
Lorna said:

It means a lot that you like it Fay!

February 1st, 2018 09:49

The Cold Moon (February)
Fay Slimm. said:

Look forward to the series on naming the different moon as months come and go Lorna - -- this one being the \"month of the cold moon\" shows its ability to keep folk indoors when trees reflect the glitter of snow - love the picture you chose as illustration.

February 1st, 2018 09:31

Floating
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 31st, 2018 11:20

Call of the Sitar
Michael Edwards said:

Well I\'ve read it a couple of times and it doesn\'t jar at all for me - super work best left as it is.

January 30th, 2018 12:56

Call of the Sitar
Tony36 said:

Amazing write

January 30th, 2018 09:56

Call of the Sitar
Fay Slimm. said:

A flow of mystery fills the lines of this engaging poem Lorna - - days of the sitar stay in the mind once its magic is taken to heart.

January 30th, 2018 06:27

Call of the Sitar
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for the memory Lorna ! I was born in the 1980\'s but my Parents (who are still HIPPIES (internally) and have their CAFTANS and a great stash of LP\'s with awesome covers \"The Age of Aquarius\" The Beatles ~ Stones ~ Mamas & Papas ~ Dylan ~ Joan Baez ~ Ravi Shankar and the SITAR ~ so moving (movable frets & quarter tones !) so unpredictable ~ Divine Music The Music of the 21st C seems soulless Thanks for caring LOVE ~ BRIAN

January 30th, 2018 05:35

Death by Hibachi
Tristan Robert Lange said:

You had me from Hibachi! Love the title, love the poem even more. Great write!

January 29th, 2018 14:40



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