Comments received on poems by Lorna
Hide and Seek
dusk arising said:
If you cant see you from where you\'re sat
maybe you should try looking under the mat
or maybe you\'re right behind that chair
have you tried yet, looking there
or close your eyes - hey! no peeping
and you\'ll come right back, whilst you\'re sleeping
January 29th, 2018 10:17
dusk arising said:
If you cant see you from where you\'re sat
maybe you should try looking under the mat
or maybe you\'re right behind that chair
have you tried yet, looking there
or close your eyes - hey! no peeping
and you\'ll come right back, whilst you\'re sleeping
January 29th, 2018 10:17
Hide and Seek
orchidee said:
Oohh I know what you mean! I was in such a tizzy, I met myself coming back from the shops, while I was on the way there! heehee.
January 29th, 2018 03:57
orchidee said:
Oohh I know what you mean! I was in such a tizzy, I met myself coming back from the shops, while I was on the way there! heehee.
January 29th, 2018 03:57
Friends
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, may that friendship be always there.
January 29th, 2018 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, may that friendship be always there.
January 29th, 2018 01:49
Friends
Michael Edwards said:
Oh this is just perfect - a real gem of a write sr.
January 28th, 2018 07:58
Michael Edwards said:
Oh this is just perfect - a real gem of a write sr.
January 28th, 2018 07:58
Under the Sturgeon Moon (August)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write sr, glad that you got the hay in.
January 28th, 2018 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write sr, glad that you got the hay in.
January 28th, 2018 01:45
Under the Sturgeon Moon (August)
Lorna said:
Thanks for your comments everyone - much appreciated!
January 27th, 2018 08:59
Lorna said:
Thanks for your comments everyone - much appreciated!
January 27th, 2018 08:59
Under the Sturgeon Moon (August)
Michael Edwards said:
Original write - nice work sr
January 27th, 2018 08:51
Michael Edwards said:
Original write - nice work sr
January 27th, 2018 08:51
Under the Sturgeon Moon (August)
Caring dove said:
interesting , i love your repetition of the words \'\' we got the hay in , we got the hay in \'\' very nice :-)
January 27th, 2018 08:24
Caring dove said:
interesting , i love your repetition of the words \'\' we got the hay in , we got the hay in \'\' very nice :-)
January 27th, 2018 08:24
Silver Bullet (Uma)
FredPeyer said:
I am reading through all your poems, sr! So glad I found you! Love your writing and your imagination!
January 26th, 2018 11:56
FredPeyer said:
I am reading through all your poems, sr! So glad I found you! Love your writing and your imagination!
January 26th, 2018 11:56
May We Always Fly Free
FredPeyer said:
Love your short train related poem. Recently took the train from San Diego to LA. Beautiful ride along the ocean. And one does see things usually not seen when traveling!
Very much enjoyed your poem!
January 26th, 2018 11:51
FredPeyer said:
Love your short train related poem. Recently took the train from San Diego to LA. Beautiful ride along the ocean. And one does see things usually not seen when traveling!
Very much enjoyed your poem!
January 26th, 2018 11:51
Death by Hibachi
FredPeyer said:
Good one, sr, beats having to fumble around with hooking up the exhaust pipe to the interior of the car. And I could enjoy a last \'bratwurst\'!
January 26th, 2018 11:49
FredPeyer said:
Good one, sr, beats having to fumble around with hooking up the exhaust pipe to the interior of the car. And I could enjoy a last \'bratwurst\'!
January 26th, 2018 11:49
Endings
FredPeyer said:
I don\'t know if it is the writing, or the subject, but after reading your wheelchair philosopher, this one too seems to draw me in, stopped me in my thoughts and made me think.
\'Good writing does that...\' I said quietly to myself!
January 26th, 2018 11:45
FredPeyer said:
I don\'t know if it is the writing, or the subject, but after reading your wheelchair philosopher, this one too seems to draw me in, stopped me in my thoughts and made me think.
\'Good writing does that...\' I said quietly to myself!
January 26th, 2018 11:45
The Train Station Wheelchair-bound Philosopher
FredPeyer said:
Great title....drew me right in! And the poem did not disappoint! I wanna know more about him!!! Very cleverly written, had to make it a favorite! Will we hear more from your philosopher?
January 26th, 2018 11:40
FredPeyer said:
Great title....drew me right in! And the poem did not disappoint! I wanna know more about him!!! Very cleverly written, had to make it a favorite! Will we hear more from your philosopher?
January 26th, 2018 11:40
The Train Station Wheelchair-bound Philosopher
orchidee said:
Good write sr.
January 26th, 2018 09:49
orchidee said:
Good write sr.
January 26th, 2018 09:49
The Train Station Wheelchair-bound Philosopher
Michael Edwards said:
Who indeed. I find this quite intriguing in the way of good poetry - super work sr.
January 26th, 2018 04:58
Michael Edwards said:
Who indeed. I find this quite intriguing in the way of good poetry - super work sr.
January 26th, 2018 04:58
Endings
FineB said:
Hi SR.
Powerful, poignant and vivid.
Lovely poem.
Keep writing
FineB
January 25th, 2018 15:12
FineB said:
Hi SR.
Powerful, poignant and vivid.
Lovely poem.
Keep writing
FineB
January 25th, 2018 15:12
Death by Hibachi
Goldfinch60 said:
There are so many days, months and years to go yet to enjoy cooking on the embers before the final banquet.
January 25th, 2018 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
There are so many days, months and years to go yet to enjoy cooking on the embers before the final banquet.
January 25th, 2018 01:15
May We Always Fly Free
Fay Slimm. said:
Your pen evokes freedom with excellent imagery here - - much food for thought in this read.
January 23rd, 2018 06:05
Fay Slimm. said:
Your pen evokes freedom with excellent imagery here - - much food for thought in this read.
January 23rd, 2018 06:05
Psychosis
Michael Edwards said:
Always look on the blind side of life - love it sr.
January 22nd, 2018 09:14
Michael Edwards said:
Always look on the blind side of life - love it sr.
January 22nd, 2018 09:14
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