Comments received on poems by Lorna
The Cold Moon (February)
Caring dove said:
i really love this! :-) and i love the moon x
February 18th, 2018 06:35
Caring dove said:
i really love this! :-) and i love the moon x
February 18th, 2018 06:35
Achtung Spitfire!
Caring dove said:
interesting how you have given a plane \'\' a red dress\'\' and you refer to the plane as \'\' she\'\' i love how you have referred to the plane.. as a strong and deadly woman lol
February 18th, 2018 06:23
Caring dove said:
interesting how you have given a plane \'\' a red dress\'\' and you refer to the plane as \'\' she\'\' i love how you have referred to the plane.. as a strong and deadly woman lol
February 18th, 2018 06:23
God\'s Mistake
Caring dove said:
god , if there is a god, he has nothing to do with the way human beings are .. unfortunately mankind is messed up .. i guess he wanted to create a nice world ... maybe he did but in the end , its the people who have ruined it with their big egos, their greed, false sense of superiority and evilness... i dont really have a belief in god but i guess he would want to have created a nice place of kindness . i don\'t know
February 18th, 2018 06:15
Caring dove said:
god , if there is a god, he has nothing to do with the way human beings are .. unfortunately mankind is messed up .. i guess he wanted to create a nice world ... maybe he did but in the end , its the people who have ruined it with their big egos, their greed, false sense of superiority and evilness... i dont really have a belief in god but i guess he would want to have created a nice place of kindness . i don\'t know
February 18th, 2018 06:15
God\'s Mistake
Caring dove said:
hi lorna .. a well expressed poem here...\'\' man is a viscious little virus \'\' wow, thats such a strong and powerful line.. you know i kind of agree with you there, mankind , humanity , there is so much evil in this world, and it never seems to go away ! great write lorna.. i feel sad that i have to live in a world full of so much hatred, evil and cruelty , its not right , never has been
February 18th, 2018 06:11
Caring dove said:
hi lorna .. a well expressed poem here...\'\' man is a viscious little virus \'\' wow, thats such a strong and powerful line.. you know i kind of agree with you there, mankind , humanity , there is so much evil in this world, and it never seems to go away ! great write lorna.. i feel sad that i have to live in a world full of so much hatred, evil and cruelty , its not right , never has been
February 18th, 2018 06:11
God\'s Mistake
orchidee said:
This is so Lorna, and not just when people are being nasty. I don\'t see it as a mistake, though I understand what you mean. It\'s all in God\'s plan of salvation, though we do not have infinite wisdom, as He does. Oh, and as I do too (well 99% of the time? lol).
February 18th, 2018 05:57
orchidee said:
This is so Lorna, and not just when people are being nasty. I don\'t see it as a mistake, though I understand what you mean. It\'s all in God\'s plan of salvation, though we do not have infinite wisdom, as He does. Oh, and as I do too (well 99% of the time? lol).
February 18th, 2018 05:57
Old Love - No Regrets (RK)
dusk arising said:
Really like the way you have ended this. Those lines in themselves are really magic.
February 17th, 2018 09:00
dusk arising said:
Really like the way you have ended this. Those lines in themselves are really magic.
February 17th, 2018 09:00
Self Torment - Specialite de la Maison
Laura🌻 said:
A great write, Lorna!
I can relate to what
you wrote! Wondering
and questioning myself...
...many years ago. No longer necessary...I’m glad to say! Enjoyed the read! Enjoy your day!
~Laura~
February 16th, 2018 08:04
Laura🌻 said:
A great write, Lorna!
I can relate to what
you wrote! Wondering
and questioning myself...
...many years ago. No longer necessary...I’m glad to say! Enjoyed the read! Enjoy your day!
~Laura~
February 16th, 2018 08:04
Self Torment - Specialite de la Maison
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Great poet Lorna!!
February 16th, 2018 06:57
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Great poet Lorna!!
February 16th, 2018 06:57
Self Torment - Specialite de la Maison
Lorna said:
It\'s not \"him\" - It\'s \"everyone\"! ha ha. I do try to laugh at myself - this is definitely regressive behavior! Should add that I was with the man I chose because it didn\'t matter to him what I did! Bridget Jones: I like you just the way you are!
February 16th, 2018 06:19
Lorna said:
It\'s not \"him\" - It\'s \"everyone\"! ha ha. I do try to laugh at myself - this is definitely regressive behavior! Should add that I was with the man I chose because it didn\'t matter to him what I did! Bridget Jones: I like you just the way you are!
February 16th, 2018 06:19
Self Torment - Specialite de la Maison
FredPeyer said:
Great poem Lorna. Just be yourself, judging from the way you write, you are one heck of a lady and don\'t need to worry about anything you do. If he does not like it....his loss!
February 16th, 2018 05:58
FredPeyer said:
Great poem Lorna. Just be yourself, judging from the way you write, you are one heck of a lady and don\'t need to worry about anything you do. If he does not like it....his loss!
February 16th, 2018 05:58
My Red Arrow
Caring dove said:
interesting lorna .. i love the idea of the red arrow soaring through the air
February 16th, 2018 03:19
Caring dove said:
interesting lorna .. i love the idea of the red arrow soaring through the air
February 16th, 2018 03:19
Just for You
FredPeyer said:
Your beautiful poem paints a very loving and tender picture and does say a lot between the lines. Well done!
February 15th, 2018 15:24
FredPeyer said:
Your beautiful poem paints a very loving and tender picture and does say a lot between the lines. Well done!
February 15th, 2018 15:24
Just for You
Laura🌻 said:
A meaningful and
beautiful write, Lorna!
Pure love and
tenderness!
~Laura~
February 15th, 2018 11:54
Laura🌻 said:
A meaningful and
beautiful write, Lorna!
Pure love and
tenderness!
~Laura~
February 15th, 2018 11:54
Just for You
Michael Edwards said:
Such a super poignant write - great work Lorna.
February 15th, 2018 11:28
Michael Edwards said:
Such a super poignant write - great work Lorna.
February 15th, 2018 11:28
Just for You
Fay Slimm. said:
Superb poetry here Lorna - must put this appealing few lines into my faves. - -- have never read better - first class writing.
February 15th, 2018 05:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Superb poetry here Lorna - must put this appealing few lines into my faves. - -- have never read better - first class writing.
February 15th, 2018 05:45
Just for You
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LORNA ~ I work with a lot of students with SPECIFIC NEEDS and it is very rewarding. My Maternal Grandfather was BLIND so i can empathise ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BROTHERLY HUGS ~ BRIAN @@@
February 15th, 2018 05:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LORNA ~ I work with a lot of students with SPECIFIC NEEDS and it is very rewarding. My Maternal Grandfather was BLIND so i can empathise ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BROTHERLY HUGS ~ BRIAN @@@
February 15th, 2018 05:44
My Red Arrow
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful illustration of Your LOVE for us All ! I love the Native American culture ~ love the picture \"CUPID pull back your BOW\" ................ ! I have written a POEM on the HAVSUPAI TRIBE who live 10 miles into The Grand Canyon but its publication coincided with that awful Helicopter tragedy so I will post it next week ~ OK Yours as always ~ Valentine HUGS ~ BRIAN @@@
February 14th, 2018 11:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful illustration of Your LOVE for us All ! I love the Native American culture ~ love the picture \"CUPID pull back your BOW\" ................ ! I have written a POEM on the HAVSUPAI TRIBE who live 10 miles into The Grand Canyon but its publication coincided with that awful Helicopter tragedy so I will post it next week ~ OK Yours as always ~ Valentine HUGS ~ BRIAN @@@
February 14th, 2018 11:27
My Red Arrow
Heather T said:
Let\'s hope our targets are worthy of full quivers! Love this little beauty.
February 14th, 2018 07:55
Heather T said:
Let\'s hope our targets are worthy of full quivers! Love this little beauty.
February 14th, 2018 07:55
My Red Arrow
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a fresh and vibrant approach to Valentine\'s Day dear Lorna - I love the punch of those final two lines.
February 14th, 2018 06:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a fresh and vibrant approach to Valentine\'s Day dear Lorna - I love the punch of those final two lines.
February 14th, 2018 06:23
No Way to Kiss a Country Man
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"If He kisses like Country ~ He is Country\" Thanks for sharin\' LORNA ! I love the Appalachians ~ the few remaining Ole Timers with their Blue Grass an\' banjo pickin\' etc. But be quick they are a dyin\' breed ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 13th, 2018 15:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"If He kisses like Country ~ He is Country\" Thanks for sharin\' LORNA ! I love the Appalachians ~ the few remaining Ole Timers with their Blue Grass an\' banjo pickin\' etc. But be quick they are a dyin\' breed ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 13th, 2018 15:34
Too Bad She Died - She Made Lovely Pickles
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Beautiful....nice to read!!
February 13th, 2018 12:19
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Beautiful....nice to read!!
February 13th, 2018 12:19
Too Bad She Died - She Made Lovely Pickles
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, those women were wonderfully strong in the most difficult of times.
February 13th, 2018 09:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, those women were wonderfully strong in the most difficult of times.
February 13th, 2018 09:05
Too Bad She Died - She Made Lovely Pickles
Lorna said:
Thank you Laura! This picture is just one I found to represent a real person.... she could do anything! Someone who had grown up in the Depression years. Glad it reminded you of your grandmother - their lives were probably harder but I still think better in many ways... that might just be romantic fancy though.
February 13th, 2018 07:18
Lorna said:
Thank you Laura! This picture is just one I found to represent a real person.... she could do anything! Someone who had grown up in the Depression years. Glad it reminded you of your grandmother - their lives were probably harder but I still think better in many ways... that might just be romantic fancy though.
February 13th, 2018 07:18
Too Bad She Died - She Made Lovely Pickles
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
What a woman! A sweet
write...and I love pickles!
Beautiful pic. She looks like
my great grandmother who
lived on a farm and taught
my mom to can fresh
tomatoes! This tradition
is still going on in our
family! Thank you for
sharing!
~Laura~
February 13th, 2018 07:07
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
What a woman! A sweet
write...and I love pickles!
Beautiful pic. She looks like
my great grandmother who
lived on a farm and taught
my mom to can fresh
tomatoes! This tradition
is still going on in our
family! Thank you for
sharing!
~Laura~
February 13th, 2018 07:07
There is Only Love
ron parrish aka wordman said:
nature is where the peace is,the fresh air,the beautiful sky displays,apple pie and love
February 12th, 2018 18:26
ron parrish aka wordman said:
nature is where the peace is,the fresh air,the beautiful sky displays,apple pie and love
February 12th, 2018 18:26
No Way to Kiss a Country Man
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, that man has seen life and is full of knowledge.
February 12th, 2018 08:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, that man has seen life and is full of knowledge.
February 12th, 2018 08:59
No Way to Kiss a Country Man
Fay Slimm. said:
A well-written tribute to the men who were real in every sense Lorna - - they certainly meant what they said and did - - though you were only nineteen methinks that woudl have been a kiss to remember. Great read.
February 12th, 2018 08:36
Fay Slimm. said:
A well-written tribute to the men who were real in every sense Lorna - - they certainly meant what they said and did - - though you were only nineteen methinks that woudl have been a kiss to remember. Great read.
February 12th, 2018 08:36
There is Only Love
MaddieJ said:
This was so sweet. I wonder if you\'d check out my latest poem \"Falling\" I think you might enjoy it. It\'s about love.
February 12th, 2018 01:58
MaddieJ said:
This was so sweet. I wonder if you\'d check out my latest poem \"Falling\" I think you might enjoy it. It\'s about love.
February 12th, 2018 01:58
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