Comments received on poems by Lorna
I\'ll Read the Clouds
Laura🌻 said:
A great write, Lorna!
Clouds always fascinated
me! One of my favorite
units in our school science
curriculum to teach seven
year olds! They were in awe! The names fascinated them! I enjoyed the read very much!
~Laura~
February 20th, 2018 10:00
Laura🌻 said:
A great write, Lorna!
Clouds always fascinated
me! One of my favorite
units in our school science
curriculum to teach seven
year olds! They were in awe! The names fascinated them! I enjoyed the read very much!
~Laura~
February 20th, 2018 10:00
I\'ll Read the Clouds
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, so many do not look up and there are so many great messages in the clouds.
February 20th, 2018 08:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, so many do not look up and there are so many great messages in the clouds.
February 20th, 2018 08:45
I\'ll Read the Clouds
Michael Edwards said:
A superb write - love every word and into favs - first for a long time.
February 20th, 2018 06:58
Michael Edwards said:
A superb write - love every word and into favs - first for a long time.
February 20th, 2018 06:58
I\'ll Read the Clouds
orchidee said:
You read those clouds, Lorna? I tried to, but it was a cloudless sky. I wondered why I didn\'t get very far with it, doh! heehee. A fine write there.
February 20th, 2018 05:23
orchidee said:
You read those clouds, Lorna? I tried to, but it was a cloudless sky. I wondered why I didn\'t get very far with it, doh! heehee. A fine write there.
February 20th, 2018 05:23
The Last Rail Ticket
Lorna said:
Thanks for all your much appreciated comments......
February 20th, 2018 04:48
Lorna said:
Thanks for all your much appreciated comments......
February 20th, 2018 04:48
The Last Rail Ticket
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Laura and great imagery.
February 20th, 2018 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Laura and great imagery.
February 20th, 2018 01:19
The Last Rail Ticket
dusk arising said:
I\'m sure there\'s a place in your mind you visit quite regularly. It\'s in a realm where perfection can be and is a respite from such days as midwinter brings. I\'m sure we all have these places and we daydream.
Wouldn\'t it be wonderful if when we daydreamed our imaginations could actually meet up and play like the children we\'ve forgotten we really still are!
Hope this cheered you up.
February 19th, 2018 08:12
dusk arising said:
I\'m sure there\'s a place in your mind you visit quite regularly. It\'s in a realm where perfection can be and is a respite from such days as midwinter brings. I\'m sure we all have these places and we daydream.
Wouldn\'t it be wonderful if when we daydreamed our imaginations could actually meet up and play like the children we\'ve forgotten we really still are!
Hope this cheered you up.
February 19th, 2018 08:12
The Last Rail Ticket
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the flow and formation of this verse Lorna. An excellent read.
February 19th, 2018 08:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the flow and formation of this verse Lorna. An excellent read.
February 19th, 2018 08:06
The Last Rail Ticket
Michael Edwards said:
This brought the picture right into my mind - a great work Lorna
February 19th, 2018 07:19
Michael Edwards said:
This brought the picture right into my mind - a great work Lorna
February 19th, 2018 07:19
The Last Rail Ticket
orchidee said:
Where ya going? So ya are not coming back, then? it is a one-way ticket? heehee. oohhh.
February 19th, 2018 06:17
orchidee said:
Where ya going? So ya are not coming back, then? it is a one-way ticket? heehee. oohhh.
February 19th, 2018 06:17
The Last Rail Ticket
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Change and decay
In all around I see !
O Thou who changes not
Abide with Me !
Yes indeed LAURA all \"living things ~ change and decay ~ including ourselves and our Loved ones. But GOD never changes and I have FAITH when my last Train comes I am assured of a place in GLORY ~ AMEN Thanks for sharing BRIAN
February 19th, 2018 06:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Change and decay
In all around I see !
O Thou who changes not
Abide with Me !
Yes indeed LAURA all \"living things ~ change and decay ~ including ourselves and our Loved ones. But GOD never changes and I have FAITH when my last Train comes I am assured of a place in GLORY ~ AMEN Thanks for sharing BRIAN
February 19th, 2018 06:13
God\'s Mistake
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Lorna, I hope that I am not hear on earth to see it.
February 19th, 2018 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Lorna, I hope that I am not hear on earth to see it.
February 19th, 2018 01:06
God\'s Mistake
dusk arising said:
I really am a big fan of the \'less is more\' school of poetry and yours here today is a gem Lorna. Goes into my favs
February 18th, 2018 21:37
dusk arising said:
I really am a big fan of the \'less is more\' school of poetry and yours here today is a gem Lorna. Goes into my favs
February 18th, 2018 21:37
God\'s Mistake
Michael Edwards said:
I am so sorry to have to agree with you Lorna - sadly the evil in this world has been driven by man and his mistaken beliefs and ego - and I guess it will ever be thus. Great poem.
February 18th, 2018 10:43
Michael Edwards said:
I am so sorry to have to agree with you Lorna - sadly the evil in this world has been driven by man and his mistaken beliefs and ego - and I guess it will ever be thus. Great poem.
February 18th, 2018 10:43
God\'s Mistake
Accidental Poet said:
Great poem Lorna. Personally, I believe in God and Heaven, but I believe man to be to source of the Earth\'s demise. There are many many wonderful people on this planet, but it\'s the mean, self-centered and wicked people on Earth that are ruining it for everyone. Who knows, maybe the second coming of Christ will take them all away and let us start anew. Excellent write Lorna.
February 18th, 2018 09:49
Accidental Poet said:
Great poem Lorna. Personally, I believe in God and Heaven, but I believe man to be to source of the Earth\'s demise. There are many many wonderful people on this planet, but it\'s the mean, self-centered and wicked people on Earth that are ruining it for everyone. Who knows, maybe the second coming of Christ will take them all away and let us start anew. Excellent write Lorna.
February 18th, 2018 09:49
God\'s Mistake
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
There is a lot of TRUTH in what you say . We are fortunate to live on Planet Earth which is the only LIVING PLANET in the Solar System ~ and possibly the MILKY WAY. Life on Earth is kept in EQUALIBRIUM by Natural Cycles ~ Powered by the SUN. Water Cycle ~ Nitrogen Cycle ~ Carbon Cycle ~ Oxygen cycle etc. The Flora & Fauna are part of these cycles and before the Industrial Revolution ~ Nature mined the CO2 content of the Atmosphere at 250ppm it is now 400ppm (and rising !) This has caused the ambient temperature to rise from 15 to 16C and sea level to rise by 6 inches due to melting of the ice caps etc and the oceans are polluted by PLASTIC to the detriment of Marine Life. The \"Vicious Little Virus with the Big Ego\" is only a minute fraction of \"Life on Earth\" but the damage He causes is a billion times more ! Not content to live as a \"BUSHMAN\" ~ in harmony with Nature ~ he morphed into \"HITECHMAN\" and is slowly killing Planet Earth and there is nowhere else for us to GO ! MAN has increased CO2 ~Ambient Temperature ~ Cut down Forests ~ Increased Desserts ~ Concreted over arable land ~ and reversibly polluted the ~ atmosphere ~ the hydrosphere and the biosphere ! If you have GREAT-GRANDCHILDREN ~ CRY FOR THEM NOW ~ because by 2100 most of Planet Earth will not be fit for the projected Human Population of 16 Billion ~ I rest my case ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 18th, 2018 08:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
There is a lot of TRUTH in what you say . We are fortunate to live on Planet Earth which is the only LIVING PLANET in the Solar System ~ and possibly the MILKY WAY. Life on Earth is kept in EQUALIBRIUM by Natural Cycles ~ Powered by the SUN. Water Cycle ~ Nitrogen Cycle ~ Carbon Cycle ~ Oxygen cycle etc. The Flora & Fauna are part of these cycles and before the Industrial Revolution ~ Nature mined the CO2 content of the Atmosphere at 250ppm it is now 400ppm (and rising !) This has caused the ambient temperature to rise from 15 to 16C and sea level to rise by 6 inches due to melting of the ice caps etc and the oceans are polluted by PLASTIC to the detriment of Marine Life. The \"Vicious Little Virus with the Big Ego\" is only a minute fraction of \"Life on Earth\" but the damage He causes is a billion times more ! Not content to live as a \"BUSHMAN\" ~ in harmony with Nature ~ he morphed into \"HITECHMAN\" and is slowly killing Planet Earth and there is nowhere else for us to GO ! MAN has increased CO2 ~Ambient Temperature ~ Cut down Forests ~ Increased Desserts ~ Concreted over arable land ~ and reversibly polluted the ~ atmosphere ~ the hydrosphere and the biosphere ! If you have GREAT-GRANDCHILDREN ~ CRY FOR THEM NOW ~ because by 2100 most of Planet Earth will not be fit for the projected Human Population of 16 Billion ~ I rest my case ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 18th, 2018 08:54
The Cold Moon (February)
Caring dove said:
i really love this! :-) and i love the moon x
February 18th, 2018 06:35
Caring dove said:
i really love this! :-) and i love the moon x
February 18th, 2018 06:35
Achtung Spitfire!
Caring dove said:
interesting how you have given a plane \'\' a red dress\'\' and you refer to the plane as \'\' she\'\' i love how you have referred to the plane.. as a strong and deadly woman lol
February 18th, 2018 06:23
Caring dove said:
interesting how you have given a plane \'\' a red dress\'\' and you refer to the plane as \'\' she\'\' i love how you have referred to the plane.. as a strong and deadly woman lol
February 18th, 2018 06:23
God\'s Mistake
Caring dove said:
god , if there is a god, he has nothing to do with the way human beings are .. unfortunately mankind is messed up .. i guess he wanted to create a nice world ... maybe he did but in the end , its the people who have ruined it with their big egos, their greed, false sense of superiority and evilness... i dont really have a belief in god but i guess he would want to have created a nice place of kindness . i don\'t know
February 18th, 2018 06:15
Caring dove said:
god , if there is a god, he has nothing to do with the way human beings are .. unfortunately mankind is messed up .. i guess he wanted to create a nice world ... maybe he did but in the end , its the people who have ruined it with their big egos, their greed, false sense of superiority and evilness... i dont really have a belief in god but i guess he would want to have created a nice place of kindness . i don\'t know
February 18th, 2018 06:15
God\'s Mistake
Caring dove said:
hi lorna .. a well expressed poem here...\'\' man is a viscious little virus \'\' wow, thats such a strong and powerful line.. you know i kind of agree with you there, mankind , humanity , there is so much evil in this world, and it never seems to go away ! great write lorna.. i feel sad that i have to live in a world full of so much hatred, evil and cruelty , its not right , never has been
February 18th, 2018 06:11
Caring dove said:
hi lorna .. a well expressed poem here...\'\' man is a viscious little virus \'\' wow, thats such a strong and powerful line.. you know i kind of agree with you there, mankind , humanity , there is so much evil in this world, and it never seems to go away ! great write lorna.. i feel sad that i have to live in a world full of so much hatred, evil and cruelty , its not right , never has been
February 18th, 2018 06:11
God\'s Mistake
orchidee said:
This is so Lorna, and not just when people are being nasty. I don\'t see it as a mistake, though I understand what you mean. It\'s all in God\'s plan of salvation, though we do not have infinite wisdom, as He does. Oh, and as I do too (well 99% of the time? lol).
February 18th, 2018 05:57
orchidee said:
This is so Lorna, and not just when people are being nasty. I don\'t see it as a mistake, though I understand what you mean. It\'s all in God\'s plan of salvation, though we do not have infinite wisdom, as He does. Oh, and as I do too (well 99% of the time? lol).
February 18th, 2018 05:57
Old Love - No Regrets (RK)
dusk arising said:
Really like the way you have ended this. Those lines in themselves are really magic.
February 17th, 2018 09:00
dusk arising said:
Really like the way you have ended this. Those lines in themselves are really magic.
February 17th, 2018 09:00
Old Love - No Regrets (RK)
Accidental Poet said:
I hear my own love in some of these words Lorna. A really wonderful write on old love.
February 17th, 2018 07:36
Accidental Poet said:
I hear my own love in some of these words Lorna. A really wonderful write on old love.
February 17th, 2018 07:36
Self Torment - Specialite de la Maison
Laura🌻 said:
A great write, Lorna!
I can relate to what
you wrote! Wondering
and questioning myself...
...many years ago. No longer necessary...I’m glad to say! Enjoyed the read! Enjoy your day!
~Laura~
February 16th, 2018 08:04
Laura🌻 said:
A great write, Lorna!
I can relate to what
you wrote! Wondering
and questioning myself...
...many years ago. No longer necessary...I’m glad to say! Enjoyed the read! Enjoy your day!
~Laura~
February 16th, 2018 08:04
Self Torment - Specialite de la Maison
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Great poet Lorna!!
February 16th, 2018 06:57
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Great poet Lorna!!
February 16th, 2018 06:57
Self Torment - Specialite de la Maison
Lorna said:
It\'s not \"him\" - It\'s \"everyone\"! ha ha. I do try to laugh at myself - this is definitely regressive behavior! Should add that I was with the man I chose because it didn\'t matter to him what I did! Bridget Jones: I like you just the way you are!
February 16th, 2018 06:19
Lorna said:
It\'s not \"him\" - It\'s \"everyone\"! ha ha. I do try to laugh at myself - this is definitely regressive behavior! Should add that I was with the man I chose because it didn\'t matter to him what I did! Bridget Jones: I like you just the way you are!
February 16th, 2018 06:19
Self Torment - Specialite de la Maison
FredPeyer said:
Great poem Lorna. Just be yourself, judging from the way you write, you are one heck of a lady and don\'t need to worry about anything you do. If he does not like it....his loss!
February 16th, 2018 05:58
FredPeyer said:
Great poem Lorna. Just be yourself, judging from the way you write, you are one heck of a lady and don\'t need to worry about anything you do. If he does not like it....his loss!
February 16th, 2018 05:58
My Red Arrow
Caring dove said:
interesting lorna .. i love the idea of the red arrow soaring through the air
February 16th, 2018 03:19
Caring dove said:
interesting lorna .. i love the idea of the red arrow soaring through the air
February 16th, 2018 03:19
Just for You
Accidental Poet said:
A very caring write Lorna. 2 thumbs up. ; )
February 15th, 2018 19:45
Accidental Poet said:
A very caring write Lorna. 2 thumbs up. ; )
February 15th, 2018 19:45
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