Comments received on poems by Lorna



The Cold Moon (February)
Caring dove said:

i really love this! :-) and i love the moon x

February 18th, 2018 06:35

Achtung Spitfire!
Caring dove said:

interesting how you have given a plane \'\' a red dress\'\' and you refer to the plane as \'\' she\'\' i love how you have referred to the plane.. as a strong and deadly woman lol

February 18th, 2018 06:23

God\'s Mistake
Caring dove said:

god , if there is a god, he has nothing to do with the way human beings are .. unfortunately mankind is messed up .. i guess he wanted to create a nice world ... maybe he did but in the end , its the people who have ruined it with their big egos, their greed, false sense of superiority and evilness... i dont really have a belief in god but i guess he would want to have created a nice place of kindness . i don\'t know

February 18th, 2018 06:15

God\'s Mistake
Caring dove said:

hi lorna .. a well expressed poem here...\'\' man is a viscious little virus \'\' wow, thats such a strong and powerful line.. you know i kind of agree with you there, mankind , humanity , there is so much evil in this world, and it never seems to go away ! great write lorna.. i feel sad that i have to live in a world full of so much hatred, evil and cruelty , its not right , never has been

February 18th, 2018 06:11

God\'s Mistake
orchidee said:

This is so Lorna, and not just when people are being nasty. I don\'t see it as a mistake, though I understand what you mean. It\'s all in God\'s plan of salvation, though we do not have infinite wisdom, as He does. Oh, and as I do too (well 99% of the time? lol).

February 18th, 2018 05:57

Old Love - No Regrets (RK)
dusk arising said:

Really like the way you have ended this. Those lines in themselves are really magic.

February 17th, 2018 09:00

Self Torment - Specialite de la Maison
Laura🌻 said:

A great write, Lorna!
I can relate to what
you wrote! Wondering
and questioning myself...
...many years ago. No longer necessary...I’m glad to say! Enjoyed the read! Enjoy your day!

~Laura~

February 16th, 2018 08:04

Self Torment - Specialite de la Maison
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Great poet Lorna!!

February 16th, 2018 06:57

Self Torment - Specialite de la Maison
Lorna said:

It\'s not \"him\" - It\'s \"everyone\"! ha ha. I do try to laugh at myself - this is definitely regressive behavior! Should add that I was with the man I chose because it didn\'t matter to him what I did! Bridget Jones: I like you just the way you are!

February 16th, 2018 06:19

Self Torment - Specialite de la Maison
FredPeyer said:

Great poem Lorna. Just be yourself, judging from the way you write, you are one heck of a lady and don\'t need to worry about anything you do. If he does not like it....his loss!

February 16th, 2018 05:58

My Red Arrow
Caring dove said:

interesting lorna .. i love the idea of the red arrow soaring through the air

February 16th, 2018 03:19

Just for You
FredPeyer said:

Your beautiful poem paints a very loving and tender picture and does say a lot between the lines. Well done!

February 15th, 2018 15:24

Just for You
Laura🌻 said:

A meaningful and
beautiful write, Lorna!
Pure love and
tenderness!

~Laura~

February 15th, 2018 11:54

Just for You
Michael Edwards said:

Such a super poignant write - great work Lorna.

February 15th, 2018 11:28

Just for You
Fay Slimm. said:

Superb poetry here Lorna - must put this appealing few lines into my faves. - -- have never read better - first class writing.

February 15th, 2018 05:45

Just for You
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks LORNA ~ I work with a lot of students with SPECIFIC NEEDS and it is very rewarding. My Maternal Grandfather was BLIND so i can empathise ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BROTHERLY HUGS ~ BRIAN @@@

February 15th, 2018 05:44

My Red Arrow
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Beautiful illustration of Your LOVE for us All ! I love the Native American culture ~ love the picture \"CUPID pull back your BOW\" ................ ! I have written a POEM on the HAVSUPAI TRIBE who live 10 miles into The Grand Canyon but its publication coincided with that awful Helicopter tragedy so I will post it next week ~ OK Yours as always ~ Valentine HUGS ~ BRIAN @@@

February 14th, 2018 11:27

My Red Arrow
Heather T said:

Let\'s hope our targets are worthy of full quivers! Love this little beauty.

February 14th, 2018 07:55

My Red Arrow
Fay Slimm. said:

Such a fresh and vibrant approach to Valentine\'s Day dear Lorna - I love the punch of those final two lines.

February 14th, 2018 06:23

Too Bad She Died - She Made Lovely Pickles
dusk arising said:

Lovely.

February 13th, 2018 15:42

No Way to Kiss a Country Man
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

\"If He kisses like Country ~ He is Country\" Thanks for sharin\' LORNA ! I love the Appalachians ~ the few remaining Ole Timers with their Blue Grass an\' banjo pickin\' etc. But be quick they are a dyin\' breed ! Yours BRIAN (UK)

February 13th, 2018 15:34

Too Bad She Died - She Made Lovely Pickles
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Beautiful....nice to read!!

February 13th, 2018 12:19

Too Bad She Died - She Made Lovely Pickles
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, those women were wonderfully strong in the most difficult of times.

February 13th, 2018 09:05

Too Bad She Died - She Made Lovely Pickles
Lorna said:

Thank you Laura! This picture is just one I found to represent a real person.... she could do anything! Someone who had grown up in the Depression years. Glad it reminded you of your grandmother - their lives were probably harder but I still think better in many ways... that might just be romantic fancy though.

February 13th, 2018 07:18

Too Bad She Died - She Made Lovely Pickles
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,
What a woman! A sweet
write...and I love pickles!
Beautiful pic. She looks like
my great grandmother who
lived on a farm and taught
my mom to can fresh
tomatoes! This tradition
is still going on in our
family! Thank you for
sharing!
~Laura~

February 13th, 2018 07:07

There is Only Love
ron parrish aka wordman said:

nature is where the peace is,the fresh air,the beautiful sky displays,apple pie and love

February 12th, 2018 18:26

No Way to Kiss a Country Man
Michael Edwards said:

Great fun read Lorna

February 12th, 2018 09:04

No Way to Kiss a Country Man
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, that man has seen life and is full of knowledge.

February 12th, 2018 08:59

No Way to Kiss a Country Man
Fay Slimm. said:

A well-written tribute to the men who were real in every sense Lorna - - they certainly meant what they said and did - - though you were only nineteen methinks that woudl have been a kiss to remember. Great read.

February 12th, 2018 08:36

There is Only Love
MaddieJ said:

This was so sweet. I wonder if you\'d check out my latest poem \"Falling\" I think you might enjoy it. It\'s about love.

February 12th, 2018 01:58



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