Comments received on poems by sylviasearcher
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Neville said:
the punctuation in this, set it apart
short, sharp and powerful as any kidney punch...
February 7th, 2019 12:59
Neville said:
the punctuation in this, set it apart
short, sharp and powerful as any kidney punch...
February 7th, 2019 12:59
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siranswerer said:
I dont know the rules on answering prose with prose, so forgive me if I am out of place.
However, please read the \"575\" that I hold dear to me, and reflect on your own?
Just, let yourself go.
Let yourself float and the Words,
Will carry you home.
February 7th, 2019 09:28
siranswerer said:
I dont know the rules on answering prose with prose, so forgive me if I am out of place.
However, please read the \"575\" that I hold dear to me, and reflect on your own?
Just, let yourself go.
Let yourself float and the Words,
Will carry you home.
February 7th, 2019 09:28
End
Michael Edwards said:
Love 575s - I never call them Haikus or senryus etc as the purists can be quick to criticise (not here but on other sites I hasten to add) - I just think of them as \'in the haiku format\'. Anyway enough of my waffle - love this one - a real feel of desolation to it.
February 7th, 2019 03:10
Michael Edwards said:
Love 575s - I never call them Haikus or senryus etc as the purists can be quick to criticise (not here but on other sites I hasten to add) - I just think of them as \'in the haiku format\'. Anyway enough of my waffle - love this one - a real feel of desolation to it.
February 7th, 2019 03:10
Sickness
Fay Slimm. said:
An outpour of needed words in this revolt against pharma-control - - powerful read Sylvia.
February 6th, 2019 03:25
Fay Slimm. said:
An outpour of needed words in this revolt against pharma-control - - powerful read Sylvia.
February 6th, 2019 03:25
Sickness
psychofemale said:
such a nice rhyme and flow, the words flew right off the tongue perfectly....perfect :D
February 5th, 2019 20:55
psychofemale said:
such a nice rhyme and flow, the words flew right off the tongue perfectly....perfect :D
February 5th, 2019 20:55
Sickness
Netashi said:
Acceptance is the bittersweet stage of grief. Very well written keep up the great work.
- T
February 5th, 2019 13:50
Netashi said:
Acceptance is the bittersweet stage of grief. Very well written keep up the great work.
- T
February 5th, 2019 13:50
Sickness
Poetic Dan said:
First read in a while and I\'m so glad it was yours as I felt every word. Thank you for what felt so sad but yet balanced
Much love and respect
February 5th, 2019 10:33
Poetic Dan said:
First read in a while and I\'m so glad it was yours as I felt every word. Thank you for what felt so sad but yet balanced
Much love and respect
February 5th, 2019 10:33
Sickness
Neville said:
some things just have to be said.. yet it takes a poet to say it this well..
February 5th, 2019 08:12
Neville said:
some things just have to be said.. yet it takes a poet to say it this well..
February 5th, 2019 08:12
Different Pages
Lorna said:
\"they\" are always going to judge dear Sylvia and the only thing that works is learning how to put up your force field sad to say............ The world is wonderful........ it\'s the people... it\'s especially hard when you go with an open heart and then get pummeled.
February 4th, 2019 08:35
Lorna said:
\"they\" are always going to judge dear Sylvia and the only thing that works is learning how to put up your force field sad to say............ The world is wonderful........ it\'s the people... it\'s especially hard when you go with an open heart and then get pummeled.
February 4th, 2019 08:35
Different Pages
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. If only more people could have more open minds and understand each others libraries the world would be a much better place.
February 4th, 2019 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. If only more people could have more open minds and understand each others libraries the world would be a much better place.
February 4th, 2019 01:28
Different Pages
dusk arising said:
Love the way you have used the books and library analogy here. I just call it baggage.
February 3rd, 2019 20:43
dusk arising said:
Love the way you have used the books and library analogy here. I just call it baggage.
February 3rd, 2019 20:43
Different Pages
Michael Edwards said:
Fresh music to my ears - so true and so well expressed in this super poem.
February 3rd, 2019 04:25
Michael Edwards said:
Fresh music to my ears - so true and so well expressed in this super poem.
February 3rd, 2019 04:25
Searching
dusk arising said:
Trying to fall into meditation i am \"searching for a moment\'s peace where nothingness is out of reach\" and failing once again.
So much of todays frustrating life is here in your words, the mental baggage upon our shoulders. Oh to be a ploughman.
February 2nd, 2019 08:14
dusk arising said:
Trying to fall into meditation i am \"searching for a moment\'s peace where nothingness is out of reach\" and failing once again.
So much of todays frustrating life is here in your words, the mental baggage upon our shoulders. Oh to be a ploughman.
February 2nd, 2019 08:14
Searching
orchidee said:
I had a similar quote (heehee).\'If we don\'t know what we\'re looking for, how will we know when we\'ve found it?\' Doh!
February 1st, 2019 12:31
orchidee said:
I had a similar quote (heehee).\'If we don\'t know what we\'re looking for, how will we know when we\'ve found it?\' Doh!
February 1st, 2019 12:31
Searching
Michael Edwards said:
In empty spaces
Searching for the great unfound
nothing to declare.
A fine write Sylvia.
February 1st, 2019 09:03
Michael Edwards said:
In empty spaces
Searching for the great unfound
nothing to declare.
A fine write Sylvia.
February 1st, 2019 09:03
Searching
Neville said:
tis where it all began...
should you ever find what it is you are looking for, drop me a line
February 1st, 2019 08:36
Neville said:
tis where it all began...
should you ever find what it is you are looking for, drop me a line
February 1st, 2019 08:36
Being
Caleb.A said:
Lovely piece. I sense that you are seeking acceptance/understanding from someone or something. But the reality is that you are alone.
February 1st, 2019 07:27
Caleb.A said:
Lovely piece. I sense that you are seeking acceptance/understanding from someone or something. But the reality is that you are alone.
February 1st, 2019 07:27
ShhhHaiku
Neville said:
I could gorge on haiku any day of the week.... blink.... feels good.. N
February 1st, 2019 04:40
Neville said:
I could gorge on haiku any day of the week.... blink.... feels good.. N
February 1st, 2019 04:40
Adoration
dusk arising said:
All this may be wonderful but in submission... you only submit to yourself.
January 31st, 2019 16:18
dusk arising said:
All this may be wonderful but in submission... you only submit to yourself.
January 31st, 2019 16:18
Adoration
Michael Edwards said:
Your writing isn\'t off here Sylvia. An inspired write.
January 31st, 2019 13:03
Michael Edwards said:
Your writing isn\'t off here Sylvia. An inspired write.
January 31st, 2019 13:03
Adoration
Neville said:
what an exquisite bit of erotica, if you dont mind me saying so.. tis certainly another favourwrite of this old man :)
January 31st, 2019 11:55
Neville said:
what an exquisite bit of erotica, if you dont mind me saying so.. tis certainly another favourwrite of this old man :)
January 31st, 2019 11:55
The whir of the unsaid
Neville said:
Great title, some great lines and a whole lot of great insights shared.. if indeed autobiographical.... I hope you just made it up, but then I\'m a great big softy ....
January 31st, 2019 04:33
Neville said:
Great title, some great lines and a whole lot of great insights shared.. if indeed autobiographical.... I hope you just made it up, but then I\'m a great big softy ....
January 31st, 2019 04:33
Barren Land
Neville said:
this is my new favourite poem of yours sylviasearcher a real good un.... N
January 30th, 2019 09:54
Neville said:
this is my new favourite poem of yours sylviasearcher a real good un.... N
January 30th, 2019 09:54
Barren Land
Fay Slimm. said:
Excellent read Sylvia - - love all the metaphors along with fine rhyming.
January 28th, 2019 17:34
Fay Slimm. said:
Excellent read Sylvia - - love all the metaphors along with fine rhyming.
January 28th, 2019 17:34
Barren Land
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Hibernation and rejuvenation \" wow I like the word choice that you employ for your poem and the imagery and muse all combined so artistically wow. Kudos.
Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too . Best wishes,
January 28th, 2019 12:38
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Hibernation and rejuvenation \" wow I like the word choice that you employ for your poem and the imagery and muse all combined so artistically wow. Kudos.
Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too . Best wishes,
January 28th, 2019 12:38
Barren Land
Laura🌻 said:
sylviasearcher,
A fine write complemented by a great Sylvia Plath quote!
One may
“see the end begin today”...
whereas another
“the end is a chance for new beginning”!
I enjoyed this read!
~Laura~
January 28th, 2019 07:17
Laura🌻 said:
sylviasearcher,
A fine write complemented by a great Sylvia Plath quote!
One may
“see the end begin today”...
whereas another
“the end is a chance for new beginning”!
I enjoyed this read!
~Laura~
January 28th, 2019 07:17
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