Comments received on poems by sylviasearcher
Forgiveness
Neville said:
I really do think this is good.. it kind of reaches out and gives the reader a bit of a gentle rough shake if that makes sense... I forgive ya.. if that helps... N
December 28th, 2018 05:40
Neville said:
I really do think this is good.. it kind of reaches out and gives the reader a bit of a gentle rough shake if that makes sense... I forgive ya.. if that helps... N
December 28th, 2018 05:40
Forgiveness
Simon Bromley said:
Powerful write and a credit to this site! Keep up the good work.
December 28th, 2018 03:48
Simon Bromley said:
Powerful write and a credit to this site! Keep up the good work.
December 28th, 2018 03:48
Forgiveness
Goldfinch60 said:
That \'bad\' will soon be dispelled as the words that you write will change the bad to the good.
December 28th, 2018 03:27
Goldfinch60 said:
That \'bad\' will soon be dispelled as the words that you write will change the bad to the good.
December 28th, 2018 03:27
The Dreamer - Part 2
Neville said:
Part two is better... in all respects....
December 27th, 2018 12:37
Neville said:
Part two is better... in all respects....
December 27th, 2018 12:37
The Dreamer
Neville said:
I read this a couple of days ago and was impressed by the wording and very subtle intonation and rhyme... I had always intended to re-visit and leave my impression... so here goes... there are a couple of lines I would like to have written myself.. is this about a dreamer who dreams maybe... not so keen on the concluding stanza.. I think it perhaps does not need the last verse as writ... the current penultimate stanza makes a better ending.. at least in my mind... N
December 27th, 2018 12:31
Neville said:
I read this a couple of days ago and was impressed by the wording and very subtle intonation and rhyme... I had always intended to re-visit and leave my impression... so here goes... there are a couple of lines I would like to have written myself.. is this about a dreamer who dreams maybe... not so keen on the concluding stanza.. I think it perhaps does not need the last verse as writ... the current penultimate stanza makes a better ending.. at least in my mind... N
December 27th, 2018 12:31
Home for Christmas
Goldfinch60 said:
May that singing continue in your world. Very good emotive write.
December 24th, 2018 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
May that singing continue in your world. Very good emotive write.
December 24th, 2018 01:06
Home for Christmas
Simon Bromley said:
cleverly wrote and befitting of the season.
December 23rd, 2018 09:10
Simon Bromley said:
cleverly wrote and befitting of the season.
December 23rd, 2018 09:10
Home for Christmas
Michael Edwards said:
This took me all the way to the somewhat enigmatic ending - a fitting work for the festive season.
December 23rd, 2018 05:11
Michael Edwards said:
This took me all the way to the somewhat enigmatic ending - a fitting work for the festive season.
December 23rd, 2018 05:11
Home for Christmas
Neville said:
and the story continues.. as indeed it should and must.. you appear to write here of a place much desired .. a retreat.. somewhere to relax, love and take the weight of ya feet.. enjoyed and true N
December 23rd, 2018 04:34
Neville said:
and the story continues.. as indeed it should and must.. you appear to write here of a place much desired .. a retreat.. somewhere to relax, love and take the weight of ya feet.. enjoyed and true N
December 23rd, 2018 04:34
Sad Sounds
Neville said:
one of the best haiku\'s I have read for some time.. domo arigato
December 19th, 2018 04:04
Neville said:
one of the best haiku\'s I have read for some time.. domo arigato
December 19th, 2018 04:04
Nothing
Neville said:
sometimes we find something where nothing once was...
there is nothing quite like silence, is there.. enjoyed N
December 18th, 2018 06:30
Neville said:
sometimes we find something where nothing once was...
there is nothing quite like silence, is there.. enjoyed N
December 18th, 2018 06:30
Free From Nothing
Neville said:
I particularly like the first two stanza\'s rounded off with Faraway from Everything... N
December 17th, 2018 12:32
Neville said:
I particularly like the first two stanza\'s rounded off with Faraway from Everything... N
December 17th, 2018 12:32
Close
Neville said:
why would I do that, one of the things I quite like about myself is my integrity...
December 14th, 2018 06:57
Neville said:
why would I do that, one of the things I quite like about myself is my integrity...
December 14th, 2018 06:57
Close
Neville said:
my new fave...are you sure you are not Ms Plath reincarnated... I really like the way the first and final stanza very nearly repeats itself...not far short of full marks.... Nevile
December 14th, 2018 06:35
Neville said:
my new fave...are you sure you are not Ms Plath reincarnated... I really like the way the first and final stanza very nearly repeats itself...not far short of full marks.... Nevile
December 14th, 2018 06:35
Sacrifice
Neville said:
wickedly ragged and real.. once started, I felt compelled to see it through to the bitter end.. powerful stuff indeed and with loads of potentially powerful subliminal messages and archetypes .. both Young and Freud would have a field day.. Bravo...
December 14th, 2018 02:48
Neville said:
wickedly ragged and real.. once started, I felt compelled to see it through to the bitter end.. powerful stuff indeed and with loads of potentially powerful subliminal messages and archetypes .. both Young and Freud would have a field day.. Bravo...
December 14th, 2018 02:48
Alone
Neville said:
not gone but merely set aside methinks..
the
ocean is wider than tis deep, maybe there is hope yet... sad yes, fatalistic maybe but certainly enjoyed... Neville
December 13th, 2018 15:19
Neville said:
not gone but merely set aside methinks..
the
ocean is wider than tis deep, maybe there is hope yet... sad yes, fatalistic maybe but certainly enjoyed... Neville
December 13th, 2018 15:19
Sanddune Solitude
Neville said:
precariously balanced on the very edge between romantic dream and erotica fantasy... whatever the case, I enjoyed my visit here... maybe we need another category.. I propose \' fantica\'.... Neville
December 12th, 2018 08:32
Neville said:
precariously balanced on the very edge between romantic dream and erotica fantasy... whatever the case, I enjoyed my visit here... maybe we need another category.. I propose \' fantica\'.... Neville
December 12th, 2018 08:32
Fine
Neville said:
I get your message sylviasearcher, how could I not.... fine is okay when applied to the weather...however as a response when asked how one feels or for an opinion, it means very little... I enjoyed reading and digesting these words.. very much so Neville
December 10th, 2018 08:16
Neville said:
I get your message sylviasearcher, how could I not.... fine is okay when applied to the weather...however as a response when asked how one feels or for an opinion, it means very little... I enjoyed reading and digesting these words.. very much so Neville
December 10th, 2018 08:16
Fine
Debsspot said:
I\'m so familiar with this picture. Many my age are. Beautifully written. Thankfully things are changing.
December 10th, 2018 04:34
Debsspot said:
I\'m so familiar with this picture. Many my age are. Beautifully written. Thankfully things are changing.
December 10th, 2018 04:34
Fine
Michael Edwards said:
Even worse is \'Not so bad@. But either way they are both quite inane responses. Fine write.
December 10th, 2018 03:54
Michael Edwards said:
Even worse is \'Not so bad@. But either way they are both quite inane responses. Fine write.
December 10th, 2018 03:54
Fine
orchidee said:
I suppose it\'s all we can say, and do say, in reply to some people\'s \'How are you?\' only knowing some people on a surface level.
We wouldn\'t say to everyone: \'Well, actually I\'m not OK\', and then give them a 3 hour (or apx?)explanation of how we really are!
December 10th, 2018 03:10
orchidee said:
I suppose it\'s all we can say, and do say, in reply to some people\'s \'How are you?\' only knowing some people on a surface level.
We wouldn\'t say to everyone: \'Well, actually I\'m not OK\', and then give them a 3 hour (or apx?)explanation of how we really are!
December 10th, 2018 03:10
Neediness
Michael Edwards said:
Love the way it is written with \'he\' but it could read \'Those who understand?
December 9th, 2018 06:06
Michael Edwards said:
Love the way it is written with \'he\' but it could read \'Those who understand?
December 9th, 2018 06:06
Neediness
Neville said:
Everyone has their very own critical point, beyond which it is a good idea to either have a Swiss Army Knife handy, or a friend who understands..
A fine haiku.... N
December 7th, 2018 13:02
Neville said:
Everyone has their very own critical point, beyond which it is a good idea to either have a Swiss Army Knife handy, or a friend who understands..
A fine haiku.... N
December 7th, 2018 13:02
Melancholy
Neville said:
emotionally charged & moribund...a moment captured in time.. I hope the fog is lifted... N
December 7th, 2018 08:25
Neville said:
emotionally charged & moribund...a moment captured in time.. I hope the fog is lifted... N
December 7th, 2018 08:25
Nothing
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
\"Crafted me on sheets of poetry\" woww such creative lines in this awesome poem with great word choice and metaphors. Superb rhyming muse. Kudos.
Pleez do review/add your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too . I like meeting new poets and their poems.
December 6th, 2018 07:51
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
\"Crafted me on sheets of poetry\" woww such creative lines in this awesome poem with great word choice and metaphors. Superb rhyming muse. Kudos.
Pleez do review/add your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too . I like meeting new poets and their poems.
December 6th, 2018 07:51
Awake
Neville said:
Move me like your poetry
Until I\'m weak with breathless ecstasy
I really must remember these lines for when I\'m standing at a bar behind someone I feel drawn to... there are other line here too but that would be telling.. and of course, a gentleman never tells... N
December 6th, 2018 05:18
Neville said:
Move me like your poetry
Until I\'m weak with breathless ecstasy
I really must remember these lines for when I\'m standing at a bar behind someone I feel drawn to... there are other line here too but that would be telling.. and of course, a gentleman never tells... N
December 6th, 2018 05:18
Just Another Mad Girl\'s Love Song
Neville said:
I can appreciate just how cathartic it must have felt having got these words out into the open and capturing them here.. there are some great lines and some very memorable ones too... I wont forget this page and I thank you for it...
December 6th, 2018 02:41
Neville said:
I can appreciate just how cathartic it must have felt having got these words out into the open and capturing them here.. there are some great lines and some very memorable ones too... I wont forget this page and I thank you for it...
December 6th, 2018 02:41
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