Comments received on poems by sylviasearcher
Obsession
Poetic Dan said:
Wow what was powerful and made me cry as I read it out loud. Keep turning thoses corners and you\'ll be found. Much love and respect x
October 24th, 2018 09:14
Poetic Dan said:
Wow what was powerful and made me cry as I read it out loud. Keep turning thoses corners and you\'ll be found. Much love and respect x
October 24th, 2018 09:14
Obsession
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing & caring SYLVIA : Love the Quote & Song & Poem all excellent. OBSESSION is a good word for True & Total LOVE ! Im OBSESSED with BRIAN & Hes OBSESSED with me ! Unfortunately until EASTER 2019 we are 11,500 miles apart ! WE phone and SKYPE each day and share this site BUT what my OBSESSION needs is a big HUUUUUUUUG ! Love your posting please check MINE : SUNRISE : SUNSET : Blessings & Love ANGELA (NZ) š§”š§”š§”š§”
October 24th, 2018 05:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing & caring SYLVIA : Love the Quote & Song & Poem all excellent. OBSESSION is a good word for True & Total LOVE ! Im OBSESSED with BRIAN & Hes OBSESSED with me ! Unfortunately until EASTER 2019 we are 11,500 miles apart ! WE phone and SKYPE each day and share this site BUT what my OBSESSION needs is a big HUUUUUUUUG ! Love your posting please check MINE : SUNRISE : SUNSET : Blessings & Love ANGELA (NZ) š§”š§”š§”š§”
October 24th, 2018 05:56
Awake
Simple-Man87 said:
This was incredible. So much feeling, and passion. Very well done.
October 23rd, 2018 09:44
Simple-Man87 said:
This was incredible. So much feeling, and passion. Very well done.
October 23rd, 2018 09:44
Half Moon
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautiful description in poetic terms of the moon\'s striking radiance - - a lovely read Sylvia
October 19th, 2018 07:05
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautiful description in poetic terms of the moon\'s striking radiance - - a lovely read Sylvia
October 19th, 2018 07:05
Alone
orchidee said:
We can be \'lost in a crowd\', if I\'ve gathered the intended theme of your poem?
Me being daft now - oohh one is never alone. There\'s always 3 of ya - me, myself, and I. heehee
October 16th, 2018 02:40
orchidee said:
We can be \'lost in a crowd\', if I\'ve gathered the intended theme of your poem?
Me being daft now - oohh one is never alone. There\'s always 3 of ya - me, myself, and I. heehee
October 16th, 2018 02:40
Nothing
Michael Edwards said:
Whether intended or otherwise great meanings can be found in these words - a great read.
October 15th, 2018 01:41
Michael Edwards said:
Whether intended or otherwise great meanings can be found in these words - a great read.
October 15th, 2018 01:41
Dying to be seen
dusk arising said:
Ah, re-cycling at its zenith. Nothing goes to waste.
October 12th, 2018 09:25
dusk arising said:
Ah, re-cycling at its zenith. Nothing goes to waste.
October 12th, 2018 09:25
Extinguish
Unobtrusive Sun said:
This is the first of yours I\'ve read. Great work! You tell a very engaging story, laced with speculative wordplay. It was a pleasure to read!
October 10th, 2018 01:11
Unobtrusive Sun said:
This is the first of yours I\'ve read. Great work! You tell a very engaging story, laced with speculative wordplay. It was a pleasure to read!
October 10th, 2018 01:11
Awake
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Extremely romantic poem that clearly shows your depth of feeling and the images presented in your write. I don\'t doubt the words you submitted are considered poems. Do not doubt yourself and keep up with your writing. We enjoy it! :)
September 29th, 2018 13:40
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Extremely romantic poem that clearly shows your depth of feeling and the images presented in your write. I don\'t doubt the words you submitted are considered poems. Do not doubt yourself and keep up with your writing. We enjoy it! :)
September 29th, 2018 13:40
Awake
orchidee said:
Oops yes, does rhyme! lol. Sorry!
Sometimes I don\'t spot the rhymes, if they are not immediately in the next line of the poem, such as ā¦..cat, then the next line......mat.
September 28th, 2018 14:06
orchidee said:
Oops yes, does rhyme! lol. Sorry!
Sometimes I don\'t spot the rhymes, if they are not immediately in the next line of the poem, such as ā¦..cat, then the next line......mat.
September 28th, 2018 14:06
Awake
orchidee said:
Well it\'s definitely poetry, and good! Does not have to rhyme. Though I\'m fussing about rhyming, syllables, etc, but necessary for some of my semi-formal stuff!
September 28th, 2018 11:23
orchidee said:
Well it\'s definitely poetry, and good! Does not have to rhyme. Though I\'m fussing about rhyming, syllables, etc, but necessary for some of my semi-formal stuff!
September 28th, 2018 11:23
Awake
Christina8 said:
This is an outstanding piece of poetry!! I agree with Kevin that the calibur of this piece is top notch! I rarely save favorites, but this is one of them. Great job!
September 28th, 2018 08:10
Christina8 said:
This is an outstanding piece of poetry!! I agree with Kevin that the calibur of this piece is top notch! I rarely save favorites, but this is one of them. Great job!
September 28th, 2018 08:10
Awake
kevin browne said:
I\'ve read some poems on here this morning and found the standard quite outstanding. This is one of them. It owns a purity of such deepened and relentlessly opens up a new perception of what poetry can do. To me, this is hitting pretty high towards the top noted. Stunningly written. I think I need to step up a touch or two.
September 28th, 2018 06:17
kevin browne said:
I\'ve read some poems on here this morning and found the standard quite outstanding. This is one of them. It owns a purity of such deepened and relentlessly opens up a new perception of what poetry can do. To me, this is hitting pretty high towards the top noted. Stunningly written. I think I need to step up a touch or two.
September 28th, 2018 06:17
Kiss of Death
Gogeta said:
Fantastic poem and if it\'s still a work in progress I can\'t wait to see its conclusion. You have a great talent and I can\'t wait to read more š
September 25th, 2018 11:25
Gogeta said:
Fantastic poem and if it\'s still a work in progress I can\'t wait to see its conclusion. You have a great talent and I can\'t wait to read more š
September 25th, 2018 11:25
Sensing Me
Lauraš» said:
sylviasearcher,
A compelling read. Your write reminds me of Maya Angelouās āI Know Why The Caged Bird Singsā. A powerful literary piece!
Your poemās meaning is heightened with the repeating stanza. It works very well as does Judy Garlandās
š¶Over The Rainbow š¶
A super write!
~Laura~
September 23rd, 2018 09:32
Lauraš» said:
sylviasearcher,
A compelling read. Your write reminds me of Maya Angelouās āI Know Why The Caged Bird Singsā. A powerful literary piece!
Your poemās meaning is heightened with the repeating stanza. It works very well as does Judy Garlandās
š¶Over The Rainbow š¶
A super write!
~Laura~
September 23rd, 2018 09:32
ShhhHaiku
Lauraš» said:
Sylvia,
A great write with an awesome alliteration! Thereās a lot going on within those nine words!
At first I read it as if it were a nightmare where one is screaming without making a sound sound.
On the second read, another thought came to mind because of today...
September 11, 2001š¤
On a peaceful, beautiful morning...PEACE was compromised and silenced many!
~Laura~
September 11th, 2018 07:59
Lauraš» said:
Sylvia,
A great write with an awesome alliteration! Thereās a lot going on within those nine words!
At first I read it as if it were a nightmare where one is screaming without making a sound sound.
On the second read, another thought came to mind because of today...
September 11, 2001š¤
On a peaceful, beautiful morning...PEACE was compromised and silenced many!
~Laura~
September 11th, 2018 07:59
ShhhHaiku
orchidee said:
A fine write Sylvia. I too did a poem on \'Sshhh\' but no one heard it. I whispered it! doh! lol.
September 11th, 2018 07:17
orchidee said:
A fine write Sylvia. I too did a poem on \'Sshhh\' but no one heard it. I whispered it! doh! lol.
September 11th, 2018 07:17
Ode to an old friend
Goldfinch60 said:
May that blade be put away for ever and lost from your mind. Your children need you, we need you, the world needs you.
September 2nd, 2018 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
May that blade be put away for ever and lost from your mind. Your children need you, we need you, the world needs you.
September 2nd, 2018 00:49
Endless
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely brilliant I can so vibe with this
Endless in motion like all things in the world. It only has an illusion of Stillness, we live in a wave of constant vibration.
Thanks for sharing yours
Much love and respect
August 31st, 2018 13:23
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely brilliant I can so vibe with this
Endless in motion like all things in the world. It only has an illusion of Stillness, we live in a wave of constant vibration.
Thanks for sharing yours
Much love and respect
August 31st, 2018 13:23
Endless
Michael Edwards said:
Continue at the beginning - am I loopy? Yes much enjoyed!
August 31st, 2018 09:54
Michael Edwards said:
Continue at the beginning - am I loopy? Yes much enjoyed!
August 31st, 2018 09:54
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