Comments received on poems by sylviasearcher
Severing the beast\'s head
dusk arising said:
There comes a time...... .... a time well described by you.
There follows another time, time to confront the world and gather anew, respect, friendship, love and devotion.
July 11th, 2018 14:45
dusk arising said:
There comes a time...... .... a time well described by you.
There follows another time, time to confront the world and gather anew, respect, friendship, love and devotion.
July 11th, 2018 14:45
Wild
OldPine said:
Beautiful . “She watched in awe at the mighty strength
Powered not by mankind, but ancient moon”
Love how this simplifies life that we all forget to much these days.
July 5th, 2018 05:09
OldPine said:
Beautiful . “She watched in awe at the mighty strength
Powered not by mankind, but ancient moon”
Love how this simplifies life that we all forget to much these days.
July 5th, 2018 05:09
Wild
sylviasearcher said:
I have not tested this but based on my vast experience of cake... I think most would float!
What are you doing at the alpha hotel in Sorrento?
July 4th, 2018 10:13
sylviasearcher said:
I have not tested this but based on my vast experience of cake... I think most would float!
What are you doing at the alpha hotel in Sorrento?
July 4th, 2018 10:13
I died again today
Poetic Dan said:
That was hard read but I thank you for that, the place my mind took me didn\'t feel nice. Then I realised that\'s the old me, to nerves to say what I know. Thank you for helping me see where I come from and I still need that bit of healing on this one
July 4th, 2018 06:43
Poetic Dan said:
That was hard read but I thank you for that, the place my mind took me didn\'t feel nice. Then I realised that\'s the old me, to nerves to say what I know. Thank you for helping me see where I come from and I still need that bit of healing on this one
July 4th, 2018 06:43
Wild
Michael Edwards said:
Super work - it goes well with Fay\'s posting today. Enjoyed.
July 4th, 2018 05:29
Michael Edwards said:
Super work - it goes well with Fay\'s posting today. Enjoyed.
July 4th, 2018 05:29
Wild
FineB said:
Wow sylviasearcher!
A powerful, vivid poem!
Wonderful!
Keep writing
FineB
July 4th, 2018 05:26
FineB said:
Wow sylviasearcher!
A powerful, vivid poem!
Wonderful!
Keep writing
FineB
July 4th, 2018 05:26
The Absence of Words
Heartwriter said:
Very nice. Sometimes nothing is all we see. You showed it well. Good write.
June 26th, 2018 04:29
Heartwriter said:
Very nice. Sometimes nothing is all we see. You showed it well. Good write.
June 26th, 2018 04:29
Stolen Lines
Michael Edwards said:
Of course it\'s a poem and a good one at that.
June 25th, 2018 02:34
Michael Edwards said:
Of course it\'s a poem and a good one at that.
June 25th, 2018 02:34
The Dreamer
willyweed said:
to dreams and dreamers near and far the dreams we dream are who we are
great write Sylvia ww
June 12th, 2018 17:12
willyweed said:
to dreams and dreamers near and far the dreams we dream are who we are
great write Sylvia ww
June 12th, 2018 17:12
Fall
Jhe said:
there are mornings when going for a pee is done resentfully, and bed gets crawled back into without eyes ever opening, and the only reason the birds don\'t get cursed is coz sleep stepped up so they weren\'t even heard for more a minute before that start of the day faded away ...before my mind fell under the strain into a sleep that wasted a chunk of my life again!
it will pass...it usually does
June 2nd, 2018 22:23
Jhe said:
there are mornings when going for a pee is done resentfully, and bed gets crawled back into without eyes ever opening, and the only reason the birds don\'t get cursed is coz sleep stepped up so they weren\'t even heard for more a minute before that start of the day faded away ...before my mind fell under the strain into a sleep that wasted a chunk of my life again!
it will pass...it usually does
June 2nd, 2018 22:23
The Dreamer
rrivera138 said:
Oh my God. The writing is impeccable. I wish I could write this well. The dreamer is still lucid enough to write to the woke.
May 10th, 2018 13:10
rrivera138 said:
Oh my God. The writing is impeccable. I wish I could write this well. The dreamer is still lucid enough to write to the woke.
May 10th, 2018 13:10
The Dreamer
Michael Edwards said:
You write some great pieces and this is top drawer Sylvia.
May 9th, 2018 02:38
Michael Edwards said:
You write some great pieces and this is top drawer Sylvia.
May 9th, 2018 02:38
The light in my dreams
Aa Harvey said:
Nice poem. Out of darkness into light. My poetry has a lot of light and darkness in it, as I am sure do other poets poems, and I have just listened to three songs about dreams (Ozzy, Gabrielle and Fleetwood Mac) so I thought I would read this poem and I was not disappointed.
In Winter I was longing for the light, and this poem reminds me of that time perfectly, as well as the many other meanings the poem has, concerning Heaven / Hell / Depression etc.
I like a lot of the imagery in the poem and I like finding meaning in various lines such as
\"I did not know how well acquainted I had become with my old friend Darkness.
He had wrapped me up so I could not feel, hear or see.\"
This line describes me and my search for love perfectly.
May 4th, 2018 04:22
Aa Harvey said:
Nice poem. Out of darkness into light. My poetry has a lot of light and darkness in it, as I am sure do other poets poems, and I have just listened to three songs about dreams (Ozzy, Gabrielle and Fleetwood Mac) so I thought I would read this poem and I was not disappointed.
In Winter I was longing for the light, and this poem reminds me of that time perfectly, as well as the many other meanings the poem has, concerning Heaven / Hell / Depression etc.
I like a lot of the imagery in the poem and I like finding meaning in various lines such as
\"I did not know how well acquainted I had become with my old friend Darkness.
He had wrapped me up so I could not feel, hear or see.\"
This line describes me and my search for love perfectly.
May 4th, 2018 04:22
Fall
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have these opposites in life but as long as you rise all is fine.
April 30th, 2018 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have these opposites in life but as long as you rise all is fine.
April 30th, 2018 00:40
I died again today
Jhe said:
Deep, validating, and refreshing; you have a unique way of saying these things. All the best, J
April 24th, 2018 10:42
Jhe said:
Deep, validating, and refreshing; you have a unique way of saying these things. All the best, J
April 24th, 2018 10:42
Serenity
Goldfinch60 said:
There is a key but it takes time and experience to find the one that fits the lock but it is out there, I found mine many years ago and have lived my free and happy life ever since as I go into the evening of life.
April 14th, 2018 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
There is a key but it takes time and experience to find the one that fits the lock but it is out there, I found mine many years ago and have lived my free and happy life ever since as I go into the evening of life.
April 14th, 2018 00:54
Serenity
onepauly said:
you really don\'t need a key, or lock either. great write!
April 13th, 2018 07:31
onepauly said:
you really don\'t need a key, or lock either. great write!
April 13th, 2018 07:31
Serenity
Lorna said:
This poem made me think of how I\'ve come to see life - I struggled a lot with \"being told what to do\" and \"being what everyone wants you to be\" when I was young - and then \"failing\" because I went my own way..... I didn\'t want to let people down but honestly didn\'t want to go with the establishment. This sounds like a cry about getting away from a lot of what society tells you you have to do or not do. Of course I don\'t mean doing awful things instead - just that it is better - although perhaps lonelier - to just be oneself instead of \"polishing chrome\" to stop from thinking about things......... life is simple if we don\'t make it complicated.... and so much more beautiful. I\'ve never regretted making my own decisions.
April 13th, 2018 06:32
Lorna said:
This poem made me think of how I\'ve come to see life - I struggled a lot with \"being told what to do\" and \"being what everyone wants you to be\" when I was young - and then \"failing\" because I went my own way..... I didn\'t want to let people down but honestly didn\'t want to go with the establishment. This sounds like a cry about getting away from a lot of what society tells you you have to do or not do. Of course I don\'t mean doing awful things instead - just that it is better - although perhaps lonelier - to just be oneself instead of \"polishing chrome\" to stop from thinking about things......... life is simple if we don\'t make it complicated.... and so much more beautiful. I\'ve never regretted making my own decisions.
April 13th, 2018 06:32
Serenity
blast219 said:
i like the title and it is every person\'s wish to experience that peace.
April 13th, 2018 06:11
blast219 said:
i like the title and it is every person\'s wish to experience that peace.
April 13th, 2018 06:11
Serenity
Michael Edwards said:
Great structure and makes you think - needs a reread but great write.
April 13th, 2018 03:46
Michael Edwards said:
Great structure and makes you think - needs a reread but great write.
April 13th, 2018 03:46
Serenity
Nicholas Browning said:
I made the locks. Made the keys too. You looking to buy?
Lol. Just jokes. Lovely poem though.
Ahh, I believe everyone is searching for acceptance. Except for those kinds of people that just wanna start up trouble.
Two kinds of people I tell ya\' hwat. Anyhoo, I do like this.
April 13th, 2018 03:42
Nicholas Browning said:
I made the locks. Made the keys too. You looking to buy?
Lol. Just jokes. Lovely poem though.
Ahh, I believe everyone is searching for acceptance. Except for those kinds of people that just wanna start up trouble.
Two kinds of people I tell ya\' hwat. Anyhoo, I do like this.
April 13th, 2018 03:42
Serenity
Daveyboyz said:
Thought provoking poem, I think most of us construct our own prison.
April 13th, 2018 02:58
Daveyboyz said:
Thought provoking poem, I think most of us construct our own prison.
April 13th, 2018 02:58
Escape
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, that special person is just that, special.
April 13th, 2018 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, that special person is just that, special.
April 13th, 2018 00:30
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