Comments received on poems by sylviasearcher
Being
Goldfinch60 said:
Strongly written emotive write, you still have time to be what you want to be.
January 18th, 2019 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Strongly written emotive write, you still have time to be what you want to be.
January 18th, 2019 01:26
Being
asrealastheycome said:
“I thought maybe you would sense my soul
If I laid it bare in every line I breathed
That maybe you would breathe me in
And chase me through a dream”
Perfectly written.
January 17th, 2019 21:20
asrealastheycome said:
“I thought maybe you would sense my soul
If I laid it bare in every line I breathed
That maybe you would breathe me in
And chase me through a dream”
Perfectly written.
January 17th, 2019 21:20
Being
whisperingquill said:
Exquisite my friend
Channeling Plath in this
very symmetrical from the depths. 👍🏼💫
January 17th, 2019 11:58
whisperingquill said:
Exquisite my friend
Channeling Plath in this
very symmetrical from the depths. 👍🏼💫
January 17th, 2019 11:58
Being
Neville said:
No need for me to search high and low today, these words jumped out at me as soon as I opened the page... and they are beautiful words indeed, crafted into a meaningful poem but maybe tinged with a certain sadness... Neville
January 17th, 2019 09:34
Neville said:
No need for me to search high and low today, these words jumped out at me as soon as I opened the page... and they are beautiful words indeed, crafted into a meaningful poem but maybe tinged with a certain sadness... Neville
January 17th, 2019 09:34
Being
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a poignant appeal in this outpour of Being - a most heart-wrenching read dear Sylvia
January 17th, 2019 09:34
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a poignant appeal in this outpour of Being - a most heart-wrenching read dear Sylvia
January 17th, 2019 09:34
Being
dusk arising said:
How much should we reveal of ourselves when we relax into loving. Such a safe secure warm feeling where we let all that we are flow hoping our partner is on the same planet.
Sadly all too often we are eclipsed.
January 17th, 2019 09:12
dusk arising said:
How much should we reveal of ourselves when we relax into loving. Such a safe secure warm feeling where we let all that we are flow hoping our partner is on the same planet.
Sadly all too often we are eclipsed.
January 17th, 2019 09:12
Riding through the rainbow on my space unicorn
Goldfinch60 said:
Chasing rainbows can be as wonderful as your words.
January 17th, 2019 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Chasing rainbows can be as wonderful as your words.
January 17th, 2019 01:20
Riding through the rainbow on my space unicorn
whisperingquill said:
Hell yeah....nice flow sweet alliteration
You zagged within the zig dove within the dip.....that\'s how it\'s done my poetic friend
January 16th, 2019 11:49
whisperingquill said:
Hell yeah....nice flow sweet alliteration
You zagged within the zig dove within the dip.....that\'s how it\'s done my poetic friend
January 16th, 2019 11:49
Riding through the rainbow on my space unicorn
Michael Edwards said:
If this is self indulgence I love its menu - serve me more.
January 16th, 2019 11:18
Michael Edwards said:
If this is self indulgence I love its menu - serve me more.
January 16th, 2019 11:18
Riding through the rainbow on my space unicorn
Neville said:
Nothing wrong in indulging oneself every now and then.. and that sure would be one helluva place to park my unicorn while waiting for my fairy princess to arrive with da pizza...
January 16th, 2019 11:11
Neville said:
Nothing wrong in indulging oneself every now and then.. and that sure would be one helluva place to park my unicorn while waiting for my fairy princess to arrive with da pizza...
January 16th, 2019 11:11
The Opposite of Up
Neville said:
The opposite of up is impossible to definitively define from a global perspective given that \'up\' is a culturally subjective concept ... just as we, or many of us at least struggle to appreciate for example the Inuit Indian has somewhere in the region of fifty words for snow... I like this poem though and there are certainly parts of it that I would be very proud of, if I had thought of them first.... I hope you start to feel more elevated soon.... N :)
January 15th, 2019 12:16
Neville said:
The opposite of up is impossible to definitively define from a global perspective given that \'up\' is a culturally subjective concept ... just as we, or many of us at least struggle to appreciate for example the Inuit Indian has somewhere in the region of fifty words for snow... I like this poem though and there are certainly parts of it that I would be very proud of, if I had thought of them first.... I hope you start to feel more elevated soon.... N :)
January 15th, 2019 12:16
The Opposite of Up
Fay Slimm. said:
Inventive and compelling this read on the state of being between the ups and downs - first rate writing Sylvia.
January 15th, 2019 10:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Inventive and compelling this read on the state of being between the ups and downs - first rate writing Sylvia.
January 15th, 2019 10:20
Hushed
Neville said:
I searched high and low to find these words.. but keep it quiet.. a great ending, very snappy and of course final...
January 15th, 2019 05:19
Neville said:
I searched high and low to find these words.. but keep it quiet.. a great ending, very snappy and of course final...
January 15th, 2019 05:19
Descent
Goldfinch60 said:
Nothingness can be so awe inspiring on many occasions.
January 14th, 2019 14:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Nothingness can be so awe inspiring on many occasions.
January 14th, 2019 14:44
Descent
whisperingquill said:
I must say I am admiring your word coupling in this.....do you feel better off or do you miss it? An egnimatic write my friend
January 14th, 2019 10:38
whisperingquill said:
I must say I am admiring your word coupling in this.....do you feel better off or do you miss it? An egnimatic write my friend
January 14th, 2019 10:38
Descent
Michael Edwards said:
There is no silence without substance. Just made that up - good ent it? This is a good write too Sylvia - now wield that pen.
January 14th, 2019 04:38
Michael Edwards said:
There is no silence without substance. Just made that up - good ent it? This is a good write too Sylvia - now wield that pen.
January 14th, 2019 04:38
Descent
sylviasearcher said:
Oh I am sure I could never stop really.
I was just trying to explain this grey shaped feeling which takes over the noise in my head.
I Sometimes wonder what came first. The noise or the silence and which is responding to which. Which is helpful a healing and which will mark my descent.
Thanks for reading.
January 14th, 2019 04:31
sylviasearcher said:
Oh I am sure I could never stop really.
I was just trying to explain this grey shaped feeling which takes over the noise in my head.
I Sometimes wonder what came first. The noise or the silence and which is responding to which. Which is helpful a healing and which will mark my descent.
Thanks for reading.
January 14th, 2019 04:31
Descent
Neville said:
Maybe its a new beginning... tho Aristotle was of course write... pick up thy pen and write... I demand it..
January 14th, 2019 03:56
Neville said:
Maybe its a new beginning... tho Aristotle was of course write... pick up thy pen and write... I demand it..
January 14th, 2019 03:56
Wild
Neville said:
that\'s one of the beauties of the ocean.. it can be whatever you want it to be.. I am so glad I live near it...
She tossed her masks into the wildest sea
They laughed and danced and sang just be.... let it be.. I say.. Neville
January 13th, 2019 12:57
Neville said:
that\'s one of the beauties of the ocean.. it can be whatever you want it to be.. I am so glad I live near it...
She tossed her masks into the wildest sea
They laughed and danced and sang just be.... let it be.. I say.. Neville
January 13th, 2019 12:57
Tell You
whisperingquill said:
This is complete......
The longing, the hunger....
Every breath is complex,
every whisper is a piece of the puzzle...
In my humble opinion this is ready to go as it is....thank you for sharing.
January 11th, 2019 09:42
whisperingquill said:
This is complete......
The longing, the hunger....
Every breath is complex,
every whisper is a piece of the puzzle...
In my humble opinion this is ready to go as it is....thank you for sharing.
January 11th, 2019 09:42
Tell You
Neville said:
I notice you say this is a quick rough draft & may consider revising ... my opinion may not be worth much here, but I would urge you to leave as is...or only amend if you really think you must... In essence, your \'Tell You\' poem reads like a very sincere and desperate plea... anyway, thoroughly enjoyed by my humble self.... N
January 11th, 2019 06:31
Neville said:
I notice you say this is a quick rough draft & may consider revising ... my opinion may not be worth much here, but I would urge you to leave as is...or only amend if you really think you must... In essence, your \'Tell You\' poem reads like a very sincere and desperate plea... anyway, thoroughly enjoyed by my humble self.... N
January 11th, 2019 06:31
Soulless
Neville said:
like a stick of Brighton rock... this poem has a clear message running right through its central core.. clean and fresh with a minty aftertaste I so enjoy on frosty days like these..... N
January 10th, 2019 05:48
Neville said:
like a stick of Brighton rock... this poem has a clear message running right through its central core.. clean and fresh with a minty aftertaste I so enjoy on frosty days like these..... N
January 10th, 2019 05:48
Taken
psychofemale said:
what type of poem would this be classified as, just curious? :) thanks
January 9th, 2019 22:00
psychofemale said:
what type of poem would this be classified as, just curious? :) thanks
January 9th, 2019 22:00
Taken
Aislinn Wilson said:
This makes me homesick for a place I\'ve never been.
January 9th, 2019 10:57
Aislinn Wilson said:
This makes me homesick for a place I\'ve never been.
January 9th, 2019 10:57
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