Comments received on poems by sylviasearcher
Speakeasy
Neville said:
Very good indeed.. there is certainly more here than immediately meets the eye.. you had me coughing all the way to the John...
December 5th, 2018 05:06
Neville said:
Very good indeed.. there is certainly more here than immediately meets the eye.. you had me coughing all the way to the John...
December 5th, 2018 05:06
Worthy
Neville said:
I consider myself lucky to have stumbled upon these thirteen words..
I like brevity and think of it as the future .. like orange is the new black
December 5th, 2018 04:31
Neville said:
I consider myself lucky to have stumbled upon these thirteen words..
I like brevity and think of it as the future .. like orange is the new black
December 5th, 2018 04:31
Nothing
Fay Slimm. said:
A forceful and well rhymed outcry which highlights the phrase that Nothing comes from Nothing - - a potent read Sylvia
December 4th, 2018 14:11
Fay Slimm. said:
A forceful and well rhymed outcry which highlights the phrase that Nothing comes from Nothing - - a potent read Sylvia
December 4th, 2018 14:11
One Day
Neville said:
I am mightily impressed with the way the story both grows and flows throughout and of how you have meticulously constructed each stanza.. this is certainly one of my favourites of yours to date sylviasearcher and for what it might be worth, I am convinced that such days can become realities if one wishes hard enough..... Neville
December 4th, 2018 12:44
Neville said:
I am mightily impressed with the way the story both grows and flows throughout and of how you have meticulously constructed each stanza.. this is certainly one of my favourites of yours to date sylviasearcher and for what it might be worth, I am convinced that such days can become realities if one wishes hard enough..... Neville
December 4th, 2018 12:44
I died again today
Neville said:
interesting... very interesting.. I was immediately hooked by the title and felt well and truly played until the very last line... yes.. very interesting indeed.. N
December 3rd, 2018 14:31
Neville said:
interesting... very interesting.. I was immediately hooked by the title and felt well and truly played until the very last line... yes.. very interesting indeed.. N
December 3rd, 2018 14:31
Prologue
Neville said:
we all dream, dont we... and we all wait..........I traced back through the pages you have left here and found these words.. they are fine beginning words and provide a sound foundation for those that choose to follow..
December 2nd, 2018 08:07
Neville said:
we all dream, dont we... and we all wait..........I traced back through the pages you have left here and found these words.. they are fine beginning words and provide a sound foundation for those that choose to follow..
December 2nd, 2018 08:07
Ode to my Unrequited Soulmate
Lauraš» said:
Sylvia,
A fine ode indeed! The imagery your words conjure up in my mindās eye are exceptional! Only a gifted writer can accomplish such a feat...and you have done it! You are an amazing writer!
I enjoyed the poem in its entirety...especially the ending...
āBeautiful truth can exist in me
I still believe it exists in weā.
Awesome!!
~Laura~
November 30th, 2018 11:57
Lauraš» said:
Sylvia,
A fine ode indeed! The imagery your words conjure up in my mindās eye are exceptional! Only a gifted writer can accomplish such a feat...and you have done it! You are an amazing writer!
I enjoyed the poem in its entirety...especially the ending...
āBeautiful truth can exist in me
I still believe it exists in weā.
Awesome!!
~Laura~
November 30th, 2018 11:57
Ode to my Unrequited Soulmate
sylviasearcher said:
Thanks for getting to the end...
It is one of those endless ones!
November 30th, 2018 11:44
sylviasearcher said:
Thanks for getting to the end...
It is one of those endless ones!
November 30th, 2018 11:44
Bad Desire
Neville said:
To be honest, and I always try to be honest, the only bad thing here is the fact that whatever it might be, is only fleeting.. oh\' and that little bit of unnecessary guilt you allude to... maybe we need to slow down a touch.. .lovely little bit o poetry though... Neville
November 30th, 2018 11:39
Neville said:
To be honest, and I always try to be honest, the only bad thing here is the fact that whatever it might be, is only fleeting.. oh\' and that little bit of unnecessary guilt you allude to... maybe we need to slow down a touch.. .lovely little bit o poetry though... Neville
November 30th, 2018 11:39
Restless
Neville said:
it would seem you have just woven a picture in word format of that one place we all want to be.. nice one. Neville
November 30th, 2018 08:53
Neville said:
it would seem you have just woven a picture in word format of that one place we all want to be.. nice one. Neville
November 30th, 2018 08:53
Home
Michael Edwards said:
Right up my street = or should I say footpath? Great piece Sylvia.
November 29th, 2018 11:00
Michael Edwards said:
Right up my street = or should I say footpath? Great piece Sylvia.
November 29th, 2018 11:00
Never
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you for this great cascade of rhythmic and expressive words which flow so readily from your creative pen Sylvia - -\"never\" words have rarely meant so much to this reader. A clever use of repetition and an engaging read.
November 22nd, 2018 11:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you for this great cascade of rhythmic and expressive words which flow so readily from your creative pen Sylvia - -\"never\" words have rarely meant so much to this reader. A clever use of repetition and an engaging read.
November 22nd, 2018 11:26
Worthy
Sugiura Asuna said:
\"Simplicity is elegance\" Beautiful write Sylvia!
November 14th, 2018 18:59
Sugiura Asuna said:
\"Simplicity is elegance\" Beautiful write Sylvia!
November 14th, 2018 18:59
Worthy
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing SYLVIA ~ love the concept of the OCEAN (Ive been on Trans Atlantic Cruises and it really is BIG !) being the arbiter of OUR WORTHINESS ! Every HUMAN BEING is born with the CAPACITY to be WORTHY of This ~ That & the OTHER ~ BUT (as you know) not ALL fulfill their WORTHINESS ! Angela & I (who are engaged) have been committed Christians since we were TEENAGERS and this relationship with GOD enables is to be MORE WORTHY in our Relationship with each other ~ in our professional JOBS ~ in all our Relationships & in our COMMUNITY. Please check our POEM ~ Pray for California and our Developing Fusion (click on DEVELOPING to see it) on WHATS CHRISTMAS ABOUT ? ~ BLESSINGS Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
November 14th, 2018 15:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing SYLVIA ~ love the concept of the OCEAN (Ive been on Trans Atlantic Cruises and it really is BIG !) being the arbiter of OUR WORTHINESS ! Every HUMAN BEING is born with the CAPACITY to be WORTHY of This ~ That & the OTHER ~ BUT (as you know) not ALL fulfill their WORTHINESS ! Angela & I (who are engaged) have been committed Christians since we were TEENAGERS and this relationship with GOD enables is to be MORE WORTHY in our Relationship with each other ~ in our professional JOBS ~ in all our Relationships & in our COMMUNITY. Please check our POEM ~ Pray for California and our Developing Fusion (click on DEVELOPING to see it) on WHATS CHRISTMAS ABOUT ? ~ BLESSINGS Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
November 14th, 2018 15:27
Worthy
Lauraš» said:
Sylvia,
Spot on!...
āLess is moreā!
Loved it!
~Laura~
November 14th, 2018 07:14
Lauraš» said:
Sylvia,
Spot on!...
āLess is moreā!
Loved it!
~Laura~
November 14th, 2018 07:14
Until her Last Breath Passed
Lauraš» said:
Sylvia,
Wow...
What an amazing story! So vivid and alive! As I was reading, it felt as if I was there witnessing a rebirth! Incredible! I enjoyed reading your incredible short story immensely!
~Laura~
November 12th, 2018 09:41
Lauraš» said:
Sylvia,
Wow...
What an amazing story! So vivid and alive! As I was reading, it felt as if I was there witnessing a rebirth! Incredible! I enjoyed reading your incredible short story immensely!
~Laura~
November 12th, 2018 09:41
River
Fay Slimm. said:
A write to make readers want more of this warm and inviting stream of clear water - the river of dreams will stay with me dear Sylvia and thank you for sharing it.
November 7th, 2018 16:16
Fay Slimm. said:
A write to make readers want more of this warm and inviting stream of clear water - the river of dreams will stay with me dear Sylvia and thank you for sharing it.
November 7th, 2018 16:16
Bad Desire
Fay Slimm. said:
A smouldering write on inner desire - - gentle erotica wrapped in excellent imagery Sylvia. Great read.
November 5th, 2018 10:40
Fay Slimm. said:
A smouldering write on inner desire - - gentle erotica wrapped in excellent imagery Sylvia. Great read.
November 5th, 2018 10:40
Bad Desire
Michael Edwards said:
Glad you\'ve 18+ed it - or Orchi would sent Fido after you - super work nonetheless
November 5th, 2018 06:58
Michael Edwards said:
Glad you\'ve 18+ed it - or Orchi would sent Fido after you - super work nonetheless
November 5th, 2018 06:58
Restless
Goldfinch60 said:
May that space of love and peace soon be with you.
November 3rd, 2018 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
May that space of love and peace soon be with you.
November 3rd, 2018 01:08
One Day
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... That flowed amazingly of my screen so tenderly, what a wonderful day that would be.
October 25th, 2018 18:34
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... That flowed amazingly of my screen so tenderly, what a wonderful day that would be.
October 25th, 2018 18:34
One Day
Michael Edwards said:
Well this would make Orchi\'s Fido start barking - quite enjoyed it myself too - a fine write.
October 25th, 2018 16:15
Michael Edwards said:
Well this would make Orchi\'s Fido start barking - quite enjoyed it myself too - a fine write.
October 25th, 2018 16:15
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