Comments received on poems by sylviasearcher
Endless
Fay Slimm. said:
An insightful read Sylvia - I love the multi-layered approach to the chosen subject - - a super piece of work.
August 31st, 2018 05:45
Fay Slimm. said:
An insightful read Sylvia - I love the multi-layered approach to the chosen subject - - a super piece of work.
August 31st, 2018 05:45
Just Another Mad Girl\'s Love Song
Michael Edwards said:
Plath or Plath not this is sooo good - a super write.
August 29th, 2018 06:29
Michael Edwards said:
Plath or Plath not this is sooo good - a super write.
August 29th, 2018 06:29
Just Another Mad Girl\'s Love Song
sylviasearcher said:
Thanks buddy! Took me ages to choose a song today. I ended back where I started with the obvious.
I\'m not sure my poetry would do justice to the great Plath but her title of one of my favourite poems seemed better than any others that came to mind.
Thanks for reading.
August 29th, 2018 03:54
sylviasearcher said:
Thanks buddy! Took me ages to choose a song today. I ended back where I started with the obvious.
I\'m not sure my poetry would do justice to the great Plath but her title of one of my favourite poems seemed better than any others that came to mind.
Thanks for reading.
August 29th, 2018 03:54
Conversation with Myself
Goldfinch60 said:
Living or communing with nature is always so fulfilling, as are your words.
August 28th, 2018 15:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Living or communing with nature is always so fulfilling, as are your words.
August 28th, 2018 15:28
Conversation with Myself
Michael Edwards said:
And may the words always be yours - enjoyed the read.
August 28th, 2018 07:44
Michael Edwards said:
And may the words always be yours - enjoyed the read.
August 28th, 2018 07:44
Conversation with Myself
sylviasearcher said:
Thanks SL. I\'m not sure my voice is received beyond the trees, but well I just can\'t stop wailing anyway 😬
August 28th, 2018 07:42
sylviasearcher said:
Thanks SL. I\'m not sure my voice is received beyond the trees, but well I just can\'t stop wailing anyway 😬
August 28th, 2018 07:42
Blurry Face
sylviasearcher said:
Thank you for reading and responding yumna Kay.i thought once I found the missing thing but then I realised id made him up inside my head!
August 25th, 2018 16:41
sylviasearcher said:
Thank you for reading and responding yumna Kay.i thought once I found the missing thing but then I realised id made him up inside my head!
August 25th, 2018 16:41
Blurry Face
RiverJordan said:
Sometimes beauty lies in abstinence, your words are beautiful even though you may not see it..hope you can find and hold onto strength..love this piece..I can relate 🙃
August 25th, 2018 11:52
RiverJordan said:
Sometimes beauty lies in abstinence, your words are beautiful even though you may not see it..hope you can find and hold onto strength..love this piece..I can relate 🙃
August 25th, 2018 11:52
Without Title
sylviasearcher said:
Bless you Gildfinch for bringing me a message of light.
In truth I think I was writing a little satirically about the British tight lipped nature of keeping things locked up inside, keeping up appearances so to say.
I fear this strength will be the undoing of me.
So secretly I come here and pour out all that I hold within so that indeed I can walk away feeling lighter.
Thanks for reading 🌔
August 23rd, 2018 08:05
sylviasearcher said:
Bless you Gildfinch for bringing me a message of light.
In truth I think I was writing a little satirically about the British tight lipped nature of keeping things locked up inside, keeping up appearances so to say.
I fear this strength will be the undoing of me.
So secretly I come here and pour out all that I hold within so that indeed I can walk away feeling lighter.
Thanks for reading 🌔
August 23rd, 2018 08:05
Without Title
Goldfinch60 said:
Your grip is obviously secure and it will pull you into the light of your life. Stay strong.
August 23rd, 2018 07:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Your grip is obviously secure and it will pull you into the light of your life. Stay strong.
August 23rd, 2018 07:56
Without Title
Laura🌻 said:
Sylvia,
That was some video.
It was a good choice to accentuate your great poem!
Enjoyed it!
Thank you for sharing.
~Laura~
August 23rd, 2018 06:12
Laura🌻 said:
Sylvia,
That was some video.
It was a good choice to accentuate your great poem!
Enjoyed it!
Thank you for sharing.
~Laura~
August 23rd, 2018 06:12
Speakeasy
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, love can be a trial but never give up.
August 23rd, 2018 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, love can be a trial but never give up.
August 23rd, 2018 00:27
Speakeasy
Laura🌻 said:
Sylvia,
A fine write!
“She had an argument with her heels”
That is such a great line!
I enjoyed the poem and the song!
~Laura~
August 22nd, 2018 18:14
Laura🌻 said:
Sylvia,
A fine write!
“She had an argument with her heels”
That is such a great line!
I enjoyed the poem and the song!
~Laura~
August 22nd, 2018 18:14
Speakeasy
orchidee said:
If she puts that gin down, I shall put this sherry down! Deal?! heehee.
August 22nd, 2018 11:09
orchidee said:
If she puts that gin down, I shall put this sherry down! Deal?! heehee.
August 22nd, 2018 11:09
Sacrifice
H. Ray Davis said:
Whoa! I’m new on here and don’t know how to make a pile on my favorite. When I learn how to do this will be mine.
August 22nd, 2018 10:40
H. Ray Davis said:
Whoa! I’m new on here and don’t know how to make a pile on my favorite. When I learn how to do this will be mine.
August 22nd, 2018 10:40
A Love Poem
H. Ray Davis said:
I pray that’s not auto biographical. Very nice, but heavy poem
August 22nd, 2018 10:36
H. Ray Davis said:
I pray that’s not auto biographical. Very nice, but heavy poem
August 22nd, 2018 10:36
Speakeasy
H. Ray Davis said:
This has a lonlyness I love. Really enjoyed this
August 22nd, 2018 10:33
H. Ray Davis said:
This has a lonlyness I love. Really enjoyed this
August 22nd, 2018 10:33
Blurry Face
FineB said:
Hello sylviasearcher.
You have created a beautiful poem on The Loss of Hope.
Keep writing
FineB
August 21st, 2018 10:37
FineB said:
Hello sylviasearcher.
You have created a beautiful poem on The Loss of Hope.
Keep writing
FineB
August 21st, 2018 10:37
Sacrifice
Michael Edwards said:
One of the top drawer postings - keep writing.
August 20th, 2018 11:08
Michael Edwards said:
One of the top drawer postings - keep writing.
August 20th, 2018 11:08
A Love Poem
Michael Edwards said:
Great meter and structure - well written Sylvia
August 19th, 2018 11:11
Michael Edwards said:
Great meter and structure - well written Sylvia
August 19th, 2018 11:11
A Love Poem
dusk arising said:
Good fun analogy. Begs the question why somebody should choose to behave like a doll in a musical box unless they have \'victim\' imprinted on their soul.
A song entitled \'fifty ways to leave your lover\' comes to mind.
August 19th, 2018 04:35
dusk arising said:
Good fun analogy. Begs the question why somebody should choose to behave like a doll in a musical box unless they have \'victim\' imprinted on their soul.
A song entitled \'fifty ways to leave your lover\' comes to mind.
August 19th, 2018 04:35
Standing in the River
Michael Edwards said:
It reads so well for me - great meter.
August 17th, 2018 10:22
Michael Edwards said:
It reads so well for me - great meter.
August 17th, 2018 10:22
Education! Education! Education!
poetboy123 said:
Today\'s education system is too willing to leave people behind, wonderful poem about an important topic!
August 15th, 2018 21:39
poetboy123 said:
Today\'s education system is too willing to leave people behind, wonderful poem about an important topic!
August 15th, 2018 21:39
Education! Education! Education!
Michael Edwards said:
Tolerance, understanding, appreciation , and love - where have they gone? Were they ever with us? Great write
August 15th, 2018 08:12
Michael Edwards said:
Tolerance, understanding, appreciation , and love - where have they gone? Were they ever with us? Great write
August 15th, 2018 08:12
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