Comments received on poems by sylviasearcher
Taken
whisperingquill said:
So much said in so few words
Multilayered with many different meanings
Astounding write my friend. 👍🏼💫
January 9th, 2019 10:20
whisperingquill said:
So much said in so few words
Multilayered with many different meanings
Astounding write my friend. 👍🏼💫
January 9th, 2019 10:20
Judgment Day
whisperingquill said:
Nothing is ever corny
When we purge our Suns within..
you definitely have the \"it\" factor my friend
January 8th, 2019 11:29
whisperingquill said:
Nothing is ever corny
When we purge our Suns within..
you definitely have the \"it\" factor my friend
January 8th, 2019 11:29
Melancholy
whisperingquill said:
Wow....this resonates deep....a wonderful selah
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January 7th, 2019 14:36
whisperingquill said:
Wow....this resonates deep....a wonderful selah
10
January 7th, 2019 14:36
Fall
whisperingquill said:
It\'s a like your stuck in a paradox....or purgatory
Fascinating very eerie yet enthralling.
9
January 4th, 2019 19:01
whisperingquill said:
It\'s a like your stuck in a paradox....or purgatory
Fascinating very eerie yet enthralling.
9
January 4th, 2019 19:01
Neediness
whisperingquill said:
Absorbing.....
Relatable beyond measure
Does anyone have the patience to truly understand another.
Gripping write.
8
January 4th, 2019 18:53
whisperingquill said:
Absorbing.....
Relatable beyond measure
Does anyone have the patience to truly understand another.
Gripping write.
8
January 4th, 2019 18:53
To whom these words may belong
whisperingquill said:
This is one of my favorites by you. Excellent very profound.
7
January 4th, 2019 18:35
whisperingquill said:
This is one of my favorites by you. Excellent very profound.
7
January 4th, 2019 18:35
One Day
whisperingquill said:
This is wicked awesome
Seamless in it\'s glow and flow
Damn....just immaculate
6
January 4th, 2019 12:44
whisperingquill said:
This is wicked awesome
Seamless in it\'s glow and flow
Damn....just immaculate
6
January 4th, 2019 12:44
Kiss of Death
whisperingquill said:
I think this is complete
It\'s like the writer is battling
A silent war within
Their subconscious
rising like an insurgent Nephilim
5
January 4th, 2019 12:06
whisperingquill said:
I think this is complete
It\'s like the writer is battling
A silent war within
Their subconscious
rising like an insurgent Nephilim
5
January 4th, 2019 12:06
Standing in the River
whisperingquill said:
Wow
Really like this one
That last stanza very Whitman-ish
Transcendental. Captivating
4
January 4th, 2019 12:01
whisperingquill said:
Wow
Really like this one
That last stanza very Whitman-ish
Transcendental. Captivating
4
January 4th, 2019 12:01
Speakeasy
whisperingquill said:
You have an impeccable flow I must admit
I had to look up a few words
Riveting write my friend 👍🏼
January 4th, 2019 11:43
whisperingquill said:
You have an impeccable flow I must admit
I had to look up a few words
Riveting write my friend 👍🏼
January 4th, 2019 11:43
Just Another Mad Girl\'s Love Song
whisperingquill said:
Damn...I\'m kinda envious
I gotta upgrade my stenciling now...this is potent
January 4th, 2019 11:02
whisperingquill said:
Damn...I\'m kinda envious
I gotta upgrade my stenciling now...this is potent
January 4th, 2019 11:02
The Dreamer
whisperingquill said:
You ryhme really well
it crescendos along
Channeling Poe in this I see also
January 4th, 2019 10:44
whisperingquill said:
You ryhme really well
it crescendos along
Channeling Poe in this I see also
January 4th, 2019 10:44
Soulless
whisperingquill said:
This needs music to it....this is so exquisite and on point
January 4th, 2019 09:10
whisperingquill said:
This needs music to it....this is so exquisite and on point
January 4th, 2019 09:10
Soulless
Laura🌻 said:
sylviasearcher,
A Superb write...to say the least!
Great structure!
The message...
loud and clear;
but best of all...
THE ENDING!
My first read of the day! Awesome!
“I kissed the ocean and I kissed the sky”...
That soul will keep on flying higher and higher!
~Laura~
January 4th, 2019 08:26
Laura🌻 said:
sylviasearcher,
A Superb write...to say the least!
Great structure!
The message...
loud and clear;
but best of all...
THE ENDING!
My first read of the day! Awesome!
“I kissed the ocean and I kissed the sky”...
That soul will keep on flying higher and higher!
~Laura~
January 4th, 2019 08:26
Tired of Painting
Goldfinch60 said:
Words can bring such wonderful pictures into your mind.
January 2nd, 2019 16:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Words can bring such wonderful pictures into your mind.
January 2nd, 2019 16:06
Tired of Painting
poetboy123 said:
Wow, I think you\'ve painted something brilliant yourself here.
January 2nd, 2019 12:50
poetboy123 said:
Wow, I think you\'ve painted something brilliant yourself here.
January 2nd, 2019 12:50
Tired of Painting
Michael Edwards said:
Pity I don\'t do portraits - but I do paint with words - great write.
January 2nd, 2019 11:11
Michael Edwards said:
Pity I don\'t do portraits - but I do paint with words - great write.
January 2nd, 2019 11:11
Tired of Painting
Neville said:
a self portrait is not such a bad idea... but am sure there will be loads of volunteers...... N
January 2nd, 2019 07:15
Neville said:
a self portrait is not such a bad idea... but am sure there will be loads of volunteers...... N
January 2nd, 2019 07:15
The fall of Illusion
Michael Edwards said:
Great write to end the year with.
December 31st, 2018 07:33
Michael Edwards said:
Great write to end the year with.
December 31st, 2018 07:33
Extinguish
Neville said:
occasionally one does not have to say very much, to say it all....
made me shiver and I enjoyed it.... cheers.. N
December 30th, 2018 12:38
Neville said:
occasionally one does not have to say very much, to say it all....
made me shiver and I enjoyed it.... cheers.. N
December 30th, 2018 12:38
Not a love song
Neville said:
just imagine it can happen.. and it will happen.. maybe not today but it will.. I promise ya...
December 29th, 2018 09:42
Neville said:
just imagine it can happen.. and it will happen.. maybe not today but it will.. I promise ya...
December 29th, 2018 09:42
Not a love song
Black Walker said:
This is so touching and sincere 💖 and the ending is perfect.
December 29th, 2018 08:43
Black Walker said:
This is so touching and sincere 💖 and the ending is perfect.
December 29th, 2018 08:43
Sensing Me
Neville said:
I sense thee near & breathe deep pon those pulse points you try so hard to hide behind.... beautiful poem and true.. N
December 29th, 2018 06:03
Neville said:
I sense thee near & breathe deep pon those pulse points you try so hard to hide behind.... beautiful poem and true.. N
December 29th, 2018 06:03
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