Comments received on poems by sylviasearcher



Taken
Aislinn Wilson said:

This makes me homesick for a place I\'ve never been.

January 9th, 2019 10:57

Taken
whisperingquill said:

So much said in so few words
Multilayered with many different meanings
Astounding write my friend. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ’ซ

January 9th, 2019 10:20

Taken
Neville said:

sometimes.. words make one ache so very tenderly...

January 9th, 2019 08:56

Judgment Day
whisperingquill said:

Nothing is ever corny
When we purge our Suns within..
you definitely have the \"it\" factor my friend

January 8th, 2019 11:29

Melancholy
whisperingquill said:

Wow....this resonates deep....a wonderful selah

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January 7th, 2019 14:36

Fall
whisperingquill said:

It\'s a like your stuck in a paradox....or purgatory
Fascinating very eerie yet enthralling.

9

January 4th, 2019 19:01

Neediness
whisperingquill said:

Absorbing.....
Relatable beyond measure
Does anyone have the patience to truly understand another.

Gripping write.
8

January 4th, 2019 18:53

To whom these words may belong
whisperingquill said:

This is one of my favorites by you. Excellent very profound.
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January 4th, 2019 18:35

Soulless
Sunshinefalling said:

โค๏ธ

January 4th, 2019 17:07

Soulless
Michael Edwards said:

Great structure - great read Sylvia.

January 4th, 2019 12:50

One Day
whisperingquill said:

This is wicked awesome
Seamless in it\'s glow and flow

Damn....just immaculate
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January 4th, 2019 12:44

Kiss of Death
whisperingquill said:

I think this is complete
It\'s like the writer is battling
A silent war within
Their subconscious
rising like an insurgent Nephilim

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January 4th, 2019 12:06

Standing in the River
whisperingquill said:

Wow
Really like this one
That last stanza very Whitman-ish
Transcendental. Captivating

4

January 4th, 2019 12:01

Speakeasy
whisperingquill said:

Scuppered and keeling

January 4th, 2019 11:57

Speakeasy
whisperingquill said:

You have an impeccable flow I must admit
I had to look up a few words
Riveting write my friend ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

January 4th, 2019 11:43

Just Another Mad Girl\'s Love Song
whisperingquill said:

Damn...I\'m kinda envious
I gotta upgrade my stenciling now...this is potent

January 4th, 2019 11:02

The Dreamer
whisperingquill said:

You ryhme really well
it crescendos along

Channeling Poe in this I see also

January 4th, 2019 10:44

Soulless
whisperingquill said:

This needs music to it....this is so exquisite and on point

January 4th, 2019 09:10

Soulless
Laura๐ŸŒป said:

sylviasearcher,

A Superb write...to say the least!
Great structure!
The message...
loud and clear;
but best of all...
THE ENDING!
My first read of the day! Awesome!

โ€œI kissed the ocean and I kissed the skyโ€...

That soul will keep on flying higher and higher!

~Laura~

January 4th, 2019 08:26

Tired of Painting
Goldfinch60 said:

Words can bring such wonderful pictures into your mind.

January 2nd, 2019 16:06

Tired of Painting
poetboy123 said:

Wow, I think you\'ve painted something brilliant yourself here.

January 2nd, 2019 12:50

Tired of Painting
Joanna Garrido said:

I enjoyed reading your poem.

January 2nd, 2019 11:27

Tired of Painting
Michael Edwards said:

Pity I don\'t do portraits - but I do paint with words - great write.

January 2nd, 2019 11:11

Tired of Painting
Neville said:

a self portrait is not such a bad idea... but am sure there will be loads of volunteers...... N

January 2nd, 2019 07:15

The fall of Illusion
Michael Edwards said:

Great write to end the year with.

December 31st, 2018 07:33

Extinguish
Goldfinch60 said:

Good cold stark words Sylvia.

December 31st, 2018 01:42

Extinguish
Neville said:

occasionally one does not have to say very much, to say it all....

made me shiver and I enjoyed it.... cheers.. N

December 30th, 2018 12:38

Not a love song
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a very good emotive write Sylvia.

December 30th, 2018 01:31

Not a love song
Neville said:

just imagine it can happen.. and it will happen.. maybe not today but it will.. I promise ya...

December 29th, 2018 09:42

Not a love song
Black Walker said:

This is so touching and sincere ๐Ÿ’– and the ending is perfect.

December 29th, 2018 08:43



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