Comments received on poems by Neville
Chasing the Carpet
Fay Slimm. said:
The tragic addiction to drugs such as crack will reduce a poor human to less than a rabid animal and you pen it so vividly - - a shock of a read that happens on as your note says \"an increasingly frequent basis\" in your line of care.......x
February 2nd, 2023 03:07
Fay Slimm. said:
The tragic addiction to drugs such as crack will reduce a poor human to less than a rabid animal and you pen it so vividly - - a shock of a read that happens on as your note says \"an increasingly frequent basis\" in your line of care.......x
February 2nd, 2023 03:07
Chasing the Carpet
orchidee said:
OCD?
Ohh, KP never does any housework. She\'s too busy having Botox! lol.
February 2nd, 2023 02:55
orchidee said:
OCD?
Ohh, KP never does any housework. She\'s too busy having Botox! lol.
February 2nd, 2023 02:55
With Her Head Full of Feathers ..
Dove said:
Being a Dove, I love all feathered poems. Loved it. Beautiful
February 1st, 2023 12:30
Dove said:
Being a Dove, I love all feathered poems. Loved it. Beautiful
February 1st, 2023 12:30
Hello Again Marianne
Dove said:
Nice. I guess I\'m not familiar with the artist. But you always sway to the beat. Lol
February 1st, 2023 12:28
Dove said:
Nice. I guess I\'m not familiar with the artist. But you always sway to the beat. Lol
February 1st, 2023 12:28
Hello Again Marianne
Fay Slimm. said:
What an album to echo within your worthy words Nev. Cohen knew how to appeal with his deep and unforgettable voice laughing and crying with missed Marianne. Thanks for the back-when reminder mon ami....x
February 1st, 2023 09:41
Fay Slimm. said:
What an album to echo within your worthy words Nev. Cohen knew how to appeal with his deep and unforgettable voice laughing and crying with missed Marianne. Thanks for the back-when reminder mon ami....x
February 1st, 2023 09:41
Hello Again Marianne
orchidee said:
Should I start calling KP Marianne?! lol.
February 1st, 2023 08:24
orchidee said:
Should I start calling KP Marianne?! lol.
February 1st, 2023 08:24
Hello Again Marianne
Doggerel Dave said:
Got to find the CD and hope it replicates the album ..too late at night...may get back, but what more can I say about Leonard that I haven\'t....
February 1st, 2023 06:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Got to find the CD and hope it replicates the album ..too late at night...may get back, but what more can I say about Leonard that I haven\'t....
February 1st, 2023 06:38
Hello Again Marianne
arqios said:
Oh wow, that is a whole album. Too bad there wasn\'t a song called \'Songs from a Room.\'
February 1st, 2023 04:12
arqios said:
Oh wow, that is a whole album. Too bad there wasn\'t a song called \'Songs from a Room.\'
February 1st, 2023 04:12
With Her Head Full of Feathers ..
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, may you fly together in ecstasy.
Andy
February 1st, 2023 02:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, may you fly together in ecstasy.
Andy
February 1st, 2023 02:58
With Her Head Full of Feathers ..
Bella Shepard said:
Feathers are such gentle things, ethereal and beautiful. Such fitting imagery for an act that dreams are built upon. Love should not be rushed, but anticipated and savored. Great write my friend!
January 31st, 2023 15:03
Bella Shepard said:
Feathers are such gentle things, ethereal and beautiful. Such fitting imagery for an act that dreams are built upon. Love should not be rushed, but anticipated and savored. Great write my friend!
January 31st, 2023 15:03
With Her Head Full of Feathers ..
Christina8 said:
\"flying\" is such a beautiful way of describing young love where there isn\'t any \"hint of regret at all\". What a wonderful recollection!
January 31st, 2023 09:22
Christina8 said:
\"flying\" is such a beautiful way of describing young love where there isn\'t any \"hint of regret at all\". What a wonderful recollection!
January 31st, 2023 09:22
With Her Head Full of Feathers ..
orchidee said:
I was ready to fly with KP, but she meant she was gonna wear a Red Indian head-dress. Doh!
She gets up to some odd things.
January 31st, 2023 05:46
orchidee said:
I was ready to fly with KP, but she meant she was gonna wear a Red Indian head-dress. Doh!
She gets up to some odd things.
January 31st, 2023 05:46
With Her Head Full of Feathers ..
Fay Slimm. said:
\"Flying\" is just the right word for making high whoopee with someone you love and I\'ll have you know heads full of feathers need shaking up with kisses and hugs
- another sigh of a read dear amigo..................x
January 31st, 2023 05:13
Fay Slimm. said:
\"Flying\" is just the right word for making high whoopee with someone you love and I\'ll have you know heads full of feathers need shaking up with kisses and hugs
- another sigh of a read dear amigo..................x
January 31st, 2023 05:13
Smile
Caring dove said:
That’s nice , that you have a book published ) well done ) and lovely writing
January 31st, 2023 05:06
Caring dove said:
That’s nice , that you have a book published ) well done ) and lovely writing
January 31st, 2023 05:06
With Her Head Full of Feathers ..
Caring dove said:
Feathers makes me think of freedom , light energy and gentle peace .
Lovely writing )) so nicely expressed
January 31st, 2023 05:04
Caring dove said:
Feathers makes me think of freedom , light energy and gentle peace .
Lovely writing )) so nicely expressed
January 31st, 2023 05:04
With Her Head Full of Feathers ..
arqios said:
Brought me to that old phrase about having feathers for brains but love love covers so many things... for my part I spit out feathers first thing every morning...
January 31st, 2023 05:01
arqios said:
Brought me to that old phrase about having feathers for brains but love love covers so many things... for my part I spit out feathers first thing every morning...
January 31st, 2023 05:01
Smile
Doggerel Dave said:
Your latest publication - yes, always worth a smile and congratulations, Nev.
January 30th, 2023 07:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Your latest publication - yes, always worth a smile and congratulations, Nev.
January 30th, 2023 07:24
Smile
Christina8 said:
This short poem says it all...and a \'warm summers night\" is exactly what I dream of. Congratulations on your newest book!! x
January 30th, 2023 07:09
Christina8 said:
This short poem says it all...and a \'warm summers night\" is exactly what I dream of. Congratulations on your newest book!! x
January 30th, 2023 07:09
Making Out On a Loop
L. B. Mek said:
\'If you, but promise me\'
so tender, so subtle sweet
thank you! dear Poet supreme
(betting on life
with our heart\'s on the line
as our way of life
since that very first time
our pulse, raged
to let us know, this is our stop
all that\'s left now
is return trips, of memento\'s
being relived)
January 30th, 2023 04:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'If you, but promise me\'
so tender, so subtle sweet
thank you! dear Poet supreme
(betting on life
with our heart\'s on the line
as our way of life
since that very first time
our pulse, raged
to let us know, this is our stop
all that\'s left now
is return trips, of memento\'s
being relived)
January 30th, 2023 04:09
Flawed #2
L. B. Mek said:
(My head says we should lock eyes
work it out, find a path
But this labouring heart, and stifled
breath
Recognise, we won\'t survive
A heart to heart, devoid of restraint
So I look, everywhere
But at those eyes, knowing
my kindness will be reciprocated
for old time\'s sake, for what remains
of what once, was
so sincere and pure...)
Brilliant!!!
January 30th, 2023 04:03
L. B. Mek said:
(My head says we should lock eyes
work it out, find a path
But this labouring heart, and stifled
breath
Recognise, we won\'t survive
A heart to heart, devoid of restraint
So I look, everywhere
But at those eyes, knowing
my kindness will be reciprocated
for old time\'s sake, for what remains
of what once, was
so sincere and pure...)
Brilliant!!!
January 30th, 2023 04:03
Making Out On a Loop
Christina8 said:
Love this! Living in the moment with passion and desire....Bravo!!
January 29th, 2023 18:53
Christina8 said:
Love this! Living in the moment with passion and desire....Bravo!!
January 29th, 2023 18:53
Making Out On a Loop
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh what an incorrigible romantic you are mon ami - who would not want to make out again on the premise of more heavenly repeats with that whispered ode in their ear ? ..........x
January 29th, 2023 16:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh what an incorrigible romantic you are mon ami - who would not want to make out again on the premise of more heavenly repeats with that whispered ode in their ear ? ..........x
January 29th, 2023 16:42
Making Out On a Loop
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve written brilliantly of the desire to capture the moment, the experience, irrevocably in time. Beautiful, alluring, well done dear poet!
January 29th, 2023 15:47
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve written brilliantly of the desire to capture the moment, the experience, irrevocably in time. Beautiful, alluring, well done dear poet!
January 29th, 2023 15:47
Flawed #2
Doggerel Dave said:
Or, as they once said in the very old days (and I was there though much more recent than Andy and orchi\'s claimed experience - but long enough): \' No washing your dirty linen in public\' 🙂
January 29th, 2023 06:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Or, as they once said in the very old days (and I was there though much more recent than Andy and orchi\'s claimed experience - but long enough): \' No washing your dirty linen in public\' 🙂
January 29th, 2023 06:37
Flawed #2
jarcher54 said:
If you\'ve made it this far with just 2 flaws, my dented hat off to you sir. I missed Flawed #1... using my imagination though...
January 28th, 2023 20:11
jarcher54 said:
If you\'ve made it this far with just 2 flaws, my dented hat off to you sir. I missed Flawed #1... using my imagination though...
January 28th, 2023 20:11
Flawed #2
Bella Shepard said:
How often do we feel a sense of disappointment when we come to find that all that glitters isn\'t gold, a sentiment you have captured all too well. Good write my friend!
January 28th, 2023 12:35
Bella Shepard said:
How often do we feel a sense of disappointment when we come to find that all that glitters isn\'t gold, a sentiment you have captured all too well. Good write my friend!
January 28th, 2023 12:35
Flawed #2
arqios said:
And we move on together or apart, hopeful in the revelation and the possibilities that have presented themselves!
January 28th, 2023 10:12
arqios said:
And we move on together or apart, hopeful in the revelation and the possibilities that have presented themselves!
January 28th, 2023 10:12
Flawed #2
Christina8 said:
I love this poem, Neville! That last stanza gives much to think about....as we are imperfect even though we wish perfection to be true...wonderful!
January 28th, 2023 09:48
Christina8 said:
I love this poem, Neville! That last stanza gives much to think about....as we are imperfect even though we wish perfection to be true...wonderful!
January 28th, 2023 09:48
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