Comments received on poems by Neville



On the Cusp of a Sneeze ..
Doggerel Dave said:

Even I can discern the absence but faint hope embodied there , Nev. Thanks

March 27th, 2022 05:21

On the Cusp of a Sneeze ..
Fay Slimm. said:

Musing on what once was brings a bouquet of intimate memories and so well penned they need to be in my fave. list - - such a moving finalé to this look-back my friend..............x

March 27th, 2022 05:08

On the Cusp of a Sneeze ..
orchidee said:

Good write N.

March 27th, 2022 02:34

Never Going Nowhere Maybe
Goldfinch60 said:

That love will always be with you Neville, nothing will ever change that.

Andy

March 27th, 2022 00:50

Never Going Nowhere Maybe
Crowns4Christ said:

I\'m sorry, it\'s a very safe day for you, God is with you my friend,

March 26th, 2022 12:43

Never Going Nowhere Maybe
spilleronsheet said:

That’s what truly justifies
When the journey turns sweeter than, goal post on other side
Another great one dear Neville

March 26th, 2022 12:23

Never Going Nowhere Maybe
Christina8 said:

Once a love is in our hearts its hard to let them go and like you said think of them every now and then......

March 26th, 2022 11:14

The Decline of Recollection
aburmeister said:

❤️🙏

March 26th, 2022 10:28

Never Going Nowhere Maybe
orchidee said:

Good write N.

March 26th, 2022 10:27

Never Going Nowhere Maybe
Fay Slimm. said:

Once love is exchanged no matter the time a couple remembers the highs of their journey . A verse to remember and treasure as I am sure does your sweet Pam every now and again .................. x.

March 26th, 2022 08:01

Never Going Nowhere Maybe
dusk arising said:

Those highs in life are with us always and remind us of how lucky we have been to live them. I hold a vision of life like a mountainous landscape reflected in the still waters of a lake. The higher we climbed is reflected in the depth of reflected despair. And years on we have become shaped and rounded to survive yet our hearts still fly away to those yesterdays when life was,.. well, what is the right word? Special?

So relateable.

March 26th, 2022 05:13

Global Warning
L. B. Mek said:

how, regrettably - Poignant
these words read, dear Poet Supreme
\'Elsewhere
A child
Is now crying huge
Pre-spring tears\'
hundreds of children already, murdered
in Ukraine
such wanton, disregard for life...
if reposted
I\'m sure many would relate
with how current
these words seem..
a Great write!

March 25th, 2022 06:57

Taking it Slow
Goldfinch60 said:

Rushing is not the way to hide them Neville.

Andy

March 25th, 2022 01:30

Taking it Slow
Michael Edwards said:

Nice work Neville.

March 24th, 2022 09:05

Taking it Slow
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Neville.
A fine work of miniature art.

March 24th, 2022 08:42

Taking it Slow
L. B. Mek said:

yeah, well
that\'s a better person than me;
sorry to be so predictable
but have to admit, unashamedly - so
that Kimono\'s
do it for me, too...
(a wonderful shorty, dear Poet)
lovely

March 24th, 2022 06:13

Taking it Slow
Fay Slimm. said:

Slow is the way to go when you\'re wooing with netsukes - - saves all the blushing - -well that\'s what methinks...........x

March 24th, 2022 05:34

Taking it Slow
dusk arising said:

\"It\'s only a small one\" she said \"pop it in here and keep it warm\". His hands had stopped shaking.

March 24th, 2022 04:41

Taking it Slow
Doggerel Dave said:

Should appear on the Antiques Roadshow - they love \'em there...

March 24th, 2022 03:59

Taking it Slow
orchidee said:

A netsuke - a small and intricately carved toggle, I read. Toggle?! Swoon! lol.

March 24th, 2022 02:27

Blush
Goldfinch60 said:

Good opening for spring Neville.

Andy

March 24th, 2022 01:39

Blush
Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

‘Blush’(ing) 🌸 while reading……..the comments…that is!
Nice one! 🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸

Laura🌻

March 23rd, 2022 16:43

Blush
Michael Edwards said:

What colour was the Cherry Blossom? I\'ve got black and brown and grey. But I\'ve not got any grey leather - love the write by the way.

March 23rd, 2022 13:50

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Christina8 said:

This is a great tribute to Spring. The cherry blossoms are blooming. You said it better! LOL c

March 23rd, 2022 13:10

Blush
orchidee said:

Good write N.
KP keeps getting her kimono out, but it don\'t do anything for me. lol.
If I see Big Mary as Paul did, I shall swoon! Season of beached whales? lol.

March 23rd, 2022 11:22

Blush
Fay Slimm. said:

Spring-filled imagery to sigh for in this little gem - I love the cherry-tree personification with blossom certainly more off than on..... great read Nev.

March 23rd, 2022 06:11

Blush
Paul Bell said:

Just saw big Mary passing by, not wearing much. The sooner we get back to winter, the better.

March 23rd, 2022 05:17

Blush
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Good writing ! I love spring

March 23rd, 2022 04:14

Not Just An Old Fella Passing
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful respectful words Neville, I have met many who were in ww2 but few of them tell of what they did. I had an uncle who was a Japanese POW and he never said anything about it but I could always see the horror in his eyes.

Andy

March 23rd, 2022 02:01

Not Just An Old Fella Passing
Doggerel Dave said:

Another relatively long one – thanks Nev.

For me the real message here is the contrast between Bill as “Bent down the middle, all shit, snot and piddle ..” and the reminder of a detailed complex life nearly everyone leads one way or another, with our own private battles, mostly ‘unheralded or unsung’.


March 22nd, 2022 19:43



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