Comments received on poems by Neville
The Price of a Single Soul
orchidee said:
Bit of a strange thing to ask for, in exchange for one\'s soul - swoon! lol.
KP and I never have any \'ardour\' stuff!
April 2nd, 2023 04:18
orchidee said:
Bit of a strange thing to ask for, in exchange for one\'s soul - swoon! lol.
KP and I never have any \'ardour\' stuff!
April 2nd, 2023 04:18
When Numbers No Longer Count
Doggerel Dave said:
I have a bit of a bed obsession. I do have a wee smidgin of trouble incorporating the relations you speak of into my conception.
I do hope, however it all turns out well..... 😇!!!
April 1st, 2023 16:52
Doggerel Dave said:
I have a bit of a bed obsession. I do have a wee smidgin of trouble incorporating the relations you speak of into my conception.
I do hope, however it all turns out well..... 😇!!!
April 1st, 2023 16:52
When Numbers No Longer Count
Poetic Dan said:
What books are there to see? Always a pleasure to read from your soul my friend
April 1st, 2023 11:23
Poetic Dan said:
What books are there to see? Always a pleasure to read from your soul my friend
April 1st, 2023 11:23
When Numbers No Longer Count
orchidee said:
Ohh, now a ranting comment, until Fido stops me... Ohhh, F, F, F, and F, and furthermore, F. WOOF! lol.
April 1st, 2023 06:50
orchidee said:
Ohh, now a ranting comment, until Fido stops me... Ohhh, F, F, F, and F, and furthermore, F. WOOF! lol.
April 1st, 2023 06:50
When Numbers No Longer Count
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"When Numbers No Longer Count\" is a powerful exploration of the complexities of human relationships. Through its vivid imagery and blunt language, the poem captures the confusion and emotional upheaval that can arise when intimacy turns to estrangement.
April 1st, 2023 06:07
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"When Numbers No Longer Count\" is a powerful exploration of the complexities of human relationships. Through its vivid imagery and blunt language, the poem captures the confusion and emotional upheaval that can arise when intimacy turns to estrangement.
April 1st, 2023 06:07
When Numbers No Longer Count
orchidee said:
I got enough trouble being in the same bed as KP! lol.
April 1st, 2023 04:55
orchidee said:
I got enough trouble being in the same bed as KP! lol.
April 1st, 2023 04:55
Huntress
Goldfinch60 said:
That chase has led you to a great time Neville.
Andy
April 1st, 2023 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
That chase has led you to a great time Neville.
Andy
April 1st, 2023 01:51
Huntress
Doggerel Dave said:
Didn\'t enjoy being just one scalp on a belt full of \'em? You had your moment Old Chap (whoever you are)......or maybe you didn\'t..................?
March 31st, 2023 19:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Didn\'t enjoy being just one scalp on a belt full of \'em? You had your moment Old Chap (whoever you are)......or maybe you didn\'t..................?
March 31st, 2023 19:17
Huntress
Fay Slimm. said:
Scary but true - Whatever the gender human predators show indiscriminate hunger when hunting for scalps - - wonder what they think of their conquests as age steals their ability to stalk more prey........ x
March 31st, 2023 14:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Scary but true - Whatever the gender human predators show indiscriminate hunger when hunting for scalps - - wonder what they think of their conquests as age steals their ability to stalk more prey........ x
March 31st, 2023 14:01
Huntress
L. B. Mek said:
subtle as ever, dear Poet supreme
a great write!
(in nature documentaries
a lioness, hunts alone
when discarded by her pride
for refusing to confirm
to that new conquering bully
and have her children murdered;
oh how
the viewers laud her defiance
and steadfast loyalty to her children,
where as
in our society, that same lady
born with a \'lioness\' spirit of independence
is marginalised and demeaned
for not being submissive...
luckily
there\'s still a few genuine, men
around
to value, those fierce queen\'s
forced to survive
and hunt
amongst modernity\'s regressive
idiocy...!)
March 31st, 2023 05:13
L. B. Mek said:
subtle as ever, dear Poet supreme
a great write!
(in nature documentaries
a lioness, hunts alone
when discarded by her pride
for refusing to confirm
to that new conquering bully
and have her children murdered;
oh how
the viewers laud her defiance
and steadfast loyalty to her children,
where as
in our society, that same lady
born with a \'lioness\' spirit of independence
is marginalised and demeaned
for not being submissive...
luckily
there\'s still a few genuine, men
around
to value, those fierce queen\'s
forced to survive
and hunt
amongst modernity\'s regressive
idiocy...!)
March 31st, 2023 05:13
Huntress
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem is a powerful and evocative exploration of the theme of pursuit and the thrill of the chase.
March 31st, 2023 05:11
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem is a powerful and evocative exploration of the theme of pursuit and the thrill of the chase.
March 31st, 2023 05:11
Huntress
Accidental Poet said:
Love happens in the strangest of ways N. But isn\'t it grand? Just like this little gem you\'ve penned.
March 31st, 2023 04:59
Accidental Poet said:
Love happens in the strangest of ways N. But isn\'t it grand? Just like this little gem you\'ve penned.
March 31st, 2023 04:59
The Marks on Our Ceiling
L. B. Mek said:
this is harrowingly, relatable
and
I so love how subtly you imbue
social commentary in your poetry
these words, beyond the fun
expose the eventual consequences
we\'ll be inheriting
when so much of our youth, assume
living excluded from the wider world
is better than learning the skills
to socialise and coexist
with others...
(another important message
worded light and accessible
thank you Hyung
I read n learn)
March 31st, 2023 02:24
L. B. Mek said:
this is harrowingly, relatable
and
I so love how subtly you imbue
social commentary in your poetry
these words, beyond the fun
expose the eventual consequences
we\'ll be inheriting
when so much of our youth, assume
living excluded from the wider world
is better than learning the skills
to socialise and coexist
with others...
(another important message
worded light and accessible
thank you Hyung
I read n learn)
March 31st, 2023 02:24
Upon Learning to Fly
L. B. Mek said:
(that thread of paradox in existence
live boldly
or survive, watching-on as other\'s
...fly)
\'if Icarus, lived long enough to date\'
lol
such a fun read, thank you Hyung
March 31st, 2023 02:16
L. B. Mek said:
(that thread of paradox in existence
live boldly
or survive, watching-on as other\'s
...fly)
\'if Icarus, lived long enough to date\'
lol
such a fun read, thank you Hyung
March 31st, 2023 02:16
A Question of Waste
L. B. Mek said:
makes me sad
how modernity celebrates
all those flaunting their wealth
and wasting billions
on supposed missions to Mars
yet \'OUR\' children
are marginalised more n more
and left to fend for themselves...
(sobering to contemplate
that this succinctly worded
\'wake up call\'
will be relevant, till the end of time
still
thank you! dear Poet supreme
for boldly stating
what we all, try to willingly ignore!)
March 31st, 2023 02:07
L. B. Mek said:
makes me sad
how modernity celebrates
all those flaunting their wealth
and wasting billions
on supposed missions to Mars
yet \'OUR\' children
are marginalised more n more
and left to fend for themselves...
(sobering to contemplate
that this succinctly worded
\'wake up call\'
will be relevant, till the end of time
still
thank you! dear Poet supreme
for boldly stating
what we all, try to willingly ignore!)
March 31st, 2023 02:07
The Marks on Our Ceiling
Goldfinch60 said:
Sorry Neville I am not allowed to tell you what they are. LOL
Andy
March 31st, 2023 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Sorry Neville I am not allowed to tell you what they are. LOL
Andy
March 31st, 2023 01:49
The Marks on Our Ceiling
arqios said:
Tempted to ask how high these ceilings are.
Mum always had us never eat in the bedroom lest the tomato sauce or any other sauce fall and stain.
March 30th, 2023 07:02
arqios said:
Tempted to ask how high these ceilings are.
Mum always had us never eat in the bedroom lest the tomato sauce or any other sauce fall and stain.
March 30th, 2023 07:02
The Marks on Our Ceiling
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh -- could be old blood or tomato sauce maybe - why not ask one of those ghosts that must haunt your ancient dwelling.........x
March 30th, 2023 05:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh -- could be old blood or tomato sauce maybe - why not ask one of those ghosts that must haunt your ancient dwelling.........x
March 30th, 2023 05:56
The Marks on Our Ceiling
Doggerel Dave said:
The joys of communal living....I live on the top floor, so what goes down stays down.....
March 30th, 2023 05:11
Doggerel Dave said:
The joys of communal living....I live on the top floor, so what goes down stays down.....
March 30th, 2023 05:11
The Marks on Our Ceiling
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"The Marks on Our Ceiling\" is a poem that captures the speaker\'s reflection on the stains on their dining room ceiling. The speaker uses irony and humor to convey their uneasy thoughts about the origins of the stains. The poem\'s title itself sets the tone for a contemplative, reflective piece that ultimately turns out to be an amusing take on an unpleasant experience.
March 30th, 2023 03:45
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"The Marks on Our Ceiling\" is a poem that captures the speaker\'s reflection on the stains on their dining room ceiling. The speaker uses irony and humor to convey their uneasy thoughts about the origins of the stains. The poem\'s title itself sets the tone for a contemplative, reflective piece that ultimately turns out to be an amusing take on an unpleasant experience.
March 30th, 2023 03:45
The Marks on Our Ceiling
orchidee said:
Fido will come round and sniff things out, to find out what it is! lol.
March 30th, 2023 01:53
orchidee said:
Fido will come round and sniff things out, to find out what it is! lol.
March 30th, 2023 01:53
Upon Learning to Fly
orchidee said:
Cooeee! ignore me - talking rubbish. Fido wants to be a Bird-Dog! He is making some wings. lol.
March 29th, 2023 14:46
orchidee said:
Cooeee! ignore me - talking rubbish. Fido wants to be a Bird-Dog! He is making some wings. lol.
March 29th, 2023 14:46
Upon Learning to Fly
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem\'s themes of risk-taking and fear of the unknown are relatable and universal. The speaker\'s hesitation in the face of something as uncertain and potentially dangerous as flying is something that many people can relate to when facing new challenges or taking risks in their lives.
March 29th, 2023 13:08
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem\'s themes of risk-taking and fear of the unknown are relatable and universal. The speaker\'s hesitation in the face of something as uncertain and potentially dangerous as flying is something that many people can relate to when facing new challenges or taking risks in their lives.
March 29th, 2023 13:08
Upon Learning to Fly
MendedFences27 said:
Here\'s an opposite type of risk: I was part of the crew of a submarine repair ship. I went inro their radio room and saw all these coffee cans hanging from the overhead. I asked what their purpose was and was told, \"To catch the leaks.\" Funny how your poem about flying at great risk brought back that memory. More important in your poem is the question on living. One must take a few risks in order to live a full life. Relationships too can depend on one\'s willingness to risk it all. - Phil A,
March 29th, 2023 09:41
MendedFences27 said:
Here\'s an opposite type of risk: I was part of the crew of a submarine repair ship. I went inro their radio room and saw all these coffee cans hanging from the overhead. I asked what their purpose was and was told, \"To catch the leaks.\" Funny how your poem about flying at great risk brought back that memory. More important in your poem is the question on living. One must take a few risks in order to live a full life. Relationships too can depend on one\'s willingness to risk it all. - Phil A,
March 29th, 2023 09:41
A Question of Waste
Doggerel Dave said:
Apologies Neville - I\'ve just deleted my commentary here which had no place under you neat shortie. I\'ve taken it away to develop the argument and let it stand or fall under my own name.
March 29th, 2023 08:12
Doggerel Dave said:
Apologies Neville - I\'ve just deleted my commentary here which had no place under you neat shortie. I\'ve taken it away to develop the argument and let it stand or fall under my own name.
March 29th, 2023 08:12
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