Comments received on poems by Neville
Two Odd Numbers
2781 said:
Baked beans or the Kama-Sutra. I can see the conflict there.
February 19th, 2023 02:38
2781 said:
Baked beans or the Kama-Sutra. I can see the conflict there.
February 19th, 2023 02:38
Redundant Crows
Doggerel Dave said:
Really feel I should have used \'murmurations\' somewhere..... I\'ll keep it in mind...thanks, Nev!
The feeling that like an expanding universe (but not in an inevitable or right way), we are moving apart from each other, has a certain resonance for me....
February 18th, 2023 20:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Really feel I should have used \'murmurations\' somewhere..... I\'ll keep it in mind...thanks, Nev!
The feeling that like an expanding universe (but not in an inevitable or right way), we are moving apart from each other, has a certain resonance for me....
February 18th, 2023 20:32
Redundant Crows
Fay Slimm. said:
Very good question Nev - -what a natural learning curve are wonderous bird- murmerations - oh yes indeed - - \"togetherness\" if it really becomes redundant will without doubt cripple humanity with far more than loneliness - - an apt title too for your foreseeing write my friend.................x
February 18th, 2023 11:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Very good question Nev - -what a natural learning curve are wonderous bird- murmerations - oh yes indeed - - \"togetherness\" if it really becomes redundant will without doubt cripple humanity with far more than loneliness - - an apt title too for your foreseeing write my friend.................x
February 18th, 2023 11:08
Redundant Crows
orchidee said:
Can ya beat a murmeration like ya can beat an egg?! As I say, I talk some rubbish sometimes. lol.
February 18th, 2023 03:28
orchidee said:
Can ya beat a murmeration like ya can beat an egg?! As I say, I talk some rubbish sometimes. lol.
February 18th, 2023 03:28
One Day Perhaps
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Not that this happens with KP and I. lol.
February 17th, 2023 10:07
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Not that this happens with KP and I. lol.
February 17th, 2023 10:07
One Day Perhaps
Christina8 said:
Beautiful write about love, some of us have it and some don\'t. This is really quite good!
February 17th, 2023 08:55
Christina8 said:
Beautiful write about love, some of us have it and some don\'t. This is really quite good!
February 17th, 2023 08:55
One Day Perhaps
L. B. Mek said:
empowering, our Perhaps
we light candles, as smiles
winking at strife\'s afterglow
we lament, little
but that lost second, where
you looked right and I, left
a whole second, we had
to make up for, in our next
lingering embrace
dear You,
who nourished my heart\'s dreams
my poetry\'s romance
and most of all, my anchor to worth
that next Shakespeare
will surely weave fantasy rhymes
someday, as testimony
to a love, ageless and resplendently
a most untainted, Perhaps
February 17th, 2023 05:32
L. B. Mek said:
empowering, our Perhaps
we light candles, as smiles
winking at strife\'s afterglow
we lament, little
but that lost second, where
you looked right and I, left
a whole second, we had
to make up for, in our next
lingering embrace
dear You,
who nourished my heart\'s dreams
my poetry\'s romance
and most of all, my anchor to worth
that next Shakespeare
will surely weave fantasy rhymes
someday, as testimony
to a love, ageless and resplendently
a most untainted, Perhaps
February 17th, 2023 05:32
One Day Perhaps
Doggerel Dave said:
Wow - not often we hear of that from you, Nev....perfection....🙂
Your current wife, I presume.....
February 17th, 2023 04:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Wow - not often we hear of that from you, Nev....perfection....🙂
Your current wife, I presume.....
February 17th, 2023 04:43
One Day Perhaps
Fay Slimm. said:
This tenderest of writes will raise a soft sigh from more than this reader I can assure you - -- . sniffing and sending more than a Like..............x
February 17th, 2023 04:39
Fay Slimm. said:
This tenderest of writes will raise a soft sigh from more than this reader I can assure you - -- . sniffing and sending more than a Like..............x
February 17th, 2023 04:39
For Everfriends Everywhere
L. B. Mek said:
so poignant, Hyung
reminds me of pink\'s, \'who knew\' lyrics
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7vIbsp5oJbY
)
thank you!
February 17th, 2023 03:08
L. B. Mek said:
so poignant, Hyung
reminds me of pink\'s, \'who knew\' lyrics
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7vIbsp5oJbY
)
thank you!
February 17th, 2023 03:08
A Time for Everything
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully romantic, with a tinge of melancholic angst
an irresistible poetic cocktail, dear subtle Poet
(Time, distils
worth
with more clarity, than anything
in existence..
a sip at time, we savour
our mementos of life)
February 17th, 2023 03:04
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully romantic, with a tinge of melancholic angst
an irresistible poetic cocktail, dear subtle Poet
(Time, distils
worth
with more clarity, than anything
in existence..
a sip at time, we savour
our mementos of life)
February 17th, 2023 03:04
Precisely As it Did Not Happen
L. B. Mek said:
\'When I have fears that I may cease to be
Before my pen has gleaned my teeming brain,
Before high-pilèd books, in charactery,
Hold like rich garners the full ripened grain;
When I behold, upon the night’s starred face,
Huge cloudy symbols of a high romance,
And think that I may never live to trace
Their shadows with the magic hand of chance;\'
(yeah Hyung, in my feeble eyes
Keats is the level I compare
your poetry to
only
you choose to word it more
accessible
and that is a most admirable
mastery of eloquence)
thank you!
February 17th, 2023 02:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'When I have fears that I may cease to be
Before my pen has gleaned my teeming brain,
Before high-pilèd books, in charactery,
Hold like rich garners the full ripened grain;
When I behold, upon the night’s starred face,
Huge cloudy symbols of a high romance,
And think that I may never live to trace
Their shadows with the magic hand of chance;\'
(yeah Hyung, in my feeble eyes
Keats is the level I compare
your poetry to
only
you choose to word it more
accessible
and that is a most admirable
mastery of eloquence)
thank you!
February 17th, 2023 02:58
For Everfriends Everywhere
Bella Shepard said:
Maybe the moral is to know before you speak. It is so often easy to say, but difficult to keep. I think we\'ve all been there one way or another. Three lines that strike at our weaknesses, superbly.
February 16th, 2023 14:10
Bella Shepard said:
Maybe the moral is to know before you speak. It is so often easy to say, but difficult to keep. I think we\'ve all been there one way or another. Three lines that strike at our weaknesses, superbly.
February 16th, 2023 14:10
For Everfriends Everywhere
arqios said:
Got a couple of those me-self over the years. Ever ends quite quickly it seems.
February 16th, 2023 08:42
arqios said:
Got a couple of those me-self over the years. Ever ends quite quickly it seems.
February 16th, 2023 08:42
For Everfriends Everywhere
Christina8 said:
No, I don\'t think those days did end....just my two cents on the subject! x C
February 16th, 2023 07:40
Christina8 said:
No, I don\'t think those days did end....just my two cents on the subject! x C
February 16th, 2023 07:40
For Everfriends Everywhere
Doggerel Dave said:
Which one of the 64 friends you have here woz it?
February 16th, 2023 05:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Which one of the 64 friends you have here woz it?
February 16th, 2023 05:59
For Everfriends Everywhere
Fay Slimm. said:
A case of \"say what you mean but mean what you say\" methinks -- maybe the heart was never in it........x
February 16th, 2023 05:29
Fay Slimm. said:
A case of \"say what you mean but mean what you say\" methinks -- maybe the heart was never in it........x
February 16th, 2023 05:29
A Time for Everything
Goldfinch60 said:
That time will come Neville and the enjoyment will be worth the wait.
Andy
February 16th, 2023 03:02
Goldfinch60 said:
That time will come Neville and the enjoyment will be worth the wait.
Andy
February 16th, 2023 03:02
For Everfriends Everywhere
orchidee said:
Yep, those days sure did end. Day 1 of my marriage to KP it was. All downhill since then! lol.
February 16th, 2023 02:33
orchidee said:
Yep, those days sure did end. Day 1 of my marriage to KP it was. All downhill since then! lol.
February 16th, 2023 02:33
Let’s Talk About the Weather For Once
James Stinson said:
Neville, thoroughly impressed with your body of work.
Delightful and inspiring.
February 15th, 2023 17:05
James Stinson said:
Neville, thoroughly impressed with your body of work.
Delightful and inspiring.
February 15th, 2023 17:05
A Time for Everything
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Neville,
Most definitely there’s
“A Time for Everything”.
An enjoyable read indeed!
Laura 🌻
February 15th, 2023 11:18
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Neville,
Most definitely there’s
“A Time for Everything”.
An enjoyable read indeed!
Laura 🌻
February 15th, 2023 11:18
A Time for Everything
Christina8 said:
I really enjoyed this romantic write! Just perfect! C
February 15th, 2023 09:07
Christina8 said:
I really enjoyed this romantic write! Just perfect! C
February 15th, 2023 09:07
A Time for Everything
Doggerel Dave said:
I read that all the dust in my place which I have hitherto blamed on the environment, is in reality my shed skin, which flakes off at a don\'t bear thinking of rate..... perfectly prepared to leave it as long as she likes, as I \'forget\' to vacuum mostly....
February 15th, 2023 06:53
Doggerel Dave said:
I read that all the dust in my place which I have hitherto blamed on the environment, is in reality my shed skin, which flakes off at a don\'t bear thinking of rate..... perfectly prepared to leave it as long as she likes, as I \'forget\' to vacuum mostly....
February 15th, 2023 06:53
A Time for Everything
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh - -so very romantic this well chosen \"Time for Everything\" - - and so teasingly slow that last line is sure to send shivers up (and down) the spine.........x
February 15th, 2023 06:27
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh - -so very romantic this well chosen \"Time for Everything\" - - and so teasingly slow that last line is sure to send shivers up (and down) the spine.........x
February 15th, 2023 06:27
A Time for Everything
orchidee said:
Not now, not tomorrow, not ever, KP!! heehee.
Fido don\'t let me have any ardour anyway! lol.
February 15th, 2023 04:17
orchidee said:
Not now, not tomorrow, not ever, KP!! heehee.
Fido don\'t let me have any ardour anyway! lol.
February 15th, 2023 04:17
Precisely As it Did Not Happen
Doggerel Dave said:
Well who\'d have thought ?.............................. I cannot but agree and not better Sir Orchi\'s, in this case astute, summation of your current situation, N...
February 14th, 2023 20:08
Doggerel Dave said:
Well who\'d have thought ?.............................. I cannot but agree and not better Sir Orchi\'s, in this case astute, summation of your current situation, N...
February 14th, 2023 20:08
Precisely As it Did Not Happen
orchidee said:
Cooeee! Did it happen yet? Whatever it was. lol.
I get lost in some cryptic poems, then usually spout some rubbish. No change there then from me. lol.
February 14th, 2023 13:52
orchidee said:
Cooeee! Did it happen yet? Whatever it was. lol.
I get lost in some cryptic poems, then usually spout some rubbish. No change there then from me. lol.
February 14th, 2023 13:52
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