Comments received on poems by Neville



For Everfriends Everywhere
L. B. Mek said:

so poignant, Hyung
reminds me of pink\'s, \'who knew\' lyrics
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7vIbsp5oJbY
)
thank you!

February 17th, 2023 03:08

A Time for Everything
L. B. Mek said:

wonderfully romantic, with a tinge of melancholic angst
an irresistible poetic cocktail, dear subtle Poet
(Time, distils
worth
with more clarity, than anything
in existence..
a sip at time, we savour
our mementos of life)

February 17th, 2023 03:04

Precisely As it Did Not Happen
L. B. Mek said:

\'When I have fears that I may cease to be
Before my pen has gleaned my teeming brain,
Before high-pilèd books, in charactery,
Hold like rich garners the full ripened grain;
When I behold, upon the night’s starred face,
Huge cloudy symbols of a high romance,
And think that I may never live to trace
Their shadows with the magic hand of chance;\'
(yeah Hyung, in my feeble eyes
Keats is the level I compare
your poetry to
only
you choose to word it more
accessible
and that is a most admirable
mastery of eloquence)
thank you!

February 17th, 2023 02:58

For Everfriends Everywhere
Bella Shepard said:

Maybe the moral is to know before you speak. It is so often easy to say, but difficult to keep. I think we\'ve all been there one way or another. Three lines that strike at our weaknesses, superbly.

February 16th, 2023 14:10

For Everfriends Everywhere
arqios said:

Got a couple of those me-self over the years. Ever ends quite quickly it seems.

February 16th, 2023 08:42

For Everfriends Everywhere
Christina8 said:

No, I don\'t think those days did end....just my two cents on the subject! x C

February 16th, 2023 07:40

For Everfriends Everywhere
Doggerel Dave said:

Which one of the 64 friends you have here woz it?

February 16th, 2023 05:59

For Everfriends Everywhere
Fay Slimm. said:

A case of \"say what you mean but mean what you say\" methinks -- maybe the heart was never in it........x


February 16th, 2023 05:29

A Time for Everything
Goldfinch60 said:

That time will come Neville and the enjoyment will be worth the wait.

Andy

February 16th, 2023 03:02

For Everfriends Everywhere
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive words Neville.

Andy

February 16th, 2023 02:42

For Everfriends Everywhere
orchidee said:

Yep, those days sure did end. Day 1 of my marriage to KP it was. All downhill since then! lol.

February 16th, 2023 02:33

Let’s Talk About the Weather For Once
James Stinson said:

Neville, thoroughly impressed with your body of work.
Delightful and inspiring.

February 15th, 2023 17:05

A Time for Everything
Laura🌻 said:

Dear Neville,
Most definitely there’s
“A Time for Everything”.
An enjoyable read indeed!

Laura 🌻

February 15th, 2023 11:18

A Time for Everything
Christina8 said:

I really enjoyed this romantic write! Just perfect! C

February 15th, 2023 09:07

A Time for Everything
Doggerel Dave said:

I read that all the dust in my place which I have hitherto blamed on the environment, is in reality my shed skin, which flakes off at a don\'t bear thinking of rate..... perfectly prepared to leave it as long as she likes, as I \'forget\' to vacuum mostly....

February 15th, 2023 06:53

A Time for Everything
Fay Slimm. said:

Ooooh - -so very romantic this well chosen \"Time for Everything\" - - and so teasingly slow that last line is sure to send shivers up (and down) the spine.........x

February 15th, 2023 06:27

A Time for Everything
orchidee said:

Not now, not tomorrow, not ever, KP!! heehee.
Fido don\'t let me have any ardour anyway! lol.

February 15th, 2023 04:17

Precisely As it Did Not Happen
Doggerel Dave said:

Well who\'d have thought ?.............................. I cannot but agree and not better Sir Orchi\'s, in this case astute, summation of your current situation, N...

February 14th, 2023 20:08

Precisely As it Did Not Happen
orchidee said:

Cooeee! Did it happen yet? Whatever it was. lol.
I get lost in some cryptic poems, then usually spout some rubbish. No change there then from me. lol.

February 14th, 2023 13:52

Precisely As it Did Not Happen
Fay Slimm. said:

Right on the button this piece of summing up action Nev. - - - Events in the head can soon become a scary reality - and fair to say that staying alive is vital for any lasting confession - - glad you \'re still here though amigo........x

February 14th, 2023 06:04

Precisely As it Did Not Happen
Christina8 said:

I don\'t think any of us are getting out of here alive but I think thats what you meant....I love the word play! C

February 14th, 2023 05:45

Precisely As it Did Not Happen
orchidee said:

I \'confess\' it\'s a good write N.

February 14th, 2023 03:12

Precisely As it Did Not Happen
Poetic Dan said:

Get out of my head! Fantastic word play

February 14th, 2023 03:10

Precisely As it Did Not Happen
Goldfinch60 said:

Confessions lead to a release and the power to move on life Neville, keep moving on as this life is wonderful.

Andy

February 14th, 2023 02:13

Afterthoughts Don’t Count
Doggerel Dave said:

OK Nev I\'m not going to blow your cover right now, so below is my lightly coded response:

Co-Ann was not quite broken, but some enlightenment ensued...

February 13th, 2023 22:03

Afterthoughts Don’t Count
Jerry Reynolds said:

Terrific, Neville. The first thing I thought of was a gun fight. So bad of me.

February 13th, 2023 17:35

Afterthoughts Don’t Count
Laura🌻 said:

Dear Neville,
So he is what he is and
he isn’t what he isn’t …
he opined for a fleeting of a moment.
A very interesting write which I enjoyed perusing through.

Laura🌻

February 13th, 2023 11:56

Afterthoughts Don’t Count
Kinsey Peterson said:

so much can change in a fraction of a second. never let anyone else define you.

February 13th, 2023 09:23

Afterthoughts Don’t Count
Christina8 said:

I enjoyed your poem, dear N. Yes those fractions of a second can either be rewarding or disappointing, either way just a peek into a moment, thank you!

February 13th, 2023 06:21

Afterthoughts Don’t Count
Fay Slimm. said:

Hah -- that\'s the way to stave off further complaints methinks - short but often resulting in double- trouble - -- - another momentary peep behind moments. Great stuff Sir N..........x

February 13th, 2023 04:09



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