Comments received on poems by Neville
Down With Everything
Dove said:
Oh my, time changes things and not always for the better! Great Rhythm and Rhymes
November 27th, 2021 11:37
Dove said:
Oh my, time changes things and not always for the better! Great Rhythm and Rhymes
November 27th, 2021 11:37
Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
Dove said:
Very beautiful, and calming! Best to you Dear
November 27th, 2021 11:35
Dove said:
Very beautiful, and calming! Best to you Dear
November 27th, 2021 11:35
Down With Everything
dusk arising said:
Done with them, done with them, done, done , done.....but soddit they\'re still there in my memory goading me.
Why are the relationships with sharp edges, maybe tempestuous ones, the ones which continually trip into out memories?
November 27th, 2021 08:56
dusk arising said:
Done with them, done with them, done, done , done.....but soddit they\'re still there in my memory goading me.
Why are the relationships with sharp edges, maybe tempestuous ones, the ones which continually trip into out memories?
November 27th, 2021 08:56
Down With Everything
Paul Bell said:
Yes, when the door closes for the final time, no reflection is bringing it back.
November 27th, 2021 06:48
Paul Bell said:
Yes, when the door closes for the final time, no reflection is bringing it back.
November 27th, 2021 06:48
Down With Everything
Doggerel Dave said:
Dating that nun again Nev?
Well good for her if she still inspires rhythmic verse like that.......
November 27th, 2021 05:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Dating that nun again Nev?
Well good for her if she still inspires rhythmic verse like that.......
November 27th, 2021 05:11
Down With Everything
Fay Slimm. said:
That becoming pernickety never does the trick of alluring - - lovers can become addicted to fuss - give me a partner who needs no mirror to reflect a beautiful heart..............x
November 27th, 2021 05:07
Fay Slimm. said:
That becoming pernickety never does the trick of alluring - - lovers can become addicted to fuss - give me a partner who needs no mirror to reflect a beautiful heart..............x
November 27th, 2021 05:07
Down With Everything
orchidee said:
Now I\'m wondering - should I meet her? Is a she a drama queen?!
And am I a blue-eyed boy?! lol.
November 27th, 2021 02:59
orchidee said:
Now I\'m wondering - should I meet her? Is a she a drama queen?!
And am I a blue-eyed boy?! lol.
November 27th, 2021 02:59
Down With Everything
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A very interesting write.
Are your eyes blue?…just wondering!🤔..…and are you really done with those candles?🕯……..once again, just wondering! 🤔
Laura🌻
November 27th, 2021 02:49
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A very interesting write.
Are your eyes blue?…just wondering!🤔..…and are you really done with those candles?🕯……..once again, just wondering! 🤔
Laura🌻
November 27th, 2021 02:49
Down With Everything
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words again Neville, maybe one day she will see.
Andy
November 27th, 2021 02:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words again Neville, maybe one day she will see.
Andy
November 27th, 2021 02:40
Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely poem , comfort in your words . I truly believe in angels .
November 26th, 2021 17:42
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely poem , comfort in your words . I truly believe in angels .
November 26th, 2021 17:42
Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
Doggerel Dave said:
My very literal (no, not literary) mind was none the less provoked by this piece of yours, Nev.
Visions of a view or two in the Blue Mountains (behind Sydney)
November 26th, 2021 16:47
Doggerel Dave said:
My very literal (no, not literary) mind was none the less provoked by this piece of yours, Nev.
Visions of a view or two in the Blue Mountains (behind Sydney)
November 26th, 2021 16:47
Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
Nicholas Browning said:
This is a marvelous piece of literature. I enjoyed the way you spaced out the rhymes and the playful, perhaps innovative, word choice. Well done sir.
November 26th, 2021 12:01
Nicholas Browning said:
This is a marvelous piece of literature. I enjoyed the way you spaced out the rhymes and the playful, perhaps innovative, word choice. Well done sir.
November 26th, 2021 12:01
Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
dusk arising said:
That special place all spiritual folk have found deep within our soul. A place we retire to in times of need and our batteries are recharged.
November 26th, 2021 11:05
dusk arising said:
That special place all spiritual folk have found deep within our soul. A place we retire to in times of need and our batteries are recharged.
November 26th, 2021 11:05
Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an irresistible invitation to climb for a while to places where angels have satisfied hunger in gentle loving arms - -- a gem of a verse Nev to keep and read again when needing a ledge................x
November 26th, 2021 03:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an irresistible invitation to climb for a while to places where angels have satisfied hunger in gentle loving arms - -- a gem of a verse Nev to keep and read again when needing a ledge................x
November 26th, 2021 03:51
Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
Neville said:
...... then I\'m gonna double thank you .. hope you like the more recently tweaked version too ..... N
November 26th, 2021 03:48
Neville said:
...... then I\'m gonna double thank you .. hope you like the more recently tweaked version too ..... N
November 26th, 2021 03:48
Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
spilleronsheet said:
Those ambitions setup high
Doesn’t allow me to rest for a while
A great one dear poet
A rest is surely needed
The slice of sky what a great expression
Aren’t we all birds of paradise
November 26th, 2021 03:28
spilleronsheet said:
Those ambitions setup high
Doesn’t allow me to rest for a while
A great one dear poet
A rest is surely needed
The slice of sky what a great expression
Aren’t we all birds of paradise
November 26th, 2021 03:28
Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
I had a prayer, but me wings fell off. Well, I was trying to be \'The Birdman\'! heehee.
November 26th, 2021 02:31
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
I had a prayer, but me wings fell off. Well, I was trying to be \'The Birdman\'! heehee.
November 26th, 2021 02:31
An Unmistakable She
Doggerel Dave said:
Beautifully paced , Nev, no - really.
But did Granny know you cared, though?
November 25th, 2021 21:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Beautifully paced , Nev, no - really.
But did Granny know you cared, though?
November 25th, 2021 21:49
An Unmistakable She
spilleronsheet said:
How romantic
Those words of yours
The lady in context keeps high in curiosity
For the words in praise so charming to eyes
November 25th, 2021 14:57
spilleronsheet said:
How romantic
Those words of yours
The lady in context keeps high in curiosity
For the words in praise so charming to eyes
November 25th, 2021 14:57
An Unmistakable She
L. B. Mek said:
lol
the poor lady, in her
eyes
you\'re enamoured
by her, daintily quirks..
where as
your thought\'s
are mapping, murderous
intentions...
(ahh, those tinted eyes
of romance)
a fun read, thanks for sharing
dear Poet
November 25th, 2021 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
lol
the poor lady, in her
eyes
you\'re enamoured
by her, daintily quirks..
where as
your thought\'s
are mapping, murderous
intentions...
(ahh, those tinted eyes
of romance)
a fun read, thanks for sharing
dear Poet
November 25th, 2021 05:44
An Unmistakable She
Fay Slimm. said:
Methinks your She\'s are found wanting if R\'s rolling is all they can offer amigo - am offering big thank yous though Nev. for the smile this clever write leaves..............x
November 25th, 2021 05:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Methinks your She\'s are found wanting if R\'s rolling is all they can offer amigo - am offering big thank yous though Nev. for the smile this clever write leaves..............x
November 25th, 2021 05:17
An Unmistakable She
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A thing of splendor. Magnetic, even. Well written sir.
November 25th, 2021 05:13
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A thing of splendor. Magnetic, even. Well written sir.
November 25th, 2021 05:13
An Unmistakable She
dusk arising said:
There\'s many a rolling R\'s to be observed on the high street too. And other feminine whiles are seen in the coffee shop and around the ballroom.... (sighs)
Your poetry creates visions to stir the morning into life.
November 25th, 2021 03:49
dusk arising said:
There\'s many a rolling R\'s to be observed on the high street too. And other feminine whiles are seen in the coffee shop and around the ballroom.... (sighs)
Your poetry creates visions to stir the morning into life.
November 25th, 2021 03:49
An Unmistakable She
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nice writing Neville 🙂 some people just have such lovely personalities ,
I like how you have worded your poem
November 25th, 2021 02:36
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nice writing Neville 🙂 some people just have such lovely personalities ,
I like how you have worded your poem
November 25th, 2021 02:36
An Unmistakable She
orchidee said:
Good write N. Is that she who must be obeyed? That might be KP! lol.
November 25th, 2021 02:23
orchidee said:
Good write N. Is that she who must be obeyed? That might be KP! lol.
November 25th, 2021 02:23
An Unmistakable She
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is obviously in the air Neville.
Andy
November 25th, 2021 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is obviously in the air Neville.
Andy
November 25th, 2021 02:20
Ma Petit Serviette
Goldfinch60 said:
So you met her as well Neville, I shall say no more........
Andy
November 25th, 2021 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
So you met her as well Neville, I shall say no more........
Andy
November 25th, 2021 02:09
Ma Petit Serviette
Garth Rakumakoe said:
He was a man with secrets of his own, parading as views hidden in plain sight. Everybody saw them, but only he knew about them.
November 24th, 2021 09:45
Garth Rakumakoe said:
He was a man with secrets of his own, parading as views hidden in plain sight. Everybody saw them, but only he knew about them.
November 24th, 2021 09:45
Ma Petit Serviette
orchidee said:
Best not tell me what she served without any argument. I will only swoon. Fido says it will be too much for me! lol.
November 24th, 2021 07:01
orchidee said:
Best not tell me what she served without any argument. I will only swoon. Fido says it will be too much for me! lol.
November 24th, 2021 07:01
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