Comments received on poems by Neville



My Pretty Little Psychopath
dusk arising said:

Now theres a disturbing thought.

June 11th, 2022 03:50

My Pretty Little Psychopath
orchidee said:

I best not meet her, if you mean a lass here! lol.

June 11th, 2022 02:11

My Pretty Little Psychopath
Goldfinch60 said:

Are you talking about Putin again!! We can but hope he will be gone tomorrow.

Andy

June 11th, 2022 00:51

Hypothetically Yours
Goldfinch60 said:

Hypothetical love as well Neville?

Andy

June 11th, 2022 00:27

Hypothetically Yours
Accidental Poet said:

Hypothetically, this may be your best N. But you have others that say they\'re your best. 😉

June 10th, 2022 07:32

Hypothetically Yours
L. B. Mek said:

its crazy how we sync-up
so many times
I too shared words on the ocean
since Wednesday 8th
was world ocean day..
but that\'s where our similarities end, i fear
while I waffled, you
as-ever, distilled
another gem of Poetic wisdom
dear Poet supreme..
thank you! Hyung
stay safe

June 10th, 2022 05:48

Hypothetically Yours
spilleronsheet said:

A very unique way where love blossoms in colour blue…good one dear Neville…..

June 10th, 2022 04:03

Hypothetically Yours
Fay Slimm. said:

Thanking you and your romantic heart for this ardent read Nev - -and now in my faves. Tis the best love poem I have read in an age.................x

June 10th, 2022 03:13

Hypothetically Yours
orchidee said:

I truly un-hypo-wotsit say - good write N.
\'Un-hypo-wotsit\'?? I sound like a gibbering wreck. lol.

June 10th, 2022 03:07

Vladimir’s Full Metal Jacket
Goldfinch60 said:

I wish that time would come quicker and that the war was stopped.

Make love, not war.

Andy

June 10th, 2022 00:05

Vladimir’s Full Metal Jacket
MendedFences27 said:

Politics is a dirty game and, as such, does not lend itself to poetry very well. But the human side of this piece, when one considers the loss of life on both sides, proves the arrogance of war. Would Putin\'s death be a solution to that? Maybe, but what if some other egomaniacal depot-to-be pops up and replaces him.? There are thousands of paths that events going forward could follow. The answer lies in the hands of the Russian people. They may have an opportunity here to gain their freedom once again, but it will be a struggle requiring great sacrifice. It is however, their choice. - Phil A.

June 9th, 2022 16:45

Vladimir’s Full Metal Jacket
Fay Slimm. said:

Metal jacket or not those fragments tell their own sorry story - --- such a powerful subject and read...........x

June 9th, 2022 07:59

Vladimir’s Full Metal Jacket
L. B. Mek said:

(I\'m sorry Hyung
I read your words
and a month\'s worth of frustration and despair
poured out of me
in one, self-indulgent ramble of ink..
I hope you know I mean no disrespect
I\'m just overzealous
with my foolish
over opinionated, self..
please, forgive me)
\'the enemy of my Enemy
is my friend...!\'
before, judging the entire
Russian population, we must
remember
the zealotry efforts of the west
and especially USA, to induce
a feud with Russia
from the minute WW2 ended
that\'s
more than half a century
of west, policies and sanctions
and calculated, actions
aimed at inciting
volatile reactions..
\'This war or a form of it
was on the cards the minute
the US planned to bolster
Ukraine\'s defences\'..
(
https://www.politico.com/news/2021/09/14/us-army-iron-dome-weapons-ukraine-511787
)
now, does this mean
Putin is correct in butchering
his own, blood
to stave off, USA\'s intensions
NO!
absolutely not!
and yes, let\'s not forget
he is a former
KGB general
a prodigy child of their influence
and proxy, control over Russia..
but
Please, let\'s not just play
that lazy game
where we pick
\'our side\' and then, scream
evil, evil on those
across the lines of our battlefields
let us look, Beyond
that reductive and impotent
\'good and evil\', labels
and Seriously, consider
the cause and effects
of our reality..
Because only then
can we empower our future generations
with a Chance
at preventing this same, cyclical
warmongering
conflict inducing, conditions
from, repeating....
again n again
and Again!
Russians are humans
Putin is Human
Biden is Human
We, are All Humans!!!
fallible and glorious
Humans
there is no
Them vs Us
there\'s just, One
humanity!
No to War
and NO
to those, who
Plot, conflict
as Solutions
to their Political
obstacles...
in the words for the great
Sylvia Plath:
\'Tea leaves, thwart
those
who court catastrophe\'


June 9th, 2022 06:02

Vladimir’s Full Metal Jacket
orchidee said:

We can only hope - even if sounding un-Christian, or un-spiritual.
I have to admit to rather jumping for joy when a cat-killer in the news snuffed it. Kitty\'s revenge?! No, not the naughty poet on here. lol.

June 9th, 2022 05:39

Vladimir’s Full Metal Jacket
dusk arising said:

Well we live in hope.

June 9th, 2022 05:37

Vladimir’s Full Metal Jacket
Paul Bell said:

Sooner the better.
What is wrong with the Russian people, they can\'t be that brainwashed.

June 9th, 2022 04:22

Over and Out
Goldfinch60 said:

Sad words Neville, sometimes people just do not understand the truth that is within us.

Andy

June 9th, 2022 00:19

Over and Out
Draven said:

Say what you mean, mean what you say and yet sometimes the listening ears decide to hear what they want. Very frustrating! Sending love, Neville. Nicely written.

June 8th, 2022 14:34

Over and Out
MendedFences27 said:

Best to be clear of that temptation. It seems you would always be misunderstood. Nothing could have saved it, except for you to be someone you are not, and that would not be wise. Maybe, be thankful for your escape. - Phil A.

June 8th, 2022 14:17

Over and Out
orchidee said:

Good write Neville.
i got a mad picture - the mind boggles - of ya hopping along the street on one foot, with the other foot in your mouth.
Btu why so mad a pic? says Fido. \'You do that every day on my walkies\' he says to me. lol.

June 8th, 2022 10:14

Over and Out
dusk arising said:

Your words speak to me of a man who knows and values himself sufficiently to follow his right to a relationship where he will shine within the light of a star he holds above all others.

June 8th, 2022 05:26

Over and Out
Fay Slimm. said:

Sad but true incompatibility is hard to deal with in a relationship where blame if felt must be a shared thing methinks..... at least firm decision in your final lines meant a complete break. My parents were in the same hard space for as long as I can remember - - an honestly written haunt of a read Nev...................x

June 8th, 2022 04:00

It’s All in The Seeing
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true Neville, there are so many who only look but never see.

Andy

June 8th, 2022 00:18

It’s All in The Seeing
MendedFences27 said:

\"looking at\" something is just that, looking. Seeing is having a sense of its reason for existence. Some look at art, others see it, know why it exists. Your little 3 liner contains much wisdom. - Phil A.

June 7th, 2022 08:02

It’s All in The Seeing
orchidee said:

I\'ve seen some of them gals. Should I see more of them?!

June 7th, 2022 08:00

It’s All in The Seeing
L. B. Mek said:

indeed!
there is no limit
to the depths of Truth
imbued in these words..
dear Poet supreme
(from those blurry mirrors
to those blinkers, on eyes
genuine: Poetic brevity!)

June 7th, 2022 05:06

It’s All in The Seeing
dusk arising said:

Oh so true. Perception is controlled by ones egotistical state of mind.

Short and sweet from you today, a burst of wisdom.

June 7th, 2022 03:33

It’s All in The Seeing
Fay Slimm. said:

Sight is unique and understanding is even more so -- - - many more side shoots come from the viewing. How true indeed mon cher ami.................x

June 7th, 2022 03:24

Semi-Precious Summers
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive words Neville and such a shame that that sanctuary is now redundant.

Andy

June 6th, 2022 23:36

Semi-Precious Summers
Fay Slimm. said:

Such an emotive verse Nev. The pathos of petalled togetherness when love had beginnings is perfectly poemed in this heart-tugging look back on days of lost summer. Never redundant your heartfelt sentiments always get this reader\'s top marks ............ x

June 6th, 2022 08:25



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