Comments received on poems by Neville
No Such Thing as Empty Space
Doggerel Dave said:
Smells (and I mean this in the best possible sense) a little like a Zen koan to me, Nev...........
November 11th, 2021 18:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Smells (and I mean this in the best possible sense) a little like a Zen koan to me, Nev...........
November 11th, 2021 18:59
No Such Thing as Empty Space
orchidee said:
Only between my ears does empty space exist. Them 3 brain cells of mine should be due back from holiday soon though! heehee.
November 11th, 2021 10:23
orchidee said:
Only between my ears does empty space exist. Them 3 brain cells of mine should be due back from holiday soon though! heehee.
November 11th, 2021 10:23
No Such Thing as Empty Space
L. B. Mek said:
\'white/blank space = opportunity
making its presence, felt...\'
a great shorty, thanks for sharing dear Poet
(although, its completely the opposite for me
when it comes to the absence of those, we were once
alphabet-close - to, in our poetry of life;
distance and loss in our relationships
is somewhat inevitable in our lives, but
so is the passing pain, they bring)
November 11th, 2021 05:29
L. B. Mek said:
\'white/blank space = opportunity
making its presence, felt...\'
a great shorty, thanks for sharing dear Poet
(although, its completely the opposite for me
when it comes to the absence of those, we were once
alphabet-close - to, in our poetry of life;
distance and loss in our relationships
is somewhat inevitable in our lives, but
so is the passing pain, they bring)
November 11th, 2021 05:29
No Such Thing as Empty Space
dusk arising said:
I have been described as both a waste of space and a waste of good food.
I note that many empty spaces have been filled with your wily poetic wit on mps so bring on all the more spaces to tempt your poetic wiles.
November 11th, 2021 05:09
dusk arising said:
I have been described as both a waste of space and a waste of good food.
I note that many empty spaces have been filled with your wily poetic wit on mps so bring on all the more spaces to tempt your poetic wiles.
November 11th, 2021 05:09
No Such Thing as Empty Space
spilleronsheet said:
Sometimes emptiness can be filled
Sometimes let emptiness be there
Maybe at times vaccum is also needed
A great thought left behind
Thanks to those empty spaces in life
November 11th, 2021 04:51
spilleronsheet said:
Sometimes emptiness can be filled
Sometimes let emptiness be there
Maybe at times vaccum is also needed
A great thought left behind
Thanks to those empty spaces in life
November 11th, 2021 04:51
No Such Thing as Empty Space
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - good to see you posting again Nev..... but I now question - how could a talented mind such as you possess ever be accused of spacial emptiness ?..........x
November 11th, 2021 04:16
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - good to see you posting again Nev..... but I now question - how could a talented mind such as you possess ever be accused of spacial emptiness ?..........x
November 11th, 2021 04:16
No Such Thing as Empty Space
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Emptiness and spaces can be filled … they don’t always have to be empty .
November 11th, 2021 04:04
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Emptiness and spaces can be filled … they don’t always have to be empty .
November 11th, 2021 04:04
War is Not for Lovers
L. B. Mek said:
what a brilliant bridge, between
narrative and commentary
in a single poem,
I love your nod to Kipling\'s \'tommy\'
as well, adding to the innate fallacy
you unmask, in your portrayal
of all-things war and divisive tyranny!
(worth, reposting
on Thursday as a timely poem
to help us all insure, we Never
take their sacrifices for granted
and always Remember, their bravery:
of the 60 million who fought
some 9 million, lost their lives,
this freedom we waste, came
at such a heavy price...)
thanks for sharing, dear Masterful Poet
November 9th, 2021 04:14
L. B. Mek said:
what a brilliant bridge, between
narrative and commentary
in a single poem,
I love your nod to Kipling\'s \'tommy\'
as well, adding to the innate fallacy
you unmask, in your portrayal
of all-things war and divisive tyranny!
(worth, reposting
on Thursday as a timely poem
to help us all insure, we Never
take their sacrifices for granted
and always Remember, their bravery:
of the 60 million who fought
some 9 million, lost their lives,
this freedom we waste, came
at such a heavy price...)
thanks for sharing, dear Masterful Poet
November 9th, 2021 04:14
Kitten
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, may that kitten purr softly in your life.
Andy
November 5th, 2021 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, may that kitten purr softly in your life.
Andy
November 5th, 2021 01:32
Kitten
spilleronsheet said:
Kittens are lovely when they act coy
Beware when they turn tiger beside
November 4th, 2021 10:40
spilleronsheet said:
Kittens are lovely when they act coy
Beware when they turn tiger beside
November 4th, 2021 10:40
Kitten
L. B. Mek said:
a purring meow of approval from me, lol
a fun read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
November 4th, 2021 05:53
L. B. Mek said:
a purring meow of approval from me, lol
a fun read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
November 4th, 2021 05:53
Kitten
dusk arising said:
Someones been eating their kellogs frosties i see.
Kittens climbing up your trouser leg as you open a can of cat food..... so cut but owww those bloody claws! especially when the kitten has your %%%% in her grasp (which financially is always).
November 4th, 2021 05:10
dusk arising said:
Someones been eating their kellogs frosties i see.
Kittens climbing up your trouser leg as you open a can of cat food..... so cut but owww those bloody claws! especially when the kitten has your %%%% in her grasp (which financially is always).
November 4th, 2021 05:10
Kitten
Fay Slimm. said:
Methinks even tigers have to retreat when kittens turn wild - -- ggrrrrreat read to get the blood warmed on a November morn mon ami.............x
November 4th, 2021 04:05
Fay Slimm. said:
Methinks even tigers have to retreat when kittens turn wild - -- ggrrrrreat read to get the blood warmed on a November morn mon ami.............x
November 4th, 2021 04:05
Kitten
orchidee said:
I thought this would be about a cat! (did I? lol). Did he say \'Here, kitty, kitty\'? Did he call her in from outdoors, before night-fall?! heehee.
November 4th, 2021 04:03
orchidee said:
I thought this would be about a cat! (did I? lol). Did he say \'Here, kitty, kitty\'? Did he call her in from outdoors, before night-fall?! heehee.
November 4th, 2021 04:03
Kitten
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing like the old role play to get \'em at it....
That\'s lowered the tone considerably; Sorry Nev.
November 4th, 2021 03:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing like the old role play to get \'em at it....
That\'s lowered the tone considerably; Sorry Nev.
November 4th, 2021 03:57
Shy
dusk arising said:
Nights in white satin.....
Well, better late than never. The things these ladies will do to give us the impression of purity when inside they are just........
LOvely teaser of a poem today.
November 3rd, 2021 11:53
dusk arising said:
Nights in white satin.....
Well, better late than never. The things these ladies will do to give us the impression of purity when inside they are just........
LOvely teaser of a poem today.
November 3rd, 2021 11:53
Let These Words Speak For Themselves
Garth Rakumakoe said:
When wisdom speaks.
November 3rd, 2021 09:11
Garth Rakumakoe said:
When wisdom speaks.
November 3rd, 2021 09:11
Shy
orchidee said:
Good write N.
She was going to reveal all to me, but I fainted, and Fido revived me! lol.
November 3rd, 2021 06:48
orchidee said:
Good write N.
She was going to reveal all to me, but I fainted, and Fido revived me! lol.
November 3rd, 2021 06:48
Shy
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Excellently crafted! I love the shape of it! - Or should it be the shape of her? - Thank you for sharing.
November 3rd, 2021 04:57
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Excellently crafted! I love the shape of it! - Or should it be the shape of her? - Thank you for sharing.
November 3rd, 2021 04:57
Shy
Fay Slimm. said:
A pleasure indeed to read that finally all barriers down she can enjoy her naked shape quite shamelessly - - an alluring peek into remembered intimacy which Crete seemingly offered freely - - OOooh must go for a cold shower -gone a bit hot here amigo..............x
November 3rd, 2021 04:21
Fay Slimm. said:
A pleasure indeed to read that finally all barriers down she can enjoy her naked shape quite shamelessly - - an alluring peek into remembered intimacy which Crete seemingly offered freely - - OOooh must go for a cold shower -gone a bit hot here amigo..............x
November 3rd, 2021 04:21
Let These Words Speak For Themselves
Goldfinch60 said:
May those words reach all ears and peace and joy will return to our world.
Andy
November 3rd, 2021 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
May those words reach all ears and peace and joy will return to our world.
Andy
November 3rd, 2021 01:27
Let These Words Speak For Themselves
Doggerel Dave said:
Bustle and rush to where? absolute futility....Nah I\'ve already made this post too long - I should just take the advice provided in your last two lines.
Thanks Nev.
November 2nd, 2021 20:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Bustle and rush to where? absolute futility....Nah I\'ve already made this post too long - I should just take the advice provided in your last two lines.
Thanks Nev.
November 2nd, 2021 20:00
Let These Words Speak For Themselves
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nice read ) makes me think of those people busy getting everything they want , and more … too busy to stop and reflect . just how I maybe interpreted it anyhow . Or just try and stay in peace despite what may be going on around you . There is a sense of comfort in your words
November 2nd, 2021 15:37
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nice read ) makes me think of those people busy getting everything they want , and more … too busy to stop and reflect . just how I maybe interpreted it anyhow . Or just try and stay in peace despite what may be going on around you . There is a sense of comfort in your words
November 2nd, 2021 15:37
Let These Words Speak For Themselves
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Your penned words do speak for themselves and I appreciate what they’re communicating to yours truly.
Thank you for sharing the gift of your pen.
Laura🌻
November 2nd, 2021 15:27
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Your penned words do speak for themselves and I appreciate what they’re communicating to yours truly.
Thank you for sharing the gift of your pen.
Laura🌻
November 2nd, 2021 15:27
Let These Words Speak For Themselves
orchidee said:
Now why, when they say \'Peace and good will to all men\' (mankind, that is), does some wag say, \'Who is Will? And why\'s he being good to everyone?\' I dunno these things. lol.
November 2nd, 2021 10:45
orchidee said:
Now why, when they say \'Peace and good will to all men\' (mankind, that is), does some wag say, \'Who is Will? And why\'s he being good to everyone?\' I dunno these things. lol.
November 2nd, 2021 10:45
Let These Words Speak For Themselves
spilleronsheet said:
I really look at up at your works
So refined and majestic
With few lines they convey such a powerful message
The present scenario with an advice
Well crafted dear poet
November 2nd, 2021 09:33
spilleronsheet said:
I really look at up at your works
So refined and majestic
With few lines they convey such a powerful message
The present scenario with an advice
Well crafted dear poet
November 2nd, 2021 09:33
Let These Words Speak For Themselves
dusk arising said:
Peace and wellbeing is my mantra of the last few weeks and looks like continuing for some time. Away from any human contact, except delivery drivers, peace comes along easily.
Very calming words to be taken onboard.
November 2nd, 2021 05:50
dusk arising said:
Peace and wellbeing is my mantra of the last few weeks and looks like continuing for some time. Away from any human contact, except delivery drivers, peace comes along easily.
Very calming words to be taken onboard.
November 2nd, 2021 05:50
Let These Words Speak For Themselves
L. B. Mek said:
\'Each with their pollen
pockets primed
and likewise filled
to the very
point of overflowing ..\'
these poem, just exudes
your poetic class, my friend
so subtle, ever
so majestically subtle..
you deliver that arrowed incision of insightful commentary
with the practised ease, of a Supreme wordsmith..
(I read and learn, dear Poet
and Proud, to call myself a fan)
November 2nd, 2021 05:47
L. B. Mek said:
\'Each with their pollen
pockets primed
and likewise filled
to the very
point of overflowing ..\'
these poem, just exudes
your poetic class, my friend
so subtle, ever
so majestically subtle..
you deliver that arrowed incision of insightful commentary
with the practised ease, of a Supreme wordsmith..
(I read and learn, dear Poet
and Proud, to call myself a fan)
November 2nd, 2021 05:47
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