Comments received on poems by Neville
All the Words He Left Trapped in Her Throat
Fay Slimm. said:
A haunt of a read which describes so aptly a runaway guy blind to his actions..............x
May 6th, 2022 03:12
Fay Slimm. said:
A haunt of a read which describes so aptly a runaway guy blind to his actions..............x
May 6th, 2022 03:12
Dun a Runna
Christina8 said:
This is really funny, Bullet! A naughty boy indeed!! This is a great little write!! C
May 5th, 2022 08:24
Christina8 said:
This is really funny, Bullet! A naughty boy indeed!! This is a great little write!! C
May 5th, 2022 08:24
Dun a Runna
L. B. Mek said:
lol
everything in life, needs
practise
to gain, endurance
when we learn that
we have a chance
at establishing relationships
that exist, in our blink-n-miss
reality..
than linger, longer
in our regret\'s, rear
view, warped-by-Time
reverie mirrors..
(btw Hyung
how\'s the book coming along?)
May 5th, 2022 06:14
L. B. Mek said:
lol
everything in life, needs
practise
to gain, endurance
when we learn that
we have a chance
at establishing relationships
that exist, in our blink-n-miss
reality..
than linger, longer
in our regret\'s, rear
view, warped-by-Time
reverie mirrors..
(btw Hyung
how\'s the book coming along?)
May 5th, 2022 06:14
Dun a Runna
orchidee said:
I wouldn\'t know - Bullet? - swoon!
Shall I meet her now then, if you\'ve dashed off?! lol.
I loves \'em and leaves \'em - well, I leaves KP anyway. lol.
May 5th, 2022 06:03
orchidee said:
I wouldn\'t know - Bullet? - swoon!
Shall I meet her now then, if you\'ve dashed off?! lol.
I loves \'em and leaves \'em - well, I leaves KP anyway. lol.
May 5th, 2022 06:03
Dun a Runna
dusk arising said:
Bullet? Maybe because you had six in the clip and one in the chamber.
Half an hour can see much crammed in. Life changing things happen in seconds. Discarding the replaceable is often done on the trot.
Opportunity taken is like the sweephand of life, catch it or... gone.
May 5th, 2022 03:53
dusk arising said:
Bullet? Maybe because you had six in the clip and one in the chamber.
Half an hour can see much crammed in. Life changing things happen in seconds. Discarding the replaceable is often done on the trot.
Opportunity taken is like the sweephand of life, catch it or... gone.
May 5th, 2022 03:53
Dun a Runna
Fay Slimm. said:
Guess this is why - runnin\' and not carin\' where or whom he hit for that half hour he deserved the label Bullet. - -- a swift getaway makes that a wery norty boy methinks.......... x
May 5th, 2022 03:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Guess this is why - runnin\' and not carin\' where or whom he hit for that half hour he deserved the label Bullet. - -- a swift getaway makes that a wery norty boy methinks.......... x
May 5th, 2022 03:47
No Looking Back Again
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Neville, we are back to \'If only.....\' once more.
Andy
May 5th, 2022 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Neville, we are back to \'If only.....\' once more.
Andy
May 5th, 2022 00:34
No Looking Back Again
Rozina said:
Memories good or bad
Memories happy or sad
When they hit you........
Beautiful lines.
May 4th, 2022 17:40
Rozina said:
Memories good or bad
Memories happy or sad
When they hit you........
Beautiful lines.
May 4th, 2022 17:40
No Looking Back Again
SureshG said:
Dean Martin,s song -
Take one fresh and tender kiss
Add one stolen night of bliss
One girl, one boy
Some grief, some joy
Memories are made of this
best describes my feeling about your post today.
May 4th, 2022 12:46
SureshG said:
Dean Martin,s song -
Take one fresh and tender kiss
Add one stolen night of bliss
One girl, one boy
Some grief, some joy
Memories are made of this
best describes my feeling about your post today.
May 4th, 2022 12:46
No Looking Back Again
SureshG said:
Dean Martin,s song -
Take one fresh and tender kiss
Add one stolen night of bliss
One girl, one boy
Some grief, some joy
Memories are made of this
best describes my feeling about your post today.
May 4th, 2022 12:46
SureshG said:
Dean Martin,s song -
Take one fresh and tender kiss
Add one stolen night of bliss
One girl, one boy
Some grief, some joy
Memories are made of this
best describes my feeling about your post today.
May 4th, 2022 12:46
No Looking Back Again
Christina8 said:
Love this write! It is really mindful, staying in the present while looking in the past. Sounds like you had wonderful moments...wonderful write dear nev.....C
May 4th, 2022 08:47
Christina8 said:
Love this write! It is really mindful, staying in the present while looking in the past. Sounds like you had wonderful moments...wonderful write dear nev.....C
May 4th, 2022 08:47
No Looking Back Again
Distant View said:
\"Don\'t look back!\" they tell us, yet we always do! How can we not? Bitter-sweet memories still have their pull on our hearts and minds! A poignant poem, with universal appeal, I believe, Neville! Beautifully expressed!
May 4th, 2022 07:12
Distant View said:
\"Don\'t look back!\" they tell us, yet we always do! How can we not? Bitter-sweet memories still have their pull on our hearts and minds! A poignant poem, with universal appeal, I believe, Neville! Beautifully expressed!
May 4th, 2022 07:12
No Looking Back Again
Nicholas Browning said:
It\'s almost like a sinful succulence, isn\'t it? Memory. For its sake men die every day. It\'s cruel, so very sweet, sour, and always ready to grab you by the neck. I wonder which one this is for the Author. A splendid read, Sir Neville. Thank you for the kick in the head. (A jumpstart really)
May 4th, 2022 04:38
Nicholas Browning said:
It\'s almost like a sinful succulence, isn\'t it? Memory. For its sake men die every day. It\'s cruel, so very sweet, sour, and always ready to grab you by the neck. I wonder which one this is for the Author. A splendid read, Sir Neville. Thank you for the kick in the head. (A jumpstart really)
May 4th, 2022 04:38
No Looking Back Again
Fay Slimm. said:
The pathos of losing what way back was hoped for of \"old here and theres\" comes over so touchingkly in these lines of memory dear friend.
A read to remember so tucked into my favourites...........x
May 4th, 2022 04:34
Fay Slimm. said:
The pathos of losing what way back was hoped for of \"old here and theres\" comes over so touchingkly in these lines of memory dear friend.
A read to remember so tucked into my favourites...........x
May 4th, 2022 04:34
No Looking Back Again
Caring dove said:
Good writing Neville ))
I especially like these lines
‘far away
eyes of hers, like flashing
blue lights’
mysteriously lingering
like some
tasteful, eternal eclipse ..
May 4th, 2022 04:01
Caring dove said:
Good writing Neville ))
I especially like these lines
‘far away
eyes of hers, like flashing
blue lights’
mysteriously lingering
like some
tasteful, eternal eclipse ..
May 4th, 2022 04:01
Fish Supper
SureshG said:
Teach a man to fish and he’ll have FISH SUPPER. No better title, but even more so, no better poem to hook one’s worm on.
May 3rd, 2022 07:38
SureshG said:
Teach a man to fish and he’ll have FISH SUPPER. No better title, but even more so, no better poem to hook one’s worm on.
May 3rd, 2022 07:38
Fish Supper
Goldfinch60 said:
There is nothing quite like the taste of freshly caught fish. I used to go fishing and one day a friend and I went out in his boat and we were four miles out to sea from Folkstone and we caught thirteen cod that day, our street had a magnificent meal that evening.
Andy
May 3rd, 2022 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
There is nothing quite like the taste of freshly caught fish. I used to go fishing and one day a friend and I went out in his boat and we were four miles out to sea from Folkstone and we caught thirteen cod that day, our street had a magnificent meal that evening.
Andy
May 3rd, 2022 01:02
Fish Supper
Rozina said:
Such an enjoyable tale Neville. I also love fish and chips, thank you!
May 2nd, 2022 19:16
Rozina said:
Such an enjoyable tale Neville. I also love fish and chips, thank you!
May 2nd, 2022 19:16
Fish Supper
MendedFences27 said:
Now that you taught me how, I think I\'ll go fishing. This poem was as colorful and descriptive as any I\'ve read recently. I swear I felt the sea breeze and smelt the salt air. The tale itself drove me to the final line, in which I found another suggestion for a title, \"Hunger No More.\" Loved this one. - Phil A.
May 2nd, 2022 14:36
MendedFences27 said:
Now that you taught me how, I think I\'ll go fishing. This poem was as colorful and descriptive as any I\'ve read recently. I swear I felt the sea breeze and smelt the salt air. The tale itself drove me to the final line, in which I found another suggestion for a title, \"Hunger No More.\" Loved this one. - Phil A.
May 2nd, 2022 14:36
Fish Supper
Rocky Lagou said:
This is great! That transition from \"no responsibility,\" to learning how to deal with the world. Amazing. I\'d say I like \"Teach A Man To Fish\" better because it encapsulates the overall message of the poem, but it\'s truly up to you. Great nonetheless!
May 2nd, 2022 09:28
Rocky Lagou said:
This is great! That transition from \"no responsibility,\" to learning how to deal with the world. Amazing. I\'d say I like \"Teach A Man To Fish\" better because it encapsulates the overall message of the poem, but it\'s truly up to you. Great nonetheless!
May 2nd, 2022 09:28
Fish Supper
Christina8 said:
Excellent! I myself fish a lot and my favorite is lake perch, not that ocean perch......I don\'t like fish made with a \"fishy\" flavor. people don\'t usually know what I mean when I say that......great write!!
May 2nd, 2022 08:16
Christina8 said:
Excellent! I myself fish a lot and my favorite is lake perch, not that ocean perch......I don\'t like fish made with a \"fishy\" flavor. people don\'t usually know what I mean when I say that......great write!!
May 2nd, 2022 08:16
Fish Supper
spilleronsheet said:
What a beautiful account
Never fished one, but I do like to eat some….
I guess I like the tittle as it is…it makes me hungry though
May 2nd, 2022 07:37
spilleronsheet said:
What a beautiful account
Never fished one, but I do like to eat some….
I guess I like the tittle as it is…it makes me hungry though
May 2nd, 2022 07:37
Fish Supper
L. B. Mek said:
\'Then fix a point lad, tween
horizon and tip
of the mast, of Yours Truly ..
And when
she returns, place your
hook-bait,
your trace and lead sinker
tightly, but ever so
lightly\'..
How about: \'Teaching\'s of a Fish Supper\'
my cherished Poet supreme!!!
lol
between dear fay\'s Whale portrayal
and your poetic Fishing escapades..
I think I\'m all maritime
in me thoughts for dinner
today
\'Fish n Chips\', it is then!
(thanks, that\'s one choice made for the day
just the other thousand to get through...
lol)
May 2nd, 2022 06:27
L. B. Mek said:
\'Then fix a point lad, tween
horizon and tip
of the mast, of Yours Truly ..
And when
she returns, place your
hook-bait,
your trace and lead sinker
tightly, but ever so
lightly\'..
How about: \'Teaching\'s of a Fish Supper\'
my cherished Poet supreme!!!
lol
between dear fay\'s Whale portrayal
and your poetic Fishing escapades..
I think I\'m all maritime
in me thoughts for dinner
today
\'Fish n Chips\', it is then!
(thanks, that\'s one choice made for the day
just the other thousand to get through...
lol)
May 2nd, 2022 06:27
Fish Supper
dusk arising said:
Though I be of Cornish line all this be foreign to me, but it do make a good tale sir, so it does.
May 2nd, 2022 05:11
dusk arising said:
Though I be of Cornish line all this be foreign to me, but it do make a good tale sir, so it does.
May 2nd, 2022 05:11
Fish Supper
Fay Slimm. said:
This little gem reminds me most of the times spent bass-fishing from coastal shores near here Nev. - I was the digger of lug. on many a fishing night. Thanks for a look back write of great times with this sigh of a read ...........x
May 2nd, 2022 04:41
Fay Slimm. said:
This little gem reminds me most of the times spent bass-fishing from coastal shores near here Nev. - I was the digger of lug. on many a fishing night. Thanks for a look back write of great times with this sigh of a read ...........x
May 2nd, 2022 04:41
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