Comments received on poems by Neville
Just Another Way Out
Neville said:
Absolutely & unquestionably true GF60 .......... and thanks for chirping in my friend ... Neville
November 17th, 2021 01:48
Neville said:
Absolutely & unquestionably true GF60 .......... and thanks for chirping in my friend ... Neville
November 17th, 2021 01:48
Just Another Way Out
Goldfinch60 said:
One never really knows the depths that lay in others minds Neville.
Andy
November 17th, 2021 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
One never really knows the depths that lay in others minds Neville.
Andy
November 17th, 2021 01:43
Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words and visualisations Neville.
Andy
November 17th, 2021 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words and visualisations Neville.
Andy
November 17th, 2021 01:28
Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars
MendedFences27 said:
Sorry, I can\'t tell who, what, or where \"she\" is, but that doesn\'t mean this isn\'t the most stimulating and enticing bit of poetry I have read in a while. Please don\'t explain your intent here for I wish to mull over this for a while and will save it for future exploration. A dazzling blend of perfectly selected wordings. Instantly entertaining and challenging to the reader. I\'ve read it several times and each time find something new to think about, Just great. - Phil A.
November 16th, 2021 20:08
MendedFences27 said:
Sorry, I can\'t tell who, what, or where \"she\" is, but that doesn\'t mean this isn\'t the most stimulating and enticing bit of poetry I have read in a while. Please don\'t explain your intent here for I wish to mull over this for a while and will save it for future exploration. A dazzling blend of perfectly selected wordings. Instantly entertaining and challenging to the reader. I\'ve read it several times and each time find something new to think about, Just great. - Phil A.
November 16th, 2021 20:08
Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars
orchidee said:
Ahh, a poem about a bird in a cage - the feathered variety of bird?! lol.
November 16th, 2021 11:32
orchidee said:
Ahh, a poem about a bird in a cage - the feathered variety of bird?! lol.
November 16th, 2021 11:32
Lawnsome
Fay Slimm. said:
I like faking the haiku too Nev. - never could scribble the real thing me - - -glad I caught this little example of approximate alternative and faiku for sharing it .........x
November 16th, 2021 10:51
Fay Slimm. said:
I like faking the haiku too Nev. - never could scribble the real thing me - - -glad I caught this little example of approximate alternative and faiku for sharing it .........x
November 16th, 2021 10:51
Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Poetry in motion. Absolutely beautiful and vividly descriptive! It\'s an attractive work of art sir.
November 16th, 2021 09:09
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Poetry in motion. Absolutely beautiful and vividly descriptive! It\'s an attractive work of art sir.
November 16th, 2021 09:09
Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars
L. B. Mek said:
when, we can admire
and respect, feat\'s of prowess
aside, beauty\'s - grace
and prioritise our appreciation of each: equally
we earn the right, to consider ourselves
Men
and not merely,
testosterone addled, boys...
(subtly, delivering
insightful commentary
on those
real life: \'Pandora box\' themes
few of us, have the temerity
to even consider, in private
let alone, verse
so relatable
and unashamedly, Public)
thanks for sharing, dear masterful Poet
November 16th, 2021 07:20
L. B. Mek said:
when, we can admire
and respect, feat\'s of prowess
aside, beauty\'s - grace
and prioritise our appreciation of each: equally
we earn the right, to consider ourselves
Men
and not merely,
testosterone addled, boys...
(subtly, delivering
insightful commentary
on those
real life: \'Pandora box\' themes
few of us, have the temerity
to even consider, in private
let alone, verse
so relatable
and unashamedly, Public)
thanks for sharing, dear masterful Poet
November 16th, 2021 07:20
Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars
dusk arising said:
Dress a lady in vertical bars to accentuate her curves. A real prowling cat.
November 16th, 2021 06:28
dusk arising said:
Dress a lady in vertical bars to accentuate her curves. A real prowling cat.
November 16th, 2021 06:28
Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars
Doggerel Dave said:
That tiger should be out in the forest, properly protected, not behind bars, Nev.
Beautifully paced work.
November 16th, 2021 06:26
Doggerel Dave said:
That tiger should be out in the forest, properly protected, not behind bars, Nev.
Beautifully paced work.
November 16th, 2021 06:26
Lawnsome
L. B. Mek said:
we need to find a way to heal your feud with that plague of a \'haiku\'
(why, bless you) lol
November 16th, 2021 05:59
L. B. Mek said:
we need to find a way to heal your feud with that plague of a \'haiku\'
(why, bless you) lol
November 16th, 2021 05:59
Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars
Fay Slimm. said:
Nothing like a mystery to set pulses alive - not clearly defined is even better -- - Fank yu dear Sir - loving this take on the voyeur.......x
November 16th, 2021 05:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Nothing like a mystery to set pulses alive - not clearly defined is even better -- - Fank yu dear Sir - loving this take on the voyeur.......x
November 16th, 2021 05:58
Pray Keep the Mask On
L. B. Mek said:
(another great,
thought provoking shorty, dear Poet
couldn\'t resist trying to scribble a little reply,
thank you for inspiring me)
\'adulthood\'s, deep-end
YOLO
diving experiences, where
our masking, goggles
and accompanying
\'self-contained underwater breathing apparatus\'
SCUBA gear, insure
our true selves, is kept
back on reality\'s, boat;
as we swim the wonder\'s
of our inquisitive depths
all we need, is to be
on the same page
when it comes to consent
and mutual respect
all the rest,
is fun and games
gift-wrapped in that mystique
escapism, in a face mask...\'
November 16th, 2021 05:57
L. B. Mek said:
(another great,
thought provoking shorty, dear Poet
couldn\'t resist trying to scribble a little reply,
thank you for inspiring me)
\'adulthood\'s, deep-end
YOLO
diving experiences, where
our masking, goggles
and accompanying
\'self-contained underwater breathing apparatus\'
SCUBA gear, insure
our true selves, is kept
back on reality\'s, boat;
as we swim the wonder\'s
of our inquisitive depths
all we need, is to be
on the same page
when it comes to consent
and mutual respect
all the rest,
is fun and games
gift-wrapped in that mystique
escapism, in a face mask...\'
November 16th, 2021 05:57
Lawnsome
Goldfinch60 said:
That reminds me - I still need to cut the lawn. LOL
Andy
November 16th, 2021 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
That reminds me - I still need to cut the lawn. LOL
Andy
November 16th, 2021 01:44
No Such Thing as Empty Space
myself and me said:
I won\'t forgive myself if I missed this one.
November 15th, 2021 21:35
myself and me said:
I won\'t forgive myself if I missed this one.
November 15th, 2021 21:35
Lawnsome
myself and me said:
Is this a new invention? I thought so.
\"Pray\" seems a high frequency word recently.
November 15th, 2021 20:09
myself and me said:
Is this a new invention? I thought so.
\"Pray\" seems a high frequency word recently.
November 15th, 2021 20:09
Lawnsome
Doggerel Dave said:
Your\'e aggravating my dyslexia, Nev - dodgy haikus fook it up completely.
Great environmental message there though.
Kudos to dusk\'s little effort - that one is going on the back of the next bog door I can find. Kudos also to you for the inspiration...
November 15th, 2021 18:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Your\'e aggravating my dyslexia, Nev - dodgy haikus fook it up completely.
Great environmental message there though.
Kudos to dusk\'s little effort - that one is going on the back of the next bog door I can find. Kudos also to you for the inspiration...
November 15th, 2021 18:17
Lawnsome
dusk arising said:
What the Faik is a faikhu?
Though much more a snatch than a patch
Pray leave the pubes alone she cried
Tis where my friend\'s (note the apostrope) wee crabbies hide.
I need to go for a long walk I think. This lockdown shielding has been going on too long for me and it\'s starting to.......
November 15th, 2021 14:31
dusk arising said:
What the Faik is a faikhu?
Though much more a snatch than a patch
Pray leave the pubes alone she cried
Tis where my friend\'s (note the apostrope) wee crabbies hide.
I need to go for a long walk I think. This lockdown shielding has been going on too long for me and it\'s starting to.......
November 15th, 2021 14:31
Pray Keep the Mask On
SureshG said:
While she’s willing to be intimate
She still needs to protect her privates
Satirical, absolutely
Thanks matey!!!
November 14th, 2021 20:02
SureshG said:
While she’s willing to be intimate
She still needs to protect her privates
Satirical, absolutely
Thanks matey!!!
November 14th, 2021 20:02
Pray Keep the Mask On
Goldfinch60 said:
We all wear masks in differing situations Neville, does anybody see us without a mask on?
Andy
November 14th, 2021 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
We all wear masks in differing situations Neville, does anybody see us without a mask on?
Andy
November 14th, 2021 01:38
Pray Keep the Mask On
myself and me said:
Without the mask, it would be so awkward, wouldn\'t it? A clever piece to enjoy on weekend.
November 13th, 2021 12:40
myself and me said:
Without the mask, it would be so awkward, wouldn\'t it? A clever piece to enjoy on weekend.
November 13th, 2021 12:40
Pray Keep the Mask On
orchidee said:
Should I meet her?! Should I risk it? I might swoon. lol.
November 13th, 2021 11:25
orchidee said:
Should I meet her?! Should I risk it? I might swoon. lol.
November 13th, 2021 11:25
Pray Keep the Mask On
Doggerel Dave said:
.....and we might just still make the 1.5 metre rule if you were to lean back far enough...... he said.....
November 13th, 2021 06:47
Doggerel Dave said:
.....and we might just still make the 1.5 metre rule if you were to lean back far enough...... he said.....
November 13th, 2021 06:47
Pray Keep the Mask On
dusk arising said:
There\'s an old phrase about looking at the mantlepiece which came to mind.
November 13th, 2021 06:02
dusk arising said:
There\'s an old phrase about looking at the mantlepiece which came to mind.
November 13th, 2021 06:02
Pray Keep the Mask On
spilleronsheet said:
A mask on
Nice one
The new norm
Mask on and smile
Mask on and frown
Who knows what the mask hides
November 13th, 2021 05:51
spilleronsheet said:
A mask on
Nice one
The new norm
Mask on and smile
Mask on and frown
Who knows what the mask hides
November 13th, 2021 05:51
Pray Keep the Mask On
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes amigo behind a mask anything goes - - or so they say - -- winks galore and thanks for the first smile of my day...............x
November 13th, 2021 04:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes amigo behind a mask anything goes - - or so they say - -- winks galore and thanks for the first smile of my day...............x
November 13th, 2021 04:52
No Such Thing as Empty Space
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Miles Davis once said even the silence between the notes is musical. I can definitely identify sir.
November 12th, 2021 14:35
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Miles Davis once said even the silence between the notes is musical. I can definitely identify sir.
November 12th, 2021 14:35
No Such Thing as Empty Space
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Neville, as I come towards my book of life there is no such thing as any empty spaces.
Andy
November 12th, 2021 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Neville, as I come towards my book of life there is no such thing as any empty spaces.
Andy
November 12th, 2021 01:23
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