Comments received on poems by Neville
Something in the Air Maybe
Draven said:
This is beautiful. My heart goes out to you.
December 5th, 2021 06:45
Draven said:
This is beautiful. My heart goes out to you.
December 5th, 2021 06:45
Something in the Air Maybe
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Ohh, I can\'t eat those figs though. They.......... you know! Hint: baked beans, but I\'m Ok with them.
December 5th, 2021 05:29
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Ohh, I can\'t eat those figs though. They.......... you know! Hint: baked beans, but I\'m Ok with them.
December 5th, 2021 05:29
Something in the Air Maybe
Paul Bell said:
Always find it doesn\'t matter how people come back to you, it\'s just nice they pop back to say hello.
December 5th, 2021 05:16
Paul Bell said:
Always find it doesn\'t matter how people come back to you, it\'s just nice they pop back to say hello.
December 5th, 2021 05:16
Something in the Air Maybe
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful poem , tho very sad . Nice choice of words , and nice flow )
December 5th, 2021 05:12
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful poem , tho very sad . Nice choice of words , and nice flow )
December 5th, 2021 05:12
My Lady is More Than a Poem
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem about your lady, I feel the same about mine even now.
Andy
December 4th, 2021 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem about your lady, I feel the same about mine even now.
Andy
December 4th, 2021 02:22
My Lady is More Than a Poem
Doggerel Dave said:
So be it sweetheart or vessel you have never the less described your own piece there, Nev - \'superbly crafted\'.
December 3rd, 2021 19:09
Doggerel Dave said:
So be it sweetheart or vessel you have never the less described your own piece there, Nev - \'superbly crafted\'.
December 3rd, 2021 19:09
My Lady is More Than a Poem
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Neville.
I write about my wife often.
December 3rd, 2021 16:45
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Neville.
I write about my wife often.
December 3rd, 2021 16:45
My Lady is More Than a Poem
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A ‘keeper’ indeed…………
‘to cherish, to respect and admire ..
Regardless, of distance or time ..’
as is your beautifully penned poem which I enjoyed reading this fine not.
Kudos 👏🏻👏🏻
Laura🌻
December 3rd, 2021 11:54
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A ‘keeper’ indeed…………
‘to cherish, to respect and admire ..
Regardless, of distance or time ..’
as is your beautifully penned poem which I enjoyed reading this fine not.
Kudos 👏🏻👏🏻
Laura🌻
December 3rd, 2021 11:54
My Lady is More Than a Poem
SureshG said:
Much, much more than a poem, an artist palette, that streamlined yacht or anything nature can draft, except your words
December 3rd, 2021 11:36
SureshG said:
Much, much more than a poem, an artist palette, that streamlined yacht or anything nature can draft, except your words
December 3rd, 2021 11:36
My Lady is More Than a Poem
Dove said:
Tis beautiful poetry! Cherish her curves, while working on her canvas, Remember to sprinkle the colors of love!
December 3rd, 2021 10:50
Dove said:
Tis beautiful poetry! Cherish her curves, while working on her canvas, Remember to sprinkle the colors of love!
December 3rd, 2021 10:50
My Lady is More Than a Poem
Fay Slimm. said:
No doubt this is a verse to treasure for your sleek ship-shape lady mon ami - - a keeper indeed for my faves. and superbly written.............x
December 3rd, 2021 07:29
Fay Slimm. said:
No doubt this is a verse to treasure for your sleek ship-shape lady mon ami - - a keeper indeed for my faves. and superbly written.............x
December 3rd, 2021 07:29
My Lady is More Than a Poem
dusk arising said:
Shallow bottomed and responds well to wind eh? Does she crest the waves of your storm in midnight\'s haste and becalmed seduce you with a glance?
There\'s a vacant local mooring ready for her sister within sight.
December 3rd, 2021 07:00
dusk arising said:
Shallow bottomed and responds well to wind eh? Does she crest the waves of your storm in midnight\'s haste and becalmed seduce you with a glance?
There\'s a vacant local mooring ready for her sister within sight.
December 3rd, 2021 07:00
My Lady is More Than a Poem
L. B. Mek said:
no such thing
as wasted time or feelings
in the face: of true love
just, rewards to call upon
at a distance
or from right, by our side...
(anther brilliant write, dear Poet
so relatable,
words to dive within
so we may immerse ourselves
in all the memories
they help deliver)
December 3rd, 2021 06:37
L. B. Mek said:
no such thing
as wasted time or feelings
in the face: of true love
just, rewards to call upon
at a distance
or from right, by our side...
(anther brilliant write, dear Poet
so relatable,
words to dive within
so we may immerse ourselves
in all the memories
they help deliver)
December 3rd, 2021 06:37
My Lady is More Than a Poem
orchidee said:
Ahh, so I can\'t meet her? You\'ll keep her all to yourself. :)
December 3rd, 2021 04:55
orchidee said:
Ahh, so I can\'t meet her? You\'ll keep her all to yourself. :)
December 3rd, 2021 04:55
My Lady is More Than a Poem
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words 🙂
December 3rd, 2021 04:43
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words 🙂
December 3rd, 2021 04:43
My Lady is More Than a Poem
Michael Edwards said:
You must have met my wife - I\'ve been blessed - and a good read to boot.
December 3rd, 2021 04:37
Michael Edwards said:
You must have met my wife - I\'ve been blessed - and a good read to boot.
December 3rd, 2021 04:37
Making Rainbows Blindly
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Sounds to me like the start of what is to be a happy ending, or a very sad one. There\'s no telling I guess. Very well executed Paul. Ta.
December 2nd, 2021 07:23
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Sounds to me like the start of what is to be a happy ending, or a very sad one. There\'s no telling I guess. Very well executed Paul. Ta.
December 2nd, 2021 07:23
Making Rainbows Blindly
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words once more Neville.
Andy
December 2nd, 2021 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words once more Neville.
Andy
December 2nd, 2021 01:56
Making Rainbows Blindly
SureshG said:
… obliviously she continued to scatter the orange peels, amethyst and pomegranate seeds…..
Loved the read
December 1st, 2021 12:04
SureshG said:
… obliviously she continued to scatter the orange peels, amethyst and pomegranate seeds…..
Loved the read
December 1st, 2021 12:04
Making Rainbows Blindly
orchidee said:
Hmm, it might have been me, meeting her. I can\'t recall it... lol.
December 1st, 2021 06:48
orchidee said:
Hmm, it might have been me, meeting her. I can\'t recall it... lol.
December 1st, 2021 06:48
Making Rainbows Blindly
Lorna said:
Wow - loved this one - all sorts of pictures rose up and I saw him running out the door to get to her rainbows.....
December 1st, 2021 06:32
Lorna said:
Wow - loved this one - all sorts of pictures rose up and I saw him running out the door to get to her rainbows.....
December 1st, 2021 06:32
Making Rainbows Blindly
Fay Slimm. said:
Folk do astonishing things when watched by a potential suicide case and it looks like he jumped to chase after that rainbow - a haunt of clever intrigue caught between lines here again Nev. - - brill. write my friend...............x
December 1st, 2021 04:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Folk do astonishing things when watched by a potential suicide case and it looks like he jumped to chase after that rainbow - a haunt of clever intrigue caught between lines here again Nev. - - brill. write my friend...............x
December 1st, 2021 04:45
Making Rainbows Blindly
dusk arising said:
The act of choosing hopefully meant he saw the options available to him. Where some see rainbows and fabled crock of gold others see talons and deep scars.
Another Nevillesque piece to put the mind into a state of quandary.
December 1st, 2021 04:04
dusk arising said:
The act of choosing hopefully meant he saw the options available to him. Where some see rainbows and fabled crock of gold others see talons and deep scars.
Another Nevillesque piece to put the mind into a state of quandary.
December 1st, 2021 04:04
Where are you Mary
Doggerel Dave said:
That was neat and easy to relate to, Nev.
My problem is I am talentless when it comes to condolences - words from me seem so inadequate.
November 30th, 2021 19:33
Doggerel Dave said:
That was neat and easy to relate to, Nev.
My problem is I am talentless when it comes to condolences - words from me seem so inadequate.
November 30th, 2021 19:33
Where are you Mary
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Today is one of those days for ‘us’ to weep, to grieve, to hurt, to commiserate, to cope with our loss, to focus on the happy moments we shared, tell her how much she’s loved, and that one day we will be together again. Your beautifully penned poem is very relatable. May they both Rest In Peace.♥️♥️
Laura🌻
November 30th, 2021 15:47
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Today is one of those days for ‘us’ to weep, to grieve, to hurt, to commiserate, to cope with our loss, to focus on the happy moments we shared, tell her how much she’s loved, and that one day we will be together again. Your beautifully penned poem is very relatable. May they both Rest In Peace.♥️♥️
Laura🌻
November 30th, 2021 15:47
Where are you Mary
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sorry for your loss . A sad but nicely expressed writing ..
November 30th, 2021 11:06
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sorry for your loss . A sad but nicely expressed writing ..
November 30th, 2021 11:06
Where are you Mary
orchidee said:
A sensitive write N.
Yes, December will be disastrous. It\'s one of the times I sing even more! heehee. Who is Carol? What is her surname? Put that gin away Orchi! lol.
November 30th, 2021 09:27
orchidee said:
A sensitive write N.
Yes, December will be disastrous. It\'s one of the times I sing even more! heehee. Who is Carol? What is her surname? Put that gin away Orchi! lol.
November 30th, 2021 09:27
Where are you Mary
L. B. Mek said:
somehow,
a gust of mourning\'s wind
that\'s not mine, to emote
or partake - in, invaded
and I had watery eyes, while reading
your lines
(I\'m sorry for your loss, my friend
may, she forever: rest in peace)
November 30th, 2021 07:11
L. B. Mek said:
somehow,
a gust of mourning\'s wind
that\'s not mine, to emote
or partake - in, invaded
and I had watery eyes, while reading
your lines
(I\'m sorry for your loss, my friend
may, she forever: rest in peace)
November 30th, 2021 07:11
Where are you Mary
Fay Slimm. said:
The missing is permanent when love has to leave us - the searing hurt of losing your mother weeps through every word here ........x
November 30th, 2021 05:17
Fay Slimm. said:
The missing is permanent when love has to leave us - the searing hurt of losing your mother weeps through every word here ........x
November 30th, 2021 05:17
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