Comments received on poems by Neville
Just Asking on Behalf of a Friend
Paul Bell said:
A friend in need, is usually a friend who indeed is fucking someone else, but who might phone you for a loan just to really piss you off.
July 18th, 2022 05:31
Paul Bell said:
A friend in need, is usually a friend who indeed is fucking someone else, but who might phone you for a loan just to really piss you off.
July 18th, 2022 05:31
Just Asking on Behalf of a Friend
Fay Slimm. said:
A raw read today Nev. The \"petite mort\" is still called making love in this quarter - - wow - it takes a true friend to ask such orgasmic questions and must say methinks a female never would need all and sundry revealed..................... x
July 18th, 2022 05:16
Fay Slimm. said:
A raw read today Nev. The \"petite mort\" is still called making love in this quarter - - wow - it takes a true friend to ask such orgasmic questions and must say methinks a female never would need all and sundry revealed..................... x
July 18th, 2022 05:16
Just Asking on Behalf of a Friend
L. B. Mek said:
that cherished rarity
of true friendship
is wasted, while consumed
in that fog of youthful lust;
some, choices
we can live with, but some
instinctive
surrenders, to intoxicating chemistry
thieve us
of a kin, that would have shared
everything with us, but for parents
if only
we had the strength, to fight off
alcoholic lust\'s, venomous whispers
and we kept our lines, uncrossed..
I have a few
connections, lost
to nights of passion
although
I must admit, I regret nothing
just that:
\'I wonder if you ever think of me,
fucking you,
or you, fucking me, these days ..
After all,
that my friend, is precisely\'
\'the closest thing to heaven I have
ever been or
known to date ..\'
Brilliant!
(so unapologetically raw
and thus, reads
that much more sincere
for beings so)
while I rave, over your poetry\'s subtlety
this too, is a trait
of your poetic genius, I revel in
that ability
to say it like it is
unashamed but humbled
simultaneously..
(I read and learn
Hyung!)
July 18th, 2022 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
that cherished rarity
of true friendship
is wasted, while consumed
in that fog of youthful lust;
some, choices
we can live with, but some
instinctive
surrenders, to intoxicating chemistry
thieve us
of a kin, that would have shared
everything with us, but for parents
if only
we had the strength, to fight off
alcoholic lust\'s, venomous whispers
and we kept our lines, uncrossed..
I have a few
connections, lost
to nights of passion
although
I must admit, I regret nothing
just that:
\'I wonder if you ever think of me,
fucking you,
or you, fucking me, these days ..
After all,
that my friend, is precisely\'
\'the closest thing to heaven I have
ever been or
known to date ..\'
Brilliant!
(so unapologetically raw
and thus, reads
that much more sincere
for beings so)
while I rave, over your poetry\'s subtlety
this too, is a trait
of your poetic genius, I revel in
that ability
to say it like it is
unashamed but humbled
simultaneously..
(I read and learn
Hyung!)
July 18th, 2022 04:44
Just Asking on Behalf of a Friend
Doggerel Dave said:
Unlikely - I believe in confidentiality in such situations, Neville.
I do wonder, however occasionally but rarely if I exist in the memories of anyone at all...
July 18th, 2022 04:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Unlikely - I believe in confidentiality in such situations, Neville.
I do wonder, however occasionally but rarely if I exist in the memories of anyone at all...
July 18th, 2022 04:28
Etna
arqios said:
She was a prime example of the Socratic tenet: \"Know thyself!\" That provided her with promising pragmatism.
July 17th, 2022 23:01
arqios said:
She was a prime example of the Socratic tenet: \"Know thyself!\" That provided her with promising pragmatism.
July 17th, 2022 23:01
Once Upon a Downing Street
Dove said:
I wish the best for the Country.. All over the World there is such things .. You penned it so well.
Out I say…
July 17th, 2022 15:07
Dove said:
I wish the best for the Country.. All over the World there is such things .. You penned it so well.
Out I say…
July 17th, 2022 15:07
When the Shit First Hit the Fan
Bella Shepard said:
What was, was. What is, is. What will be, will be our responsibility. Choice and responsibility should go hand in hand, can we get it back? A very truthful and insightful write my friend.
July 17th, 2022 11:48
Bella Shepard said:
What was, was. What is, is. What will be, will be our responsibility. Choice and responsibility should go hand in hand, can we get it back? A very truthful and insightful write my friend.
July 17th, 2022 11:48
Once Upon a Downing Street
Bella Shepard said:
Do you think we can find a spot in that filthy gutter for an ex-president that I know? He and Boris seem to get along well, but then they\'re cut from the same cloth. Come to think of it, a vast number of them seem to appeal to the same tailor. Maybe this guy should start investigating who is clientele is. Great write my friend!
July 17th, 2022 11:21
Bella Shepard said:
Do you think we can find a spot in that filthy gutter for an ex-president that I know? He and Boris seem to get along well, but then they\'re cut from the same cloth. Come to think of it, a vast number of them seem to appeal to the same tailor. Maybe this guy should start investigating who is clientele is. Great write my friend!
July 17th, 2022 11:21
Once Upon a Downing Street
Paul Bell said:
Boris will be partying to those words. Actually, Boris could start a war in his last weeks and days in office. In saying that, the replacements don\'t inspire much either.
July 17th, 2022 07:44
Paul Bell said:
Boris will be partying to those words. Actually, Boris could start a war in his last weeks and days in office. In saying that, the replacements don\'t inspire much either.
July 17th, 2022 07:44
Once Upon a Downing Street
Fay Slimm. said:
YES WHOLLY AGREED -- - seemingly everywhere governmental care is non-existent and deserves no better -than being revealed and brought to public shame.............x
July 17th, 2022 07:42
Fay Slimm. said:
YES WHOLLY AGREED -- - seemingly everywhere governmental care is non-existent and deserves no better -than being revealed and brought to public shame.............x
July 17th, 2022 07:42
Once Upon a Downing Street
orchidee said:
Bozo, Coco, Thicko, etc, as some papers say?! Are we f****.? Fido won\'t let me say it, of course.
Teddy and I are starting The Cabbage Party. Cabbages rule OK! You joining us?! lol.
Not related to those poor people who live a vegetable-life existence.
July 17th, 2022 07:22
orchidee said:
Bozo, Coco, Thicko, etc, as some papers say?! Are we f****.? Fido won\'t let me say it, of course.
Teddy and I are starting The Cabbage Party. Cabbages rule OK! You joining us?! lol.
Not related to those poor people who live a vegetable-life existence.
July 17th, 2022 07:22
Once Upon a Downing Street
Doggerel Dave said:
I hope you don\'t think (I\'m sure you don\'t) politicians are better elsewhere, Neville. I can assure you... and furthermore, he may rightfully reside in that gutter, but will he? The likes of them have plenty of property and dosh hidden away somewhere.....
Your write, however feels right, and I\'m pretty sure you will get much empathy and support.
July 17th, 2022 06:41
Doggerel Dave said:
I hope you don\'t think (I\'m sure you don\'t) politicians are better elsewhere, Neville. I can assure you... and furthermore, he may rightfully reside in that gutter, but will he? The likes of them have plenty of property and dosh hidden away somewhere.....
Your write, however feels right, and I\'m pretty sure you will get much empathy and support.
July 17th, 2022 06:41
Just a Few Significant Ponderings
Dove said:
OMG , that made me laugh.. if such creatures exist, which I sure there may be a few.. the name sure fits…
July 16th, 2022 16:48
Dove said:
OMG , that made me laugh.. if such creatures exist, which I sure there may be a few.. the name sure fits…
July 16th, 2022 16:48
No Mercy on Mean Street
Dove said:
Oh dearest Mean Street, exist in modern society! So many crazies in life, the human mind Is fragile and so is life. You pen an example so well.
July 16th, 2022 16:46
Dove said:
Oh dearest Mean Street, exist in modern society! So many crazies in life, the human mind Is fragile and so is life. You pen an example so well.
July 16th, 2022 16:46
Etna
Fay Slimm. said:
She knew her potential did your gal Etna - explosively eruptive this read but oh what a way to let off steam eh mon ami ?. ....................x
July 16th, 2022 14:08
Fay Slimm. said:
She knew her potential did your gal Etna - explosively eruptive this read but oh what a way to let off steam eh mon ami ?. ....................x
July 16th, 2022 14:08
Etna
Bella Shepard said:
Alluring, steamy, seductive, powerful, she is the quintessential female, and still has \"it\" at her age. Such a fun write my friend!
July 16th, 2022 13:04
Bella Shepard said:
Alluring, steamy, seductive, powerful, she is the quintessential female, and still has \"it\" at her age. Such a fun write my friend!
July 16th, 2022 13:04
No Mercy on Mean Street
Doggerel Dave said:
Served up raw with no trimmings, Nev.
July 16th, 2022 01:08
Doggerel Dave said:
Served up raw with no trimmings, Nev.
July 16th, 2022 01:08
No Mercy on Mean Street
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words about an horrendous situation Neville.
Andy
July 16th, 2022 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words about an horrendous situation Neville.
Andy
July 16th, 2022 00:58
No Mercy on Mean Street
Bella Shepard said:
The impact of addressing this subject of horror in poetic form is truly masterful. It\'s not just a story on the evening news, but an expose of the darkest side of human nature told with feeling. Well done dear poet!
July 15th, 2022 08:01
Bella Shepard said:
The impact of addressing this subject of horror in poetic form is truly masterful. It\'s not just a story on the evening news, but an expose of the darkest side of human nature told with feeling. Well done dear poet!
July 15th, 2022 08:01
No Mercy on Mean Street
spilleronsheet said:
A pitiful state
Merciless goons
Leave the duo in hapless state
A road to travel became the last journey or so
This recount gave me shrills but it is true tale of the society that lives
That horrendous part of humane which lost its humanity
So well deceived dear Neville…
July 15th, 2022 04:35
spilleronsheet said:
A pitiful state
Merciless goons
Leave the duo in hapless state
A road to travel became the last journey or so
This recount gave me shrills but it is true tale of the society that lives
That horrendous part of humane which lost its humanity
So well deceived dear Neville…
July 15th, 2022 04:35
No Mercy on Mean Street
Fay Slimm. said:
Heart-felt horror to read of such happenings and what a title to draw readers a picture of Mean Street and what happens when mercy no longer exists. You expose it will skill and with expert delivery in these unforgettable lines my caring friend.....x
July 15th, 2022 03:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Heart-felt horror to read of such happenings and what a title to draw readers a picture of Mean Street and what happens when mercy no longer exists. You expose it will skill and with expert delivery in these unforgettable lines my caring friend.....x
July 15th, 2022 03:55
No Mercy on Mean Street
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
dear Poet supreme
what empathy, you posses!
(every time, I read of such horrendous travesties
I can\'t help remember, how close Anne Frank
and her family
were, to surviving
and then
one vial human\'s betrayal, later
a father stands
a sole survivor, in that same
hideaway
and I imagine, he\'s thinking
\'why me\'
\'why do i get to survive\'
\'what justice is there, in that\'
...
sometimes, i can\'t help but fear
the cruelty, we fallible humans
posses
far, outweighs
our potential for goodness
or even, decency..
but
I can only hope, i\'m wrong
a featherweight, hope
but still, enough of its ambers
glistening
at that dawning of a new day\'s
promise
gifting me, a path in life
to consume
such devastatingly, heart-breaking
stories
and still, choose
to believe, and hope
somehow)
July 15th, 2022 03:50
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
dear Poet supreme
what empathy, you posses!
(every time, I read of such horrendous travesties
I can\'t help remember, how close Anne Frank
and her family
were, to surviving
and then
one vial human\'s betrayal, later
a father stands
a sole survivor, in that same
hideaway
and I imagine, he\'s thinking
\'why me\'
\'why do i get to survive\'
\'what justice is there, in that\'
...
sometimes, i can\'t help but fear
the cruelty, we fallible humans
posses
far, outweighs
our potential for goodness
or even, decency..
but
I can only hope, i\'m wrong
a featherweight, hope
but still, enough of its ambers
glistening
at that dawning of a new day\'s
promise
gifting me, a path in life
to consume
such devastatingly, heart-breaking
stories
and still, choose
to believe, and hope
somehow)
July 15th, 2022 03:50
Just a Few Significant Ponderings
spilleronsheet said:
Self pondering left me into grave…who am I, is it too late to regret…nice one dear Neville….
July 15th, 2022 01:12
spilleronsheet said:
Self pondering left me into grave…who am I, is it too late to regret…nice one dear Neville….
July 15th, 2022 01:12
Somewhere on a Family Tree
Goldfinch60 said:
So true for all of us - maybe.
Andy
July 15th, 2022 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
So true for all of us - maybe.
Andy
July 15th, 2022 00:46
Just a Few Significant Ponderings
Goldfinch60 said:
There are so many around now that just do not seem to care and have no respect in their lives.
Respect and morality seem to have disappeared - why!
Andy
July 15th, 2022 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
There are so many around now that just do not seem to care and have no respect in their lives.
Respect and morality seem to have disappeared - why!
Andy
July 15th, 2022 00:35
Just a Few Significant Ponderings
MendedFences27 said:
Well, if one thinks they are never wrong, and also fails to enjoy life, they just need to be left to their own misery.
This view of one personality raises many questions: How did they get this way? Why do they not savor any part of life? Do they know what they are missing? etc.
This was a great look at a very dark personality. - Phil A.
July 14th, 2022 22:05
MendedFences27 said:
Well, if one thinks they are never wrong, and also fails to enjoy life, they just need to be left to their own misery.
This view of one personality raises many questions: How did they get this way? Why do they not savor any part of life? Do they know what they are missing? etc.
This was a great look at a very dark personality. - Phil A.
July 14th, 2022 22:05
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