Comments received on poems by Neville
Signing Out
Fay Slimm. said:
How could a muse forsake thee who weaves words so endearingly wrapped for the pleasure of readers - - be not broken by dottings and crossing of T\'s dearling friend for she who fell madly in love with your kind of wordlings will badly miss inspiring romantic lines of intrigue that only you write - - after a wee while of rest methinks her allure will infuse your scribing again for believe me she will allow no signing out permanently for a poet with such rich artistic talent...............x
December 20th, 2021 15:54
Fay Slimm. said:
How could a muse forsake thee who weaves words so endearingly wrapped for the pleasure of readers - - be not broken by dottings and crossing of T\'s dearling friend for she who fell madly in love with your kind of wordlings will badly miss inspiring romantic lines of intrigue that only you write - - after a wee while of rest methinks her allure will infuse your scribing again for believe me she will allow no signing out permanently for a poet with such rich artistic talent...............x
December 20th, 2021 15:54
Signing Out
dusk arising said:
I had a visit from my muse last evening which was so refreshing. She\'s been away for far too long. Will she stay? I know not.
Your\'s on the other hand is playing games with us. Clearly from your excellent post today she is present and correct..... with her usual tease.
December 20th, 2021 15:16
dusk arising said:
I had a visit from my muse last evening which was so refreshing. She\'s been away for far too long. Will she stay? I know not.
Your\'s on the other hand is playing games with us. Clearly from your excellent post today she is present and correct..... with her usual tease.
December 20th, 2021 15:16
Signing Out
orchidee said:
It\'s my fault! I was singing on this site. It killed off the muse. How can anyone be inspired if I\'m singing?! lol.
We recognise ya. More poems soon, plz. :)
December 20th, 2021 14:49
orchidee said:
It\'s my fault! I was singing on this site. It killed off the muse. How can anyone be inspired if I\'m singing?! lol.
We recognise ya. More poems soon, plz. :)
December 20th, 2021 14:49
Signing Out
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A good writing , Neville .. I like how you have expressed yourself .
sometimes we feel like we have lost a talent or come to the end of something … but maybe we just lose the inspiration to write . It may still be there within us , we just have to somehow find it again . Sadness happens and we feel like something changes in us
Thanks for your kind words in your comments
And happy Christmas to you too ))
December 20th, 2021 14:30
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A good writing , Neville .. I like how you have expressed yourself .
sometimes we feel like we have lost a talent or come to the end of something … but maybe we just lose the inspiration to write . It may still be there within us , we just have to somehow find it again . Sadness happens and we feel like something changes in us
Thanks for your kind words in your comments
And happy Christmas to you too ))
December 20th, 2021 14:30
The Realisation of Probability
SureshG said:
What were the probabilities that we’d still be here, through the Cold War, the Hippie Generation, the Digital Apocalypse, the multitude of Financial calamities, the scare of many a Pandemic, and yet we are, but when will the realization hit us.
Thanks for your astute warning
December 17th, 2021 19:12
SureshG said:
What were the probabilities that we’d still be here, through the Cold War, the Hippie Generation, the Digital Apocalypse, the multitude of Financial calamities, the scare of many a Pandemic, and yet we are, but when will the realization hit us.
Thanks for your astute warning
December 17th, 2021 19:12
The Realisation of Probability
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Neville - who ever would have imagined.
Andy
December 17th, 2021 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Neville - who ever would have imagined.
Andy
December 17th, 2021 01:52
The Realisation of Probability
Rozina said:
The mind boggles at what\'s next around the corner. We\'ll persevere and we\'ll get through. Take care and stay safe. Thank you for sharing.
December 16th, 2021 20:39
Rozina said:
The mind boggles at what\'s next around the corner. We\'ll persevere and we\'ll get through. Take care and stay safe. Thank you for sharing.
December 16th, 2021 20:39
The Realisation of Probability
spilleronsheet said:
The poetry laces with reality
Can’t deny what it speaks
The harsh reality
Humanity’s facing
Got the vaccine, got the mask
But who knows when the lingering virus shall attack?
Spoken the truth with a poetry
The words speak the iron truth dear Neville
December 16th, 2021 13:03
spilleronsheet said:
The poetry laces with reality
Can’t deny what it speaks
The harsh reality
Humanity’s facing
Got the vaccine, got the mask
But who knows when the lingering virus shall attack?
Spoken the truth with a poetry
The words speak the iron truth dear Neville
December 16th, 2021 13:03
The Realisation of Probability
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - Who says we\'re all out of they pheromones mon ami ? - - - - well despite Covid I beg to differ \'cos there\'s plenty in me................x
December 16th, 2021 11:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - Who says we\'re all out of they pheromones mon ami ? - - - - well despite Covid I beg to differ \'cos there\'s plenty in me................x
December 16th, 2021 11:46
The Realisation of Probability
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Hope it\'s not as my singing: \'Prognosis bad; no chance of improvement whatsoever.\'
Me singing tutor says \'tee hee\' and laughs up his sleeve, telling me I\'m getting better and will only need another 9,485 lessons!
December 16th, 2021 07:18
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Hope it\'s not as my singing: \'Prognosis bad; no chance of improvement whatsoever.\'
Me singing tutor says \'tee hee\' and laughs up his sleeve, telling me I\'m getting better and will only need another 9,485 lessons!
December 16th, 2021 07:18
The Realisation of Probability
L. B. Mek said:
when opening the window
and washing your hands
is more of an antivirus
than any vaccine, and we still
can\'t prevent
people from thinking a little jab means, they can act
however irresponsibly they want...
I think the probability factor in your title, says it all dear Poet
Merry Christmas and a happy New year
to you and all your loved ones, my friend
stay safe
December 16th, 2021 06:47
L. B. Mek said:
when opening the window
and washing your hands
is more of an antivirus
than any vaccine, and we still
can\'t prevent
people from thinking a little jab means, they can act
however irresponsibly they want...
I think the probability factor in your title, says it all dear Poet
Merry Christmas and a happy New year
to you and all your loved ones, my friend
stay safe
December 16th, 2021 06:47
No Longer in The Making
L. B. Mek said:
lookup
\'Sovereign by Boadicea the Victorious\'
and realise
they got away, quite cheaply
some costs
hinder more than our reverie...
(a spear thrust, of poetry
sharp and right to the point
but with grace enough
to be delivered from a distance,
so we can curl away
from enduring too much
of the suffering, it brings back
so vividly aromatic..)
your poetry at its irresistibly
subtle best, my friend
December 16th, 2021 06:38
L. B. Mek said:
lookup
\'Sovereign by Boadicea the Victorious\'
and realise
they got away, quite cheaply
some costs
hinder more than our reverie...
(a spear thrust, of poetry
sharp and right to the point
but with grace enough
to be delivered from a distance,
so we can curl away
from enduring too much
of the suffering, it brings back
so vividly aromatic..)
your poetry at its irresistibly
subtle best, my friend
December 16th, 2021 06:38
The Realisation of Probability
dusk arising said:
Call me a rabbit if you will but i have never had time for \"Ferret moans\".
Those who refuse to accept the reality of covid and take necessary precautions are a selfish insult to society .... a threat to us all and they deserve no place in our communities.
December 16th, 2021 05:16
dusk arising said:
Call me a rabbit if you will but i have never had time for \"Ferret moans\".
Those who refuse to accept the reality of covid and take necessary precautions are a selfish insult to society .... a threat to us all and they deserve no place in our communities.
December 16th, 2021 05:16
The Realisation of Probability
Michael Edwards said:
A timely write and who would have imagined there are some still denying
the obvious. As for me I\'m completely out of pheromones - or it could be my age.
December 16th, 2021 05:09
Michael Edwards said:
A timely write and who would have imagined there are some still denying
the obvious. As for me I\'m completely out of pheromones - or it could be my age.
December 16th, 2021 05:09
The Realisation of Probability
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nothing lasts forever .. I guess it has to leave at some point ….
Merry Christmas to you too ..
December 16th, 2021 04:16
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nothing lasts forever .. I guess it has to leave at some point ….
Merry Christmas to you too ..
December 16th, 2021 04:16
No Longer in The Making
Goldfinch60 said:
The smell of wonder in our lives once more Neville.
Andy
December 16th, 2021 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
The smell of wonder in our lives once more Neville.
Andy
December 16th, 2021 01:54
No Longer in The Making
Michael Edwards said:
Perfumed imagery - the lid removed.
December 16th, 2021 00:26
Michael Edwards said:
Perfumed imagery - the lid removed.
December 16th, 2021 00:26
No Longer in The Making
Rozina said:
Wow in just a few words a story emerged. Amazing!
December 15th, 2021 18:23
Rozina said:
Wow in just a few words a story emerged. Amazing!
December 15th, 2021 18:23
Something of a Quandary
Poetic Dan said:
I wouldn\'t want to know as there could never be works of art like yours!
Great stuff
December 15th, 2021 13:58
Poetic Dan said:
I wouldn\'t want to know as there could never be works of art like yours!
Great stuff
December 15th, 2021 13:58
No Longer in The Making
Paul Bell said:
Feel like Hannibal sniffing through the glass. I don\'t recognize that scent, Clarice.
December 15th, 2021 11:53
Paul Bell said:
Feel like Hannibal sniffing through the glass. I don\'t recognize that scent, Clarice.
December 15th, 2021 11:53
No Longer in The Making
spilleronsheet said:
A very good one Neville
It just gave me inspiration
Two beautiful scents whose fragrance so different yet so mingling
December 15th, 2021 11:35
spilleronsheet said:
A very good one Neville
It just gave me inspiration
Two beautiful scents whose fragrance so different yet so mingling
December 15th, 2021 11:35
No Longer in The Making
woundedheart said:
Made made pheromones to attract the ladies attention or simply to make us feel special. Brevity at its finest.
December 15th, 2021 10:35
woundedheart said:
Made made pheromones to attract the ladies attention or simply to make us feel special. Brevity at its finest.
December 15th, 2021 10:35
No Longer in The Making
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Crimble or Crumble - apple, that is?!
December 15th, 2021 10:21
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Crimble or Crumble - apple, that is?!
December 15th, 2021 10:21
No Longer in The Making
dusk arising said:
Patchouli for me every time. Often found permeating the air in my abode.
Another of your romances with which each poet may romance. For fragrance is the tardis of the heart, immediatly transporting us through time to a specialness when we were alive at the sharp end of life.
December 15th, 2021 10:07
dusk arising said:
Patchouli for me every time. Often found permeating the air in my abode.
Another of your romances with which each poet may romance. For fragrance is the tardis of the heart, immediatly transporting us through time to a specialness when we were alive at the sharp end of life.
December 15th, 2021 10:07
No Longer in The Making
Fay Slimm. said:
Perfumed as such no wonder their memory could not be forgotten - you mention my two favourite scents dear Nev........ wonder just how you knew - cos not many know that.
December 15th, 2021 09:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Perfumed as such no wonder their memory could not be forgotten - you mention my two favourite scents dear Nev........ wonder just how you knew - cos not many know that.
December 15th, 2021 09:13
Something of a Quandary
orchidee said:
You seen any e\'ermores about?!
Why did I chip in this utterly useless comment?
You may reply \'You said it, not me!\' lol.
December 12th, 2021 02:59
orchidee said:
You seen any e\'ermores about?!
Why did I chip in this utterly useless comment?
You may reply \'You said it, not me!\' lol.
December 12th, 2021 02:59
Something of a Quandary
spilleronsheet said:
What’s the sky without sun and moon adorning it
What’s the sun and moon if it doesn’t have sky to home it
For me it means lovers in embrace of each other
Like poetry a mother and song a child
How beautifully you expressed
Wonder if some poetries so subtle lost the chance to home a song
Whether they should be worth upon
Random thoughts dwell inside
My long comments loose their track
And my eyes get captivated by your words storing a millions of interpretations inside
Your truly a man of millions emotions beautifully expressed by the chosen words
December 11th, 2021 16:00
spilleronsheet said:
What’s the sky without sun and moon adorning it
What’s the sun and moon if it doesn’t have sky to home it
For me it means lovers in embrace of each other
Like poetry a mother and song a child
How beautifully you expressed
Wonder if some poetries so subtle lost the chance to home a song
Whether they should be worth upon
Random thoughts dwell inside
My long comments loose their track
And my eyes get captivated by your words storing a millions of interpretations inside
Your truly a man of millions emotions beautifully expressed by the chosen words
December 11th, 2021 16:00
An All Too Familiar Modus
myself and me said:
Very familiar, but those who was in it all thought they were different and special.
December 11th, 2021 13:38
myself and me said:
Very familiar, but those who was in it all thought they were different and special.
December 11th, 2021 13:38
An All Too Certain Falsity
myself and me said:
Remind me of the movie \"He Loves Me... He Loves Me Not \".
December 11th, 2021 13:34
myself and me said:
Remind me of the movie \"He Loves Me... He Loves Me Not \".
December 11th, 2021 13:34
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