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Dove said:
Faikhu.
think I may attempt
Though cherry blossoms may object
Bless their blemished buds
July 24th, 2022 01:37
Dove said:
Faikhu.
think I may attempt
Though cherry blossoms may object
Bless their blemished buds
July 24th, 2022 01:37
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orchidee said:
Ahh, I know now. A thought a Haiku was a sort of sneeze, as in \'Ahh-choo!\' Is that a type of poem too? An Ahkhu.
Do shut up now Orchi, says Fido! lol.
July 24th, 2022 01:22
orchidee said:
Ahh, I know now. A thought a Haiku was a sort of sneeze, as in \'Ahh-choo!\' Is that a type of poem too? An Ahkhu.
Do shut up now Orchi, says Fido! lol.
July 24th, 2022 01:22
Mokhu #?
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - -- Hic ! -- so mi amigo this is your take on penning the meaning of Mokhu adorned I might say with the usual exotic inuendoes - methinks if ya make mine a tequila I might join your un-rude drinkin\' interlude down below.................. x
July 23rd, 2022 13:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - -- Hic ! -- so mi amigo this is your take on penning the meaning of Mokhu adorned I might say with the usual exotic inuendoes - methinks if ya make mine a tequila I might join your un-rude drinkin\' interlude down below.................. x
July 23rd, 2022 13:17
Mokhu #?
orchidee said:
I might faint if it was rude.... lol. You know I\'m prone to swoons.
July 23rd, 2022 09:40
orchidee said:
I might faint if it was rude.... lol. You know I\'m prone to swoons.
July 23rd, 2022 09:40
Mokhu #?
Doggerel Dave said:
Google is a little ambivalent with respect to the title of your piece, Neville.
Given that, and your suggestion that it ain\'t rude, but forced to take into consideration Fay\'s commentary (Sorry Fay) I am very much afraid I shall have to draw my own conclusions..........
July 23rd, 2022 08:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Google is a little ambivalent with respect to the title of your piece, Neville.
Given that, and your suggestion that it ain\'t rude, but forced to take into consideration Fay\'s commentary (Sorry Fay) I am very much afraid I shall have to draw my own conclusions..........
July 23rd, 2022 08:06
What He Really, Really Wants
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words in many relationships Neville.
Andy
July 23rd, 2022 00:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words in many relationships Neville.
Andy
July 23rd, 2022 00:13
Early Morning Rituals
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Neville I was there with the fisher folk as your words described.
Andy
July 23rd, 2022 00:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Neville I was there with the fisher folk as your words described.
Andy
July 23rd, 2022 00:04
Early Morning Rituals
Doggerel Dave said:
Preserved in aspic by your piece, a way of life which many, and I’m not exempt here, would be unaware of its continued survival. Yet a very long time ago (I was a kid, in fact) a visit to the coast….. You assure me (city boy) of its existence yet?
At the very least the write provokes a very vivid memory, Neville.
Thanks.
July 22nd, 2022 18:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Preserved in aspic by your piece, a way of life which many, and I’m not exempt here, would be unaware of its continued survival. Yet a very long time ago (I was a kid, in fact) a visit to the coast….. You assure me (city boy) of its existence yet?
At the very least the write provokes a very vivid memory, Neville.
Thanks.
July 22nd, 2022 18:17
Early Morning Rituals
Bella Shepard said:
The magic of morning, there\'s nothing else like it. The start of each day ,with cherished routines that give constancy and order to our lives. You have penned this so beautifully. Now I\'m thinking about my morning walk and the ritual of brewing my coffee, I can smell it even now. Thank you my friend!
July 22nd, 2022 16:46
Bella Shepard said:
The magic of morning, there\'s nothing else like it. The start of each day ,with cherished routines that give constancy and order to our lives. You have penned this so beautifully. Now I\'m thinking about my morning walk and the ritual of brewing my coffee, I can smell it even now. Thank you my friend!
July 22nd, 2022 16:46
Early Morning Rituals
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen with such ease not only a picture but a way of life that carries its pride from years gone by rightt through to modern day where family enters the tending to caught fish for sale So familiar here too mon ami those early morning rituals that I could smell the sea and the catch ..............x
July 22nd, 2022 15:53
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen with such ease not only a picture but a way of life that carries its pride from years gone by rightt through to modern day where family enters the tending to caught fish for sale So familiar here too mon ami those early morning rituals that I could smell the sea and the catch ..............x
July 22nd, 2022 15:53
What He Really, Really Wants
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
may the universe
add my volition
to your prayers, weight
dear Empathetic poet
and heed our, desperation
to save
the children, please
if only you grant us, some
semblance of mercy
just
go easy on the children
give them, ALL
of them
a grace period, experience
of existence
where pain\'s tearstains
and hunger\'s hollow eyes
doesn\'t make-up
their pitiful, warped view of life...
dear Universe
Please!
July 22nd, 2022 03:22
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
may the universe
add my volition
to your prayers, weight
dear Empathetic poet
and heed our, desperation
to save
the children, please
if only you grant us, some
semblance of mercy
just
go easy on the children
give them, ALL
of them
a grace period, experience
of existence
where pain\'s tearstains
and hunger\'s hollow eyes
doesn\'t make-up
their pitiful, warped view of life...
dear Universe
Please!
July 22nd, 2022 03:22
What He Really, Really Wants
Doggerel Dave said:
Too bloody true on both a macro and a micro level. Controlled by the State, controlled by the necessity to gain enough wherewithal to eat and provide shelter, controlled by the arbitrary directions of a political party in power…..got me going this morning, Nev.
Thanks for that one.
July 21st, 2022 18:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Too bloody true on both a macro and a micro level. Controlled by the State, controlled by the necessity to gain enough wherewithal to eat and provide shelter, controlled by the arbitrary directions of a political party in power…..got me going this morning, Nev.
Thanks for that one.
July 21st, 2022 18:28
What He Really, Really Wants
Fay Slimm. said:
You highlight the case of many a victim of controlled behaviour when over-run by those who think they know best for everyone. Much to ponder in this four liner our Nev.
July 21st, 2022 11:38
Fay Slimm. said:
You highlight the case of many a victim of controlled behaviour when over-run by those who think they know best for everyone. Much to ponder in this four liner our Nev.
July 21st, 2022 11:38
You Would Not Care to See me Naked .. Surely
Bella Shepard said:
Scars that are exposed , painful but lingering, memories difficult to dislodge. Soul baring my friend.
July 20th, 2022 14:49
Bella Shepard said:
Scars that are exposed , painful but lingering, memories difficult to dislodge. Soul baring my friend.
July 20th, 2022 14:49
You Would Not Care to See me Naked .. Surely
AlitaOpal said:
This brought me to a passage my mother read to me growing up..
Nothing in all creation is hidden from God. Everything is naked and exposed before his eyes, and he is the one to whom we are accountable.
Hebrews 4:13
Awesome write 🎈
July 20th, 2022 09:19
AlitaOpal said:
This brought me to a passage my mother read to me growing up..
Nothing in all creation is hidden from God. Everything is naked and exposed before his eyes, and he is the one to whom we are accountable.
Hebrews 4:13
Awesome write 🎈
July 20th, 2022 09:19
You Would Not Care to See me Naked .. Surely
Doggerel Dave said:
A brief sketch of a much deeper truth there, only a hint of a whole complex relationship in less than congenial circumstances.
Provokes curiosity which I doubt you will satisfy, Neville.
July 20th, 2022 08:25
Doggerel Dave said:
A brief sketch of a much deeper truth there, only a hint of a whole complex relationship in less than congenial circumstances.
Provokes curiosity which I doubt you will satisfy, Neville.
July 20th, 2022 08:25
You Would Not Care to See me Naked .. Surely
Fay Slimm. said:
Expertly penned this letter of longing and love that though seems forbidden still lives despite thrown stones. This little gem of a read goes into my list of faves for sure dear Nev..................x
July 20th, 2022 04:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Expertly penned this letter of longing and love that though seems forbidden still lives despite thrown stones. This little gem of a read goes into my list of faves for sure dear Nev..................x
July 20th, 2022 04:06
You Would Not Care to See me Naked .. Surely
orchidee said:
I might swoon! Fido will save me from falling. lol.
July 20th, 2022 02:59
orchidee said:
I might swoon! Fido will save me from falling. lol.
July 20th, 2022 02:59
It Only Takes One Little Thing
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories happen and bring such strange thoughts to use for writing down.
Andy
July 20th, 2022 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories happen and bring such strange thoughts to use for writing down.
Andy
July 20th, 2022 01:14
It Only Takes One Little Thing
Bella Shepard said:
Wow! From Elizabeth Barrett Browning to W.H. Auden in one fell swoop. Yes, memory has so many triggers. The trick is to prioritize.
July 19th, 2022 13:34
Bella Shepard said:
Wow! From Elizabeth Barrett Browning to W.H. Auden in one fell swoop. Yes, memory has so many triggers. The trick is to prioritize.
July 19th, 2022 13:34
It Only Takes One Little Thing
L. B. Mek said:
\'who let the dogs, out!\'
or, who\'s
\'outing themselves as the dogs
we all, are
warped
by that prism, of belated regret
grasping
at crude, objectification to ease
the ache
that\'s making it hard to breathe..\'
or
you know, its all just the heatwave
making us confess
our hellish thoughts...
lol
a great read! dear Poet supreme
July 19th, 2022 05:39
L. B. Mek said:
\'who let the dogs, out!\'
or, who\'s
\'outing themselves as the dogs
we all, are
warped
by that prism, of belated regret
grasping
at crude, objectification to ease
the ache
that\'s making it hard to breathe..\'
or
you know, its all just the heatwave
making us confess
our hellish thoughts...
lol
a great read! dear Poet supreme
July 19th, 2022 05:39
It Only Takes One Little Thing
Fay Slimm. said:
Things of mere insignificance can jog back to memory such intimate moments ---- --- and who but thee can pen honesty better with word-art to show she\'s still in your heart.
July 19th, 2022 04:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Things of mere insignificance can jog back to memory such intimate moments ---- --- and who but thee can pen honesty better with word-art to show she\'s still in your heart.
July 19th, 2022 04:26
It Only Takes One Little Thing
Thekkinkkattil said:
I sympathisr with all of you Teddy. Here we are bothered about the rains. A good write teddy enjoyed reading it.
July 19th, 2022 03:37
Thekkinkkattil said:
I sympathisr with all of you Teddy. Here we are bothered about the rains. A good write teddy enjoyed reading it.
July 19th, 2022 03:37
It Only Takes One Little Thing
orchidee said:
Woof! Fido spotted the F. You\'ve started him off again! lol. As I say, no excitement for me. Fido chucks buckets of cold water over me at first sign of any friskiness - he would!
July 19th, 2022 01:59
orchidee said:
Woof! Fido spotted the F. You\'ve started him off again! lol. As I say, no excitement for me. Fido chucks buckets of cold water over me at first sign of any friskiness - he would!
July 19th, 2022 01:59
Just Asking on Behalf of a Friend
Bella Shepard said:
Well, if it\'s for a friend I it\'s OK. So I guess this can both ways, physically and mentally. If it\'s physically, more power to you. If it\'s mentally, uh oh, you are really f....d. All blushes aside, a very provocative read.
July 18th, 2022 13:28
Bella Shepard said:
Well, if it\'s for a friend I it\'s OK. So I guess this can both ways, physically and mentally. If it\'s physically, more power to you. If it\'s mentally, uh oh, you are really f....d. All blushes aside, a very provocative read.
July 18th, 2022 13:28
Just Asking on Behalf of a Friend
orchidee said:
Woof, woof! You started Fido barking. Ohh, f, f, and f he says. Well, he don\'t actually say it! lol.
he says \'No excitement for you (meaning me) today\', he says, as he lays in the shade sipping drinks on a sun lounger!
July 18th, 2022 06:22
orchidee said:
Woof, woof! You started Fido barking. Ohh, f, f, and f he says. Well, he don\'t actually say it! lol.
he says \'No excitement for you (meaning me) today\', he says, as he lays in the shade sipping drinks on a sun lounger!
July 18th, 2022 06:22
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