Comments received on poems by Neville
Ma Petit Serviette
Fay Slimm. said:
Well shiver me timbers me hearty - no question about what she served without any argument - - like your verse that petit waitress deserves a gurt \"merci \" for stripping to tease then to please ..........x
November 24th, 2021 06:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Well shiver me timbers me hearty - no question about what she served without any argument - - like your verse that petit waitress deserves a gurt \"merci \" for stripping to tease then to please ..........x
November 24th, 2021 06:57
Ma Petit Serviette
Doggerel Dave said:
Monogrammed, laundered and ironed to perfection (No innuendo intended). Symmetrical perfection, Nev.
November 24th, 2021 06:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Monogrammed, laundered and ironed to perfection (No innuendo intended). Symmetrical perfection, Nev.
November 24th, 2021 06:41
Linger
Garth Rakumakoe said:
It is poignant in its own way, Neville, and as usual its emotion is quite well carved out. You have a brilliant pen and mind sir.
November 24th, 2021 06:00
Garth Rakumakoe said:
It is poignant in its own way, Neville, and as usual its emotion is quite well carved out. You have a brilliant pen and mind sir.
November 24th, 2021 06:00
Ma Petit Serviette
dusk arising said:
I like the way you tease my mind in your recent poetry..... did they, were they.... what was he being served other than breakfast....
November 24th, 2021 03:49
dusk arising said:
I like the way you tease my mind in your recent poetry..... did they, were they.... what was he being served other than breakfast....
November 24th, 2021 03:49
Linger
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville and so true in life.
Andy
November 24th, 2021 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville and so true in life.
Andy
November 24th, 2021 02:10
Linger
Doggerel Dave said:
First Nev, I have to state that I like the piece but am unable to put my rational spin on it. Further, I see some connection to the poem immediately preceding.......
November 23rd, 2021 19:51
Doggerel Dave said:
First Nev, I have to state that I like the piece but am unable to put my rational spin on it. Further, I see some connection to the poem immediately preceding.......
November 23rd, 2021 19:51
Linger
spilleronsheet said:
So emotional and so poignant
The words brought tears
And so many memories lingered beside
To those whom I lost
I wonder whether they are happy where they are
I wonder if they are watching me
Such a mourning
I remember my grand parents
With whom most of my childhood memories are embed in my mind
I am pretty sure they are watching me
Well penned dear Neville
The poetry felt so personal to me
Thank you for sharing
November 23rd, 2021 14:52
spilleronsheet said:
So emotional and so poignant
The words brought tears
And so many memories lingered beside
To those whom I lost
I wonder whether they are happy where they are
I wonder if they are watching me
Such a mourning
I remember my grand parents
With whom most of my childhood memories are embed in my mind
I am pretty sure they are watching me
Well penned dear Neville
The poetry felt so personal to me
Thank you for sharing
November 23rd, 2021 14:52
Linger
orchidee said:
Good write N. Yes, I meat a gal. She can\'t decide whether to stay or go. I wish KP would go! lol.
November 23rd, 2021 09:43
orchidee said:
Good write N. Yes, I meat a gal. She can\'t decide whether to stay or go. I wish KP would go! lol.
November 23rd, 2021 09:43
An All Too Certain Falsity
Garth Rakumakoe said:
How at times you say so much about a theme or subject without saying much is something I admire in your writing style Neville. You do minimalism so well and and so revealingly. This is another such piece. It\'s a rare quality, and a form of craft to marvel at. Thank you for gracing us yet again.
November 23rd, 2021 06:13
Garth Rakumakoe said:
How at times you say so much about a theme or subject without saying much is something I admire in your writing style Neville. You do minimalism so well and and so revealingly. This is another such piece. It\'s a rare quality, and a form of craft to marvel at. Thank you for gracing us yet again.
November 23rd, 2021 06:13
Linger
dusk arising said:
Beautifully told, of emotions contortions as we endure trying times in \'togetherness\'.
November 23rd, 2021 06:10
dusk arising said:
Beautifully told, of emotions contortions as we endure trying times in \'togetherness\'.
November 23rd, 2021 06:10
Linger
L. B. Mek said:
\'I just
could not find the right words
to place
inside
this mourning song
for safe keeping,\'..
(how acutely, you portray
that need, to feel
like our Time spent
at another\'s side, won\'t
be considered, so miniscule
and steeped in irrelevance, in seconds
after, that abrupt goodbye
of our raked-raw, worded emotions..)
subtly poignant, a heart wrenching depiction
of the person in the relationship
who, lingers
in the embers of the ruins, long abandoned...
simply beautiful, dear masterful Poet
love the unassuming flow and accessible wording
one of your very Best!
\'in my humble opinion\'
November 23rd, 2021 05:52
L. B. Mek said:
\'I just
could not find the right words
to place
inside
this mourning song
for safe keeping,\'..
(how acutely, you portray
that need, to feel
like our Time spent
at another\'s side, won\'t
be considered, so miniscule
and steeped in irrelevance, in seconds
after, that abrupt goodbye
of our raked-raw, worded emotions..)
subtly poignant, a heart wrenching depiction
of the person in the relationship
who, lingers
in the embers of the ruins, long abandoned...
simply beautiful, dear masterful Poet
love the unassuming flow and accessible wording
one of your very Best!
\'in my humble opinion\'
November 23rd, 2021 05:52
Linger
Fay Slimm. said:
A haunt of a mourning song this - it
reminds me that \"Parting is such sweet sorrow \" when hearts want to linger on........ tender as ever mon ami are these lines of gentle appeal.......x
November 23rd, 2021 03:45
Fay Slimm. said:
A haunt of a mourning song this - it
reminds me that \"Parting is such sweet sorrow \" when hearts want to linger on........ tender as ever mon ami are these lines of gentle appeal.......x
November 23rd, 2021 03:45
An All Too Certain Falsity
L. B. Mek said:
love your accessible wording
and blunt - poetic transparency, dear Poet
\'sadly, I have experienced your words
from both sides, of the blame assigning bridge;
where, we choose to label - quickly
so-as to bottle
and limit
the debris, from what
we once deemed, indestructible
that need to assert, blame
to - A, side...
while in reality
the gradients, in our relationship\'s - demise
was as equal, as the attraction
we both gave-in, too
knowing
beyond those aesthetic, tethers
we really
had little foundation, to build-on
in the first place...!\'
November 22nd, 2021 06:49
L. B. Mek said:
love your accessible wording
and blunt - poetic transparency, dear Poet
\'sadly, I have experienced your words
from both sides, of the blame assigning bridge;
where, we choose to label - quickly
so-as to bottle
and limit
the debris, from what
we once deemed, indestructible
that need to assert, blame
to - A, side...
while in reality
the gradients, in our relationship\'s - demise
was as equal, as the attraction
we both gave-in, too
knowing
beyond those aesthetic, tethers
we really
had little foundation, to build-on
in the first place...!\'
November 22nd, 2021 06:49
An All Too Certain Falsity
dusk arising said:
Always aware of the unspoken words I begin to wonder whether the non speaker has the intelligence to realise what they are not saying. Is it willful, are they stupid or am I a pawn in an awful game.
November 22nd, 2021 06:49
dusk arising said:
Always aware of the unspoken words I begin to wonder whether the non speaker has the intelligence to realise what they are not saying. Is it willful, are they stupid or am I a pawn in an awful game.
November 22nd, 2021 06:49
An All Too Certain Falsity
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Nev for a lesson all should see and cogitate upon:
\'Love\' a term used with free abandon by many who don\'t know it\'s meaning.
Have i just just mounted an old hobby horse of mine....again...?
November 22nd, 2021 05:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Nev for a lesson all should see and cogitate upon:
\'Love\' a term used with free abandon by many who don\'t know it\'s meaning.
Have i just just mounted an old hobby horse of mine....again...?
November 22nd, 2021 05:43
An All Too Certain Falsity
spilleronsheet said:
Love may or may not be reciprocated
That’s why they say love is selfless
So true dear poet
Initially I felt love is like a rumour turning around with no truth in it
Then I felt love is simply selfless
November 22nd, 2021 05:13
spilleronsheet said:
Love may or may not be reciprocated
That’s why they say love is selfless
So true dear poet
Initially I felt love is like a rumour turning around with no truth in it
Then I felt love is simply selfless
November 22nd, 2021 05:13
An All Too Certain Falsity
Fay Slimm. said:
Being loved the best is an aim of so many who need constant assurance of value etc - but to be taken for granted can sting the most........ some deep thoughts in this read today Nev. - - hope I have done its message justice in this short review.....................x
November 22nd, 2021 03:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Being loved the best is an aim of so many who need constant assurance of value etc - but to be taken for granted can sting the most........ some deep thoughts in this read today Nev. - - hope I have done its message justice in this short review.....................x
November 22nd, 2021 03:28
An All Too Certain Falsity
Goldfinch60 said:
Love or thoughts of love if not explained can be so painful Neville.
Andy
November 22nd, 2021 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Love or thoughts of love if not explained can be so painful Neville.
Andy
November 22nd, 2021 02:44
An All Too Familiar Modus
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The praying mantis lover. Apparently their kind are the most irresistible. The drawing flame, whose heat burns the most.
November 22nd, 2021 02:42
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The praying mantis lover. Apparently their kind are the most irresistible. The drawing flame, whose heat burns the most.
November 22nd, 2021 02:42
An All Too Familiar Modus
Doggerel Dave said:
Where was yer British reserve? Well for them as hasn\'t got it , a cautionary tale.
November 21st, 2021 19:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Where was yer British reserve? Well for them as hasn\'t got it , a cautionary tale.
November 21st, 2021 19:53
An All Too Familiar Modus
spilleronsheet said:
Ohhh
That happens
Only if sooner we could realise before being badly hurt inside
Alas love is unpredictable and blind
November 21st, 2021 18:48
spilleronsheet said:
Ohhh
That happens
Only if sooner we could realise before being badly hurt inside
Alas love is unpredictable and blind
November 21st, 2021 18:48
An All Too Familiar Modus
dusk arising said:
You\'ve been reading my diaries again Neville.
November 21st, 2021 05:55
dusk arising said:
You\'ve been reading my diaries again Neville.
November 21st, 2021 05:55
An All Too Familiar Modus
Michael Edwards said:
Sadly there are quite a few like this in both sexes - great piece.
November 21st, 2021 05:31
Michael Edwards said:
Sadly there are quite a few like this in both sexes - great piece.
November 21st, 2021 05:31
An All Too Familiar Modus
Fay Slimm. said:
Seems often the misled mislead those who being vulnerable believe too easily - - great example here Nev. of finding out a bit too late that all is not fair in love or war................x
November 21st, 2021 04:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Seems often the misled mislead those who being vulnerable believe too easily - - great example here Nev. of finding out a bit too late that all is not fair in love or war................x
November 21st, 2021 04:28
An All Too Familiar Modus
orchidee said:
But I met her, and hoped it would all work out OK. lol
Do shut up Orchi. heehee.
November 21st, 2021 02:53
orchidee said:
But I met her, and hoped it would all work out OK. lol
Do shut up Orchi. heehee.
November 21st, 2021 02:53
An All Too Familiar Modus
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Some people don’t care enough , and just think about themselves in a selfish way … not caring about others feelings
November 21st, 2021 02:19
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Some people don’t care enough , and just think about themselves in a selfish way … not caring about others feelings
November 21st, 2021 02:19
The Wreck of Our Lady
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I must say you bring her out in all her grandeur. I see her clearly. An adorned work of art sir. Thank you once more good sir.
November 20th, 2021 14:36
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I must say you bring her out in all her grandeur. I see her clearly. An adorned work of art sir. Thank you once more good sir.
November 20th, 2021 14:36
Unsincerely Yours
Accidental Poet said:
But maybe she smiles to herself at thought of him. 🤔
November 20th, 2021 10:09
Accidental Poet said:
But maybe she smiles to herself at thought of him. 🤔
November 20th, 2021 10:09
The Wreck of Our Lady
Accidental Poet said:
\"The Wreck of the Edmund Fitzgerald\" by Gordon Lightfoot comes to my mind N. And just as worthy a tribute here of your own, a fine work of prose. 👍
November 20th, 2021 10:05
Accidental Poet said:
\"The Wreck of the Edmund Fitzgerald\" by Gordon Lightfoot comes to my mind N. And just as worthy a tribute here of your own, a fine work of prose. 👍
November 20th, 2021 10:05
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