Comments received on poems by Neville
Clearly a Vague Recollection
Fay Slimm. said:
Great read Nev - had me pondering why the draped female who wanted her man smelling of time. Hhmm - though with no clue this feels like a Nev-kinda- dream woven with special threads of intrigue - - but after several reads I see a near-broken relationship on the way to be mended. Hope this detective work hits one or two nails tho\' still in awe of your take on those clear but vague recollections............. x
July 8th, 2022 03:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Great read Nev - had me pondering why the draped female who wanted her man smelling of time. Hhmm - though with no clue this feels like a Nev-kinda- dream woven with special threads of intrigue - - but after several reads I see a near-broken relationship on the way to be mended. Hope this detective work hits one or two nails tho\' still in awe of your take on those clear but vague recollections............. x
July 8th, 2022 03:10
Clearly a Vague Recollection
orchidee said:
Good write N. Should I meet her?! lol.
July 8th, 2022 01:58
orchidee said:
Good write N. Should I meet her?! lol.
July 8th, 2022 01:58
Waving at Amphitrite
Paul Bell said:
Something tells me that\'s a long queue, but hey, if you don\'t ask you don\'t get. If only it was today, and you could send her a little message online.
July 7th, 2022 11:48
Paul Bell said:
Something tells me that\'s a long queue, but hey, if you don\'t ask you don\'t get. If only it was today, and you could send her a little message online.
July 7th, 2022 11:48
A Very Sudden Realisation
Matthew Kx said:
Very visual, imagery and message on point. Thanks for sharing.
July 7th, 2022 10:45
Matthew Kx said:
Very visual, imagery and message on point. Thanks for sharing.
July 7th, 2022 10:45
Waving at Amphitrite
Doggerel Dave said:
Not good at yer myfs n stuff, but I\'d say go for it....
July 7th, 2022 07:48
Doggerel Dave said:
Not good at yer myfs n stuff, but I\'d say go for it....
July 7th, 2022 07:48
Waving at Amphitrite
L. B. Mek said:
(so, your Inspirational poetry
is back
and thus, my qwerty keys are flying again
thank you!
thank you!
thank you!
\'The\' Poet is back!!!!!!!)
does water in the sea, recycle?
does rain, wash anew
those rivers of history?
if not
let us swim, dear friend
dip our toes
and jump, head first
place our bets
all in!
swim - back
to those Grecian, pillars
of mythology, comforts
where God\'s
visited us, and swam in the same
Lakes
we \'tadpole-d\', out from..
swim - back
to a society, that had
a dedicated island of Lesbos
than just a month, in a year
of politically - feigned, equality..
swim - back
to wisdom and knowledge
we of modernity, choose
to forget and taint
so as to hide, from its complexities
and truth\'s
like, when a Goddess we can never
aspire, to believe-in
can be worshiped
for simply breathing, near
our dreams..
like, when we could look
and covet
that grace
only a woman, can gift our life\'s
without, being made to feel
lice creeps
plotting, insidious attraction
in our innocent heart\'s..
indeed,
dear Poet supreme
let\'s swim - back
and indulge, in a mirage
of Time
where, we fallible humans
brushed wishes and
shooting stars
with those, wingless angels
and gods
lowered near enough, to reach
and imperfect, enough
for us to aspire
and imitate or at least
exist, aside...
(it all ended
with \'cleanliness is next to godliness\'
became, a thing
since
we can never, shower our myth\'s
in-to, our realities
however much we scrape and clean
our fears in-to, morbid dreams..)
July 7th, 2022 04:07
L. B. Mek said:
(so, your Inspirational poetry
is back
and thus, my qwerty keys are flying again
thank you!
thank you!
thank you!
\'The\' Poet is back!!!!!!!)
does water in the sea, recycle?
does rain, wash anew
those rivers of history?
if not
let us swim, dear friend
dip our toes
and jump, head first
place our bets
all in!
swim - back
to those Grecian, pillars
of mythology, comforts
where God\'s
visited us, and swam in the same
Lakes
we \'tadpole-d\', out from..
swim - back
to a society, that had
a dedicated island of Lesbos
than just a month, in a year
of politically - feigned, equality..
swim - back
to wisdom and knowledge
we of modernity, choose
to forget and taint
so as to hide, from its complexities
and truth\'s
like, when a Goddess we can never
aspire, to believe-in
can be worshiped
for simply breathing, near
our dreams..
like, when we could look
and covet
that grace
only a woman, can gift our life\'s
without, being made to feel
lice creeps
plotting, insidious attraction
in our innocent heart\'s..
indeed,
dear Poet supreme
let\'s swim - back
and indulge, in a mirage
of Time
where, we fallible humans
brushed wishes and
shooting stars
with those, wingless angels
and gods
lowered near enough, to reach
and imperfect, enough
for us to aspire
and imitate or at least
exist, aside...
(it all ended
with \'cleanliness is next to godliness\'
became, a thing
since
we can never, shower our myth\'s
in-to, our realities
however much we scrape and clean
our fears in-to, morbid dreams..)
July 7th, 2022 04:07
Waving at Amphitrite
Fay Slimm. said:
After such an expressively written invite that Greek goddess would never need asking twice to take you first in an oceanic \"saline embrace\" Nev. - - to drown in love makes a dream of a read ..............x
July 7th, 2022 02:40
Fay Slimm. said:
After such an expressively written invite that Greek goddess would never need asking twice to take you first in an oceanic \"saline embrace\" Nev. - - to drown in love makes a dream of a read ..............x
July 7th, 2022 02:40
Waving at Amphitrite
orchidee said:
Doh! I wrote a similar poem, but after first two lines I swooned. Fido said it\'s too much for me! lol.
July 7th, 2022 02:01
orchidee said:
Doh! I wrote a similar poem, but after first two lines I swooned. Fido said it\'s too much for me! lol.
July 7th, 2022 02:01
Waving at Amphitrite
Goldfinch60 said:
Why not indeed take you first, it may be in your dreams Neville but the possibility is there.
Andy
July 7th, 2022 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Why not indeed take you first, it may be in your dreams Neville but the possibility is there.
Andy
July 7th, 2022 01:11
A Very Sudden Realisation
Doggerel Dave said:
Trip worthwhile to you, I think. And the return not just an exit. A journey with extra depth.
Thanks Nev.
July 6th, 2022 08:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Trip worthwhile to you, I think. And the return not just an exit. A journey with extra depth.
Thanks Nev.
July 6th, 2022 08:36
Generosity
spilleronsheet said:
Good to read from you againā¦a void was feltā¦and the generosity will be if we get to read more and more wonderful poetry from youā¦
July 6th, 2022 08:01
spilleronsheet said:
Good to read from you againā¦a void was feltā¦and the generosity will be if we get to read more and more wonderful poetry from youā¦
July 6th, 2022 08:01
A Very Sudden Realisation
Dove said:
What people do to survive is heroic,
In the forest, desert, or a war torn country, its all different, but hunger never leaves us. Beautiful imagery. Lucky there weren\'t any bulls to chase you away from apples, or angry old farmers wife, mad you stole her chicken eggs. Love to see your words again
July 6th, 2022 05:04
Dove said:
What people do to survive is heroic,
In the forest, desert, or a war torn country, its all different, but hunger never leaves us. Beautiful imagery. Lucky there weren\'t any bulls to chase you away from apples, or angry old farmers wife, mad you stole her chicken eggs. Love to see your words again
July 6th, 2022 05:04
A Very Sudden Realisation
spilleronsheet said:
Good one dear Neville
The words so well matched the imagination
Imagery at its best
And truly enjoyed itā¦
July 6th, 2022 04:41
spilleronsheet said:
Good one dear Neville
The words so well matched the imagination
Imagery at its best
And truly enjoyed itā¦
July 6th, 2022 04:41
A Very Sudden Realisation
arqios said:
That depth and that rawness and belatedly that conscience pointing to a less than shining moment of live or die without a fight. Inner struggle unfurled in verse. Thank you, Nev. /Rik.
July 6th, 2022 04:29
arqios said:
That depth and that rawness and belatedly that conscience pointing to a less than shining moment of live or die without a fight. Inner struggle unfurled in verse. Thank you, Nev. /Rik.
July 6th, 2022 04:29
A Very Sudden Realisation
Fay Slimm. said:
A confession penned from dire hunger could not be more moving Nev. and eating raw eggs suffices to call heroes those who have to partake yet still remain the \" very nicest of fellas\" so hats off to the likes of yaself mi amigo .........x
July 6th, 2022 02:23
Fay Slimm. said:
A confession penned from dire hunger could not be more moving Nev. and eating raw eggs suffices to call heroes those who have to partake yet still remain the \" very nicest of fellas\" so hats off to the likes of yaself mi amigo .........x
July 6th, 2022 02:23
Generosity
Dove said:
Drunk on happiness, I must say I did indulge in a drink, but it put me to sleep like a baby, of course hearing you were safe no doubt, made sleeping so much easier. Remember livers regenerate, if you give it a break. Lol
July 5th, 2022 19:15
Dove said:
Drunk on happiness, I must say I did indulge in a drink, but it put me to sleep like a baby, of course hearing you were safe no doubt, made sleeping so much easier. Remember livers regenerate, if you give it a break. Lol
July 5th, 2022 19:15
Generosity
Fay Slimm. said:
Sighing most freely at reading this posting mon ami - - have a good break and come home safely.......x
July 5th, 2022 06:05
Fay Slimm. said:
Sighing most freely at reading this posting mon ami - - have a good break and come home safely.......x
July 5th, 2022 06:05
Generosity
arqios said:
So thatās where you went off to. Your silence was quite deafening!
July 5th, 2022 05:42
arqios said:
So thatās where you went off to. Your silence was quite deafening!
July 5th, 2022 05:42
Generosity
L. B. Mek said:
\'The\' Poet, is back
all is well then, all is well..
(enjoy your break Hyung
indulge \'generously\', if you will
šš»)
yeah, not much growth
I\'m that same old fool, typing away
aimlessly, like always
š
July 5th, 2022 04:42
L. B. Mek said:
\'The\' Poet, is back
all is well then, all is well..
(enjoy your break Hyung
indulge \'generously\', if you will
šš»)
yeah, not much growth
I\'m that same old fool, typing away
aimlessly, like always
š
July 5th, 2022 04:42
My Pretty Little Psychopath
Dove said:
Hope all is well in your service to Ukraine... Be safe! Remember, I may not be here often, but I do value your work, and friendship
June 19th, 2022 07:40
Dove said:
Hope all is well in your service to Ukraine... Be safe! Remember, I may not be here often, but I do value your work, and friendship
June 19th, 2022 07:40
My Pretty Little Psychopath
Doggerel Dave said:
Re:
\"I am taking some time out to try and help out a little bit in the Ukraine .. not sure how long I will be away, but will be back .. just you mark my words .. stay safe folks N :)\"
Whatever you do, YOU stay safe, Neville.
(Reposted from \"V\'s Full..........\").
June 11th, 2022 21:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Re:
\"I am taking some time out to try and help out a little bit in the Ukraine .. not sure how long I will be away, but will be back .. just you mark my words .. stay safe folks N :)\"
Whatever you do, YOU stay safe, Neville.
(Reposted from \"V\'s Full..........\").
June 11th, 2022 21:59
Vladimirās Full Metal Jacket
Doggerel Dave said:
Re:
\"I am taking some time out to try and help out a little bit in the Ukraine .. not sure how long I will be away, but will be back .. just you mark my words .. stay safe folks N :)\"
Whatever you do, YOU stay safe, Neville.
June 11th, 2022 21:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Re:
\"I am taking some time out to try and help out a little bit in the Ukraine .. not sure how long I will be away, but will be back .. just you mark my words .. stay safe folks N :)\"
Whatever you do, YOU stay safe, Neville.
June 11th, 2022 21:50
My Pretty Little Psychopath
MendedFences27 said:
\"Morphine shots\" will dull the pain, but last only a short while and then it\'s back to reality. It seems unlikely your \"psychopath\" will be hanging around much longer. Perhaps we all will be better for it. - Phil A.
P. S, - Keep safe.
June 11th, 2022 19:13
MendedFences27 said:
\"Morphine shots\" will dull the pain, but last only a short while and then it\'s back to reality. It seems unlikely your \"psychopath\" will be hanging around much longer. Perhaps we all will be better for it. - Phil A.
P. S, - Keep safe.
June 11th, 2022 19:13
My Pretty Little Psychopath
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - enjoy your break and come back refreshed and ready to post again eh ? --- know you will be missed................x
June 11th, 2022 11:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - enjoy your break and come back refreshed and ready to post again eh ? --- know you will be missed................x
June 11th, 2022 11:55
My Pretty Little Psychopath
Fay Slimm. said:
A sigh ends this haunt of a read at least it does for me Nev.. Tragic those morrows when morphine effects wear themselves off - - - -- your pen tellingly expresses an ongoing disorder that is all too familiar in these difficult times my caring friend..............x
June 11th, 2022 05:03
Fay Slimm. said:
A sigh ends this haunt of a read at least it does for me Nev.. Tragic those morrows when morphine effects wear themselves off - - - -- your pen tellingly expresses an ongoing disorder that is all too familiar in these difficult times my caring friend..............x
June 11th, 2022 05:03
« Return to the profile of Neville
