Comments received on poems by Neville
Do You Ever Look Back on Those Days
Michael Edwards said:
Supremo - yus I do look back lest I forget where I\'m gong. Fine words Neville.
May 31st, 2022 15:13
Michael Edwards said:
Supremo - yus I do look back lest I forget where I\'m gong. Fine words Neville.
May 31st, 2022 15:13
Do You Ever Look Back on Those Days
Rocky Lagou said:
This is splendid Neville. I felt as if it were me reliving these \"times of prime.\" It seemed like you were so ready to take the next step, but unfortunately the one you\'re addressing doesn\'t seem to feel the same. Wonderful anyways.
May 31st, 2022 08:49
Rocky Lagou said:
This is splendid Neville. I felt as if it were me reliving these \"times of prime.\" It seemed like you were so ready to take the next step, but unfortunately the one you\'re addressing doesn\'t seem to feel the same. Wonderful anyways.
May 31st, 2022 08:49
Do You Ever Look Back on Those Days
dusk arising said:
Oh my, If I had listened to words of certain people I surely would not have such a colourful past to look back upon with a smile.
So it should be, so it should continue. Though I think most folk are more liberally minded today than when i was a young corruptable thing.
May 31st, 2022 07:59
dusk arising said:
Oh my, If I had listened to words of certain people I surely would not have such a colourful past to look back upon with a smile.
So it should be, so it should continue. Though I think most folk are more liberally minded today than when i was a young corruptable thing.
May 31st, 2022 07:59
Do You Ever Look Back on Those Days
Fay Slimm. said:
A dip into memory never read more attractive -- your pen conjures lessons aplenty such as \"never listen to rantings of jealousy - -
another peach of a read mon ami - -
May 31st, 2022 07:20
Fay Slimm. said:
A dip into memory never read more attractive -- your pen conjures lessons aplenty such as \"never listen to rantings of jealousy - -
another peach of a read mon ami - -
May 31st, 2022 07:20
Do You Ever Look Back on Those Days
L. B. Mek said:
exemplary
\'stream of consciousness\'
Poetry!
thank you, dear Poet supreme
May 31st, 2022 05:57
L. B. Mek said:
exemplary
\'stream of consciousness\'
Poetry!
thank you, dear Poet supreme
May 31st, 2022 05:57
Do You Ever Look Back on Those Days
orchidee said:
Nope, I don\'t recall the A309, but I know a bit of the A310. You anywhere near it?! lol.
I\'m a jealous old woman... lol.
May 31st, 2022 02:30
orchidee said:
Nope, I don\'t recall the A309, but I know a bit of the A310. You anywhere near it?! lol.
I\'m a jealous old woman... lol.
May 31st, 2022 02:30
Embu
Fay Slimm. said:
One I must have missed and lovely indeed to end my sleepless interlude
with a \"no need for words embu \" of thanks for your poetic company mon cher ami..................x
May 28th, 2022 22:44
Fay Slimm. said:
One I must have missed and lovely indeed to end my sleepless interlude
with a \"no need for words embu \" of thanks for your poetic company mon cher ami..................x
May 28th, 2022 22:44
Take Me Somewhere
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - a girl after my own heart was She of the open air garden suggestion - -nearly as good as skinny dipping together methnks...........x
May 28th, 2022 22:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - a girl after my own heart was She of the open air garden suggestion - -nearly as good as skinny dipping together methnks...........x
May 28th, 2022 22:15
White Violets
Fay Slimm. said:
What a telling word is \"pearlescent\" when on a green sweater that moved so seductively - - good memories eh my romantic friend. ?
May 28th, 2022 22:06
Fay Slimm. said:
What a telling word is \"pearlescent\" when on a green sweater that moved so seductively - - good memories eh my romantic friend. ?
May 28th, 2022 22:06
I Do so Hope There are Saxophones in Heaven
Fay Slimm. said:
Couldnt sleep so had a peep at a few of your back numbers I may have missed - - the title of this one has me smilin\' - - have always loved the sound of cool sax -play...............x
May 28th, 2022 21:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Couldnt sleep so had a peep at a few of your back numbers I may have missed - - the title of this one has me smilin\' - - have always loved the sound of cool sax -play...............x
May 28th, 2022 21:56
Somewhere Down Turn Again Lane
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
I may be dumb for asking this but what is the Turn again lane?
May 27th, 2022 13:15
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
I may be dumb for asking this but what is the Turn again lane?
May 27th, 2022 13:15
Somewhere Down Turn Again Lane
dusk arising said:
Ah, images of butterflies on the wing on that one day they live for.... all that growing from a bug then to pupate and break free into flight all for one good shag.... well the human version has a lot more going for it... you can even stop by the pub and reflect as you eye up the barmaid. Mindfully contemplating your next conquest in the traditional crimson blooded male tradition.
May 27th, 2022 12:03
dusk arising said:
Ah, images of butterflies on the wing on that one day they live for.... all that growing from a bug then to pupate and break free into flight all for one good shag.... well the human version has a lot more going for it... you can even stop by the pub and reflect as you eye up the barmaid. Mindfully contemplating your next conquest in the traditional crimson blooded male tradition.
May 27th, 2022 12:03
Somewhere Down Turn Again Lane
Neville said:
No kidding .. I was only just thinking about good ole Charlie .. I am well n truly honoured brother Mek .... N
May 27th, 2022 09:48
Neville said:
No kidding .. I was only just thinking about good ole Charlie .. I am well n truly honoured brother Mek .... N
May 27th, 2022 09:48
Somewhere Down Turn Again Lane
L. B. Mek said:
reading your subtle words
I can\'t help favourably
comparing them
to Bukowski\'s \'Layover\'
the nuanced majesty, in your poem
is in so much
you purposely, keep unsaid
and thus
allow your readers memories
to bespoke, fill-in
the missing lines
as they
have experienced life..
(such Artistic, restraint
just can\'t be learned
\'in my humble opinion\'
how I treasure you deft touch
dear Poet supreme, thank you!)
from \'Layover\':
\'That moment- to this. . .
may be years in the way they measure,
but it\'s only one sentence back in my mind-
there are so many days
when living stops and pulls up and sits
and waits like a train on the rails.
I pass the hotel at 8
and at 5; there are cats in the alleys
and bottles and bums,
and I look up at the window and think,
I no longer know where you are,
and I walk on and wonder where
the living goes
when it stops.\'
(
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-4394
)
May 27th, 2022 06:16
L. B. Mek said:
reading your subtle words
I can\'t help favourably
comparing them
to Bukowski\'s \'Layover\'
the nuanced majesty, in your poem
is in so much
you purposely, keep unsaid
and thus
allow your readers memories
to bespoke, fill-in
the missing lines
as they
have experienced life..
(such Artistic, restraint
just can\'t be learned
\'in my humble opinion\'
how I treasure you deft touch
dear Poet supreme, thank you!)
from \'Layover\':
\'That moment- to this. . .
may be years in the way they measure,
but it\'s only one sentence back in my mind-
there are so many days
when living stops and pulls up and sits
and waits like a train on the rails.
I pass the hotel at 8
and at 5; there are cats in the alleys
and bottles and bums,
and I look up at the window and think,
I no longer know where you are,
and I walk on and wonder where
the living goes
when it stops.\'
(
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-4394
)
May 27th, 2022 06:16
Somewhere Down Turn Again Lane
arqios said:
That is a lane that some only unwittingly walk into, and others boldly rush towards. In my day all the rage/rave/whatever was the one night stand. Even that wasn\'t the best a person could achieve. Tomorrow is surely another day. Chin up, mate.
May 27th, 2022 05:19
arqios said:
That is a lane that some only unwittingly walk into, and others boldly rush towards. In my day all the rage/rave/whatever was the one night stand. Even that wasn\'t the best a person could achieve. Tomorrow is surely another day. Chin up, mate.
May 27th, 2022 05:19
Somewhere Down Turn Again Lane
orchidee said:
I swoon when I pass that Lane. lol.
May 27th, 2022 04:45
orchidee said:
I swoon when I pass that Lane. lol.
May 27th, 2022 04:45
Somewhere Down Turn Again Lane
Fay Slimm. said:
Am not larfin\' Nev. as this read brought back much that lessons us later if we take heed ...... needs two to make bargains though eh my dear friend ?..............x
May 27th, 2022 03:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Am not larfin\' Nev. as this read brought back much that lessons us later if we take heed ...... needs two to make bargains though eh my dear friend ?..............x
May 27th, 2022 03:04
Slaves of Eros
MendedFences27 said:
Eros is a lousy archer. I was wounded several times with his inaccurate arrows before he finally found my heart.
However, your poem is spot on. Maybe someday you\'ll be centered at Piccadilly with pen in hand. As to walking the tightrope, all I can say is that the older you become, the more slack it becomes. Great write. - Phil A.
May 26th, 2022 16:06
MendedFences27 said:
Eros is a lousy archer. I was wounded several times with his inaccurate arrows before he finally found my heart.
However, your poem is spot on. Maybe someday you\'ll be centered at Piccadilly with pen in hand. As to walking the tightrope, all I can say is that the older you become, the more slack it becomes. Great write. - Phil A.
May 26th, 2022 16:06
Slaves of Eros
spilleronsheet said:
Your slaying with your words dear Neville…the pains and grip of Eros that binds painfully yet so essentially….
May 26th, 2022 09:51
spilleronsheet said:
Your slaying with your words dear Neville…the pains and grip of Eros that binds painfully yet so essentially….
May 26th, 2022 09:51
Slaves of Eros
L. B. Mek said:
(our fallibility fast becoming
the only, remaining tendrils
to our mirage of connectivity...)
\'to serve as a
measure to somehow determine
our place and
position, plus the state of our
balance and
the grip we each maintained on
the tightrope\'..
Amen!
May 26th, 2022 06:13
L. B. Mek said:
(our fallibility fast becoming
the only, remaining tendrils
to our mirage of connectivity...)
\'to serve as a
measure to somehow determine
our place and
position, plus the state of our
balance and
the grip we each maintained on
the tightrope\'..
Amen!
May 26th, 2022 06:13
Slaves of Eros
dusk arising said:
Well my excuse is that, as a devout follower or Eros\' ethos, I bcame knackered!
May 26th, 2022 01:55
dusk arising said:
Well my excuse is that, as a devout follower or Eros\' ethos, I bcame knackered!
May 26th, 2022 01:55
Slaves of Eros
Fay Slimm. said:
Yup - that Eros has been a tough master and you pen his hold over our hearts so well Nev............. we remain in his romantic but painful grip too whatever becomes of our lives methinks...........x
May 26th, 2022 01:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Yup - that Eros has been a tough master and you pen his hold over our hearts so well Nev............. we remain in his romantic but painful grip too whatever becomes of our lives methinks...........x
May 26th, 2022 01:38
Slaves of Eros
orchidee said:
Eros? We\'ll all be swooning. It\'ll be too much for us. For me, anyway! heehee.
May 26th, 2022 01:33
orchidee said:
Eros? We\'ll all be swooning. It\'ll be too much for us. For me, anyway! heehee.
May 26th, 2022 01:33
Remember Me She Said
L. B. Mek said:
a central, beautiful metaphor
anchoring
that alluring pace and poise
in your choice, wording
and drip-down, distilled wisdom
effect
in our reading of your poem, by design..
a comfort in a read, thank you!
you, at your subtle Best
dear Poet
May 23rd, 2022 04:05
L. B. Mek said:
a central, beautiful metaphor
anchoring
that alluring pace and poise
in your choice, wording
and drip-down, distilled wisdom
effect
in our reading of your poem, by design..
a comfort in a read, thank you!
you, at your subtle Best
dear Poet
May 23rd, 2022 04:05
For Ever Aint Never That Far Away
L. B. Mek said:
a thread of fate, separating
between, those
being born in a war zone
and those
being born in peaceful, moments..
Personally, I think the latter
is the crueller, fate
as we get to glimpse, a perhaps
of peace
that can never be sustained..
so from the beginning
of humanity\'s, fantastic Tales
and Cain and Abel\'s
inability to cohabitate, war
has ever
and I fear, will ever
exist, to remind us:
\'that here, now and forever
are not far away,\'
So we too, go-on
celebrating those heroes
who gifted us, a chance
and doing our Best
then simply let, Fate
judge the rest...
(just a such a poignant read
when you think
that so many, are living this reality
in the now, we lucky few
take for granted...)
Brilliant!
dear Poet, supreme
thank you!
May 23rd, 2022 04:00
L. B. Mek said:
a thread of fate, separating
between, those
being born in a war zone
and those
being born in peaceful, moments..
Personally, I think the latter
is the crueller, fate
as we get to glimpse, a perhaps
of peace
that can never be sustained..
so from the beginning
of humanity\'s, fantastic Tales
and Cain and Abel\'s
inability to cohabitate, war
has ever
and I fear, will ever
exist, to remind us:
\'that here, now and forever
are not far away,\'
So we too, go-on
celebrating those heroes
who gifted us, a chance
and doing our Best
then simply let, Fate
judge the rest...
(just a such a poignant read
when you think
that so many, are living this reality
in the now, we lucky few
take for granted...)
Brilliant!
dear Poet, supreme
thank you!
May 23rd, 2022 04:00
Fingers Crossed
L. B. Mek said:
a good luck charm, in a poem
never occurred to me
to imbue something tangible
in my scribbles
(an \'omamori\' in a poem)
as-ever
I read and learn, Hyung
thank you!
May 23rd, 2022 03:46
L. B. Mek said:
a good luck charm, in a poem
never occurred to me
to imbue something tangible
in my scribbles
(an \'omamori\' in a poem)
as-ever
I read and learn, Hyung
thank you!
May 23rd, 2022 03:46
Remember Me She Said
Fay Slimm. said:
May Queen or no she certainly drew my attention to what she maybe - one lovely sunflower in a mess of tumbleweed needs to be remembered methinks mon ami...... another intriguing read and loved it.
May 21st, 2022 03:52
Fay Slimm. said:
May Queen or no she certainly drew my attention to what she maybe - one lovely sunflower in a mess of tumbleweed needs to be remembered methinks mon ami...... another intriguing read and loved it.
May 21st, 2022 03:52
Every Now and Then Maybe
Fay Slimm. said:
That sip once taken makes lovely memories that last a lifetime - - I know the feel of your lines here mon ami ..........................x
May 20th, 2022 01:38
Fay Slimm. said:
That sip once taken makes lovely memories that last a lifetime - - I know the feel of your lines here mon ami ..........................x
May 20th, 2022 01:38
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