Comments received on poems by Neville
Overcome
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot? Hot over there? Winter here, hasn\'t got over 20 degrees C all week. Too cold to do much.... Could do an Oates I suppose.....not ready to go yet....
June 13th, 2021 19:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot? Hot over there? Winter here, hasn\'t got over 20 degrees C all week. Too cold to do much.... Could do an Oates I suppose.....not ready to go yet....
June 13th, 2021 19:16
Overcome
SureshG said:
After reading several of your recent posts, I have come to a conclusion that I’m jealous of you, your experiences and your talent.
June 13th, 2021 13:22
SureshG said:
After reading several of your recent posts, I have come to a conclusion that I’m jealous of you, your experiences and your talent.
June 13th, 2021 13:22
Overcome
Fay Slimm. said:
Sensually as any and hotter than this scorching Sunday - - ah yes - I remember it well................x
June 13th, 2021 10:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Sensually as any and hotter than this scorching Sunday - - ah yes - I remember it well................x
June 13th, 2021 10:07
Overcome
dusk arising said:
Disgracefully good!
You\'ve phrased this so well here to take your reader on their own sensual journey without revealing a thing. You\'re at it again pesky Neville.
June 13th, 2021 09:06
dusk arising said:
Disgracefully good!
You\'ve phrased this so well here to take your reader on their own sensual journey without revealing a thing. You\'re at it again pesky Neville.
June 13th, 2021 09:06
Overcome
Saxon Crow said:
It\'s hot out there already without you turning up the heat Nev!
June 13th, 2021 07:12
Saxon Crow said:
It\'s hot out there already without you turning up the heat Nev!
June 13th, 2021 07:12
Seizing Moments
Fay Slimm. said:
A quick second read of this truly engaging piece highlights a different subject in my view Nev. - - secret indeed is the moment when even fierce winds cannot expose it - - so with this second comment I think a good title could have been Your Secret - - whatever - - tis still good stuff...........x
June 13th, 2021 03:19
Fay Slimm. said:
A quick second read of this truly engaging piece highlights a different subject in my view Nev. - - secret indeed is the moment when even fierce winds cannot expose it - - so with this second comment I think a good title could have been Your Secret - - whatever - - tis still good stuff...........x
June 13th, 2021 03:19
Seizing Moments
Doggerel Dave said:
And tomorrow \"The answer is blowin\' in the wind\"
Sorry Neville - I just couldn\'t get it out of my mind....
June 12th, 2021 19:51
Doggerel Dave said:
And tomorrow \"The answer is blowin\' in the wind\"
Sorry Neville - I just couldn\'t get it out of my mind....
June 12th, 2021 19:51
Seizing Moments
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good twist, Neville. A bit of clever poetic kiss and tell.
June 12th, 2021 16:52
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good twist, Neville. A bit of clever poetic kiss and tell.
June 12th, 2021 16:52
Seizing Moments
Goldfinch60 said:
Tomorrow is waiting for us and it will be wonderful.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 12:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Tomorrow is waiting for us and it will be wonderful.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 12:33
Seizing Moments
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Yes, let’s seize those moments
that gratify us…
in the now!
Let’s live for today…
for we don’t know what
tomorrow will bring!
Your penned “scribble”,
as you call it,
has been a very satisfying read.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
June 12th, 2021 12:01
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Yes, let’s seize those moments
that gratify us…
in the now!
Let’s live for today…
for we don’t know what
tomorrow will bring!
Your penned “scribble”,
as you call it,
has been a very satisfying read.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
June 12th, 2021 12:01
Seizing Moments
dusk arising said:
When passion becomes a whispering breeze - worry!
Whilst passiion is a screaming wind - let it blow, let it blow, let it blow.
June 12th, 2021 08:19
dusk arising said:
When passion becomes a whispering breeze - worry!
Whilst passiion is a screaming wind - let it blow, let it blow, let it blow.
June 12th, 2021 08:19
Seizing Moments
Fay Slimm. said:
Am smiling again at how you build up with imagery a feel of intrigue as you poem this ode and I like the title you use above this play around Seizing Moments amigo - - great stuff.........x
June 12th, 2021 05:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Am smiling again at how you build up with imagery a feel of intrigue as you poem this ode and I like the title you use above this play around Seizing Moments amigo - - great stuff.........x
June 12th, 2021 05:23
Seizing Moments
Accidental Poet said:
Giving reason to look forward to tomorrow. Nice write N. ; )
June 12th, 2021 04:51
Accidental Poet said:
Giving reason to look forward to tomorrow. Nice write N. ; )
June 12th, 2021 04:51
Nowhere Left to Bleed
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful words Neville,
\"but then....who cares\" ......you do.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful words Neville,
\"but then....who cares\" ......you do.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 00:25
Nowhere Left to Bleed
SureshG said:
Exposed you have yourself, raw, in that moment of life. A song most of sign at least once in our lives.
June 11th, 2021 12:30
SureshG said:
Exposed you have yourself, raw, in that moment of life. A song most of sign at least once in our lives.
June 11th, 2021 12:30
Nowhere Left to Bleed
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville. Inspiring poem.
June 11th, 2021 09:07
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville. Inspiring poem.
June 11th, 2021 09:07
Nowhere Left to Bleed
Doggerel Dave said:
A couple of my relationships were a little toxic, Neville - but compared to yours I feel grateful.......
Heavy, heavy...
June 11th, 2021 05:58
Doggerel Dave said:
A couple of my relationships were a little toxic, Neville - but compared to yours I feel grateful.......
Heavy, heavy...
June 11th, 2021 05:58
Nowhere Left to Bleed
L. B. Mek said:
\'And tho’ the well is just
as deep,
the bottom and the sides
have long run dry
and the drop is still as
steep ..\'
so, so steep: indeed
\'lived-in-words\'
sprouting that consoling solace
of shed-dry crimson: pulsed wisdom
realised
through fruits of stoic acceptance..
subtle, oh so subtle my friend
life\'s veracity hidden in plain sight
within each of your choice syllables
for us to bite, that harvested sweetness
of commonality\'s: relatability of relief...
June 11th, 2021 05:08
L. B. Mek said:
\'And tho’ the well is just
as deep,
the bottom and the sides
have long run dry
and the drop is still as
steep ..\'
so, so steep: indeed
\'lived-in-words\'
sprouting that consoling solace
of shed-dry crimson: pulsed wisdom
realised
through fruits of stoic acceptance..
subtle, oh so subtle my friend
life\'s veracity hidden in plain sight
within each of your choice syllables
for us to bite, that harvested sweetness
of commonality\'s: relatability of relief...
June 11th, 2021 05:08
Nowhere Left to Bleed
dusk arising said:
Don\'t pull yer punches Neville. Tell it like it is.
In her crazy fucked up mind will she even notice her loss.
June 11th, 2021 02:53
dusk arising said:
Don\'t pull yer punches Neville. Tell it like it is.
In her crazy fucked up mind will she even notice her loss.
June 11th, 2021 02:53
Nowhere Left to Bleed
orchidee said:
I best not meet this gal! lol.
A fine write N.
June 11th, 2021 01:39
orchidee said:
I best not meet this gal! lol.
A fine write N.
June 11th, 2021 01:39
Nowhere Left to Bleed
orchidee said:
I best not meet this gal! lol.
A fine write N.
June 11th, 2021 01:39
orchidee said:
I best not meet this gal! lol.
A fine write N.
June 11th, 2021 01:39
Nowhere Left to Bleed
Saxon Crow said:
There\'s certainly some powerful meaning behind this one Nev. Very nicely written
June 11th, 2021 01:31
Saxon Crow said:
There\'s certainly some powerful meaning behind this one Nev. Very nicely written
June 11th, 2021 01:31
Nowhere Left to Bleed
Fay Slimm. said:
Whooa - A strongly put set of reasons to say a firm Goodbye to love gone sour - -- - - your turn of words with searing imagery would shake to the core some crazy She who thinks otherwise..........x
June 11th, 2021 01:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Whooa - A strongly put set of reasons to say a firm Goodbye to love gone sour - -- - - your turn of words with searing imagery would shake to the core some crazy She who thinks otherwise..........x
June 11th, 2021 01:29
Upon Reflection
SureshG said:
Very intense, deep on many levels, worthy of series
June 10th, 2021 13:31
SureshG said:
Very intense, deep on many levels, worthy of series
June 10th, 2021 13:31
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