Comments received on poems by Neville



On Being Called to War 
kitty the naughty poet said:

I feel the emotion behind this poem. thank you for sharing

November 29th, 2021 03:43

On Being Called to War 
Fay Slimm. said:

Many were facing that call and for conscience accepted white feathers and all that resulted from their objection - your pen tells well the wept pearls my friend.............x

November 29th, 2021 03:38

Summer 19..
Goldfinch60 said:

So true Neville.

Andy

November 29th, 2021 01:51

Summer 19..
Garth Rakumakoe said:

Like the summer of \'69... Beautiful sir, absolutely beautiful! Classic, in fact.

November 28th, 2021 13:30

Summer 19..
SureshG said:

You phrased my daydreams in silken words. OOHHH!!! many a destination stops I missed….

Thanks for the memories

November 28th, 2021 10:51

Down With Everything
spilleronsheet said:

Love the one who loves you back
Often the fools fail to recognise until it’s too late to be cherished
Another great message by strong emotive sir
Well done

November 28th, 2021 09:45

Summer 19..
spilleronsheet said:

A long lost love
Or eternal love missed today
I just got nostalgic over a music similar to your lines
Good one dear Neville

November 28th, 2021 09:43

Summer 19..
Paul Bell said:

Imagine two people, complete strangers, heading out to meet their partners, then fate strikes. The rest is history.

November 28th, 2021 07:57

Summer 19..
Caring dove said:

Lovely writing in just a few lines 🙂

November 28th, 2021 07:22

Summer 19..
dusk arising said:

And why not miss everything..... love is a worthwhile diversion..... while it lasts.

November 28th, 2021 06:35

Summer 19..
Fay Slimm. said:

Shows what love can do when it strikes eh ? - - just guessing the year - could that be \' 97 I wonder ? .......x

November 28th, 2021 06:31

Summer 19..
Lorna said:

Was that anything like the summer of love \'67? Fine wine........

November 28th, 2021 06:09

Summer 19..
orchidee said:

Good write Neville.
I remember the year I met her - 1902 I think. I had just finished in the Boer War, being very old!

November 28th, 2021 05:46

Down With Everything
Garth Rakumakoe said:

When one does not even flinch anymore. It\'s the oddest thing that in love people bring others to such a point. Love is best enjoyed drama-free. Very well penned.

November 27th, 2021 13:08

Down With Everything
Lorna said:

Oh I liked this from the title onwards..... someone has just so HAD IT. I\'ve had days like this.....

November 27th, 2021 12:58

Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
Garth Rakumakoe said:

I heard voices sing. That\'s how good this is. It\'s almost a stairway to another realm, and how spiritual it\'s ascend. Solid. Timeless.

November 27th, 2021 12:22

Down With Everything
Dove said:

Oh my, time changes things and not always for the better! Great Rhythm and Rhymes

November 27th, 2021 11:37

Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
Dove said:

Very beautiful, and calming! Best to you Dear

November 27th, 2021 11:35

Down With Everything
dusk arising said:

Done with them, done with them, done, done , done.....but soddit they\'re still there in my memory goading me.

Why are the relationships with sharp edges, maybe tempestuous ones, the ones which continually trip into out memories?

November 27th, 2021 08:56

Down With Everything
Paul Bell said:

Yes, when the door closes for the final time, no reflection is bringing it back.

November 27th, 2021 06:48

Down With Everything
Doggerel Dave said:

Dating that nun again Nev?
Well good for her if she still inspires rhythmic verse like that.......

November 27th, 2021 05:11

Down With Everything
Fay Slimm. said:

That becoming pernickety never does the trick of alluring - - lovers can become addicted to fuss - give me a partner who needs no mirror to reflect a beautiful heart..............x

November 27th, 2021 05:07

Down With Everything
orchidee said:

Now I\'m wondering - should I meet her? Is a she a drama queen?!
And am I a blue-eyed boy?! lol.

November 27th, 2021 02:59

Down With Everything
Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

A very interesting write.
Are your eyes blue?…just wondering!🤔..…and are you really done with those candles?🕯……..once again, just wondering! 🤔

Laura🌻

November 27th, 2021 02:49

Down With Everything
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive words again Neville, maybe one day she will see.

Andy

November 27th, 2021 02:40

Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
Caring dove said:

Lovely poem , comfort in your words . I truly believe in angels .

November 26th, 2021 17:42

Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
Doggerel Dave said:

My very literal (no, not literary) mind was none the less provoked by this piece of yours, Nev.
Visions of a view or two in the Blue Mountains (behind Sydney)

November 26th, 2021 16:47

Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
Nicholas Browning said:

This is a marvelous piece of literature. I enjoyed the way you spaced out the rhymes and the playful, perhaps innovative, word choice. Well done sir.

November 26th, 2021 12:01

Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
dusk arising said:

That special place all spiritual folk have found deep within our soul. A place we retire to in times of need and our batteries are recharged.

November 26th, 2021 11:05

Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
L. B. Mek said:

Amen!

November 26th, 2021 06:14



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