Comments received on poems by Neville
Somewhere Down Turn Again Lane
Fay Slimm. said:
Am not larfin\' Nev. as this read brought back much that lessons us later if we take heed ...... needs two to make bargains though eh my dear friend ?..............x
May 27th, 2022 03:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Am not larfin\' Nev. as this read brought back much that lessons us later if we take heed ...... needs two to make bargains though eh my dear friend ?..............x
May 27th, 2022 03:04
Slaves of Eros
MendedFences27 said:
Eros is a lousy archer. I was wounded several times with his inaccurate arrows before he finally found my heart.
However, your poem is spot on. Maybe someday you\'ll be centered at Piccadilly with pen in hand. As to walking the tightrope, all I can say is that the older you become, the more slack it becomes. Great write. - Phil A.
May 26th, 2022 16:06
MendedFences27 said:
Eros is a lousy archer. I was wounded several times with his inaccurate arrows before he finally found my heart.
However, your poem is spot on. Maybe someday you\'ll be centered at Piccadilly with pen in hand. As to walking the tightrope, all I can say is that the older you become, the more slack it becomes. Great write. - Phil A.
May 26th, 2022 16:06
Slaves of Eros
spilleronsheet said:
Your slaying with your words dear Neville…the pains and grip of Eros that binds painfully yet so essentially….
May 26th, 2022 09:51
spilleronsheet said:
Your slaying with your words dear Neville…the pains and grip of Eros that binds painfully yet so essentially….
May 26th, 2022 09:51
Slaves of Eros
L. B. Mek said:
(our fallibility fast becoming
the only, remaining tendrils
to our mirage of connectivity...)
\'to serve as a
measure to somehow determine
our place and
position, plus the state of our
balance and
the grip we each maintained on
the tightrope\'..
Amen!
May 26th, 2022 06:13
L. B. Mek said:
(our fallibility fast becoming
the only, remaining tendrils
to our mirage of connectivity...)
\'to serve as a
measure to somehow determine
our place and
position, plus the state of our
balance and
the grip we each maintained on
the tightrope\'..
Amen!
May 26th, 2022 06:13
Slaves of Eros
dusk arising said:
Well my excuse is that, as a devout follower or Eros\' ethos, I bcame knackered!
May 26th, 2022 01:55
dusk arising said:
Well my excuse is that, as a devout follower or Eros\' ethos, I bcame knackered!
May 26th, 2022 01:55
Slaves of Eros
Fay Slimm. said:
Yup - that Eros has been a tough master and you pen his hold over our hearts so well Nev............. we remain in his romantic but painful grip too whatever becomes of our lives methinks...........x
May 26th, 2022 01:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Yup - that Eros has been a tough master and you pen his hold over our hearts so well Nev............. we remain in his romantic but painful grip too whatever becomes of our lives methinks...........x
May 26th, 2022 01:38
Slaves of Eros
orchidee said:
Eros? We\'ll all be swooning. It\'ll be too much for us. For me, anyway! heehee.
May 26th, 2022 01:33
orchidee said:
Eros? We\'ll all be swooning. It\'ll be too much for us. For me, anyway! heehee.
May 26th, 2022 01:33
Remember Me She Said
L. B. Mek said:
a central, beautiful metaphor
anchoring
that alluring pace and poise
in your choice, wording
and drip-down, distilled wisdom
effect
in our reading of your poem, by design..
a comfort in a read, thank you!
you, at your subtle Best
dear Poet
May 23rd, 2022 04:05
L. B. Mek said:
a central, beautiful metaphor
anchoring
that alluring pace and poise
in your choice, wording
and drip-down, distilled wisdom
effect
in our reading of your poem, by design..
a comfort in a read, thank you!
you, at your subtle Best
dear Poet
May 23rd, 2022 04:05
For Ever Aint Never That Far Away
L. B. Mek said:
a thread of fate, separating
between, those
being born in a war zone
and those
being born in peaceful, moments..
Personally, I think the latter
is the crueller, fate
as we get to glimpse, a perhaps
of peace
that can never be sustained..
so from the beginning
of humanity\'s, fantastic Tales
and Cain and Abel\'s
inability to cohabitate, war
has ever
and I fear, will ever
exist, to remind us:
\'that here, now and forever
are not far away,\'
So we too, go-on
celebrating those heroes
who gifted us, a chance
and doing our Best
then simply let, Fate
judge the rest...
(just a such a poignant read
when you think
that so many, are living this reality
in the now, we lucky few
take for granted...)
Brilliant!
dear Poet, supreme
thank you!
May 23rd, 2022 04:00
L. B. Mek said:
a thread of fate, separating
between, those
being born in a war zone
and those
being born in peaceful, moments..
Personally, I think the latter
is the crueller, fate
as we get to glimpse, a perhaps
of peace
that can never be sustained..
so from the beginning
of humanity\'s, fantastic Tales
and Cain and Abel\'s
inability to cohabitate, war
has ever
and I fear, will ever
exist, to remind us:
\'that here, now and forever
are not far away,\'
So we too, go-on
celebrating those heroes
who gifted us, a chance
and doing our Best
then simply let, Fate
judge the rest...
(just a such a poignant read
when you think
that so many, are living this reality
in the now, we lucky few
take for granted...)
Brilliant!
dear Poet, supreme
thank you!
May 23rd, 2022 04:00
Fingers Crossed
L. B. Mek said:
a good luck charm, in a poem
never occurred to me
to imbue something tangible
in my scribbles
(an \'omamori\' in a poem)
as-ever
I read and learn, Hyung
thank you!
May 23rd, 2022 03:46
L. B. Mek said:
a good luck charm, in a poem
never occurred to me
to imbue something tangible
in my scribbles
(an \'omamori\' in a poem)
as-ever
I read and learn, Hyung
thank you!
May 23rd, 2022 03:46
Remember Me She Said
Fay Slimm. said:
May Queen or no she certainly drew my attention to what she maybe - one lovely sunflower in a mess of tumbleweed needs to be remembered methinks mon ami...... another intriguing read and loved it.
May 21st, 2022 03:52
Fay Slimm. said:
May Queen or no she certainly drew my attention to what she maybe - one lovely sunflower in a mess of tumbleweed needs to be remembered methinks mon ami...... another intriguing read and loved it.
May 21st, 2022 03:52
Every Now and Then Maybe
Fay Slimm. said:
That sip once taken makes lovely memories that last a lifetime - - I know the feel of your lines here mon ami ..........................x
May 20th, 2022 01:38
Fay Slimm. said:
That sip once taken makes lovely memories that last a lifetime - - I know the feel of your lines here mon ami ..........................x
May 20th, 2022 01:38
Remember Me She Said
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Yep, I remember her among the hundreds of lassies I\'ve met! lol.
May 19th, 2022 01:34
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Yep, I remember her among the hundreds of lassies I\'ve met! lol.
May 19th, 2022 01:34
Remember Me She Said
spilleronsheet said:
The happiness and glow
The sunflowers carry around
And the aura of positivity
So well penned dear Neville
May 18th, 2022 13:39
spilleronsheet said:
The happiness and glow
The sunflowers carry around
And the aura of positivity
So well penned dear Neville
May 18th, 2022 13:39
Remember Me She Said
Bella Shepard said:
Gentle and flowing as I read it aloud. Lovely imagery of the sunflower against the backdrop of tumbleweed, such a wonderful visual. Beautiful words, beautiful poem!
May 18th, 2022 13:33
Bella Shepard said:
Gentle and flowing as I read it aloud. Lovely imagery of the sunflower against the backdrop of tumbleweed, such a wonderful visual. Beautiful words, beautiful poem!
May 18th, 2022 13:33
For Ever Aint Never That Far Away
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always do the best we can in life Neville and life will do its best for us.
Andy
May 17th, 2022 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always do the best we can in life Neville and life will do its best for us.
Andy
May 17th, 2022 00:33
For Ever Aint Never That Far Away
Rozina said:
This is true for life. Your sergeant major was spot on.
May 16th, 2022 23:54
Rozina said:
This is true for life. Your sergeant major was spot on.
May 16th, 2022 23:54
For Ever Aint Never That Far Away
Christina8 said:
Very good write Neville.......enjoyed the read!! I really liked the third stanza, so true it is!
May 16th, 2022 10:04
Christina8 said:
Very good write Neville.......enjoyed the read!! I really liked the third stanza, so true it is!
May 16th, 2022 10:04
Fingers Crossed
Goldfinch60 said:
May that good luck be with us forever Neville.
Andy
May 16th, 2022 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
May that good luck be with us forever Neville.
Andy
May 16th, 2022 00:23
Fingers Crossed
Rozina said:
Thank you. And all the very best of luck to you too Neville.
Now there are local witch doctors here (called bomoh) some of whom also practise black magic....
May 15th, 2022 17:57
Rozina said:
Thank you. And all the very best of luck to you too Neville.
Now there are local witch doctors here (called bomoh) some of whom also practise black magic....
May 15th, 2022 17:57
Fingers Crossed
orchidee said:
But not one magpie on its own? \'One for sorrow, two for joy.....\'
Erm good wishes, maybe luck too, but I don\'t believe in it. lol.
You seen our black cat? Or the tabby one? We have two cats. Ahhh!
The black one said to me: \'Never mind if I cross your path or not for luck where\'s me grub?\' A talking cat now! lol
May 15th, 2022 09:41
orchidee said:
But not one magpie on its own? \'One for sorrow, two for joy.....\'
Erm good wishes, maybe luck too, but I don\'t believe in it. lol.
You seen our black cat? Or the tabby one? We have two cats. Ahhh!
The black one said to me: \'Never mind if I cross your path or not for luck where\'s me grub?\' A talking cat now! lol
May 15th, 2022 09:41
Fingers Crossed
Christina8 said:
very clever write, N. Hopefully it will bring me good luck today! C
May 15th, 2022 09:35
Christina8 said:
very clever write, N. Hopefully it will bring me good luck today! C
May 15th, 2022 09:35
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