Comments received on poems by Neville
Fish Supper
Goldfinch60 said:
There is nothing quite like the taste of freshly caught fish. I used to go fishing and one day a friend and I went out in his boat and we were four miles out to sea from Folkstone and we caught thirteen cod that day, our street had a magnificent meal that evening.
Andy
May 3rd, 2022 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
There is nothing quite like the taste of freshly caught fish. I used to go fishing and one day a friend and I went out in his boat and we were four miles out to sea from Folkstone and we caught thirteen cod that day, our street had a magnificent meal that evening.
Andy
May 3rd, 2022 01:02
Fish Supper
Rozina said:
Such an enjoyable tale Neville. I also love fish and chips, thank you!
May 2nd, 2022 19:16
Rozina said:
Such an enjoyable tale Neville. I also love fish and chips, thank you!
May 2nd, 2022 19:16
Fish Supper
MendedFences27 said:
Now that you taught me how, I think I\'ll go fishing. This poem was as colorful and descriptive as any I\'ve read recently. I swear I felt the sea breeze and smelt the salt air. The tale itself drove me to the final line, in which I found another suggestion for a title, \"Hunger No More.\" Loved this one. - Phil A.
May 2nd, 2022 14:36
MendedFences27 said:
Now that you taught me how, I think I\'ll go fishing. This poem was as colorful and descriptive as any I\'ve read recently. I swear I felt the sea breeze and smelt the salt air. The tale itself drove me to the final line, in which I found another suggestion for a title, \"Hunger No More.\" Loved this one. - Phil A.
May 2nd, 2022 14:36
Fish Supper
Rocky Lagou said:
This is great! That transition from \"no responsibility,\" to learning how to deal with the world. Amazing. I\'d say I like \"Teach A Man To Fish\" better because it encapsulates the overall message of the poem, but it\'s truly up to you. Great nonetheless!
May 2nd, 2022 09:28
Rocky Lagou said:
This is great! That transition from \"no responsibility,\" to learning how to deal with the world. Amazing. I\'d say I like \"Teach A Man To Fish\" better because it encapsulates the overall message of the poem, but it\'s truly up to you. Great nonetheless!
May 2nd, 2022 09:28
Fish Supper
Christina8 said:
Excellent! I myself fish a lot and my favorite is lake perch, not that ocean perch......I don\'t like fish made with a \"fishy\" flavor. people don\'t usually know what I mean when I say that......great write!!
May 2nd, 2022 08:16
Christina8 said:
Excellent! I myself fish a lot and my favorite is lake perch, not that ocean perch......I don\'t like fish made with a \"fishy\" flavor. people don\'t usually know what I mean when I say that......great write!!
May 2nd, 2022 08:16
Fish Supper
spilleronsheet said:
What a beautiful account
Never fished one, but I do like to eat some….
I guess I like the tittle as it is…it makes me hungry though
May 2nd, 2022 07:37
spilleronsheet said:
What a beautiful account
Never fished one, but I do like to eat some….
I guess I like the tittle as it is…it makes me hungry though
May 2nd, 2022 07:37
Fish Supper
L. B. Mek said:
\'Then fix a point lad, tween
horizon and tip
of the mast, of Yours Truly ..
And when
she returns, place your
hook-bait,
your trace and lead sinker
tightly, but ever so
lightly\'..
How about: \'Teaching\'s of a Fish Supper\'
my cherished Poet supreme!!!
lol
between dear fay\'s Whale portrayal
and your poetic Fishing escapades..
I think I\'m all maritime
in me thoughts for dinner
today
\'Fish n Chips\', it is then!
(thanks, that\'s one choice made for the day
just the other thousand to get through...
lol)
May 2nd, 2022 06:27
L. B. Mek said:
\'Then fix a point lad, tween
horizon and tip
of the mast, of Yours Truly ..
And when
she returns, place your
hook-bait,
your trace and lead sinker
tightly, but ever so
lightly\'..
How about: \'Teaching\'s of a Fish Supper\'
my cherished Poet supreme!!!
lol
between dear fay\'s Whale portrayal
and your poetic Fishing escapades..
I think I\'m all maritime
in me thoughts for dinner
today
\'Fish n Chips\', it is then!
(thanks, that\'s one choice made for the day
just the other thousand to get through...
lol)
May 2nd, 2022 06:27
Fish Supper
dusk arising said:
Though I be of Cornish line all this be foreign to me, but it do make a good tale sir, so it does.
May 2nd, 2022 05:11
dusk arising said:
Though I be of Cornish line all this be foreign to me, but it do make a good tale sir, so it does.
May 2nd, 2022 05:11
Fish Supper
Fay Slimm. said:
This little gem reminds me most of the times spent bass-fishing from coastal shores near here Nev. - I was the digger of lug. on many a fishing night. Thanks for a look back write of great times with this sigh of a read ...........x
May 2nd, 2022 04:41
Fay Slimm. said:
This little gem reminds me most of the times spent bass-fishing from coastal shores near here Nev. - I was the digger of lug. on many a fishing night. Thanks for a look back write of great times with this sigh of a read ...........x
May 2nd, 2022 04:41
Upon Reflections Shattered
Goldfinch60 said:
Only look forward, that\'s where all new life is waiting and it will be wonderful.
Andy
May 2nd, 2022 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Only look forward, that\'s where all new life is waiting and it will be wonderful.
Andy
May 2nd, 2022 00:47
Upon Reflections Shattered
MendedFences27 said:
Let\'s not get angry at the mirror and crack it \"well and truly,\" just turn out the light.
A nice little \"reflection\" on the mystery of mirrors. - Phil A.
(see PM)
May 1st, 2022 19:21
MendedFences27 said:
Let\'s not get angry at the mirror and crack it \"well and truly,\" just turn out the light.
A nice little \"reflection\" on the mystery of mirrors. - Phil A.
(see PM)
May 1st, 2022 19:21
Upon Reflections Shattered
Rozina said:
These days I just have to look at a mirror and it starts to crack up. Great meaning in those lines.
May 1st, 2022 18:27
Rozina said:
These days I just have to look at a mirror and it starts to crack up. Great meaning in those lines.
May 1st, 2022 18:27
Upon Reflections Shattered
Michael Edwards said:
Mirrors - never look back - the rear side doesn\'t reflect. Nice one Neville.
May 1st, 2022 08:25
Michael Edwards said:
Mirrors - never look back - the rear side doesn\'t reflect. Nice one Neville.
May 1st, 2022 08:25
Upon Reflections Shattered
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Short yet meaningful. Good one Neville
May 1st, 2022 07:07
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Short yet meaningful. Good one Neville
May 1st, 2022 07:07
Upon Reflections Shattered
dusk arising said:
By \'eck what a cracker Neville. Always been a fan of the sucinct and this ones a beaut. Bound for my favourites.
May 1st, 2022 06:29
dusk arising said:
By \'eck what a cracker Neville. Always been a fan of the sucinct and this ones a beaut. Bound for my favourites.
May 1st, 2022 06:29
Upon Reflections Shattered
spilleronsheet said:
Life and mirror
Relationships like mirror
Hope cracks don’t appear
Or heart like mirror shall shatter
Lovely lines dear Neville….
May 1st, 2022 05:05
spilleronsheet said:
Life and mirror
Relationships like mirror
Hope cracks don’t appear
Or heart like mirror shall shatter
Lovely lines dear Neville….
May 1st, 2022 05:05
Upon Reflections Shattered
orchidee said:
If the mirror don\'t crack, will it be seven years good luck? I must know these things, even though I don\'t believe in \'luck\'. It\'s \'sad\' of me, I know. lol.
May 1st, 2022 04:56
orchidee said:
If the mirror don\'t crack, will it be seven years good luck? I must know these things, even though I don\'t believe in \'luck\'. It\'s \'sad\' of me, I know. lol.
May 1st, 2022 04:56
Upon Reflections Shattered
Fay Slimm. said:
Mirrors are truly attractive to poets world-over - you aptly show on reflection that cracks distort every look-back - I must say when mine do that I chuck em away........x
May 1st, 2022 04:53
Fay Slimm. said:
Mirrors are truly attractive to poets world-over - you aptly show on reflection that cracks distort every look-back - I must say when mine do that I chuck em away........x
May 1st, 2022 04:53
Upon Reflections Shattered
Paul Bell said:
The mirror is such a dangerous implement, always looking at your worse side.
May 1st, 2022 04:39
Paul Bell said:
The mirror is such a dangerous implement, always looking at your worse side.
May 1st, 2022 04:39
Like Some Old Discarded Stocking
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Neville.
I read an article once where a guy said that he was so please to be in around in the six months where mini-skirts had come into fashion in the 1960s but stockings had not been replaces by tights. LOL
Andy
May 1st, 2022 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Neville.
I read an article once where a guy said that he was so please to be in around in the six months where mini-skirts had come into fashion in the 1960s but stockings had not been replaces by tights. LOL
Andy
May 1st, 2022 00:49
Like Some Old Discarded Stocking
Rozina said:
Haha, after I googled \'doxy\', I got it!
April 30th, 2022 17:43
Rozina said:
Haha, after I googled \'doxy\', I got it!
April 30th, 2022 17:43
Like Some Old Discarded Stocking
MendedFences27 said:
Careful! You may start a fashion trend. If life serves you lemons... make lemonade. Coping with the downside of life is what I extracted from this humorous poem.
Inform me - What the hell is a doxy?
Still caring about the opinion of \"those that give a damn,\" she would \"make a perfect matching pair..\" Still resilient no matter the circumstance. Definitely \"worth her salt.\" Most interesting view on life, and in so few words. - Phil A.
April 30th, 2022 16:38
MendedFences27 said:
Careful! You may start a fashion trend. If life serves you lemons... make lemonade. Coping with the downside of life is what I extracted from this humorous poem.
Inform me - What the hell is a doxy?
Still caring about the opinion of \"those that give a damn,\" she would \"make a perfect matching pair..\" Still resilient no matter the circumstance. Definitely \"worth her salt.\" Most interesting view on life, and in so few words. - Phil A.
April 30th, 2022 16:38
Like Some Old Discarded Stocking
Accidental Poet said:
Well if OCD has any say in the matter, a matching pair is worth a salt. Or CDO as it should be. 😆
April 30th, 2022 10:17
Accidental Poet said:
Well if OCD has any say in the matter, a matching pair is worth a salt. Or CDO as it should be. 😆
April 30th, 2022 10:17
Like Some Old Discarded Stocking
SureshG said:
That would surely be trendy, and not a stare, stir or commotion as she passes by…..
Delightfully light and amusing….
April 30th, 2022 08:17
SureshG said:
That would surely be trendy, and not a stare, stir or commotion as she passes by…..
Delightfully light and amusing….
April 30th, 2022 08:17
Like Some Old Discarded Stocking
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha -- - you got me there at the finish with that singularly clever plural ---- - - but point taken Nev. re. the old dear who like a holed stocking sits in all weathers and is almost invisible to those who don\'t want to see.
April 30th, 2022 08:16
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha -- - you got me there at the finish with that singularly clever plural ---- - - but point taken Nev. re. the old dear who like a holed stocking sits in all weathers and is almost invisible to those who don\'t want to see.
April 30th, 2022 08:16
Like Some Old Discarded Stocking
Paul Bell said:
Like some old discarded sock.
Is that not a great saying.
Mind you, the hole in it speaks volumes.
April 30th, 2022 06:41
Paul Bell said:
Like some old discarded sock.
Is that not a great saying.
Mind you, the hole in it speaks volumes.
April 30th, 2022 06:41
Like Some Old Discarded Stocking
Distant View said:
A quaint and amusing poem - and a delight to read!
April 30th, 2022 06:15
Distant View said:
A quaint and amusing poem - and a delight to read!
April 30th, 2022 06:15
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