Comments received on poems by Neville
The Taking of Innocence
Goldfinch60 said:
That too makes me angry, how anybody can hurt anybody else is such a dreadful thing in my mind.
Andy
December 22nd, 2021 16:21
Goldfinch60 said:
That too makes me angry, how anybody can hurt anybody else is such a dreadful thing in my mind.
Andy
December 22nd, 2021 16:21
The Taking of Innocence
orchidee said:
If it was not such a serious theme - it\'s my fault!
My version is: I made her kiss me, nothing more. Well I had just been eating garlic! lol.
December 22nd, 2021 06:54
orchidee said:
If it was not such a serious theme - it\'s my fault!
My version is: I made her kiss me, nothing more. Well I had just been eating garlic! lol.
December 22nd, 2021 06:54
The Taking of Innocence
dusk arising said:
I share your anger on this subject. Not least for the reputation it casts upon the innocent male majority. But of course mainly anger on behalf of the violated.
December 22nd, 2021 06:19
dusk arising said:
I share your anger on this subject. Not least for the reputation it casts upon the innocent male majority. But of course mainly anger on behalf of the violated.
December 22nd, 2021 06:19
The Taking of Innocence
Fay Slimm. said:
Rape would make a saint angry - this write needs reading by a far larger audience and taking a lesson from - -- into my list for further reference...............x
December 22nd, 2021 05:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Rape would make a saint angry - this write needs reading by a far larger audience and taking a lesson from - -- into my list for further reference...............x
December 22nd, 2021 05:50
Quarry
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Neville, the only traps I see are the hoops I run a croquet ball through. LOL
Andy
December 22nd, 2021 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Neville, the only traps I see are the hoops I run a croquet ball through. LOL
Andy
December 22nd, 2021 01:43
Signing Out
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A carving out of the self. This leaves a mark on any reader/writer. When one has come into their own and became their own writing perhaps? Very deep, very profound sir.
December 21st, 2021 15:20
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A carving out of the self. This leaves a mark on any reader/writer. When one has come into their own and became their own writing perhaps? Very deep, very profound sir.
December 21st, 2021 15:20
Quarry
Fay Slimm. said:
Can see you know the inns and the out of the poaching game Nev. - - shall you be out early for Xmas catches this year to serve on poor homeless tables- - if so will join ya as cook...............x
December 21st, 2021 09:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Can see you know the inns and the out of the poaching game Nev. - - shall you be out early for Xmas catches this year to serve on poor homeless tables- - if so will join ya as cook...............x
December 21st, 2021 09:15
Quarry
dusk arising said:
I did a practice run for my roast potatoes today.... mmmm lufferly they was too. But I\'m buggered if i\'m going to go out setting traps for my christmas meal to catch..... oh no sir. These be tymes of yon olde Morrisons doorsteppe delivery dontcha know....... stay away from they plague ridden types and heathen politicians aaaarrrrr
December 21st, 2021 06:46
dusk arising said:
I did a practice run for my roast potatoes today.... mmmm lufferly they was too. But I\'m buggered if i\'m going to go out setting traps for my christmas meal to catch..... oh no sir. These be tymes of yon olde Morrisons doorsteppe delivery dontcha know....... stay away from they plague ridden types and heathen politicians aaaarrrrr
December 21st, 2021 06:46
Quarry
L. B. Mek said:
got eggnog\'s on me mind
but me cream is all askew
so I\'ll borrow Neville\'s advice
and brew his recipe anew, \'yey!\'
a horse hair for cinnamon stick
a lengthy twine for sugar cane
a baited trap for my Quarry
a broken twig and wire
to boarder Boris, in his
Quarantine borders... (for once)
all served
with a side of poached eggs
in Rum...
(thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply, my friend
great Fun!)
December 21st, 2021 06:31
L. B. Mek said:
got eggnog\'s on me mind
but me cream is all askew
so I\'ll borrow Neville\'s advice
and brew his recipe anew, \'yey!\'
a horse hair for cinnamon stick
a lengthy twine for sugar cane
a baited trap for my Quarry
a broken twig and wire
to boarder Boris, in his
Quarantine borders... (for once)
all served
with a side of poached eggs
in Rum...
(thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply, my friend
great Fun!)
December 21st, 2021 06:31
Quarry
orchidee said:
In one sense it sounds like a witches brew. Got any eye of newt? Aww, why all these one-eyed newts going about? Apologies to newts!
December 21st, 2021 05:10
orchidee said:
In one sense it sounds like a witches brew. Got any eye of newt? Aww, why all these one-eyed newts going about? Apologies to newts!
December 21st, 2021 05:10
Signing Out
L. B. Mek said:
Poesy, our beloved
\'what\'s in a muse
but for a flicker, lullaby
from wings, of a butterfly\'
sincerity\'s inked words
have a tendency to fly...
(simply Brilliant, dear Poet
I think I break-up with my muse
every afternoon, and wake-up
at 3am, under that judgemental
moonlight gaze
to make-up, scribbling
like it\'s my very fist time...)
December 21st, 2021 04:29
L. B. Mek said:
Poesy, our beloved
\'what\'s in a muse
but for a flicker, lullaby
from wings, of a butterfly\'
sincerity\'s inked words
have a tendency to fly...
(simply Brilliant, dear Poet
I think I break-up with my muse
every afternoon, and wake-up
at 3am, under that judgemental
moonlight gaze
to make-up, scribbling
like it\'s my very fist time...)
December 21st, 2021 04:29
Signing Out
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Neville, your Muse is only having a nap and will awake very soon.
Andy
December 21st, 2021 02:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Neville, your Muse is only having a nap and will awake very soon.
Andy
December 21st, 2021 02:35
Signing Out
Coyote said:
Do not fret my friend, the muse wanders but never goes too far. It does like to return at the most inconvenient of times though. Excellent write🙂
December 21st, 2021 00:49
Coyote said:
Do not fret my friend, the muse wanders but never goes too far. It does like to return at the most inconvenient of times though. Excellent write🙂
December 21st, 2021 00:49
Signing Out
spilleronsheet said:
It’s hard to say that your muse is gone
Who can stay to hide the shine from sun
So who can stop praising the words you weave
A man with less words but so much emotions
Where each word is engulfed with waves of emotions and feels
But yes often I wonder if the muse is gone, what shall happen to me
For so long it wasn’t there
Now if it goes I can’t seem to find purpose then
Your poetry never lacks the gleam
The sheen you carry with your pen
The mightier it is
Your poetry always a treasure dear Neville
December 21st, 2021 00:03
spilleronsheet said:
It’s hard to say that your muse is gone
Who can stay to hide the shine from sun
So who can stop praising the words you weave
A man with less words but so much emotions
Where each word is engulfed with waves of emotions and feels
But yes often I wonder if the muse is gone, what shall happen to me
For so long it wasn’t there
Now if it goes I can’t seem to find purpose then
Your poetry never lacks the gleam
The sheen you carry with your pen
The mightier it is
Your poetry always a treasure dear Neville
December 21st, 2021 00:03
Signing Out
Rozina said:
It’s all there! It’s holiday season during Christmas. Have a safe and Merry Christmas.
December 20th, 2021 22:16
Rozina said:
It’s all there! It’s holiday season during Christmas. Have a safe and Merry Christmas.
December 20th, 2021 22:16
Signing Out
Fay Slimm. said:
How could a muse forsake thee who weaves words so endearingly wrapped for the pleasure of readers - - be not broken by dottings and crossing of T\'s dearling friend for she who fell madly in love with your kind of wordlings will badly miss inspiring romantic lines of intrigue that only you write - - after a wee while of rest methinks her allure will infuse your scribing again for believe me she will allow no signing out permanently for a poet with such rich artistic talent...............x
December 20th, 2021 15:54
Fay Slimm. said:
How could a muse forsake thee who weaves words so endearingly wrapped for the pleasure of readers - - be not broken by dottings and crossing of T\'s dearling friend for she who fell madly in love with your kind of wordlings will badly miss inspiring romantic lines of intrigue that only you write - - after a wee while of rest methinks her allure will infuse your scribing again for believe me she will allow no signing out permanently for a poet with such rich artistic talent...............x
December 20th, 2021 15:54
Signing Out
dusk arising said:
I had a visit from my muse last evening which was so refreshing. She\'s been away for far too long. Will she stay? I know not.
Your\'s on the other hand is playing games with us. Clearly from your excellent post today she is present and correct..... with her usual tease.
December 20th, 2021 15:16
dusk arising said:
I had a visit from my muse last evening which was so refreshing. She\'s been away for far too long. Will she stay? I know not.
Your\'s on the other hand is playing games with us. Clearly from your excellent post today she is present and correct..... with her usual tease.
December 20th, 2021 15:16
Signing Out
orchidee said:
It\'s my fault! I was singing on this site. It killed off the muse. How can anyone be inspired if I\'m singing?! lol.
We recognise ya. More poems soon, plz. :)
December 20th, 2021 14:49
orchidee said:
It\'s my fault! I was singing on this site. It killed off the muse. How can anyone be inspired if I\'m singing?! lol.
We recognise ya. More poems soon, plz. :)
December 20th, 2021 14:49
Signing Out
Caring dove said:
A good writing , Neville .. I like how you have expressed yourself .
sometimes we feel like we have lost a talent or come to the end of something … but maybe we just lose the inspiration to write . It may still be there within us , we just have to somehow find it again . Sadness happens and we feel like something changes in us
Thanks for your kind words in your comments
And happy Christmas to you too ))
December 20th, 2021 14:30
Caring dove said:
A good writing , Neville .. I like how you have expressed yourself .
sometimes we feel like we have lost a talent or come to the end of something … but maybe we just lose the inspiration to write . It may still be there within us , we just have to somehow find it again . Sadness happens and we feel like something changes in us
Thanks for your kind words in your comments
And happy Christmas to you too ))
December 20th, 2021 14:30
The Realisation of Probability
SureshG said:
What were the probabilities that we’d still be here, through the Cold War, the Hippie Generation, the Digital Apocalypse, the multitude of Financial calamities, the scare of many a Pandemic, and yet we are, but when will the realization hit us.
Thanks for your astute warning
December 17th, 2021 19:12
SureshG said:
What were the probabilities that we’d still be here, through the Cold War, the Hippie Generation, the Digital Apocalypse, the multitude of Financial calamities, the scare of many a Pandemic, and yet we are, but when will the realization hit us.
Thanks for your astute warning
December 17th, 2021 19:12
The Realisation of Probability
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Neville - who ever would have imagined.
Andy
December 17th, 2021 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Neville - who ever would have imagined.
Andy
December 17th, 2021 01:52
The Realisation of Probability
Rozina said:
The mind boggles at what\'s next around the corner. We\'ll persevere and we\'ll get through. Take care and stay safe. Thank you for sharing.
December 16th, 2021 20:39
Rozina said:
The mind boggles at what\'s next around the corner. We\'ll persevere and we\'ll get through. Take care and stay safe. Thank you for sharing.
December 16th, 2021 20:39
The Realisation of Probability
spilleronsheet said:
The poetry laces with reality
Can’t deny what it speaks
The harsh reality
Humanity’s facing
Got the vaccine, got the mask
But who knows when the lingering virus shall attack?
Spoken the truth with a poetry
The words speak the iron truth dear Neville
December 16th, 2021 13:03
spilleronsheet said:
The poetry laces with reality
Can’t deny what it speaks
The harsh reality
Humanity’s facing
Got the vaccine, got the mask
But who knows when the lingering virus shall attack?
Spoken the truth with a poetry
The words speak the iron truth dear Neville
December 16th, 2021 13:03
The Realisation of Probability
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - Who says we\'re all out of they pheromones mon ami ? - - - - well despite Covid I beg to differ \'cos there\'s plenty in me................x
December 16th, 2021 11:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - Who says we\'re all out of they pheromones mon ami ? - - - - well despite Covid I beg to differ \'cos there\'s plenty in me................x
December 16th, 2021 11:46
The Realisation of Probability
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Hope it\'s not as my singing: \'Prognosis bad; no chance of improvement whatsoever.\'
Me singing tutor says \'tee hee\' and laughs up his sleeve, telling me I\'m getting better and will only need another 9,485 lessons!
December 16th, 2021 07:18
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Hope it\'s not as my singing: \'Prognosis bad; no chance of improvement whatsoever.\'
Me singing tutor says \'tee hee\' and laughs up his sleeve, telling me I\'m getting better and will only need another 9,485 lessons!
December 16th, 2021 07:18
The Realisation of Probability
L. B. Mek said:
when opening the window
and washing your hands
is more of an antivirus
than any vaccine, and we still
can\'t prevent
people from thinking a little jab means, they can act
however irresponsibly they want...
I think the probability factor in your title, says it all dear Poet
Merry Christmas and a happy New year
to you and all your loved ones, my friend
stay safe
December 16th, 2021 06:47
L. B. Mek said:
when opening the window
and washing your hands
is more of an antivirus
than any vaccine, and we still
can\'t prevent
people from thinking a little jab means, they can act
however irresponsibly they want...
I think the probability factor in your title, says it all dear Poet
Merry Christmas and a happy New year
to you and all your loved ones, my friend
stay safe
December 16th, 2021 06:47
No Longer in The Making
L. B. Mek said:
lookup
\'Sovereign by Boadicea the Victorious\'
and realise
they got away, quite cheaply
some costs
hinder more than our reverie...
(a spear thrust, of poetry
sharp and right to the point
but with grace enough
to be delivered from a distance,
so we can curl away
from enduring too much
of the suffering, it brings back
so vividly aromatic..)
your poetry at its irresistibly
subtle best, my friend
December 16th, 2021 06:38
L. B. Mek said:
lookup
\'Sovereign by Boadicea the Victorious\'
and realise
they got away, quite cheaply
some costs
hinder more than our reverie...
(a spear thrust, of poetry
sharp and right to the point
but with grace enough
to be delivered from a distance,
so we can curl away
from enduring too much
of the suffering, it brings back
so vividly aromatic..)
your poetry at its irresistibly
subtle best, my friend
December 16th, 2021 06:38
The Realisation of Probability
dusk arising said:
Call me a rabbit if you will but i have never had time for \"Ferret moans\".
Those who refuse to accept the reality of covid and take necessary precautions are a selfish insult to society .... a threat to us all and they deserve no place in our communities.
December 16th, 2021 05:16
dusk arising said:
Call me a rabbit if you will but i have never had time for \"Ferret moans\".
Those who refuse to accept the reality of covid and take necessary precautions are a selfish insult to society .... a threat to us all and they deserve no place in our communities.
December 16th, 2021 05:16
The Realisation of Probability
Michael Edwards said:
A timely write and who would have imagined there are some still denying
the obvious. As for me I\'m completely out of pheromones - or it could be my age.
December 16th, 2021 05:09
Michael Edwards said:
A timely write and who would have imagined there are some still denying
the obvious. As for me I\'m completely out of pheromones - or it could be my age.
December 16th, 2021 05:09
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