Comments received on poems by Neville
Bilge
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Neville, but we still hear those long lost poets.
Andy
December 7th, 2021 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Neville, but we still hear those long lost poets.
Andy
December 7th, 2021 01:41
Bilge
SureshG said:
Reminds me of the stories I heard of the seafarers of eons past, who were entertained by the poets on their torturous voyages, many meeting their ghostly ends, so brought to life by your pen
December 6th, 2021 15:38
SureshG said:
Reminds me of the stories I heard of the seafarers of eons past, who were entertained by the poets on their torturous voyages, many meeting their ghostly ends, so brought to life by your pen
December 6th, 2021 15:38
Bilge
Paul Bell said:
Lonely place to die, the sea.
You can see why they\'re crying when no hope exists and the ghosts scream. Haunting write this one.
December 6th, 2021 11:17
Paul Bell said:
Lonely place to die, the sea.
You can see why they\'re crying when no hope exists and the ghosts scream. Haunting write this one.
December 6th, 2021 11:17
Bilge
Draven said:
Wow, that is quite haunting. Some nice thoughts and imagery there!
December 6th, 2021 09:34
Draven said:
Wow, that is quite haunting. Some nice thoughts and imagery there!
December 6th, 2021 09:34
Bilge
Fay Slimm. said:
Some make a habit of painting those darkly who fail expectations - sad but true poetic lovers of long ago now ghosts indeed will line all the decks of any She so disposed - - - maybe ......x
December 6th, 2021 07:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Some make a habit of painting those darkly who fail expectations - sad but true poetic lovers of long ago now ghosts indeed will line all the decks of any She so disposed - - - maybe ......x
December 6th, 2021 07:01
Bilge
L. B. Mek said:
\'flimsy she might sail ..
Yet in her wake, I thought I heard
sad shanty songs\'..
back in days, when ships
were warded off evil spirits
by tattooing a lady\'s
name or sculpted image
at their bow,
now we dwell in progress
that no longer deals in spirits
and so no more fortune\'s, ladies
to adorn our ships
or hopes;
just curses of luck
be it fleeting good
or tolerated bad, that lingers...
(love how brilliantly you captured
that whole melancholic feel
and seafarer characterisation
in such few words)
showcasing exemplary Brevity in Poetry
a masterful write, dear Poet
and you write it all so unassumingly accessible
makes us all think, its so simple
till we try to emulate and fail, lol
December 6th, 2021 06:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'flimsy she might sail ..
Yet in her wake, I thought I heard
sad shanty songs\'..
back in days, when ships
were warded off evil spirits
by tattooing a lady\'s
name or sculpted image
at their bow,
now we dwell in progress
that no longer deals in spirits
and so no more fortune\'s, ladies
to adorn our ships
or hopes;
just curses of luck
be it fleeting good
or tolerated bad, that lingers...
(love how brilliantly you captured
that whole melancholic feel
and seafarer characterisation
in such few words)
showcasing exemplary Brevity in Poetry
a masterful write, dear Poet
and you write it all so unassumingly accessible
makes us all think, its so simple
till we try to emulate and fail, lol
December 6th, 2021 06:48
Bilge
spilleronsheet said:
Tears spoke by
As passing years of time
Those words shall remain
So remorseful the sayer passed away
Beautiful Neville
Short poetry of yours
Sheds so many shades
December 6th, 2021 06:06
spilleronsheet said:
Tears spoke by
As passing years of time
Those words shall remain
So remorseful the sayer passed away
Beautiful Neville
Short poetry of yours
Sheds so many shades
December 6th, 2021 06:06
Bilge
Caring dove said:
Sad writing . Nicely expressed . To hear the voice of poets … floating in the breeze but no longer here , … sad
December 6th, 2021 05:53
Caring dove said:
Sad writing . Nicely expressed . To hear the voice of poets … floating in the breeze but no longer here , … sad
December 6th, 2021 05:53
Something in the Air Maybe
Goldfinch60 said:
There may well be something in the air Neville and all will be well again.
Andy
December 6th, 2021 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
There may well be something in the air Neville and all will be well again.
Andy
December 6th, 2021 01:51
Something in the Air Maybe
Fay Slimm. said:
Something that scents the air often brings someone special to mind and so do your words dear Nev. - - - they abound with tender nostalgia and times that can never return --a sigh of a read my friend..............x
December 5th, 2021 16:27
Fay Slimm. said:
Something that scents the air often brings someone special to mind and so do your words dear Nev. - - - they abound with tender nostalgia and times that can never return --a sigh of a read my friend..............x
December 5th, 2021 16:27
Something in the Air Maybe
Michael Edwards said:
When I click on a posting here on MPS there are many where I give up and don\'t get beyond the first few lines - never the case with your postings - - another gem of a write.
December 5th, 2021 12:54
Michael Edwards said:
When I click on a posting here on MPS there are many where I give up and don\'t get beyond the first few lines - never the case with your postings - - another gem of a write.
December 5th, 2021 12:54
Something in the Air Maybe
SureshG said:
One wouldn’t recall, nor could they be stirred if those memories hadn’t been stored, as you have so lovingly recited
December 5th, 2021 08:47
SureshG said:
One wouldn’t recall, nor could they be stirred if those memories hadn’t been stored, as you have so lovingly recited
December 5th, 2021 08:47
Something in the Air Maybe
Lorna said:
Wish I could say you\'ll stop feeling sad but you probably won\'t.... but then again, every time you think of her she is alive again.
December 5th, 2021 08:27
Lorna said:
Wish I could say you\'ll stop feeling sad but you probably won\'t.... but then again, every time you think of her she is alive again.
December 5th, 2021 08:27
Something in the Air Maybe
Draven said:
This is beautiful. My heart goes out to you.
December 5th, 2021 06:45
Draven said:
This is beautiful. My heart goes out to you.
December 5th, 2021 06:45
Something in the Air Maybe
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Ohh, I can\'t eat those figs though. They.......... you know! Hint: baked beans, but I\'m Ok with them.
December 5th, 2021 05:29
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Ohh, I can\'t eat those figs though. They.......... you know! Hint: baked beans, but I\'m Ok with them.
December 5th, 2021 05:29
Something in the Air Maybe
Paul Bell said:
Always find it doesn\'t matter how people come back to you, it\'s just nice they pop back to say hello.
December 5th, 2021 05:16
Paul Bell said:
Always find it doesn\'t matter how people come back to you, it\'s just nice they pop back to say hello.
December 5th, 2021 05:16
Something in the Air Maybe
Caring dove said:
Beautiful poem , tho very sad . Nice choice of words , and nice flow )
December 5th, 2021 05:12
Caring dove said:
Beautiful poem , tho very sad . Nice choice of words , and nice flow )
December 5th, 2021 05:12
My Lady is More Than a Poem
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem about your lady, I feel the same about mine even now.
Andy
December 4th, 2021 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem about your lady, I feel the same about mine even now.
Andy
December 4th, 2021 02:22
My Lady is More Than a Poem
Doggerel Dave said:
So be it sweetheart or vessel you have never the less described your own piece there, Nev - \'superbly crafted\'.
December 3rd, 2021 19:09
Doggerel Dave said:
So be it sweetheart or vessel you have never the less described your own piece there, Nev - \'superbly crafted\'.
December 3rd, 2021 19:09
My Lady is More Than a Poem
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Neville.
I write about my wife often.
December 3rd, 2021 16:45
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Neville.
I write about my wife often.
December 3rd, 2021 16:45
My Lady is More Than a Poem
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A ‘keeper’ indeed…………
‘to cherish, to respect and admire ..
Regardless, of distance or time ..’
as is your beautifully penned poem which I enjoyed reading this fine not.
Kudos 👏🏻👏🏻
Laura🌻
December 3rd, 2021 11:54
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A ‘keeper’ indeed…………
‘to cherish, to respect and admire ..
Regardless, of distance or time ..’
as is your beautifully penned poem which I enjoyed reading this fine not.
Kudos 👏🏻👏🏻
Laura🌻
December 3rd, 2021 11:54
My Lady is More Than a Poem
SureshG said:
Much, much more than a poem, an artist palette, that streamlined yacht or anything nature can draft, except your words
December 3rd, 2021 11:36
SureshG said:
Much, much more than a poem, an artist palette, that streamlined yacht or anything nature can draft, except your words
December 3rd, 2021 11:36
My Lady is More Than a Poem
Dove said:
Tis beautiful poetry! Cherish her curves, while working on her canvas, Remember to sprinkle the colors of love!
December 3rd, 2021 10:50
Dove said:
Tis beautiful poetry! Cherish her curves, while working on her canvas, Remember to sprinkle the colors of love!
December 3rd, 2021 10:50
My Lady is More Than a Poem
Fay Slimm. said:
No doubt this is a verse to treasure for your sleek ship-shape lady mon ami - - a keeper indeed for my faves. and superbly written.............x
December 3rd, 2021 07:29
Fay Slimm. said:
No doubt this is a verse to treasure for your sleek ship-shape lady mon ami - - a keeper indeed for my faves. and superbly written.............x
December 3rd, 2021 07:29
My Lady is More Than a Poem
dusk arising said:
Shallow bottomed and responds well to wind eh? Does she crest the waves of your storm in midnight\'s haste and becalmed seduce you with a glance?
There\'s a vacant local mooring ready for her sister within sight.
December 3rd, 2021 07:00
dusk arising said:
Shallow bottomed and responds well to wind eh? Does she crest the waves of your storm in midnight\'s haste and becalmed seduce you with a glance?
There\'s a vacant local mooring ready for her sister within sight.
December 3rd, 2021 07:00
My Lady is More Than a Poem
L. B. Mek said:
no such thing
as wasted time or feelings
in the face: of true love
just, rewards to call upon
at a distance
or from right, by our side...
(anther brilliant write, dear Poet
so relatable,
words to dive within
so we may immerse ourselves
in all the memories
they help deliver)
December 3rd, 2021 06:37
L. B. Mek said:
no such thing
as wasted time or feelings
in the face: of true love
just, rewards to call upon
at a distance
or from right, by our side...
(anther brilliant write, dear Poet
so relatable,
words to dive within
so we may immerse ourselves
in all the memories
they help deliver)
December 3rd, 2021 06:37
My Lady is More Than a Poem
orchidee said:
Ahh, so I can\'t meet her? You\'ll keep her all to yourself. :)
December 3rd, 2021 04:55
orchidee said:
Ahh, so I can\'t meet her? You\'ll keep her all to yourself. :)
December 3rd, 2021 04:55
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