Comments received on poems by Neville
A Little Point of Fact Maybe
Jerry Reynolds said:
More than a good write, Neville.
Love, birds, and flying machines.
June 24th, 2021 14:03
Jerry Reynolds said:
More than a good write, Neville.
Love, birds, and flying machines.
June 24th, 2021 14:03
A Little Point of Fact Maybe
dusk arising said:
LOL I suppose that means i love the highway more than does the kittyhawk?
Or shall i read..... who loves sex more than the sexy?
Love and lovers....Scrubbing and scrubbers?
June 24th, 2021 09:10
dusk arising said:
LOL I suppose that means i love the highway more than does the kittyhawk?
Or shall i read..... who loves sex more than the sexy?
Love and lovers....Scrubbing and scrubbers?
June 24th, 2021 09:10
A Little Point of Fact Maybe
Fay Slimm. said:
Lovely Nev. - Romantic lines again from your tender pen methinks - -- stating that even sky\'s expanse cannot be more broad or deep than love which the heart feels for a much cherished lady. - - twas using the Olde English of \"thee\" did it for me - - - sighingly - - - Fay.........x
June 24th, 2021 08:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Lovely Nev. - Romantic lines again from your tender pen methinks - -- stating that even sky\'s expanse cannot be more broad or deep than love which the heart feels for a much cherished lady. - - twas using the Olde English of \"thee\" did it for me - - - sighingly - - - Fay.........x
June 24th, 2021 08:58
A Little Point of Fact Maybe
Saxon Crow said:
Nice. Can\'t beat a lapwing either. The spitfire of the sky.
Great poem Nev :)
June 24th, 2021 08:26
Saxon Crow said:
Nice. Can\'t beat a lapwing either. The spitfire of the sky.
Great poem Nev :)
June 24th, 2021 08:26
A Little Point of Fact Maybe
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
You met more lasses?!
June 24th, 2021 07:22
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
You met more lasses?!
June 24th, 2021 07:22
A Taste of Hunger
L. B. Mek said:
\'I live in a crooked world
of the most acute offset lines
and flawed masonry ..
So why should I pretend to
subscribe
to such technical lineography\'..
this is so, so deep my friend
it could anchor
an entire books worth of literary thread...
sheer articulated brevity of insightful brilliance!
in my humble opinion
(and sorry for my abrupt comment in your last poem
your words took me to my favourite metaphor of love
\'that red string of fate\';
a concept originally of Chinese origin, I think
but I love the Japanese wording, where I fatefully
came across it first)
June 24th, 2021 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
\'I live in a crooked world
of the most acute offset lines
and flawed masonry ..
So why should I pretend to
subscribe
to such technical lineography\'..
this is so, so deep my friend
it could anchor
an entire books worth of literary thread...
sheer articulated brevity of insightful brilliance!
in my humble opinion
(and sorry for my abrupt comment in your last poem
your words took me to my favourite metaphor of love
\'that red string of fate\';
a concept originally of Chinese origin, I think
but I love the Japanese wording, where I fatefully
came across it first)
June 24th, 2021 04:15
A Taste of Hunger
Goldfinch60 said:
One day that hurt and hunger will be satisfied and all will be good in your house.
Andy
June 24th, 2021 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
One day that hurt and hunger will be satisfied and all will be good in your house.
Andy
June 24th, 2021 00:50
A Taste of Hunger
Doggerel Dave said:
Hurt because you bust your head on the door lintel (them old houses) and the mice ate your tucker, Neville?
Great story - enjoyed the imagery.
June 23rd, 2021 20:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Hurt because you bust your head on the door lintel (them old houses) and the mice ate your tucker, Neville?
Great story - enjoyed the imagery.
June 23rd, 2021 20:13
A Taste of Hunger
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
A very interesting and intriguing read.
We may feed our hungerā¦
but never enough to sate it.
Lauraš»
June 23rd, 2021 16:53
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
A very interesting and intriguing read.
We may feed our hungerā¦
but never enough to sate it.
Lauraš»
June 23rd, 2021 16:53
A Taste of Hunger
dusk arising said:
Nothing is straight and linear when you are hurt and hungry for resolution.
Hurt and hungry stem from an unjust finale.
June 23rd, 2021 12:58
dusk arising said:
Nothing is straight and linear when you are hurt and hungry for resolution.
Hurt and hungry stem from an unjust finale.
June 23rd, 2021 12:58
A Taste of Hunger
Fay Slimm. said:
Dear Nev - Is this your old house defending itself I wonder - or maybe tis a metaphor expertly constructed Everyone\'s flawed and to be reminded that crooked is unacceptable can hurt thus
creating one of the worst hungers - - a powerful piece of potent answer and do hope it worked........x
June 23rd, 2021 12:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Dear Nev - Is this your old house defending itself I wonder - or maybe tis a metaphor expertly constructed Everyone\'s flawed and to be reminded that crooked is unacceptable can hurt thus
creating one of the worst hungers - - a powerful piece of potent answer and do hope it worked........x
June 23rd, 2021 12:57
A Taste of Hunger
SureshG said:
Maybe ācause Henry got all the courtesans and many wives, screwing up everybody elseās lives, thatās why you live in a crooked house and are always hungry - I know I would be
Loved the read
June 23rd, 2021 12:45
SureshG said:
Maybe ācause Henry got all the courtesans and many wives, screwing up everybody elseās lives, thatās why you live in a crooked house and are always hungry - I know I would be
Loved the read
June 23rd, 2021 12:45
A Taste of Hunger
Saxon Crow said:
Great title. Awesomely quirky house you live in!
June 23rd, 2021 12:18
Saxon Crow said:
Great title. Awesomely quirky house you live in!
June 23rd, 2021 12:18
Himawari - Sunflower
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
āHimawariā as in Girasoleā¦
Beautiful words for a beautiful flower.š»
I feel like Iāve been in that field of beauty that you so elegantly have penned with an abundance of metaphors.
Thank you for sharing your pen.
Lauraš»
June 23rd, 2021 12:17
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
āHimawariā as in Girasoleā¦
Beautiful words for a beautiful flower.š»
I feel like Iāve been in that field of beauty that you so elegantly have penned with an abundance of metaphors.
Thank you for sharing your pen.
Lauraš»
June 23rd, 2021 12:17
Himawari - Sunflower
Neville said:
another much appreciated visit, thank you L.B ...
right said Fred .. red thread doomed red thread .. :)
June 23rd, 2021 11:42
Neville said:
another much appreciated visit, thank you L.B ...
right said Fred .. red thread doomed red thread .. :)
June 23rd, 2021 11:42
Himawari - Sunflower
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Neville, may that light shine on us all forever.
Andy
June 23rd, 2021 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Neville, may that light shine on us all forever.
Andy
June 23rd, 2021 00:39
Himawari - Sunflower
Dove said:
Beautiful and a delight to read! Oh to see it bloom amongst the lovely flowers, metaphorically I imagine a handsome gents as yourself surrounded by beautiful women admiring from afar,
June 22nd, 2021 13:18
Dove said:
Beautiful and a delight to read! Oh to see it bloom amongst the lovely flowers, metaphorically I imagine a handsome gents as yourself surrounded by beautiful women admiring from afar,
June 22nd, 2021 13:18
Himawari - Sunflower
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Standing tall is a good start for sure.
June 22nd, 2021 12:36
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Standing tall is a good start for sure.
June 22nd, 2021 12:36
Himawari - Sunflower
dusk arising said:
Though no longer at the peak of his glorious self, he stood out from the well dressed crowd with a dignity unsurpassable.
June 22nd, 2021 07:39
dusk arising said:
Though no longer at the peak of his glorious self, he stood out from the well dressed crowd with a dignity unsurpassable.
June 22nd, 2021 07:39
Himawari - Sunflower
orchidee said:
A fine write Nev.
Metaphorical of a lass I should meet?! And can ya beat a bit of meta-wotsit?! lol.
June 22nd, 2021 06:03
orchidee said:
A fine write Nev.
Metaphorical of a lass I should meet?! And can ya beat a bit of meta-wotsit?! lol.
June 22nd, 2021 06:03
Himawari - Sunflower
L. B. Mek said:
\'Even with his head
turned slightly
to one side and held low
He shone
and brightly so ..
Erect, proud and golden
Taller
than his counterparts\'..
\'Straining
although, bereft of belief
to glimpse, however brief
that promised: Rose
of scarlet threaded fate\'..
赤ćē³ø éå½ć®čµ¤ćē³ø
June 22nd, 2021 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
\'Even with his head
turned slightly
to one side and held low
He shone
and brightly so ..
Erect, proud and golden
Taller
than his counterparts\'..
\'Straining
although, bereft of belief
to glimpse, however brief
that promised: Rose
of scarlet threaded fate\'..
赤ćē³ø éå½ć®čµ¤ćē³ø
June 22nd, 2021 04:51
Himawari - Sunflower
Fay Slimm. said:
Your fine words raise a metaphor in my fanciful mind Nev. To belong to that sunflower class eyes need to shine with confident beauty and heads grow taller with maybe looking where best to show care for those growing in violent surroundings - thanking you kindly cos even tiny short me feels a bit taller after thinking on your lines rich in simile...........x
June 22nd, 2021 03:19
Fay Slimm. said:
Your fine words raise a metaphor in my fanciful mind Nev. To belong to that sunflower class eyes need to shine with confident beauty and heads grow taller with maybe looking where best to show care for those growing in violent surroundings - thanking you kindly cos even tiny short me feels a bit taller after thinking on your lines rich in simile...........x
June 22nd, 2021 03:19
Pandemia
SureshG said:
ādepth of night skyā a phrase imagination to stir
Beautifully writ
June 22nd, 2021 01:48
SureshG said:
ādepth of night skyā a phrase imagination to stir
Beautifully writ
June 22nd, 2021 01:48
Pandemia
Accidental Poet said:
The night sky so mesmerizing as are your words N. ; )
June 21st, 2021 18:53
Accidental Poet said:
The night sky so mesmerizing as are your words N. ; )
June 21st, 2021 18:53
Pandemia
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
A brilliant write.
I sincerely liked it.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
June 21st, 2021 16:34
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
A brilliant write.
I sincerely liked it.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
June 21st, 2021 16:34
Pandemia
Fay Slimm. said:
This anthem to night\'s cavalcade of stars humble the senses if like me these few words evoke memories of dark sky lit with myriads of winking wonder - -- beautiful .......... x
June 21st, 2021 11:43
Fay Slimm. said:
This anthem to night\'s cavalcade of stars humble the senses if like me these few words evoke memories of dark sky lit with myriads of winking wonder - -- beautiful .......... x
June 21st, 2021 11:43
Pandemia
L. B. Mek said:
a small glimpse of your True poetic depth
we get to glean in this Poem, my friend
as you subtly and brilliantly juxtaposition
that insistently prevalent - archaic mindset, where:
in the bleakness of night
when despair blows-out, hope\'s light
gripped by our incessant need, of all-things pandemic
that we gravitate towards, for being dramatically chaotic
we finally realise, that hidden potential for greatness
in all that we utilise to survive and stubbornly: Thrive...!
and there-in, exists that unwavering mythology
of innate belief, in our capacity to mimic
what godliness of flesh: we can yet, realise!
(Such depth of versatility
you showcase consistently, dear poet
Two great poems from you today
each, so drastically different
in style and tone, what a poetic treat)
Brilliant!
in my humble opinion
June 21st, 2021 06:35
L. B. Mek said:
a small glimpse of your True poetic depth
we get to glean in this Poem, my friend
as you subtly and brilliantly juxtaposition
that insistently prevalent - archaic mindset, where:
in the bleakness of night
when despair blows-out, hope\'s light
gripped by our incessant need, of all-things pandemic
that we gravitate towards, for being dramatically chaotic
we finally realise, that hidden potential for greatness
in all that we utilise to survive and stubbornly: Thrive...!
and there-in, exists that unwavering mythology
of innate belief, in our capacity to mimic
what godliness of flesh: we can yet, realise!
(Such depth of versatility
you showcase consistently, dear poet
Two great poems from you today
each, so drastically different
in style and tone, what a poetic treat)
Brilliant!
in my humble opinion
June 21st, 2021 06:35
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