Comments received on poems by Neville
Barely Semi Touched
spilleronsheet said:
If a scale could measure the depth of love
Only if
Suddenly there were words to count the love
And those words stringed in poetry
So intense and so deep
Yet why so heart wrenching
Love leaves us abandoned, separated when fate makes a sudden change
January 3rd, 2022 13:02
spilleronsheet said:
If a scale could measure the depth of love
Only if
Suddenly there were words to count the love
And those words stringed in poetry
So intense and so deep
Yet why so heart wrenching
Love leaves us abandoned, separated when fate makes a sudden change
January 3rd, 2022 13:02
Barely Semi Touched
dusk arising said:
Semi touched but.... in cold places? Thoughts and memories linger in the heart and as they call out the heat is intense. So intense it has to be stepped back from, hoping to find cooler more pacifying coping thoughts.
January 3rd, 2022 12:24
dusk arising said:
Semi touched but.... in cold places? Thoughts and memories linger in the heart and as they call out the heat is intense. So intense it has to be stepped back from, hoping to find cooler more pacifying coping thoughts.
January 3rd, 2022 12:24
Barely Semi Touched
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah the unquenchable miss of those who loved are now barely available ........ only semi-touched but still remembered. -- A heart-tugging read Nev.
January 3rd, 2022 11:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah the unquenchable miss of those who loved are now barely available ........ only semi-touched but still remembered. -- A heart-tugging read Nev.
January 3rd, 2022 11:29
Sated
Dove said:
Beautiful! Has a frisky ending, or is that my naughty imagination! Lol Happy New Year
January 3rd, 2022 08:13
Dove said:
Beautiful! Has a frisky ending, or is that my naughty imagination! Lol Happy New Year
January 3rd, 2022 08:13
Sated
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep on wondering Neville and your thoughts will come to fruition.
Andy
January 1st, 2022 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep on wondering Neville and your thoughts will come to fruition.
Andy
January 1st, 2022 02:06
Sated
Paul Bell said:
Never used that as a chat up line.
Fancy exchanging, DNA.
No, Paul, I dumped you.
She never liked green fields, that girl.
December 31st, 2021 11:01
Paul Bell said:
Never used that as a chat up line.
Fancy exchanging, DNA.
No, Paul, I dumped you.
She never liked green fields, that girl.
December 31st, 2021 11:01
Sated
SureshG said:
Exceptionally deposited, may it flourish and blossom, and thanks for the tease
December 31st, 2021 10:13
SureshG said:
Exceptionally deposited, may it flourish and blossom, and thanks for the tease
December 31st, 2021 10:13
Sated
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - leaving D.A. eh ? well that\'s a most novel way to put it - -- the title did it for me - - but what could be better than to wonder whether the wet walk will deliver a dry patch to lie and maybe exchange more than pleasantries - - am smiling big at this bit of your gift for teasingly inventive intrigue .............x
December 31st, 2021 06:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - leaving D.A. eh ? well that\'s a most novel way to put it - -- the title did it for me - - but what could be better than to wonder whether the wet walk will deliver a dry patch to lie and maybe exchange more than pleasantries - - am smiling big at this bit of your gift for teasingly inventive intrigue .............x
December 31st, 2021 06:09
Sated
dusk arising said:
Gone are those hankerchief days of youth eh?
You could always scratch/cut yourself on a hawthorn bush or barbed wire escaping from mischievous bovines...... deposits made.
There\'s a delightful mischievous note in your poetry today.... is that a sign of a new years twinkle in your eye?.... I hope so.
December 31st, 2021 05:52
dusk arising said:
Gone are those hankerchief days of youth eh?
You could always scratch/cut yourself on a hawthorn bush or barbed wire escaping from mischievous bovines...... deposits made.
There\'s a delightful mischievous note in your poetry today.... is that a sign of a new years twinkle in your eye?.... I hope so.
December 31st, 2021 05:52
It Don’t Help to Forget None
Goldfinch60 said:
Such important words to give to your lady, as I did to mine.
Andy
December 31st, 2021 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Such important words to give to your lady, as I did to mine.
Andy
December 31st, 2021 01:36
It Don’t Help to Forget None
Rozina said:
Even once in a blue moon is better than never! 3 powerful words.
December 30th, 2021 23:34
Rozina said:
Even once in a blue moon is better than never! 3 powerful words.
December 30th, 2021 23:34
It Don’t Help to Forget None
orchidee said:
Which gal was this?
One I cannot meet, for she is yours!
Not KP though. Things went downhill since the day I married her! lol.
December 30th, 2021 14:44
orchidee said:
Which gal was this?
One I cannot meet, for she is yours!
Not KP though. Things went downhill since the day I married her! lol.
December 30th, 2021 14:44
It Don’t Help to Forget None
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Beautiful sentiments for your beautiful lady. What truly counts is that you’ve remembered what you forgot.
Laura 🌻
December 30th, 2021 11:41
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Beautiful sentiments for your beautiful lady. What truly counts is that you’ve remembered what you forgot.
Laura 🌻
December 30th, 2021 11:41
It Don’t Help to Forget None
Fay Slimm. said:
Words mean a lot to a lady when they come from a purely romantic heart - and who could wish for a better \"forgetter\" than thee mon ami - -- - a lovely warm read.............. x
December 30th, 2021 11:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Words mean a lot to a lady when they come from a purely romantic heart - and who could wish for a better \"forgetter\" than thee mon ami - -- - a lovely warm read.............. x
December 30th, 2021 11:26
Chasing Light
SureshG said:
You are full of romance that your pen lovingly exposes, letting us dream a little
December 30th, 2021 10:24
SureshG said:
You are full of romance that your pen lovingly exposes, letting us dream a little
December 30th, 2021 10:24
Chasing Light
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words Neville, may she always be with you.
Andy
December 30th, 2021 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words Neville, may she always be with you.
Andy
December 30th, 2021 01:46
Chasing Light
Fay Slimm. said:
Your tender expressions put romantic poetry on a whole different level and to say I enjoyed this would be putting it mildly - -- a sigh of a read Nev........x
December 30th, 2021 01:41
Fay Slimm. said:
Your tender expressions put romantic poetry on a whole different level and to say I enjoyed this would be putting it mildly - -- a sigh of a read Nev........x
December 30th, 2021 01:41
Chasing Light
dusk arising said:
(swoons)..... hold that thought.... I think I just fell in love too.
December 29th, 2021 16:09
dusk arising said:
(swoons)..... hold that thought.... I think I just fell in love too.
December 29th, 2021 16:09
Chasing Light
Michael Edwards said:
And so may she blossom. Enjoyed the read.
December 29th, 2021 15:13
Michael Edwards said:
And so may she blossom. Enjoyed the read.
December 29th, 2021 15:13
On Being But a Poet
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all leave this earth at some time but hopefully we will leave some fond memories Neville.
Andy
December 28th, 2021 14:39
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all leave this earth at some time but hopefully we will leave some fond memories Neville.
Andy
December 28th, 2021 14:39
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