Comments received on poems by Neville
Face-ination
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever words Neville that can bring profound thoughts within us.
Andy
May 26th, 2021 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever words Neville that can bring profound thoughts within us.
Andy
May 26th, 2021 00:49
Face-ination
L. B. Mek said:
\'how sobering
that, what endlessly inspires
is often
the very worst: within us...!\'
(what a poignant write my friend
so many narratives and images
flashed through my mind
trying to decipher wat inspired you;
and ain\'t that the beauty
of this poetry artform, we fight
to keep alive)
May 25th, 2021 05:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'how sobering
that, what endlessly inspires
is often
the very worst: within us...!\'
(what a poignant write my friend
so many narratives and images
flashed through my mind
trying to decipher wat inspired you;
and ain\'t that the beauty
of this poetry artform, we fight
to keep alive)
May 25th, 2021 05:41
Face-ination
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the coined word in the title Nev. and oh that clever and very telling metaphor - -- - I maybe completely up a gum-tree but judgemental pride comes to mind after reading a second time your bit of intrigue today mon ami.
May 25th, 2021 04:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the coined word in the title Nev. and oh that clever and very telling metaphor - -- - I maybe completely up a gum-tree but judgemental pride comes to mind after reading a second time your bit of intrigue today mon ami.
May 25th, 2021 04:08
Face-ination
dusk arising said:
Clouds - bringer of nourishing, rebirthing rain, as are the tears we all shed.
May 25th, 2021 02:32
dusk arising said:
Clouds - bringer of nourishing, rebirthing rain, as are the tears we all shed.
May 25th, 2021 02:32
Journey of Tears
Dove said:
Oh my some people magically work tears to manipulate
Others, and others though heartfelt turn into works of art
Ultimately fake tears or not, lose their meaning If
lies and tantrums are infused!
Always deeply meaningful words infused in your works
May 21st, 2021 08:50
Dove said:
Oh my some people magically work tears to manipulate
Others, and others though heartfelt turn into works of art
Ultimately fake tears or not, lose their meaning If
lies and tantrums are infused!
Always deeply meaningful words infused in your works
May 21st, 2021 08:50
Paper Cups
L. B. Mek said:
this be those kinda whispered \'messages, in a bottle\'
that had the Helen\'s of this world - abandon
their loyalties: for a heart\'s vehement desires
and wars that launch timeless tales
upon that unconquerable sea, of poetic ink..
A great write my friend, wonderfully executed pacing and flow
May 21st, 2021 02:29
L. B. Mek said:
this be those kinda whispered \'messages, in a bottle\'
that had the Helen\'s of this world - abandon
their loyalties: for a heart\'s vehement desires
and wars that launch timeless tales
upon that unconquerable sea, of poetic ink..
A great write my friend, wonderfully executed pacing and flow
May 21st, 2021 02:29
Paper Cups
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that she will remember Neville, such wonderful memories shared with us all and maybe her.
Andy
May 21st, 2021 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that she will remember Neville, such wonderful memories shared with us all and maybe her.
Andy
May 21st, 2021 00:22
Paper Cups
Doggerel Dave said:
No thought for the past, no thought for the future, our energies combined in the glorious present – which will last forever…..And it has – in memory….
Thanks Neville.
May 20th, 2021 20:44
Doggerel Dave said:
No thought for the past, no thought for the future, our energies combined in the glorious present – which will last forever…..And it has – in memory….
Thanks Neville.
May 20th, 2021 20:44
Paper Cups
MendedFences27 said:
Ah, yes. the hurried emotions of youth. Surely, she would remember the wine and the frenzy. A small snip of lost emotions that are recalled with a passion that sweetens the recollection and perhaps, the taste of the wine. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 20th, 2021 10:45
MendedFences27 said:
Ah, yes. the hurried emotions of youth. Surely, she would remember the wine and the frenzy. A small snip of lost emotions that are recalled with a passion that sweetens the recollection and perhaps, the taste of the wine. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 20th, 2021 10:45
Paper Cups
dusk arising said:
With a scene addressed so well I\'m sure she will have quite a coloured memory of it.
Love the way you create with a pastiche of the actual scene.
May 20th, 2021 09:31
dusk arising said:
With a scene addressed so well I\'m sure she will have quite a coloured memory of it.
Love the way you create with a pastiche of the actual scene.
May 20th, 2021 09:31
Not Never in a Month of Sundays
Dove said:
There’s only one true love
which kisses ones soul
One true heart that flutters
as memories lovingly unfolds
knowing there’s no others
Where affections gently holds
Love it Neville!,
May 20th, 2021 09:14
Dove said:
There’s only one true love
which kisses ones soul
One true heart that flutters
as memories lovingly unfolds
knowing there’s no others
Where affections gently holds
Love it Neville!,
May 20th, 2021 09:14
Paper Cups
Dove said:
Woo Hoo, a blank page of Love ! I imagine all the beautiful colors you added to the mental loving without a night’s pause! Nicely done as always
May 20th, 2021 08:54
Dove said:
Woo Hoo, a blank page of Love ! I imagine all the beautiful colors you added to the mental loving without a night’s pause! Nicely done as always
May 20th, 2021 08:54
Paper Cups
Fay Slimm. said:
So rich with imagery this write - it cleverly takes events in back- then and romantically stirs such sweet memories - - oh yes Nev. that lady in question having read this would well remember - methinks..........x
May 20th, 2021 04:05
Fay Slimm. said:
So rich with imagery this write - it cleverly takes events in back- then and romantically stirs such sweet memories - - oh yes Nev. that lady in question having read this would well remember - methinks..........x
May 20th, 2021 04:05
Fletched
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Bit late to ask now methinks \'specially as everyone else seems to have got a grip ..... so is it OK if I just put ....Good write, Neville?
May 19th, 2021 23:23
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Bit late to ask now methinks \'specially as everyone else seems to have got a grip ..... so is it OK if I just put ....Good write, Neville?
May 19th, 2021 23:23
Not Never in a Month of Sundays
L. B. Mek said:
of that one
of those one\'s
that mean: the most
and shall do
and we insure, will do
till
our
ink
runs, dry: on its last
blink
lingered
treasured
as, the very best
of all
that we\'ve been: blessed...
May 19th, 2021 06:31
L. B. Mek said:
of that one
of those one\'s
that mean: the most
and shall do
and we insure, will do
till
our
ink
runs, dry: on its last
blink
lingered
treasured
as, the very best
of all
that we\'ve been: blessed...
May 19th, 2021 06:31
Not Never in a Month of Sundays
Fay Slimm. said:
A confession which must make your lady know such love is forever..........x
May 16th, 2021 04:14
Fay Slimm. said:
A confession which must make your lady know such love is forever..........x
May 16th, 2021 04:14
Not Never in a Month of Sundays
dusk arising said:
Words of certainty from a man who knows. Such a wonderful statement for the lady. A feeling so strong that it is doubtless.
The \'one\' for me arrived at the wrong time for us both and slipped through our fingers we jointly admitted 30 years later.
May 16th, 2021 01:40
dusk arising said:
Words of certainty from a man who knows. Such a wonderful statement for the lady. A feeling so strong that it is doubtless.
The \'one\' for me arrived at the wrong time for us both and slipped through our fingers we jointly admitted 30 years later.
May 16th, 2021 01:40
Fletched
L. B. Mek said:
brilliantly executed my friend
indeed, there is nothing as penetratingly impactful
as humanity\'s complexly divisive: commonality
worded, so accessibly relatable..
\'cause fetching and firing, ain\'t ever been our problem
its the simple fact
that we never allow ourselves the rationality
of assuming we, like most around us
will miss
more than we hit, and so
each painful stab of those missed
dreams and aspirations, we collide with
in our everyday interactions, impact us
much more than they should
then we add our obliviousness
to life\'s happenstance, toxic cocktail mix
ignoring the suffering
our own missed arrows, help create...
\'Free
and aching
for
the sky …\'
indeed! simultaneously, all at once
no inch or quarter given,
no wonder we see more satellite dishes, than stars
in that bleakness of nightly, realisations...
May 14th, 2021 04:40
L. B. Mek said:
brilliantly executed my friend
indeed, there is nothing as penetratingly impactful
as humanity\'s complexly divisive: commonality
worded, so accessibly relatable..
\'cause fetching and firing, ain\'t ever been our problem
its the simple fact
that we never allow ourselves the rationality
of assuming we, like most around us
will miss
more than we hit, and so
each painful stab of those missed
dreams and aspirations, we collide with
in our everyday interactions, impact us
much more than they should
then we add our obliviousness
to life\'s happenstance, toxic cocktail mix
ignoring the suffering
our own missed arrows, help create...
\'Free
and aching
for
the sky …\'
indeed! simultaneously, all at once
no inch or quarter given,
no wonder we see more satellite dishes, than stars
in that bleakness of nightly, realisations...
May 14th, 2021 04:40
Fletched
orchidee said:
I mucked it all up on that day in 1066. If only I hadn\'t turned up!
May 14th, 2021 01:36
orchidee said:
I mucked it all up on that day in 1066. If only I hadn\'t turned up!
May 14th, 2021 01:36
Fletched
Goldfinch60 said:
Ask Orchi why he told King Harold to look up in 1066?
Andy
May 13th, 2021 15:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Ask Orchi why he told King Harold to look up in 1066?
Andy
May 13th, 2021 15:19
Fletched
Fay Slimm. said:
Cupid\'s darts always hit where they wish to cause most damage methinks - - a smile for these well-covered lines of clever intrigue...........x
May 13th, 2021 04:18
Fay Slimm. said:
Cupid\'s darts always hit where they wish to cause most damage methinks - - a smile for these well-covered lines of clever intrigue...........x
May 13th, 2021 04:18
Fletched
dusk arising said:
EE-BAH-GUM Fletch were a grand old fellah and deadly absolutely deadly at 100yds with his catapault until his mam wanted her knickers elastic back. Worra lad. But youre right, it wor with bow an arrah where he wor lethal. Robin \'ood weren\'t innit when Fletch let one loose, especially after he\'d had a curry.
Straight and true, just like your words this day.
May 13th, 2021 03:45
dusk arising said:
EE-BAH-GUM Fletch were a grand old fellah and deadly absolutely deadly at 100yds with his catapault until his mam wanted her knickers elastic back. Worra lad. But youre right, it wor with bow an arrah where he wor lethal. Robin \'ood weren\'t innit when Fletch let one loose, especially after he\'d had a curry.
Straight and true, just like your words this day.
May 13th, 2021 03:45
Fletched
orchidee said:
Will I swoon if I find out what\'s behind these words?! lol.
May 13th, 2021 03:44
orchidee said:
Will I swoon if I find out what\'s behind these words?! lol.
May 13th, 2021 03:44
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