Comments received on poems by Neville
Even Sadder than That Even
spilleronsheet said:
A poetry
A message of resurrection I seek
There you lay those magnificent lines
So well inked with blue describing the red that coloured the world canvas
Hope I see in the prose
Happen to believe to the belief of yours
A new world with a virtue called peace
April 11th, 2022 04:41
spilleronsheet said:
A poetry
A message of resurrection I seek
There you lay those magnificent lines
So well inked with blue describing the red that coloured the world canvas
Hope I see in the prose
Happen to believe to the belief of yours
A new world with a virtue called peace
April 11th, 2022 04:41
Why
Rozina said:
Unanswerable by the victims and others. But the main culprit knows why.
April 11th, 2022 01:07
Rozina said:
Unanswerable by the victims and others. But the main culprit knows why.
April 11th, 2022 01:07
Why
spilleronsheet said:
A thought provoking question
That awakes me in my deep sleep
Further to it a very intriguing poetry
So well matching with the recent times
I can hear the voices of so many who are marginalised
Very well worded dear Neville
April 10th, 2022 14:39
spilleronsheet said:
A thought provoking question
That awakes me in my deep sleep
Further to it a very intriguing poetry
So well matching with the recent times
I can hear the voices of so many who are marginalised
Very well worded dear Neville
April 10th, 2022 14:39
Why
Fay Slimm. said:
The horror of war\'s vile effect is brought to the fore by your experience when trying to enter the field of its victims dear Nev - -- your verse speaks its own clearly captured message of no answers to Why - -- - -- yet we must go on asking - -- - heartbreaking indeed this first read of my belated return to M.P.S. ..................x
April 10th, 2022 03:47
Fay Slimm. said:
The horror of war\'s vile effect is brought to the fore by your experience when trying to enter the field of its victims dear Nev - -- your verse speaks its own clearly captured message of no answers to Why - -- - -- yet we must go on asking - -- - heartbreaking indeed this first read of my belated return to M.P.S. ..................x
April 10th, 2022 03:47
Why
Poetic Dan said:
To many thoughts for this piece of art, so I\'ll just thank you for sharing your heart!
Take care
April 10th, 2022 02:07
Poetic Dan said:
To many thoughts for this piece of art, so I\'ll just thank you for sharing your heart!
Take care
April 10th, 2022 02:07
Why
L. B. Mek said:
I imagine
all children, Victims
of war
can relate, verbatim
to every word in your poem
dear Poet Supreme!
how you capture, the true horror
in the eyes, and voice
of lost, innocence
and beleaguered, mindsets
where a childhoods, precious
naivety has been, warped
far - far, too soon
to that sinister, world
of adulthoods, wanton cruelty...
April 7th, 2022 03:45
L. B. Mek said:
I imagine
all children, Victims
of war
can relate, verbatim
to every word in your poem
dear Poet Supreme!
how you capture, the true horror
in the eyes, and voice
of lost, innocence
and beleaguered, mindsets
where a childhoods, precious
naivety has been, warped
far - far, too soon
to that sinister, world
of adulthoods, wanton cruelty...
April 7th, 2022 03:45
Why
orchidee said:
Why? \'God knows\' as the saying goes, usually said out of resignation, but true words.
An extract from my nutty \'Meanwhile....\' jottings: \'Why did I start singing, and cause so much misery to millions?!\' heehee.
April 7th, 2022 02:06
orchidee said:
Why? \'God knows\' as the saying goes, usually said out of resignation, but true words.
An extract from my nutty \'Meanwhile....\' jottings: \'Why did I start singing, and cause so much misery to millions?!\' heehee.
April 7th, 2022 02:06
Why
Crowns4Christ said:
How sad, I don\'t think that question can ever be answered
April 6th, 2022 17:19
Crowns4Christ said:
How sad, I don\'t think that question can ever be answered
April 6th, 2022 17:19
The Mending of a Very Broken Man
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I’ve read your penned words a few times…very interesting. My take on this is that your poem is not about a man and/or a woman at all. Depending on the reader, a poem may have many interpretations. More often than not, your poems do lend themselves to that.
Laura🌻
April 4th, 2022 14:06
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I’ve read your penned words a few times…very interesting. My take on this is that your poem is not about a man and/or a woman at all. Depending on the reader, a poem may have many interpretations. More often than not, your poems do lend themselves to that.
Laura🌻
April 4th, 2022 14:06
The Mending of a Very Broken Man
Goldfinch60 said:
That healing can work both ways and is so important in a true relationship.
Andy
April 4th, 2022 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
That healing can work both ways and is so important in a true relationship.
Andy
April 4th, 2022 00:15
The Mending of a Very Broken Man
Christina8 said:
Very nice write N! Sexy too! ...C
April 3rd, 2022 09:28
Christina8 said:
Very nice write N! Sexy too! ...C
April 3rd, 2022 09:28
The Mending of a Very Broken Man
dusk arising said:
I\'ve reversed the roles a couple of times but never met (yet) one so obligingly caring.
Initially i thought you were going to be writing about a boat (first six lines).
April 3rd, 2022 08:14
dusk arising said:
I\'ve reversed the roles a couple of times but never met (yet) one so obligingly caring.
Initially i thought you were going to be writing about a boat (first six lines).
April 3rd, 2022 08:14
Zen Tree
SureshG said:
we forget that it is alive, from a single blade of grass, to a mighty oak.
It is the essential and eminent source of life, physically and spiritually, that Zen Tree of yours, that gently sways in the invisible breeze.
April 2nd, 2022 10:03
SureshG said:
we forget that it is alive, from a single blade of grass, to a mighty oak.
It is the essential and eminent source of life, physically and spiritually, that Zen Tree of yours, that gently sways in the invisible breeze.
April 2nd, 2022 10:03
Let us Not Forget Syria
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(one political family\'s, obsession
and an entire nation, left
in utter devastation...
I\'ll never forgive Blair
for tainting us all,
a true act of cowardly
Judas-esque, Venality!
making us all, unwilling perpetrators
of such a heinous
tyrannically wilful, disregard
for life..)
April 1st, 2022 06:12
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(one political family\'s, obsession
and an entire nation, left
in utter devastation...
I\'ll never forgive Blair
for tainting us all,
a true act of cowardly
Judas-esque, Venality!
making us all, unwilling perpetrators
of such a heinous
tyrannically wilful, disregard
for life..)
April 1st, 2022 06:12
Dirty Water
L. B. Mek said:
our H2O crisis, encapsulated
within such scarce, poignant words
poetry\'s aesthetics, reflecting
its empathetic message
yes, indeed
it will be our children
picking up
consequences: hefty Bill..
(heartachingly, depressing
to know this is our reality
despite all our progress)
an important write, dear Poet
April 1st, 2022 06:04
L. B. Mek said:
our H2O crisis, encapsulated
within such scarce, poignant words
poetry\'s aesthetics, reflecting
its empathetic message
yes, indeed
it will be our children
picking up
consequences: hefty Bill..
(heartachingly, depressing
to know this is our reality
despite all our progress)
an important write, dear Poet
April 1st, 2022 06:04
Let us Not Forget Syria
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A poignant piece of writing. We shall pray for all who are suffering…
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
March 31st, 2022 16:17
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A poignant piece of writing. We shall pray for all who are suffering…
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
March 31st, 2022 16:17
Let us Not Forget Syria
Paul Bell said:
Probably add a few more countries to that list. Sadly, Ukraine affects us financially, so we dwell on it more and more.
March 31st, 2022 13:39
Paul Bell said:
Probably add a few more countries to that list. Sadly, Ukraine affects us financially, so we dwell on it more and more.
March 31st, 2022 13:39
Let us Not Forget Syria
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Neville, you are so right. Ukraine does get all the oxygen right now with 24/7 news coverage on the ground. But suffering is suffering no matter where it happens, and just because we don\'t see it happening in real time doesn\'t mean that it\'s not real or important. Every war or conflict diminishes our humanity and has a ripple effect around the world. Thank you for these words that should resonate with all of us.
March 31st, 2022 13:37
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Neville, you are so right. Ukraine does get all the oxygen right now with 24/7 news coverage on the ground. But suffering is suffering no matter where it happens, and just because we don\'t see it happening in real time doesn\'t mean that it\'s not real or important. Every war or conflict diminishes our humanity and has a ripple effect around the world. Thank you for these words that should resonate with all of us.
March 31st, 2022 13:37
Let us Not Forget Syria
Christina8 said:
Wonderful write...nobody deserves to suffer the way these folks are....C
March 31st, 2022 08:42
Christina8 said:
Wonderful write...nobody deserves to suffer the way these folks are....C
March 31st, 2022 08:42
Let us Not Forget Syria
Rocky Lagou said:
Just a little quote form Lana:
\"No  bombs in the sky, only fireworks when you and I collide
It\'s just a dream I had in mind\"
March 31st, 2022 08:16
Rocky Lagou said:
Just a little quote form Lana:
\"No  bombs in the sky, only fireworks when you and I collide
It\'s just a dream I had in mind\"
March 31st, 2022 08:16
Let us Not Forget Syria
dusk arising said:
Wherever Putin has placed his evil wand of misery is deserving of our thoughts and grief.
March 31st, 2022 07:45
dusk arising said:
Wherever Putin has placed his evil wand of misery is deserving of our thoughts and grief.
March 31st, 2022 07:45
Let us Not Forget Syria
Caring dove said:
Nobody deserves to suffer .. a caring writing )
March 31st, 2022 06:30
Caring dove said:
Nobody deserves to suffer .. a caring writing )
March 31st, 2022 06:30
Dirty Water
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Neville when there is so much we can do to help but those who are able to help are just not willing to help.
Andy
March 31st, 2022 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Neville when there is so much we can do to help but those who are able to help are just not willing to help.
Andy
March 31st, 2022 00:32
Dirty Water
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
‘what we gonna do ..‘
What are we going to do?!
An easy question with a difficult answer.
Laura🌻
March 30th, 2022 15:53
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
‘what we gonna do ..‘
What are we going to do?!
An easy question with a difficult answer.
Laura🌻
March 30th, 2022 15:53
Dirty Water
Bella Shepard said:
Considering that 60 % of the human body is made up of water, you\'d think we\'d show a lot more respect. Love what you\'ve written.
March 30th, 2022 10:30
Bella Shepard said:
Considering that 60 % of the human body is made up of water, you\'d think we\'d show a lot more respect. Love what you\'ve written.
March 30th, 2022 10:30
Dirty Water
dusk arising said:
Straight away i thought of the besieged people in ukrain cities having to drink water of any kind, sewage and heating system waters. Yet in many parts of the world people have been drinking contaminated water all their lives it seems.
Water a basic human need regardless of politics and race. Why cant we solve this basic problem.
March 30th, 2022 09:58
dusk arising said:
Straight away i thought of the besieged people in ukrain cities having to drink water of any kind, sewage and heating system waters. Yet in many parts of the world people have been drinking contaminated water all their lives it seems.
Water a basic human need regardless of politics and race. Why cant we solve this basic problem.
March 30th, 2022 09:58
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