Comments received on poems by Neville
Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
SureshG said:
There is nothing more thrilling then to see a seed germinate, and to nourish the fruits of wonderful words.
April 29th, 2022 17:51
SureshG said:
There is nothing more thrilling then to see a seed germinate, and to nourish the fruits of wonderful words.
April 29th, 2022 17:51
Gooder than Good Even
Caring dove said:
by a mile and a smile even ..ā love that line ! ))
Some connections are so nice .. and so too are some memories .
Nicely expressed poem
April 29th, 2022 01:08
Caring dove said:
by a mile and a smile even ..ā love that line ! ))
Some connections are so nice .. and so too are some memories .
Nicely expressed poem
April 29th, 2022 01:08
Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
Goldfinch60 said:
Every day is a good day Neville, they must be as we got up in the morning.
Andy
April 29th, 2022 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Every day is a good day Neville, they must be as we got up in the morning.
Andy
April 29th, 2022 00:57
Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
Rozina said:
A positive scene of a good harvest written so nicely in just a few lines.
April 28th, 2022 18:09
Rozina said:
A positive scene of a good harvest written so nicely in just a few lines.
April 28th, 2022 18:09
Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
Lauraš» said:
Dear Neville,
Your beautifully scripted poem reminded me of harvest time at my great grandmotherās farm. As a young child, I found the whole experience fascinating. Everyone had funā¦from the youngest to the eldest.
Thank you for sharing your basketful of meaningful words.
Lauraš»
April 28th, 2022 16:38
Lauraš» said:
Dear Neville,
Your beautifully scripted poem reminded me of harvest time at my great grandmotherās farm. As a young child, I found the whole experience fascinating. Everyone had funā¦from the youngest to the eldest.
Thank you for sharing your basketful of meaningful words.
Lauraš»
April 28th, 2022 16:38
Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
Bella Shepard said:
We need more positive in this world, and you have reaffirmed this so well with these simple lines. Be grateful for each good day!
April 28th, 2022 15:05
Bella Shepard said:
We need more positive in this world, and you have reaffirmed this so well with these simple lines. Be grateful for each good day!
April 28th, 2022 15:05
Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
dusk arising said:
HEY said the landlord, what about rejoicing down the pub?
Brought back childhood memories when I lived on the edge of a mining village in Notts and we would go help with the harvest and making haystacks. We were a good community and the farmer had no quibbles about us sleigh riding in his fields come winter.
Fond memories - thank you.
April 28th, 2022 09:45
dusk arising said:
HEY said the landlord, what about rejoicing down the pub?
Brought back childhood memories when I lived on the edge of a mining village in Notts and we would go help with the harvest and making haystacks. We were a good community and the farmer had no quibbles about us sleigh riding in his fields come winter.
Fond memories - thank you.
April 28th, 2022 09:45
Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
Christina8 said:
Very nice one N! Flows with optimism.....C
April 28th, 2022 09:20
Christina8 said:
Very nice one N! Flows with optimism.....C
April 28th, 2022 09:20
Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
Rocky Lagou said:
A positive affirmation. This feels so optimistic and ripe, I just want to take a bite off my computer screen and engulf your words.
April 28th, 2022 08:44
Rocky Lagou said:
A positive affirmation. This feels so optimistic and ripe, I just want to take a bite off my computer screen and engulf your words.
April 28th, 2022 08:44
Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
orchidee said:
You started me off singing (argghh!)
\'Ohhh, Bringing in the sheaves,,.....\'
(on you tube - that\'s the chorus bit)
April 28th, 2022 07:57
orchidee said:
You started me off singing (argghh!)
\'Ohhh, Bringing in the sheaves,,.....\'
(on you tube - that\'s the chorus bit)
April 28th, 2022 07:57
Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
Fay Slimm. said:
Seeing the intake clearly as I rejoice in your gift for intrigue so effortlessly - -- telling words and loved every line.
April 28th, 2022 07:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Seeing the intake clearly as I rejoice in your gift for intrigue so effortlessly - -- telling words and loved every line.
April 28th, 2022 07:01
Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
spilleronsheet said:
And those are lines of optimism, overflowing with celebration of successā¦ really enjoyed dear Nevilleā¦
April 28th, 2022 05:36
spilleronsheet said:
And those are lines of optimism, overflowing with celebration of successā¦ really enjoyed dear Nevilleā¦
April 28th, 2022 05:36
Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
L. B. Mek said:
I gotta get out to the Dales again soon
been too long...
Have you been staying at the \'Country Harvest\', dear poet
is this poem how you paid for your bill?
(They got the better end of that deal!)
lol
thank you! loved this
pure nourishment for our poetic imaginations:
read, close eyes
and traverse, lush countryside\'s
at harvest
merely, within words...!
therapeutic to say the least
April 28th, 2022 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
I gotta get out to the Dales again soon
been too long...
Have you been staying at the \'Country Harvest\', dear poet
is this poem how you paid for your bill?
(They got the better end of that deal!)
lol
thank you! loved this
pure nourishment for our poetic imaginations:
read, close eyes
and traverse, lush countryside\'s
at harvest
merely, within words...!
therapeutic to say the least
April 28th, 2022 04:46
Some things are Just Not Right
Rozina said:
You are SO RIGHT Neville. It got me thinking about many wrong things in life. A great thought provoking write.
April 26th, 2022 18:00
Rozina said:
You are SO RIGHT Neville. It got me thinking about many wrong things in life. A great thought provoking write.
April 26th, 2022 18:00
Some things are Just Not Right
spilleronsheet said:
Totally resonating on those linesā¦somethingās totally not rightā¦from drugs, explosives, violence and war, corrupt bureaucracy to hypocrisy, opportunists to greedy politiciansā¦ so well said dear Nevilleā¦hope they extinguish fasterā¦
April 26th, 2022 17:57
spilleronsheet said:
Totally resonating on those linesā¦somethingās totally not rightā¦from drugs, explosives, violence and war, corrupt bureaucracy to hypocrisy, opportunists to greedy politiciansā¦ so well said dear Nevilleā¦hope they extinguish fasterā¦
April 26th, 2022 17:57
Some things are Just Not Right
Michael Edwards said:
And can I add cancer - - and yet there is so much good in the world - another poem?
April 26th, 2022 14:23
Michael Edwards said:
And can I add cancer - - and yet there is so much good in the world - another poem?
April 26th, 2022 14:23
Some things are Just Not Right
MR.apocalypse said:
the words of someone who wishes not just to gain wisdom but teach the wisdom they\'ve learned
April 26th, 2022 09:36
MR.apocalypse said:
the words of someone who wishes not just to gain wisdom but teach the wisdom they\'ve learned
April 26th, 2022 09:36
Some things are Just Not Right
Christina8 said:
That was a fantastic write by you dear N.....I can\'t think of what isn\'t right most....probably when people just look the other way and live their lives like things aren\'t happening when they could do something about it, like child poverty, or anything to do with children for that matter! Good solid write!
April 26th, 2022 09:09
Christina8 said:
That was a fantastic write by you dear N.....I can\'t think of what isn\'t right most....probably when people just look the other way and live their lives like things aren\'t happening when they could do something about it, like child poverty, or anything to do with children for that matter! Good solid write!
April 26th, 2022 09:09
Some things are Just Not Right
Rocky Lagou said:
I admire the way you sculpted this poem. It\'s like one long thin line of things that are \"just not right.\" The morally and wickedly corrupt. The terrorists and the evil in the world. You summed it up wonderfully.
April 26th, 2022 08:48
Rocky Lagou said:
I admire the way you sculpted this poem. It\'s like one long thin line of things that are \"just not right.\" The morally and wickedly corrupt. The terrorists and the evil in the world. You summed it up wonderfully.
April 26th, 2022 08:48
Some things are Just Not Right
Lauraš» said:
Dear Neville,
Youāre so spot on with your thoughts that youāve inked for your readers. Much to ponder uponā¦
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
April 26th, 2022 08:41
Lauraš» said:
Dear Neville,
Youāre so spot on with your thoughts that youāve inked for your readers. Much to ponder uponā¦
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
April 26th, 2022 08:41
Some things are Just Not Right
dusk arising said:
No, not right at all. The list could go on and on.
I feel we must srtive for the positives whilst dealing with the negatives and heap praise upon the do gooders in life.
It would be nice to think we learn from history\'s \'not rights\' but sadly we see repetition taking place.
April 26th, 2022 08:28
dusk arising said:
No, not right at all. The list could go on and on.
I feel we must srtive for the positives whilst dealing with the negatives and heap praise upon the do gooders in life.
It would be nice to think we learn from history\'s \'not rights\' but sadly we see repetition taking place.
April 26th, 2022 08:28
Some things are Just Not Right
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
An extra line needed? \'Orchi\'s singing will never be right!\' heehee.
April 26th, 2022 08:06
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
An extra line needed? \'Orchi\'s singing will never be right!\' heehee.
April 26th, 2022 08:06
Some things are Just Not Right
Fay Slimm. said:
That list is significantly versed as an implicit warning that so much recorded evil needs always to be in the front of our minds .. An explosive reminder that such actions and attitudes are no way to gain love and peace - - - thanks a load for this write my friend.
April 26th, 2022 07:21
Fay Slimm. said:
That list is significantly versed as an implicit warning that so much recorded evil needs always to be in the front of our minds .. An explosive reminder that such actions and attitudes are no way to gain love and peace - - - thanks a load for this write my friend.
April 26th, 2022 07:21
Some things are Just Not Right
L. B. Mek said:
an important write, dear Poet!
this
a listing of murderous
intent
and divisive, hate\'s
sinister, roots..
no
we must never forget and pretend
that they\'re all some nightmare
form a past
far removed
from our daily reality..
like
how the world press, pretend
Ukraine, is the only active war
on our planet
when in reality, its just the one
that\'s most profitable
to report about...!
yes, we must never
forget
and deny those harsh realities
of life..
April 26th, 2022 06:12
L. B. Mek said:
an important write, dear Poet!
this
a listing of murderous
intent
and divisive, hate\'s
sinister, roots..
no
we must never forget and pretend
that they\'re all some nightmare
form a past
far removed
from our daily reality..
like
how the world press, pretend
Ukraine, is the only active war
on our planet
when in reality, its just the one
that\'s most profitable
to report about...!
yes, we must never
forget
and deny those harsh realities
of life..
April 26th, 2022 06:12
Some things are Just Not Right
Distant View said:
No, some things are not right at all, but they are still with us. Danger lurks. Some dangers we can avoid, others, sometimes, we cannot.
April 26th, 2022 06:04
Distant View said:
No, some things are not right at all, but they are still with us. Danger lurks. Some dangers we can avoid, others, sometimes, we cannot.
April 26th, 2022 06:04
Some things are Just Not Right
Caring dove said:
So confusing .. the things that happen in this world .. when they shouldnāt
April 26th, 2022 04:32
Caring dove said:
So confusing .. the things that happen in this world .. when they shouldnāt
April 26th, 2022 04:32
Some things are Just Not Right
Caring dove said:
Their not right .. a good writing .. if only things were different and such things didnāt exist .
April 26th, 2022 04:31
Caring dove said:
Their not right .. a good writing .. if only things were different and such things didnāt exist .
April 26th, 2022 04:31
Wind Dancer .. a Haiku
Goldfinch60 said:
Kites are so wonderful to see, they fly over our croquet lawn quite regularly.
Andy
April 26th, 2022 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Kites are so wonderful to see, they fly over our croquet lawn quite regularly.
Andy
April 26th, 2022 00:21
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