Comments received on poems by Neville
Spare a Moment for These Words
Rocky Lagou said:
Really nice and neat. Sometimes poetry really could just be chugged like liquid, it\'s quite fascinating.
April 14th, 2022 08:29
Rocky Lagou said:
Really nice and neat. Sometimes poetry really could just be chugged like liquid, it\'s quite fascinating.
April 14th, 2022 08:29
Spare a Moment for These Words
Christina8 said:
I vote for chasing light but it depends on the subject matter I suppose. Fantastic write, N!
April 14th, 2022 07:46
Christina8 said:
I vote for chasing light but it depends on the subject matter I suppose. Fantastic write, N!
April 14th, 2022 07:46
Spare a Moment for These Words
Fay Slimm. said:
Am never afraid to spare more than a moment for your extraordinary work mon ami - -- - best of wishes for your next published book - I rather favour Chasing Light.............x
April 14th, 2022 07:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Am never afraid to spare more than a moment for your extraordinary work mon ami - -- - best of wishes for your next published book - I rather favour Chasing Light.............x
April 14th, 2022 07:00
Spare a Moment for These Words
L. B. Mek said:
I await, Hyung
thank you! for the great news
its made my week..
as for recommending a title
may I propose, the title to this
subtly, enticing write
I think
I\'d be drawn to the humble confidence
in a book of poetry, titled:
\'Spend a moment for these words\'
speaks to the authors intentions
so succinctly and with such sincerity!
(that\'s my 2 cents - worth
yeah, I know
there\'s a reason its valued
at almost, free)
lol
all the best, dear Poet
April 14th, 2022 05:03
L. B. Mek said:
I await, Hyung
thank you! for the great news
its made my week..
as for recommending a title
may I propose, the title to this
subtly, enticing write
I think
I\'d be drawn to the humble confidence
in a book of poetry, titled:
\'Spend a moment for these words\'
speaks to the authors intentions
so succinctly and with such sincerity!
(that\'s my 2 cents - worth
yeah, I know
there\'s a reason its valued
at almost, free)
lol
all the best, dear Poet
April 14th, 2022 05:03
Spare a Moment for These Words
dusk arising said:
..... and find within, what meaning you will for everything meaningful resides in you already.
.
ho-hum... just a thought
April 14th, 2022 04:06
dusk arising said:
..... and find within, what meaning you will for everything meaningful resides in you already.
.
ho-hum... just a thought
April 14th, 2022 04:06
Spare a Moment for These Words
Caring dove said:
You already have poems published in a book ? Someone once suggested that I should try publishing some of mine .. but I prefer just sharing them on the internet . Well done on getting your poems or writings published )
April 14th, 2022 02:47
Caring dove said:
You already have poems published in a book ? Someone once suggested that I should try publishing some of mine .. but I prefer just sharing them on the internet . Well done on getting your poems or writings published )
April 14th, 2022 02:47
Spare a Moment for These Words
Caring dove said:
I like the title ‘ chasing light ‘ just my opinion . ))
April 14th, 2022 02:46
Caring dove said:
I like the title ‘ chasing light ‘ just my opinion . ))
April 14th, 2022 02:46
Spare a Moment for These Words
orchidee said:
You broken? You all fallen in a heap? Can we repair you with superglue?
Good write N. I don\'t know which title I would choose.
April 14th, 2022 02:20
orchidee said:
You broken? You all fallen in a heap? Can we repair you with superglue?
Good write N. I don\'t know which title I would choose.
April 14th, 2022 02:20
Before it Hurts Too Much to See
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Neville.
Andy
April 14th, 2022 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Neville.
Andy
April 14th, 2022 01:19
Before it Hurts Too Much to See
Michael Edwards said:
loads of punch in a small serving - super.................
April 13th, 2022 14:24
Michael Edwards said:
loads of punch in a small serving - super.................
April 13th, 2022 14:24
Gooder than Good Even
spilleronsheet said:
That’s a bunch of intelligent lines
So witty dear Neville
Awaiting more neologisms to encounter
It got more gooder and gooder as I read more from you
April 13th, 2022 13:01
spilleronsheet said:
That’s a bunch of intelligent lines
So witty dear Neville
Awaiting more neologisms to encounter
It got more gooder and gooder as I read more from you
April 13th, 2022 13:01
Before it Hurts Too Much to See
spilleronsheet said:
An intense romance, a sincere love and tragic ending
You made a tragic movie
Bringing tears to eyes
A fine and emotive work dear Neville
April 13th, 2022 12:54
spilleronsheet said:
An intense romance, a sincere love and tragic ending
You made a tragic movie
Bringing tears to eyes
A fine and emotive work dear Neville
April 13th, 2022 12:54
Before it Hurts Too Much to See
Fay Slimm. said:
Saddest of subjects this five line prayerful appeal for one final look at who love has gifted to one losing sight will bring a great lump to the throat and a tear to the eye of any reader -- a more than emotive write my friend.........x
April 13th, 2022 08:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Saddest of subjects this five line prayerful appeal for one final look at who love has gifted to one losing sight will bring a great lump to the throat and a tear to the eye of any reader -- a more than emotive write my friend.........x
April 13th, 2022 08:00
Gooder than Good Even
Rocky Lagou said:
So so lovely! I\'m definitely all for neologisms in poetry as I feel there are times when we just can\'t express what we want via regular speech. I\'ve used them in the past and even seminal poets like Gwendolyn Brooks have also used them. Thanks for this amazing sentiment,
April 13th, 2022 07:54
Rocky Lagou said:
So so lovely! I\'m definitely all for neologisms in poetry as I feel there are times when we just can\'t express what we want via regular speech. I\'ve used them in the past and even seminal poets like Gwendolyn Brooks have also used them. Thanks for this amazing sentiment,
April 13th, 2022 07:54
Gooder than Good Even
Rozina said:
Learnt another new word here, neologism. The most goodest of all? Thinking of all sorts of words now......
April 12th, 2022 18:17
Rozina said:
Learnt another new word here, neologism. The most goodest of all? Thinking of all sorts of words now......
April 12th, 2022 18:17
Gooder than Good Even
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
easy rhyme moment in time
creates a natural pause
even made me smile
April 12th, 2022 15:00
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
easy rhyme moment in time
creates a natural pause
even made me smile
April 12th, 2022 15:00
Gooder than Good Even
MendedFences27 said:
\"by a mile and a smile,\" and a half! Does that mean this is Neopoetic. Thoroughly enjoyed this one. Just to entertain for \"a moment in time\" is all we can expect. Great write. - Phil A.
April 12th, 2022 11:28
MendedFences27 said:
\"by a mile and a smile,\" and a half! Does that mean this is Neopoetic. Thoroughly enjoyed this one. Just to entertain for \"a moment in time\" is all we can expect. Great write. - Phil A.
April 12th, 2022 11:28
Gooder than Good Even
Christina8 said:
This is one of your \"goodest\" poems...Wonderful write dear N!
April 12th, 2022 08:27
Christina8 said:
This is one of your \"goodest\" poems...Wonderful write dear N!
April 12th, 2022 08:27
Gooder than Good Even
L. B. Mek said:
or even gooder than that, dear Poet
much, much
gooder, than any level of good
you realise..
all we can do, is thank you
for sharing your genius
and gifting us, so much poetic
enjoyment
April 12th, 2022 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
or even gooder than that, dear Poet
much, much
gooder, than any level of good
you realise..
all we can do, is thank you
for sharing your genius
and gifting us, so much poetic
enjoyment
April 12th, 2022 05:45
Gooder than Good Even
orchidee said:
Good write N. I\'ve not met many neologisms myself. Does the Co-op sell them?! lol.
April 12th, 2022 05:21
orchidee said:
Good write N. I\'ve not met many neologisms myself. Does the Co-op sell them?! lol.
April 12th, 2022 05:21
Gooder than Good Even
dusk arising said:
I\'m still flinching at curiouser and curiouser but if betterest ever comes along i\'m out of here.
When something for us is \'gooder than good\' then it tickles our ego to hope that it will be remembered as such by that person too. But it took your finesse to state it so well.
April 12th, 2022 05:01
dusk arising said:
I\'m still flinching at curiouser and curiouser but if betterest ever comes along i\'m out of here.
When something for us is \'gooder than good\' then it tickles our ego to hope that it will be remembered as such by that person too. But it took your finesse to state it so well.
April 12th, 2022 05:01
Gooder than Good Even
Paul Bell said:
You can\'t get better than, gooder, maybe super gooder.
I\'ll be spending my day now looking for neologisms and just being annoying to people.
April 12th, 2022 04:54
Paul Bell said:
You can\'t get better than, gooder, maybe super gooder.
I\'ll be spending my day now looking for neologisms and just being annoying to people.
April 12th, 2022 04:54
Gooder than Good Even
Fay Slimm. said:
Naught can be gooder than memories of closeness between two like minds even for a few moments - regretting that would be an insanity - - or so methinks. - - Am loving your offering of pure neologism..........x
April 12th, 2022 03:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Naught can be gooder than memories of closeness between two like minds even for a few moments - regretting that would be an insanity - - or so methinks. - - Am loving your offering of pure neologism..........x
April 12th, 2022 03:15
Even Sadder than That Even
Rozina said:
This really tugs at the heartstrings. Heartbreaking.
April 11th, 2022 16:59
Rozina said:
This really tugs at the heartstrings. Heartbreaking.
April 11th, 2022 16:59
Even Sadder than That Even
Fay Slimm. said:
The saddest of sights is ravaged children which your concerned words capture on heaps of rubble to remind readers of the sheer desperation of those found after fire and death
- -- bewildered and weeping young faces do indeed need living and caring doctors and nurses - - shame on leaders unworthy of a new world of peace.................x
April 11th, 2022 10:44
Fay Slimm. said:
The saddest of sights is ravaged children which your concerned words capture on heaps of rubble to remind readers of the sheer desperation of those found after fire and death
- -- bewildered and weeping young faces do indeed need living and caring doctors and nurses - - shame on leaders unworthy of a new world of peace.................x
April 11th, 2022 10:44
Even Sadder than That Even
Christina8 said:
This is a magnificent poem, Neville. Magnificent but terribly sad.I can\'t even watch the news anymore. Hopefully some day the world will know peace. Fantastic job!
April 11th, 2022 09:45
Christina8 said:
This is a magnificent poem, Neville. Magnificent but terribly sad.I can\'t even watch the news anymore. Hopefully some day the world will know peace. Fantastic job!
April 11th, 2022 09:45
Even Sadder than That Even
Rocky Lagou said:
Great job. Currently our world is drowning in the evilness that is humankind. I pray for better days. Amazing and touching poem.
April 11th, 2022 08:35
Rocky Lagou said:
Great job. Currently our world is drowning in the evilness that is humankind. I pray for better days. Amazing and touching poem.
April 11th, 2022 08:35
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