Comments received on poems by Neville
Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an irresistible invitation to climb for a while to places where angels have satisfied hunger in gentle loving arms - -- a gem of a verse Nev to keep and read again when needing a ledge................x
November 26th, 2021 03:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an irresistible invitation to climb for a while to places where angels have satisfied hunger in gentle loving arms - -- a gem of a verse Nev to keep and read again when needing a ledge................x
November 26th, 2021 03:51
Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
Neville said:
...... then I\'m gonna double thank you .. hope you like the more recently tweaked version too ..... N
November 26th, 2021 03:48
Neville said:
...... then I\'m gonna double thank you .. hope you like the more recently tweaked version too ..... N
November 26th, 2021 03:48
Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
spilleronsheet said:
Those ambitions setup high
Doesn’t allow me to rest for a while
A great one dear poet
A rest is surely needed
The slice of sky what a great expression
Aren’t we all birds of paradise
November 26th, 2021 03:28
spilleronsheet said:
Those ambitions setup high
Doesn’t allow me to rest for a while
A great one dear poet
A rest is surely needed
The slice of sky what a great expression
Aren’t we all birds of paradise
November 26th, 2021 03:28
Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
I had a prayer, but me wings fell off. Well, I was trying to be \'The Birdman\'! heehee.
November 26th, 2021 02:31
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
I had a prayer, but me wings fell off. Well, I was trying to be \'The Birdman\'! heehee.
November 26th, 2021 02:31
An Unmistakable She
Doggerel Dave said:
Beautifully paced , Nev, no - really.
But did Granny know you cared, though?
November 25th, 2021 21:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Beautifully paced , Nev, no - really.
But did Granny know you cared, though?
November 25th, 2021 21:49
An Unmistakable She
spilleronsheet said:
How romantic
Those words of yours
The lady in context keeps high in curiosity
For the words in praise so charming to eyes
November 25th, 2021 14:57
spilleronsheet said:
How romantic
Those words of yours
The lady in context keeps high in curiosity
For the words in praise so charming to eyes
November 25th, 2021 14:57
An Unmistakable She
L. B. Mek said:
lol
the poor lady, in her
eyes
you\'re enamoured
by her, daintily quirks..
where as
your thought\'s
are mapping, murderous
intentions...
(ahh, those tinted eyes
of romance)
a fun read, thanks for sharing
dear Poet
November 25th, 2021 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
lol
the poor lady, in her
eyes
you\'re enamoured
by her, daintily quirks..
where as
your thought\'s
are mapping, murderous
intentions...
(ahh, those tinted eyes
of romance)
a fun read, thanks for sharing
dear Poet
November 25th, 2021 05:44
An Unmistakable She
Fay Slimm. said:
Methinks your She\'s are found wanting if R\'s rolling is all they can offer amigo - am offering big thank yous though Nev. for the smile this clever write leaves..............x
November 25th, 2021 05:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Methinks your She\'s are found wanting if R\'s rolling is all they can offer amigo - am offering big thank yous though Nev. for the smile this clever write leaves..............x
November 25th, 2021 05:17
An Unmistakable She
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A thing of splendor. Magnetic, even. Well written sir.
November 25th, 2021 05:13
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A thing of splendor. Magnetic, even. Well written sir.
November 25th, 2021 05:13
An Unmistakable She
dusk arising said:
There\'s many a rolling R\'s to be observed on the high street too. And other feminine whiles are seen in the coffee shop and around the ballroom.... (sighs)
Your poetry creates visions to stir the morning into life.
November 25th, 2021 03:49
dusk arising said:
There\'s many a rolling R\'s to be observed on the high street too. And other feminine whiles are seen in the coffee shop and around the ballroom.... (sighs)
Your poetry creates visions to stir the morning into life.
November 25th, 2021 03:49
An Unmistakable She
Caring dove said:
Nice writing Neville 🙂 some people just have such lovely personalities ,
I like how you have worded your poem
November 25th, 2021 02:36
Caring dove said:
Nice writing Neville 🙂 some people just have such lovely personalities ,
I like how you have worded your poem
November 25th, 2021 02:36
An Unmistakable She
orchidee said:
Good write N. Is that she who must be obeyed? That might be KP! lol.
November 25th, 2021 02:23
orchidee said:
Good write N. Is that she who must be obeyed? That might be KP! lol.
November 25th, 2021 02:23
An Unmistakable She
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is obviously in the air Neville.
Andy
November 25th, 2021 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is obviously in the air Neville.
Andy
November 25th, 2021 02:20
Ma Petit Serviette
Goldfinch60 said:
So you met her as well Neville, I shall say no more........
Andy
November 25th, 2021 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
So you met her as well Neville, I shall say no more........
Andy
November 25th, 2021 02:09
Ma Petit Serviette
Garth Rakumakoe said:
He was a man with secrets of his own, parading as views hidden in plain sight. Everybody saw them, but only he knew about them.
November 24th, 2021 09:45
Garth Rakumakoe said:
He was a man with secrets of his own, parading as views hidden in plain sight. Everybody saw them, but only he knew about them.
November 24th, 2021 09:45
Ma Petit Serviette
orchidee said:
Best not tell me what she served without any argument. I will only swoon. Fido says it will be too much for me! lol.
November 24th, 2021 07:01
orchidee said:
Best not tell me what she served without any argument. I will only swoon. Fido says it will be too much for me! lol.
November 24th, 2021 07:01
Ma Petit Serviette
Fay Slimm. said:
Well shiver me timbers me hearty - no question about what she served without any argument - - like your verse that petit waitress deserves a gurt \"merci \" for stripping to tease then to please ..........x
November 24th, 2021 06:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Well shiver me timbers me hearty - no question about what she served without any argument - - like your verse that petit waitress deserves a gurt \"merci \" for stripping to tease then to please ..........x
November 24th, 2021 06:57
Ma Petit Serviette
Doggerel Dave said:
Monogrammed, laundered and ironed to perfection (No innuendo intended). Symmetrical perfection, Nev.
November 24th, 2021 06:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Monogrammed, laundered and ironed to perfection (No innuendo intended). Symmetrical perfection, Nev.
November 24th, 2021 06:41
Linger
Garth Rakumakoe said:
It is poignant in its own way, Neville, and as usual its emotion is quite well carved out. You have a brilliant pen and mind sir.
November 24th, 2021 06:00
Garth Rakumakoe said:
It is poignant in its own way, Neville, and as usual its emotion is quite well carved out. You have a brilliant pen and mind sir.
November 24th, 2021 06:00
Ma Petit Serviette
dusk arising said:
I like the way you tease my mind in your recent poetry..... did they, were they.... what was he being served other than breakfast....
November 24th, 2021 03:49
dusk arising said:
I like the way you tease my mind in your recent poetry..... did they, were they.... what was he being served other than breakfast....
November 24th, 2021 03:49
Linger
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville and so true in life.
Andy
November 24th, 2021 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville and so true in life.
Andy
November 24th, 2021 02:10
Linger
Doggerel Dave said:
First Nev, I have to state that I like the piece but am unable to put my rational spin on it. Further, I see some connection to the poem immediately preceding.......
November 23rd, 2021 19:51
Doggerel Dave said:
First Nev, I have to state that I like the piece but am unable to put my rational spin on it. Further, I see some connection to the poem immediately preceding.......
November 23rd, 2021 19:51
Linger
spilleronsheet said:
So emotional and so poignant
The words brought tears
And so many memories lingered beside
To those whom I lost
I wonder whether they are happy where they are
I wonder if they are watching me
Such a mourning
I remember my grand parents
With whom most of my childhood memories are embed in my mind
I am pretty sure they are watching me
Well penned dear Neville
The poetry felt so personal to me
Thank you for sharing
November 23rd, 2021 14:52
spilleronsheet said:
So emotional and so poignant
The words brought tears
And so many memories lingered beside
To those whom I lost
I wonder whether they are happy where they are
I wonder if they are watching me
Such a mourning
I remember my grand parents
With whom most of my childhood memories are embed in my mind
I am pretty sure they are watching me
Well penned dear Neville
The poetry felt so personal to me
Thank you for sharing
November 23rd, 2021 14:52
Linger
orchidee said:
Good write N. Yes, I meat a gal. She can\'t decide whether to stay or go. I wish KP would go! lol.
November 23rd, 2021 09:43
orchidee said:
Good write N. Yes, I meat a gal. She can\'t decide whether to stay or go. I wish KP would go! lol.
November 23rd, 2021 09:43
An All Too Certain Falsity
Garth Rakumakoe said:
How at times you say so much about a theme or subject without saying much is something I admire in your writing style Neville. You do minimalism so well and and so revealingly. This is another such piece. It\'s a rare quality, and a form of craft to marvel at. Thank you for gracing us yet again.
November 23rd, 2021 06:13
Garth Rakumakoe said:
How at times you say so much about a theme or subject without saying much is something I admire in your writing style Neville. You do minimalism so well and and so revealingly. This is another such piece. It\'s a rare quality, and a form of craft to marvel at. Thank you for gracing us yet again.
November 23rd, 2021 06:13
Linger
dusk arising said:
Beautifully told, of emotions contortions as we endure trying times in \'togetherness\'.
November 23rd, 2021 06:10
dusk arising said:
Beautifully told, of emotions contortions as we endure trying times in \'togetherness\'.
November 23rd, 2021 06:10
Linger
L. B. Mek said:
\'I just
could not find the right words
to place
inside
this mourning song
for safe keeping,\'..
(how acutely, you portray
that need, to feel
like our Time spent
at another\'s side, won\'t
be considered, so miniscule
and steeped in irrelevance, in seconds
after, that abrupt goodbye
of our raked-raw, worded emotions..)
subtly poignant, a heart wrenching depiction
of the person in the relationship
who, lingers
in the embers of the ruins, long abandoned...
simply beautiful, dear masterful Poet
love the unassuming flow and accessible wording
one of your very Best!
\'in my humble opinion\'
November 23rd, 2021 05:52
L. B. Mek said:
\'I just
could not find the right words
to place
inside
this mourning song
for safe keeping,\'..
(how acutely, you portray
that need, to feel
like our Time spent
at another\'s side, won\'t
be considered, so miniscule
and steeped in irrelevance, in seconds
after, that abrupt goodbye
of our raked-raw, worded emotions..)
subtly poignant, a heart wrenching depiction
of the person in the relationship
who, lingers
in the embers of the ruins, long abandoned...
simply beautiful, dear masterful Poet
love the unassuming flow and accessible wording
one of your very Best!
\'in my humble opinion\'
November 23rd, 2021 05:52
Linger
Fay Slimm. said:
A haunt of a mourning song this - it
reminds me that \"Parting is such sweet sorrow \" when hearts want to linger on........ tender as ever mon ami are these lines of gentle appeal.......x
November 23rd, 2021 03:45
Fay Slimm. said:
A haunt of a mourning song this - it
reminds me that \"Parting is such sweet sorrow \" when hearts want to linger on........ tender as ever mon ami are these lines of gentle appeal.......x
November 23rd, 2021 03:45
An All Too Certain Falsity
L. B. Mek said:
love your accessible wording
and blunt - poetic transparency, dear Poet
\'sadly, I have experienced your words
from both sides, of the blame assigning bridge;
where, we choose to label - quickly
so-as to bottle
and limit
the debris, from what
we once deemed, indestructible
that need to assert, blame
to - A, side...
while in reality
the gradients, in our relationship\'s - demise
was as equal, as the attraction
we both gave-in, too
knowing
beyond those aesthetic, tethers
we really
had little foundation, to build-on
in the first place...!\'
November 22nd, 2021 06:49
L. B. Mek said:
love your accessible wording
and blunt - poetic transparency, dear Poet
\'sadly, I have experienced your words
from both sides, of the blame assigning bridge;
where, we choose to label - quickly
so-as to bottle
and limit
the debris, from what
we once deemed, indestructible
that need to assert, blame
to - A, side...
while in reality
the gradients, in our relationship\'s - demise
was as equal, as the attraction
we both gave-in, too
knowing
beyond those aesthetic, tethers
we really
had little foundation, to build-on
in the first place...!\'
November 22nd, 2021 06:49
An All Too Certain Falsity
dusk arising said:
Always aware of the unspoken words I begin to wonder whether the non speaker has the intelligence to realise what they are not saying. Is it willful, are they stupid or am I a pawn in an awful game.
November 22nd, 2021 06:49
dusk arising said:
Always aware of the unspoken words I begin to wonder whether the non speaker has the intelligence to realise what they are not saying. Is it willful, are they stupid or am I a pawn in an awful game.
November 22nd, 2021 06:49
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