Comments received on poems by Neville
Never Going Nowhere Maybe
Christina8 said:
Once a love is in our hearts its hard to let them go and like you said think of them every now and then......
March 26th, 2022 11:14
Christina8 said:
Once a love is in our hearts its hard to let them go and like you said think of them every now and then......
March 26th, 2022 11:14
Never Going Nowhere Maybe
Fay Slimm. said:
Once love is exchanged no matter the time a couple remembers the highs of their journey . A verse to remember and treasure as I am sure does your sweet Pam every now and again .................. x.
March 26th, 2022 08:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Once love is exchanged no matter the time a couple remembers the highs of their journey . A verse to remember and treasure as I am sure does your sweet Pam every now and again .................. x.
March 26th, 2022 08:01
Never Going Nowhere Maybe
dusk arising said:
Those highs in life are with us always and remind us of how lucky we have been to live them. I hold a vision of life like a mountainous landscape reflected in the still waters of a lake. The higher we climbed is reflected in the depth of reflected despair. And years on we have become shaped and rounded to survive yet our hearts still fly away to those yesterdays when life was,.. well, what is the right word? Special?
So relateable.
March 26th, 2022 05:13
dusk arising said:
Those highs in life are with us always and remind us of how lucky we have been to live them. I hold a vision of life like a mountainous landscape reflected in the still waters of a lake. The higher we climbed is reflected in the depth of reflected despair. And years on we have become shaped and rounded to survive yet our hearts still fly away to those yesterdays when life was,.. well, what is the right word? Special?
So relateable.
March 26th, 2022 05:13
Global Warning
L. B. Mek said:
how, regrettably - Poignant
these words read, dear Poet Supreme
\'Elsewhere
A child
Is now crying huge
Pre-spring tears\'
hundreds of children already, murdered
in Ukraine
such wanton, disregard for life...
if reposted
I\'m sure many would relate
with how current
these words seem..
a Great write!
March 25th, 2022 06:57
L. B. Mek said:
how, regrettably - Poignant
these words read, dear Poet Supreme
\'Elsewhere
A child
Is now crying huge
Pre-spring tears\'
hundreds of children already, murdered
in Ukraine
such wanton, disregard for life...
if reposted
I\'m sure many would relate
with how current
these words seem..
a Great write!
March 25th, 2022 06:57
Taking it Slow
Goldfinch60 said:
Rushing is not the way to hide them Neville.
Andy
March 25th, 2022 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Rushing is not the way to hide them Neville.
Andy
March 25th, 2022 01:30
Taking it Slow
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
A fine work of miniature art.
March 24th, 2022 08:42
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
A fine work of miniature art.
March 24th, 2022 08:42
Taking it Slow
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, well
that\'s a better person than me;
sorry to be so predictable
but have to admit, unashamedly - so
that Kimono\'s
do it for me, too...
(a wonderful shorty, dear Poet)
lovely
March 24th, 2022 06:13
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, well
that\'s a better person than me;
sorry to be so predictable
but have to admit, unashamedly - so
that Kimono\'s
do it for me, too...
(a wonderful shorty, dear Poet)
lovely
March 24th, 2022 06:13
Taking it Slow
Fay Slimm. said:
Slow is the way to go when you\'re wooing with netsukes - - saves all the blushing - -well that\'s what methinks...........x
March 24th, 2022 05:34
Fay Slimm. said:
Slow is the way to go when you\'re wooing with netsukes - - saves all the blushing - -well that\'s what methinks...........x
March 24th, 2022 05:34
Taking it Slow
dusk arising said:
\"It\'s only a small one\" she said \"pop it in here and keep it warm\". His hands had stopped shaking.
March 24th, 2022 04:41
dusk arising said:
\"It\'s only a small one\" she said \"pop it in here and keep it warm\". His hands had stopped shaking.
March 24th, 2022 04:41
Taking it Slow
Doggerel Dave said:
Should appear on the Antiques Roadshow - they love \'em there...
March 24th, 2022 03:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Should appear on the Antiques Roadshow - they love \'em there...
March 24th, 2022 03:59
Taking it Slow
orchidee said:
A netsuke - a small and intricately carved toggle, I read. Toggle?! Swoon! lol.
March 24th, 2022 02:27
orchidee said:
A netsuke - a small and intricately carved toggle, I read. Toggle?! Swoon! lol.
March 24th, 2022 02:27
Blush
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
‘Blush’(ing) 🌸 while reading……..the comments…that is!
Nice one! 🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸
Laura🌻
March 23rd, 2022 16:43
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
‘Blush’(ing) 🌸 while reading……..the comments…that is!
Nice one! 🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸
Laura🌻
March 23rd, 2022 16:43
Blush
Michael Edwards said:
What colour was the Cherry Blossom? I\'ve got black and brown and grey. But I\'ve not got any grey leather - love the write by the way.
March 23rd, 2022 13:50
Michael Edwards said:
What colour was the Cherry Blossom? I\'ve got black and brown and grey. But I\'ve not got any grey leather - love the write by the way.
March 23rd, 2022 13:50
Blush
Christina8 said:
This is a great tribute to Spring. The cherry blossoms are blooming. You said it better! LOL c
March 23rd, 2022 13:10
Christina8 said:
This is a great tribute to Spring. The cherry blossoms are blooming. You said it better! LOL c
March 23rd, 2022 13:10
Blush
orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP keeps getting her kimono out, but it don\'t do anything for me. lol.
If I see Big Mary as Paul did, I shall swoon! Season of beached whales? lol.
March 23rd, 2022 11:22
orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP keeps getting her kimono out, but it don\'t do anything for me. lol.
If I see Big Mary as Paul did, I shall swoon! Season of beached whales? lol.
March 23rd, 2022 11:22
Blush
Fay Slimm. said:
Spring-filled imagery to sigh for in this little gem - I love the cherry-tree personification with blossom certainly more off than on..... great read Nev.
March 23rd, 2022 06:11
Fay Slimm. said:
Spring-filled imagery to sigh for in this little gem - I love the cherry-tree personification with blossom certainly more off than on..... great read Nev.
March 23rd, 2022 06:11
Blush
Paul Bell said:
Just saw big Mary passing by, not wearing much. The sooner we get back to winter, the better.
March 23rd, 2022 05:17
Paul Bell said:
Just saw big Mary passing by, not wearing much. The sooner we get back to winter, the better.
March 23rd, 2022 05:17
Not Just An Old Fella Passing
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful respectful words Neville, I have met many who were in ww2 but few of them tell of what they did. I had an uncle who was a Japanese POW and he never said anything about it but I could always see the horror in his eyes.
Andy
March 23rd, 2022 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful respectful words Neville, I have met many who were in ww2 but few of them tell of what they did. I had an uncle who was a Japanese POW and he never said anything about it but I could always see the horror in his eyes.
Andy
March 23rd, 2022 02:01
Not Just An Old Fella Passing
Doggerel Dave said:
Another relatively long one – thanks Nev.
For me the real message here is the contrast between Bill as “Bent down the middle, all shit, snot and piddle ..” and the reminder of a detailed complex life nearly everyone leads one way or another, with our own private battles, mostly ‘unheralded or unsung’.
March 22nd, 2022 19:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Another relatively long one – thanks Nev.
For me the real message here is the contrast between Bill as “Bent down the middle, all shit, snot and piddle ..” and the reminder of a detailed complex life nearly everyone leads one way or another, with our own private battles, mostly ‘unheralded or unsung’.
March 22nd, 2022 19:43
Not Just An Old Fella Passing
spilleronsheet said:
A beautiful thought
A sincere gratitude
So well said and a beautiful tribute for all those unsung heroes who didn’t think twice of loosing the head
Very thoughtful dear Neville
March 22nd, 2022 14:16
spilleronsheet said:
A beautiful thought
A sincere gratitude
So well said and a beautiful tribute for all those unsung heroes who didn’t think twice of loosing the head
Very thoughtful dear Neville
March 22nd, 2022 14:16
Not Just An Old Fella Passing
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Meanwhile - you know Bill Stickers, or his mate Bill Posters? Why they always prosecuting them? What they done? An old joke, probably centuries old! lol.
March 22nd, 2022 09:04
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Meanwhile - you know Bill Stickers, or his mate Bill Posters? Why they always prosecuting them? What they done? An old joke, probably centuries old! lol.
March 22nd, 2022 09:04
Not Just An Old Fella Passing
Christina8 said:
This is a wonderful tribute, N! As you said \"Lay him down gently\" I got shivers down my spine. Military funerals are so hard to attend, for me at least. The last being of my grandpa and they play \'taps\' here and that always gets me. Anyway, you did one hell of a job on this!
March 22nd, 2022 08:51
Christina8 said:
This is a wonderful tribute, N! As you said \"Lay him down gently\" I got shivers down my spine. Military funerals are so hard to attend, for me at least. The last being of my grandpa and they play \'taps\' here and that always gets me. Anyway, you did one hell of a job on this!
March 22nd, 2022 08:51
Not Just An Old Fella Passing
Fay Slimm. said:
Poemed to perfection this caring tribute to a friend with a chest full of medals and ribbons earned by his efforts to stay over the top again and again - - certainly not just any old fella and we as readers will remember Bill Stamp along with this mention of his valued example of what peace and love of justice means. A fine and very moving write Nev,..............x
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March 22nd, 2022 08:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Poemed to perfection this caring tribute to a friend with a chest full of medals and ribbons earned by his efforts to stay over the top again and again - - certainly not just any old fella and we as readers will remember Bill Stamp along with this mention of his valued example of what peace and love of justice means. A fine and very moving write Nev,..............x
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March 22nd, 2022 08:10
Not Just An Old Fella Passing
L. B. Mek said:
\'All bent down the middle ..
Nor was he just skin and bone
He once was a
father, a brother, a lover and
somebodies son ..
Moreover, on more than just
one odd occasion
he went over and over and
over the top ..\'
Dusk\'s comment, spoke to me
\'Are we the last generation to respect our elders?\'
not while Supreme Poet\'s like you, Hyung
share such emotive poems
invoking that respect and gratitude
we should never forget
for those who stood up and championed Peace
by bloodying their fingers and minds
and scarring their lives...
March 22nd, 2022 07:30
L. B. Mek said:
\'All bent down the middle ..
Nor was he just skin and bone
He once was a
father, a brother, a lover and
somebodies son ..
Moreover, on more than just
one odd occasion
he went over and over and
over the top ..\'
Dusk\'s comment, spoke to me
\'Are we the last generation to respect our elders?\'
not while Supreme Poet\'s like you, Hyung
share such emotive poems
invoking that respect and gratitude
we should never forget
for those who stood up and championed Peace
by bloodying their fingers and minds
and scarring their lives...
March 22nd, 2022 07:30
Not Just An Old Fella Passing
dean langmuir said:
I could feel the respect,Take care
March 22nd, 2022 07:17
dean langmuir said:
I could feel the respect,Take care
March 22nd, 2022 07:17
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