Comments received on poems by Neville
No Such Thing as Empty Space
myself and me said:
I won\'t forgive myself if I missed this one.
November 15th, 2021 21:35
myself and me said:
I won\'t forgive myself if I missed this one.
November 15th, 2021 21:35
Lawnsome
myself and me said:
Is this a new invention? I thought so.
\"Pray\" seems a high frequency word recently.
November 15th, 2021 20:09
myself and me said:
Is this a new invention? I thought so.
\"Pray\" seems a high frequency word recently.
November 15th, 2021 20:09
Lawnsome
Doggerel Dave said:
Your\'e aggravating my dyslexia, Nev - dodgy haikus fook it up completely.
Great environmental message there though.
Kudos to dusk\'s little effort - that one is going on the back of the next bog door I can find. Kudos also to you for the inspiration...
November 15th, 2021 18:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Your\'e aggravating my dyslexia, Nev - dodgy haikus fook it up completely.
Great environmental message there though.
Kudos to dusk\'s little effort - that one is going on the back of the next bog door I can find. Kudos also to you for the inspiration...
November 15th, 2021 18:17
Lawnsome
dusk arising said:
What the Faik is a faikhu?
Though much more a snatch than a patch
Pray leave the pubes alone she cried
Tis where my friend\'s (note the apostrope) wee crabbies hide.
I need to go for a long walk I think. This lockdown shielding has been going on too long for me and it\'s starting to.......
November 15th, 2021 14:31
dusk arising said:
What the Faik is a faikhu?
Though much more a snatch than a patch
Pray leave the pubes alone she cried
Tis where my friend\'s (note the apostrope) wee crabbies hide.
I need to go for a long walk I think. This lockdown shielding has been going on too long for me and it\'s starting to.......
November 15th, 2021 14:31
Pray Keep the Mask On
SureshG said:
While she’s willing to be intimate
She still needs to protect her privates
Satirical, absolutely
Thanks matey!!!
November 14th, 2021 20:02
SureshG said:
While she’s willing to be intimate
She still needs to protect her privates
Satirical, absolutely
Thanks matey!!!
November 14th, 2021 20:02
Pray Keep the Mask On
Goldfinch60 said:
We all wear masks in differing situations Neville, does anybody see us without a mask on?
Andy
November 14th, 2021 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
We all wear masks in differing situations Neville, does anybody see us without a mask on?
Andy
November 14th, 2021 01:38
Pray Keep the Mask On
myself and me said:
Without the mask, it would be so awkward, wouldn\'t it? A clever piece to enjoy on weekend.
November 13th, 2021 12:40
myself and me said:
Without the mask, it would be so awkward, wouldn\'t it? A clever piece to enjoy on weekend.
November 13th, 2021 12:40
Pray Keep the Mask On
orchidee said:
Should I meet her?! Should I risk it? I might swoon. lol.
November 13th, 2021 11:25
orchidee said:
Should I meet her?! Should I risk it? I might swoon. lol.
November 13th, 2021 11:25
Pray Keep the Mask On
Doggerel Dave said:
.....and we might just still make the 1.5 metre rule if you were to lean back far enough...... he said.....
November 13th, 2021 06:47
Doggerel Dave said:
.....and we might just still make the 1.5 metre rule if you were to lean back far enough...... he said.....
November 13th, 2021 06:47
Pray Keep the Mask On
dusk arising said:
There\'s an old phrase about looking at the mantlepiece which came to mind.
November 13th, 2021 06:02
dusk arising said:
There\'s an old phrase about looking at the mantlepiece which came to mind.
November 13th, 2021 06:02
Pray Keep the Mask On
spilleronsheet said:
A mask on
Nice one
The new norm
Mask on and smile
Mask on and frown
Who knows what the mask hides
November 13th, 2021 05:51
spilleronsheet said:
A mask on
Nice one
The new norm
Mask on and smile
Mask on and frown
Who knows what the mask hides
November 13th, 2021 05:51
Pray Keep the Mask On
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes amigo behind a mask anything goes - - or so they say - -- winks galore and thanks for the first smile of my day...............x
November 13th, 2021 04:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes amigo behind a mask anything goes - - or so they say - -- winks galore and thanks for the first smile of my day...............x
November 13th, 2021 04:52
No Such Thing as Empty Space
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Miles Davis once said even the silence between the notes is musical. I can definitely identify sir.
November 12th, 2021 14:35
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Miles Davis once said even the silence between the notes is musical. I can definitely identify sir.
November 12th, 2021 14:35
No Such Thing as Empty Space
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Neville, as I come towards my book of life there is no such thing as any empty spaces.
Andy
November 12th, 2021 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Neville, as I come towards my book of life there is no such thing as any empty spaces.
Andy
November 12th, 2021 01:23
No Such Thing as Empty Space
Doggerel Dave said:
Smells (and I mean this in the best possible sense) a little like a Zen koan to me, Nev...........
November 11th, 2021 18:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Smells (and I mean this in the best possible sense) a little like a Zen koan to me, Nev...........
November 11th, 2021 18:59
No Such Thing as Empty Space
orchidee said:
Only between my ears does empty space exist. Them 3 brain cells of mine should be due back from holiday soon though! heehee.
November 11th, 2021 10:23
orchidee said:
Only between my ears does empty space exist. Them 3 brain cells of mine should be due back from holiday soon though! heehee.
November 11th, 2021 10:23
No Such Thing as Empty Space
L. B. Mek said:
\'white/blank space = opportunity
making its presence, felt...\'
a great shorty, thanks for sharing dear Poet
(although, its completely the opposite for me
when it comes to the absence of those, we were once
alphabet-close - to, in our poetry of life;
distance and loss in our relationships
is somewhat inevitable in our lives, but
so is the passing pain, they bring)
November 11th, 2021 05:29
L. B. Mek said:
\'white/blank space = opportunity
making its presence, felt...\'
a great shorty, thanks for sharing dear Poet
(although, its completely the opposite for me
when it comes to the absence of those, we were once
alphabet-close - to, in our poetry of life;
distance and loss in our relationships
is somewhat inevitable in our lives, but
so is the passing pain, they bring)
November 11th, 2021 05:29
No Such Thing as Empty Space
dusk arising said:
I have been described as both a waste of space and a waste of good food.
I note that many empty spaces have been filled with your wily poetic wit on mps so bring on all the more spaces to tempt your poetic wiles.
November 11th, 2021 05:09
dusk arising said:
I have been described as both a waste of space and a waste of good food.
I note that many empty spaces have been filled with your wily poetic wit on mps so bring on all the more spaces to tempt your poetic wiles.
November 11th, 2021 05:09
No Such Thing as Empty Space
spilleronsheet said:
Sometimes emptiness can be filled
Sometimes let emptiness be there
Maybe at times vaccum is also needed
A great thought left behind
Thanks to those empty spaces in life
November 11th, 2021 04:51
spilleronsheet said:
Sometimes emptiness can be filled
Sometimes let emptiness be there
Maybe at times vaccum is also needed
A great thought left behind
Thanks to those empty spaces in life
November 11th, 2021 04:51
No Such Thing as Empty Space
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - good to see you posting again Nev..... but I now question - how could a talented mind such as you possess ever be accused of spacial emptiness ?..........x
November 11th, 2021 04:16
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - good to see you posting again Nev..... but I now question - how could a talented mind such as you possess ever be accused of spacial emptiness ?..........x
November 11th, 2021 04:16
No Such Thing as Empty Space
Caring dove said:
Emptiness and spaces can be filled … they don’t always have to be empty .
November 11th, 2021 04:04
Caring dove said:
Emptiness and spaces can be filled … they don’t always have to be empty .
November 11th, 2021 04:04
War is Not for Lovers
L. B. Mek said:
what a brilliant bridge, between
narrative and commentary
in a single poem,
I love your nod to Kipling\'s \'tommy\'
as well, adding to the innate fallacy
you unmask, in your portrayal
of all-things war and divisive tyranny!
(worth, reposting
on Thursday as a timely poem
to help us all insure, we Never
take their sacrifices for granted
and always Remember, their bravery:
of the 60 million who fought
some 9 million, lost their lives,
this freedom we waste, came
at such a heavy price...)
thanks for sharing, dear Masterful Poet
November 9th, 2021 04:14
L. B. Mek said:
what a brilliant bridge, between
narrative and commentary
in a single poem,
I love your nod to Kipling\'s \'tommy\'
as well, adding to the innate fallacy
you unmask, in your portrayal
of all-things war and divisive tyranny!
(worth, reposting
on Thursday as a timely poem
to help us all insure, we Never
take their sacrifices for granted
and always Remember, their bravery:
of the 60 million who fought
some 9 million, lost their lives,
this freedom we waste, came
at such a heavy price...)
thanks for sharing, dear Masterful Poet
November 9th, 2021 04:14
Kitten
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, may that kitten purr softly in your life.
Andy
November 5th, 2021 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, may that kitten purr softly in your life.
Andy
November 5th, 2021 01:32
Kitten
spilleronsheet said:
Kittens are lovely when they act coy
Beware when they turn tiger beside
November 4th, 2021 10:40
spilleronsheet said:
Kittens are lovely when they act coy
Beware when they turn tiger beside
November 4th, 2021 10:40
Kitten
L. B. Mek said:
a purring meow of approval from me, lol
a fun read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
November 4th, 2021 05:53
L. B. Mek said:
a purring meow of approval from me, lol
a fun read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
November 4th, 2021 05:53
Kitten
dusk arising said:
Someones been eating their kellogs frosties i see.
Kittens climbing up your trouser leg as you open a can of cat food..... so cut but owww those bloody claws! especially when the kitten has your %%%% in her grasp (which financially is always).
November 4th, 2021 05:10
dusk arising said:
Someones been eating their kellogs frosties i see.
Kittens climbing up your trouser leg as you open a can of cat food..... so cut but owww those bloody claws! especially when the kitten has your %%%% in her grasp (which financially is always).
November 4th, 2021 05:10
Kitten
Fay Slimm. said:
Methinks even tigers have to retreat when kittens turn wild - -- ggrrrrreat read to get the blood warmed on a November morn mon ami.............x
November 4th, 2021 04:05
Fay Slimm. said:
Methinks even tigers have to retreat when kittens turn wild - -- ggrrrrreat read to get the blood warmed on a November morn mon ami.............x
November 4th, 2021 04:05
Kitten
orchidee said:
I thought this would be about a cat! (did I? lol). Did he say \'Here, kitty, kitty\'? Did he call her in from outdoors, before night-fall?! heehee.
November 4th, 2021 04:03
orchidee said:
I thought this would be about a cat! (did I? lol). Did he say \'Here, kitty, kitty\'? Did he call her in from outdoors, before night-fall?! heehee.
November 4th, 2021 04:03
Kitten
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing like the old role play to get \'em at it....
That\'s lowered the tone considerably; Sorry Nev.
November 4th, 2021 03:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing like the old role play to get \'em at it....
That\'s lowered the tone considerably; Sorry Nev.
November 4th, 2021 03:57
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