Comments received on poems by Neville
2 Put it Frankly
Jerry Reynolds said:
This was so much fun, Neville. Set your alarm or you might miss a opportunity at the \"Crack of Dawn\"
May 29th, 2021 12:39
Jerry Reynolds said:
This was so much fun, Neville. Set your alarm or you might miss a opportunity at the \"Crack of Dawn\"
May 29th, 2021 12:39
2 Put it Frankly
Fay Slimm. said:
My smiles ever widen by your cleverly inventive twisting of words Nev. - another twice read verse to set me achuckle with use of Toulouses without one Lautrec - - hopin\' ya sleep tite yerself with all ya ticked boxes my naughtymost friend..............x
May 29th, 2021 04:23
Fay Slimm. said:
My smiles ever widen by your cleverly inventive twisting of words Nev. - another twice read verse to set me achuckle with use of Toulouses without one Lautrec - - hopin\' ya sleep tite yerself with all ya ticked boxes my naughtymost friend..............x
May 29th, 2021 04:23
2 Put it Frankly
Doggerel Dave said:
Didn\'t have the Monet to court her for longer? Wasn\'t Degas was it?
May 29th, 2021 04:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Didn\'t have the Monet to court her for longer? Wasn\'t Degas was it?
May 29th, 2021 04:09
2 Put it Frankly
dusk arising said:
Something tragic and heartfelt recounted here. One of those moments where the door of the \'best forgotten locker\' has opened and due venom has been levied.
May the rest of your bank holiday weekend be spent in more restful, peaceful frame of mind dear poet.
May 29th, 2021 03:34
dusk arising said:
Something tragic and heartfelt recounted here. One of those moments where the door of the \'best forgotten locker\' has opened and due venom has been levied.
May the rest of your bank holiday weekend be spent in more restful, peaceful frame of mind dear poet.
May 29th, 2021 03:34
2 Put it Frankly
Neville said:
............ I seem to be living in a world increasingly filled with ***** asterixis ...however, under the circumstances Mr. O I ****** thank thee ................. :)
May 29th, 2021 02:59
Neville said:
............ I seem to be living in a world increasingly filled with ***** asterixis ...however, under the circumstances Mr. O I ****** thank thee ................. :)
May 29th, 2021 02:59
2 Put it Frankly
orchidee said:
Ahh, marked 18+, or Fido would be barking ferociously! Meanwhile, I\'ve swooned, and he is helping to revive me. Well, he told me it was marked 18+. lol.
I saw a programme on Tourettes. One person used those words to a squirrel of all things. It looked bemused, poor creature.
Can it be helped? Or will men in white coats arrive for her soon?
May 29th, 2021 01:55
orchidee said:
Ahh, marked 18+, or Fido would be barking ferociously! Meanwhile, I\'ve swooned, and he is helping to revive me. Well, he told me it was marked 18+. lol.
I saw a programme on Tourettes. One person used those words to a squirrel of all things. It looked bemused, poor creature.
Can it be helped? Or will men in white coats arrive for her soon?
May 29th, 2021 01:55
A Box Full of Maybe’s
Trenz Pruca said:
Much more than a scribble,. A box full of maybe\'s perhaps. Thank you for the poem.
May 28th, 2021 22:34
Trenz Pruca said:
Much more than a scribble,. A box full of maybe\'s perhaps. Thank you for the poem.
May 28th, 2021 22:34
A Box Full of Maybe’s
Accidental Poet said:
A box of maybes is still better than a box of no\'s, yes? ; )
May 28th, 2021 19:42
Accidental Poet said:
A box of maybes is still better than a box of no\'s, yes? ; )
May 28th, 2021 19:42
A Box Full of Maybe’s
Dove said:
Well I hope the enjoyable days come more often, I’ll take a box of maybes and trade you for a box of chocolates! Smiles
May 28th, 2021 17:50
Dove said:
Well I hope the enjoyable days come more often, I’ll take a box of maybes and trade you for a box of chocolates! Smiles
May 28th, 2021 17:50
A Box Full of Maybe’s
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, Neville. Sometimes chance and destiny collide and for one moment it all makes sense.
May 28th, 2021 09:12
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, Neville. Sometimes chance and destiny collide and for one moment it all makes sense.
May 28th, 2021 09:12
A Box Full of Maybe’s
Doggerel Dave said:
I dunno – and as I’ve made it plain elsewhere, believe I most probably will never know…and maybe, I sometimes think, maybe that’s enlightenment… or perhaps enlightenment is the thought I may be wrong…then perhaps your position that it don’t happen all that often …
Anyway Neville....
May 28th, 2021 08:40
Doggerel Dave said:
I dunno – and as I’ve made it plain elsewhere, believe I most probably will never know…and maybe, I sometimes think, maybe that’s enlightenment… or perhaps enlightenment is the thought I may be wrong…then perhaps your position that it don’t happen all that often …
Anyway Neville....
May 28th, 2021 08:40
A Box Full of Maybe’s
L. B. Mek said:
\'life\'s like, a box of Maybe\'s
we never know
which one, we\'re meant to harvest\'..
a brilliant write my friend
lulled me into a satori observation, of my own
I think I\'m a fan of your poetry;
oh wait, I confessed that - already
and oh - so, very Proudly...!
😁😎🍻
May 28th, 2021 05:13
L. B. Mek said:
\'life\'s like, a box of Maybe\'s
we never know
which one, we\'re meant to harvest\'..
a brilliant write my friend
lulled me into a satori observation, of my own
I think I\'m a fan of your poetry;
oh wait, I confessed that - already
and oh - so, very Proudly...!
😁😎🍻
May 28th, 2021 05:13
A Box Full of Maybe’s
orchidee said:
Maybe I will like this poem. Yep, I sure do, as usual!
Maybe - I will meet one of them gals soon too.
May 28th, 2021 04:50
orchidee said:
Maybe I will like this poem. Yep, I sure do, as usual!
Maybe - I will meet one of them gals soon too.
May 28th, 2021 04:50
A Box Full of Maybe’s
Fay Slimm. said:
Bending to change can bring an awakening - - and that is no maybe my satorical friend. A write to remember for poets like me.
May 28th, 2021 04:19
Fay Slimm. said:
Bending to change can bring an awakening - - and that is no maybe my satorical friend. A write to remember for poets like me.
May 28th, 2021 04:19
A Box Full of Maybe’s
dusk arising said:
Kensho - seeing ones essence. A day to sit among natural wonders and let life begin it\'s teachings again.
May 28th, 2021 03:32
dusk arising said:
Kensho - seeing ones essence. A day to sit among natural wonders and let life begin it\'s teachings again.
May 28th, 2021 03:32
Rokhsana
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an awfully sad poem Neville, only alleged but still stoned to death, if it was a man I bet the Afghans would not have stoned him!!
Andy
May 28th, 2021 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an awfully sad poem Neville, only alleged but still stoned to death, if it was a man I bet the Afghans would not have stoned him!!
Andy
May 28th, 2021 00:19
Rokhsana
Doggerel Dave said:
Short sharp shock there, Neville... read piece first. Your comment only caused the switch.
In your words - Not everything is what it seems. Universal truth there, but in this case it certainly focused attention on something I find difficult to think about.
May 27th, 2021 20:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Short sharp shock there, Neville... read piece first. Your comment only caused the switch.
In your words - Not everything is what it seems. Universal truth there, but in this case it certainly focused attention on something I find difficult to think about.
May 27th, 2021 20:22
Rokhsana
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
a write of such empathy, displayed proudly
exemplifying: with unwavering sincerity...!
I read and learn, my friend
May 27th, 2021 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
a write of such empathy, displayed proudly
exemplifying: with unwavering sincerity...!
I read and learn, my friend
May 27th, 2021 05:26
Rokhsana
dusk arising said:
Maybe the world was not ready for true beauty. Maybe it is still not ready. Maybe injustice justifies the existence of some.
How many lines occupy the story of rokhsana, how many missing lines occupied her truth.
May 27th, 2021 03:38
dusk arising said:
Maybe the world was not ready for true beauty. Maybe it is still not ready. Maybe injustice justifies the existence of some.
How many lines occupy the story of rokhsana, how many missing lines occupied her truth.
May 27th, 2021 03:38
Rokhsana
Fay Slimm. said:
What a terrible custom Nev. - and so widely used for eons by many cultures - - - being stoned often meant a very slow death -- merely alleged of a crime yet courageously out-spoken was young Rokhsana - hoping your caring post will rouse readers to ever remember with flagrant empathy that beautiful name.
May 27th, 2021 03:35
Fay Slimm. said:
What a terrible custom Nev. - and so widely used for eons by many cultures - - - being stoned often meant a very slow death -- merely alleged of a crime yet courageously out-spoken was young Rokhsana - hoping your caring post will rouse readers to ever remember with flagrant empathy that beautiful name.
May 27th, 2021 03:35
Scarce Blues
L. B. Mek said:
\'Was a portion of sky with
a small diagonal crease
and a tear ….
Overflowing it was
with a million or more
jigsaw shaped pieces of
delicate blue\'..
well, what can I say
I read and learn, dear poet..
what an awesome gift
you choose to share, my friend
thank you!
May 27th, 2021 03:20
L. B. Mek said:
\'Was a portion of sky with
a small diagonal crease
and a tear ….
Overflowing it was
with a million or more
jigsaw shaped pieces of
delicate blue\'..
well, what can I say
I read and learn, dear poet..
what an awesome gift
you choose to share, my friend
thank you!
May 27th, 2021 03:20
Rokhsana
orchidee said:
Only \'alleged\' and yet stoned - a terrible state.
I can\'t meet her, unfortunately :(
May 27th, 2021 02:54
orchidee said:
Only \'alleged\' and yet stoned - a terrible state.
I can\'t meet her, unfortunately :(
May 27th, 2021 02:54
Scarce Blues
MendedFences27 said:
In passing, the life of a butterfly is very short, seasonal to be exact. It seems that most things beautiful in nature are short lived. Sometimes human emotions are sensational only to be quick in passing. Maybe both share the same fragility.
Your remembrance of a fleeting moment, or was it more, and the symbolism of butterflies, and blue in particular, of luck, love, and hope become a very allegorical image and well structured poem. Truly a classical pairing. - Phil A.
May 26th, 2021 12:33
MendedFences27 said:
In passing, the life of a butterfly is very short, seasonal to be exact. It seems that most things beautiful in nature are short lived. Sometimes human emotions are sensational only to be quick in passing. Maybe both share the same fragility.
Your remembrance of a fleeting moment, or was it more, and the symbolism of butterflies, and blue in particular, of luck, love, and hope become a very allegorical image and well structured poem. Truly a classical pairing. - Phil A.
May 26th, 2021 12:33
Scarce Blues
Jerry Reynolds said:
Fondly remember the ones who loved you. Grateful for the one who stayed.
Really good write, Neville.
May 26th, 2021 09:20
Jerry Reynolds said:
Fondly remember the ones who loved you. Grateful for the one who stayed.
Really good write, Neville.
May 26th, 2021 09:20
Scarce Blues
Fay Slimm. said:
More than a tribute to butterfly-beauty in this clever exposure of memory\'s \"forget-me-not\" visions of long-ago love. A corker agen Nev........x
May 26th, 2021 03:14
Fay Slimm. said:
More than a tribute to butterfly-beauty in this clever exposure of memory\'s \"forget-me-not\" visions of long-ago love. A corker agen Nev........x
May 26th, 2021 03:14
Scarce Blues
dusk arising said:
In the ending of all things life rests as fragile as butterfly wings seeking shelter in a rainstorm.
Is it our life or the futility which passes thru ones mind on the point of passing.
May 26th, 2021 02:39
dusk arising said:
In the ending of all things life rests as fragile as butterfly wings seeking shelter in a rainstorm.
Is it our life or the futility which passes thru ones mind on the point of passing.
May 26th, 2021 02:39
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