Comments received on poems by Neville
Unsincerely Yours
dusk arising said:
There\'s a lot to be said for a clean and final ending. Often an exchange of iffs buts and maybes is nothing more than a time wasting pre-cursor of the inevitable anyway. Save them for the dream world, it\'s less painful.
November 19th, 2021 05:24
dusk arising said:
There\'s a lot to be said for a clean and final ending. Often an exchange of iffs buts and maybes is nothing more than a time wasting pre-cursor of the inevitable anyway. Save them for the dream world, it\'s less painful.
November 19th, 2021 05:24
Unsincerely Yours
orchidee said:
I know - KP wrote me some letters when she was away having Botox (I\'m cruel to her. lol) She said they got lost in the post, but I doubt it.
November 19th, 2021 03:17
orchidee said:
I know - KP wrote me some letters when she was away having Botox (I\'m cruel to her. lol) She said they got lost in the post, but I doubt it.
November 19th, 2021 03:17
Narcissistically Speaking
spilleronsheet said:
It took a long time to acknowledge
It wasn’t me who was wrong but the one in front
Who thought always himself above me
He was a narcissist
And never knew when others around turned victims and lost themselves in self doubt
Beautifully put dear poet
November 18th, 2021 11:45
spilleronsheet said:
It took a long time to acknowledge
It wasn’t me who was wrong but the one in front
Who thought always himself above me
He was a narcissist
And never knew when others around turned victims and lost themselves in self doubt
Beautifully put dear poet
November 18th, 2021 11:45
Narcissistically Speaking
Garth Rakumakoe said:
An invisible enigma of sorts, narcissism. I read somewhere that we all have a little narcissist somewhere within us. Very well written work sir. Very impressive.
November 18th, 2021 09:09
Garth Rakumakoe said:
An invisible enigma of sorts, narcissism. I read somewhere that we all have a little narcissist somewhere within us. Very well written work sir. Very impressive.
November 18th, 2021 09:09
Narcissistically Speaking
L. B. Mek said:
great title, lol
I think you managed to capture
the hypocritical misogyny
in your portrayal, very well
November 18th, 2021 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
great title, lol
I think you managed to capture
the hypocritical misogyny
in your portrayal, very well
November 18th, 2021 06:08
Narcissistically Speaking
Fay Slimm. said:
So skillful your words Nev on the unassailable nature of the true narcissist who distort and are often quite unaware of it - -- I like the honesty too in the final line. A victim maybe of much painful past. history - - still smiling however at your opening clever comparison ........................x
November 18th, 2021 05:26
Fay Slimm. said:
So skillful your words Nev on the unassailable nature of the true narcissist who distort and are often quite unaware of it - -- I like the honesty too in the final line. A victim maybe of much painful past. history - - still smiling however at your opening clever comparison ........................x
November 18th, 2021 05:26
Narcissistically Speaking
dusk arising said:
I knew her for about eighteen months of one 2 one. Finally i walked away from the best physical relationship and found someone else to do.
November 18th, 2021 04:24
dusk arising said:
I knew her for about eighteen months of one 2 one. Finally i walked away from the best physical relationship and found someone else to do.
November 18th, 2021 04:24
Narcissistically Speaking
Goldfinch60 said:
A friend of mine has suffered at the hands of a narcissist for many years, she has at last managed to get him from the house but he still thinks all is ok, he is an absolute swine as all who know him know too darn well.
Andy
November 18th, 2021 03:39
Goldfinch60 said:
A friend of mine has suffered at the hands of a narcissist for many years, she has at last managed to get him from the house but he still thinks all is ok, he is an absolute swine as all who know him know too darn well.
Andy
November 18th, 2021 03:39
Narcissistically Speaking
orchidee said:
Thanks N. Oohh, have I met her yet?! I can\'t remember. lol.
November 18th, 2021 03:05
orchidee said:
Thanks N. Oohh, have I met her yet?! I can\'t remember. lol.
November 18th, 2021 03:05
Narcissistically Speaking
Caring dove said:
Narcissists also lie to themselves . They think everything is about them
.
I have spoken to someone in the past who I felt was somewhat narcissistic ‘ …
November 18th, 2021 03:01
Caring dove said:
Narcissists also lie to themselves . They think everything is about them
.
I have spoken to someone in the past who I felt was somewhat narcissistic ‘ …
November 18th, 2021 03:01
Just Another Way Out
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A fine write indeed!
Whether your penned words are referencing a person, place , or thing, I can feel the sadness in your poem.
Sometimes we can be our own worst enemy.
Laura🌻
November 17th, 2021 16:45
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A fine write indeed!
Whether your penned words are referencing a person, place , or thing, I can feel the sadness in your poem.
Sometimes we can be our own worst enemy.
Laura🌻
November 17th, 2021 16:45
Just Another Way Out
SureshG said:
Maybe I’m misreading this emasculate poem, but my mind immediately thought of the Norte Dame.
November 17th, 2021 11:08
SureshG said:
Maybe I’m misreading this emasculate poem, but my mind immediately thought of the Norte Dame.
November 17th, 2021 11:08
Just Another Way Out
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Was the Titanic weren\'t it? \'Cept there was no time to mend her...... The history\'s there - in the books, on the Antiques Roadshow....
Good \'un, Nev....
November 17th, 2021 05:42
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Was the Titanic weren\'t it? \'Cept there was no time to mend her...... The history\'s there - in the books, on the Antiques Roadshow....
Good \'un, Nev....
November 17th, 2021 05:42
Just Another Way Out
dusk arising said:
Ah, the secrets of a woman\'s past, who shall know their varying. For jealous tongues will wag in creative wiles in places truth dare not enter.
So you fell for a gal who looked like a temple but farted like an old church bell. \"If ya wanna see me do my thing baby pull my string\"
Ding-dong.
Another piece of mystery from the enthralling hand of a master poet.
November 17th, 2021 03:41
dusk arising said:
Ah, the secrets of a woman\'s past, who shall know their varying. For jealous tongues will wag in creative wiles in places truth dare not enter.
So you fell for a gal who looked like a temple but farted like an old church bell. \"If ya wanna see me do my thing baby pull my string\"
Ding-dong.
Another piece of mystery from the enthralling hand of a master poet.
November 17th, 2021 03:41
Just Another Way Out
Fay Slimm. said:
The pity when people come to such broken ends is captured with tender empathy throughout this verse Nev. from its title to final line a moving write on fabrication and how often it masks painful experience - - -- a heart-wrenching piece for my keeper\'s list................x
November 17th, 2021 03:39
Fay Slimm. said:
The pity when people come to such broken ends is captured with tender empathy throughout this verse Nev. from its title to final line a moving write on fabrication and how often it masks painful experience - - -- a heart-wrenching piece for my keeper\'s list................x
November 17th, 2021 03:39
Just Another Way Out
orchidee said:
Awww, and I was gonna meet her - she\'s gone!
Was she dusty and musty inside, as some old churches can be?
November 17th, 2021 03:16
orchidee said:
Awww, and I was gonna meet her - she\'s gone!
Was she dusty and musty inside, as some old churches can be?
November 17th, 2021 03:16
Just Another Way Out
Neville said:
Absolutely & unquestionably true GF60 .......... and thanks for chirping in my friend ... Neville
November 17th, 2021 01:48
Neville said:
Absolutely & unquestionably true GF60 .......... and thanks for chirping in my friend ... Neville
November 17th, 2021 01:48
Just Another Way Out
Goldfinch60 said:
One never really knows the depths that lay in others minds Neville.
Andy
November 17th, 2021 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
One never really knows the depths that lay in others minds Neville.
Andy
November 17th, 2021 01:43
Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words and visualisations Neville.
Andy
November 17th, 2021 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words and visualisations Neville.
Andy
November 17th, 2021 01:28
Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars
MendedFences27 said:
Sorry, I can\'t tell who, what, or where \"she\" is, but that doesn\'t mean this isn\'t the most stimulating and enticing bit of poetry I have read in a while. Please don\'t explain your intent here for I wish to mull over this for a while and will save it for future exploration. A dazzling blend of perfectly selected wordings. Instantly entertaining and challenging to the reader. I\'ve read it several times and each time find something new to think about, Just great. - Phil A.
November 16th, 2021 20:08
MendedFences27 said:
Sorry, I can\'t tell who, what, or where \"she\" is, but that doesn\'t mean this isn\'t the most stimulating and enticing bit of poetry I have read in a while. Please don\'t explain your intent here for I wish to mull over this for a while and will save it for future exploration. A dazzling blend of perfectly selected wordings. Instantly entertaining and challenging to the reader. I\'ve read it several times and each time find something new to think about, Just great. - Phil A.
November 16th, 2021 20:08
Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars
orchidee said:
Ahh, a poem about a bird in a cage - the feathered variety of bird?! lol.
November 16th, 2021 11:32
orchidee said:
Ahh, a poem about a bird in a cage - the feathered variety of bird?! lol.
November 16th, 2021 11:32
Lawnsome
Fay Slimm. said:
I like faking the haiku too Nev. - never could scribble the real thing me - - -glad I caught this little example of approximate alternative and faiku for sharing it .........x
November 16th, 2021 10:51
Fay Slimm. said:
I like faking the haiku too Nev. - never could scribble the real thing me - - -glad I caught this little example of approximate alternative and faiku for sharing it .........x
November 16th, 2021 10:51
Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Poetry in motion. Absolutely beautiful and vividly descriptive! It\'s an attractive work of art sir.
November 16th, 2021 09:09
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Poetry in motion. Absolutely beautiful and vividly descriptive! It\'s an attractive work of art sir.
November 16th, 2021 09:09
Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars
L. B. Mek said:
when, we can admire
and respect, feat\'s of prowess
aside, beauty\'s - grace
and prioritise our appreciation of each: equally
we earn the right, to consider ourselves
Men
and not merely,
testosterone addled, boys...
(subtly, delivering
insightful commentary
on those
real life: \'Pandora box\' themes
few of us, have the temerity
to even consider, in private
let alone, verse
so relatable
and unashamedly, Public)
thanks for sharing, dear masterful Poet
November 16th, 2021 07:20
L. B. Mek said:
when, we can admire
and respect, feat\'s of prowess
aside, beauty\'s - grace
and prioritise our appreciation of each: equally
we earn the right, to consider ourselves
Men
and not merely,
testosterone addled, boys...
(subtly, delivering
insightful commentary
on those
real life: \'Pandora box\' themes
few of us, have the temerity
to even consider, in private
let alone, verse
so relatable
and unashamedly, Public)
thanks for sharing, dear masterful Poet
November 16th, 2021 07:20
Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars
dusk arising said:
Dress a lady in vertical bars to accentuate her curves. A real prowling cat.
November 16th, 2021 06:28
dusk arising said:
Dress a lady in vertical bars to accentuate her curves. A real prowling cat.
November 16th, 2021 06:28
Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars
Doggerel Dave said:
That tiger should be out in the forest, properly protected, not behind bars, Nev.
Beautifully paced work.
November 16th, 2021 06:26
Doggerel Dave said:
That tiger should be out in the forest, properly protected, not behind bars, Nev.
Beautifully paced work.
November 16th, 2021 06:26
Lawnsome
L. B. Mek said:
we need to find a way to heal your feud with that plague of a \'haiku\'
(why, bless you) lol
November 16th, 2021 05:59
L. B. Mek said:
we need to find a way to heal your feud with that plague of a \'haiku\'
(why, bless you) lol
November 16th, 2021 05:59
Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars
Fay Slimm. said:
Nothing like a mystery to set pulses alive - not clearly defined is even better -- - Fank yu dear Sir - loving this take on the voyeur.......x
November 16th, 2021 05:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Nothing like a mystery to set pulses alive - not clearly defined is even better -- - Fank yu dear Sir - loving this take on the voyeur.......x
November 16th, 2021 05:58
Pray Keep the Mask On
L. B. Mek said:
(another great,
thought provoking shorty, dear Poet
couldn\'t resist trying to scribble a little reply,
thank you for inspiring me)
\'adulthood\'s, deep-end
YOLO
diving experiences, where
our masking, goggles
and accompanying
\'self-contained underwater breathing apparatus\'
SCUBA gear, insure
our true selves, is kept
back on reality\'s, boat;
as we swim the wonder\'s
of our inquisitive depths
all we need, is to be
on the same page
when it comes to consent
and mutual respect
all the rest,
is fun and games
gift-wrapped in that mystique
escapism, in a face mask...\'
November 16th, 2021 05:57
L. B. Mek said:
(another great,
thought provoking shorty, dear Poet
couldn\'t resist trying to scribble a little reply,
thank you for inspiring me)
\'adulthood\'s, deep-end
YOLO
diving experiences, where
our masking, goggles
and accompanying
\'self-contained underwater breathing apparatus\'
SCUBA gear, insure
our true selves, is kept
back on reality\'s, boat;
as we swim the wonder\'s
of our inquisitive depths
all we need, is to be
on the same page
when it comes to consent
and mutual respect
all the rest,
is fun and games
gift-wrapped in that mystique
escapism, in a face mask...\'
November 16th, 2021 05:57
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