Comments received on poems by Neville
If Truth was a Colour
dusk arising said:
I wish truth were black and white with no room for misinterpretation.....
However, blue seems to be, as you say, the inevitability of truth.
Short and punchy verse get my vote every time.
June 2nd, 2021 04:13
dusk arising said:
I wish truth were black and white with no room for misinterpretation.....
However, blue seems to be, as you say, the inevitability of truth.
Short and punchy verse get my vote every time.
June 2nd, 2021 04:13
If Truth was a Colour
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I agree . Colours have so much meaning . A nice poem
June 2nd, 2021 03:39
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I agree . Colours have so much meaning . A nice poem
June 2nd, 2021 03:39
Once Upon a Freckled Cheek
Goldfinch60 said:
May that smile be forever there Neville.
Andy
June 2nd, 2021 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
May that smile be forever there Neville.
Andy
June 2nd, 2021 00:29
Once Upon a Freckled Cheek
Doggerel Dave said:
To tell more would be to spoil it, I think, Neville. Best leave it right there, as you so carefully did.
June 1st, 2021 19:55
Doggerel Dave said:
To tell more would be to spoil it, I think, Neville. Best leave it right there, as you so carefully did.
June 1st, 2021 19:55
Once Upon a Freckled Cheek
orchidee said:
I might have met some of these fine gals, with notes in my Little Red (?) Book.
But were they too much for me?! lol.
June 1st, 2021 09:25
orchidee said:
I might have met some of these fine gals, with notes in my Little Red (?) Book.
But were they too much for me?! lol.
June 1st, 2021 09:25
Once Upon a Freckled Cheek
L. B. Mek said:
this was scarily reminiscent
of a crisp clear, cherished memory
I keep close
in those corridors of our heart\'s
where Time, can\'t blemish the sanctity
of a moment that exists
to reaffirm our tethers: to existence, itself...
utilising sumptuous imagery, my friend
a wonderful read
June 1st, 2021 05:02
L. B. Mek said:
this was scarily reminiscent
of a crisp clear, cherished memory
I keep close
in those corridors of our heart\'s
where Time, can\'t blemish the sanctity
of a moment that exists
to reaffirm our tethers: to existence, itself...
utilising sumptuous imagery, my friend
a wonderful read
June 1st, 2021 05:02
Once Upon a Freckled Cheek
Fay Slimm. said:
Thrilling as ever your best \"rainbow moment\" with I suspect a new family member.......... such a tender-packed bouquet of poetic wealth to keep and remember forever - - - or maybe the verse recalls another time of first smiles when a different amour struck afresh -- - - I love how the last line ends ........x
June 1st, 2021 03:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Thrilling as ever your best \"rainbow moment\" with I suspect a new family member.......... such a tender-packed bouquet of poetic wealth to keep and remember forever - - - or maybe the verse recalls another time of first smiles when a different amour struck afresh -- - - I love how the last line ends ........x
June 1st, 2021 03:14
Once Upon a Freckled Cheek
dusk arising said:
Delightful. I\'m jealous.
How do you pack so much into short lines?
June 1st, 2021 02:41
dusk arising said:
Delightful. I\'m jealous.
How do you pack so much into short lines?
June 1st, 2021 02:41
Sheen
Trenz Pruca said:
I get an image of shimmering crystal as I read this. Good poem. Thank you.
May 31st, 2021 19:14
Trenz Pruca said:
I get an image of shimmering crystal as I read this. Good poem. Thank you.
May 31st, 2021 19:14
Sheen
SureshG said:
Sheen, a film thinner than the thinnest object, that your words colored so poetically
May 31st, 2021 11:36
SureshG said:
Sheen, a film thinner than the thinnest object, that your words colored so poetically
May 31st, 2021 11:36
Sheen
orchidee said:
Can ya beat a bit of sheen? And am I talking nonsense now?
And - does anyone notice the difference if I am?! lol.
I thought it was gonna be about polishing. You got any Mr Sheen?
May 31st, 2021 06:49
orchidee said:
Can ya beat a bit of sheen? And am I talking nonsense now?
And - does anyone notice the difference if I am?! lol.
I thought it was gonna be about polishing. You got any Mr Sheen?
May 31st, 2021 06:49
Riding a Curve
L. B. Mek said:
\'Was like
riding a curve ..
Set in stone
upon a simple
eyelash flutter\'..
see now, that\'s that Poetry: that can never be replicated
merely copied and imitated...
simply, and as ever subtly: Brilliant!
thanks for sharing my friend
May 31st, 2021 03:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'Was like
riding a curve ..
Set in stone
upon a simple
eyelash flutter\'..
see now, that\'s that Poetry: that can never be replicated
merely copied and imitated...
simply, and as ever subtly: Brilliant!
thanks for sharing my friend
May 31st, 2021 03:46
Sheen
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Yes -- Sheen - you use one of my favourite words in this gloriously readable verse on its meaning Nev -- an intriguingly gorgeous first read of my day and thanking you dearly......x
May 31st, 2021 03:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Yes -- Sheen - you use one of my favourite words in this gloriously readable verse on its meaning Nev -- an intriguingly gorgeous first read of my day and thanking you dearly......x
May 31st, 2021 03:10
Sheen
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words . I liked reading this nicely expressed and flows nicely
May 31st, 2021 02:26
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words . I liked reading this nicely expressed and flows nicely
May 31st, 2021 02:26
Riding a Curve
SureshG said:
One more in a series of sensuous recollections, so thoroughly enjoyed.
May 30th, 2021 16:00
SureshG said:
One more in a series of sensuous recollections, so thoroughly enjoyed.
May 30th, 2021 16:00
Riding a Curve
Jerry Reynolds said:
I agree with Fay, Neville. A very sensuous poem.
May 30th, 2021 13:58
Jerry Reynolds said:
I agree with Fay, Neville. A very sensuous poem.
May 30th, 2021 13:58
Riding a Curve
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a sensuous read - know what you mean by knowing and hope that stone softened in time mon ami.....x
May 30th, 2021 12:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a sensuous read - know what you mean by knowing and hope that stone softened in time mon ami.....x
May 30th, 2021 12:43
Riding a Curve
Accidental Poet said:
Sometimes we\'re touched by an Angel\'s smile and it stays with us for a lifetime. Beautiful poem N. ; )
May 30th, 2021 09:16
Accidental Poet said:
Sometimes we\'re touched by an Angel\'s smile and it stays with us for a lifetime. Beautiful poem N. ; )
May 30th, 2021 09:16
Virus
Doggerel Dave said:
Pre covid. Prophetic or what?
Poignant write on its own, without the current situation, Neville.
Covid, \'cunning\', mutable, aspires to be everything you list , if that\'s not too anthropomorphic.
This one is ready for a re-run, I think.
May 30th, 2021 07:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Pre covid. Prophetic or what?
Poignant write on its own, without the current situation, Neville.
Covid, \'cunning\', mutable, aspires to be everything you list , if that\'s not too anthropomorphic.
This one is ready for a re-run, I think.
May 30th, 2021 07:36
Mirrors Cracked
Doggerel Dave said:
Got It...and no, I\'m not gonna ask - I see too many bits of my own life and relationships in there to want to take on any of yours.
Thanks for that, Neville.
May 30th, 2021 07:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Got It...and no, I\'m not gonna ask - I see too many bits of my own life and relationships in there to want to take on any of yours.
Thanks for that, Neville.
May 30th, 2021 07:07
Riding a Curve
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve bin battered and bruised by these birds lately, ain\'t you, Neville?
Any chance better times ahead? 😊
Advice to the lovelorn? Surely you could pass one of them on who would not be too damaging to poor old orchi? 😊
May 30th, 2021 05:50
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve bin battered and bruised by these birds lately, ain\'t you, Neville?
Any chance better times ahead? 😊
Advice to the lovelorn? Surely you could pass one of them on who would not be too damaging to poor old orchi? 😊
May 30th, 2021 05:50
Riding a Curve
dusk arising said:
Unforgettable short lived times. Like ehen a beautiful butterfly lands on your forhead, you open your eyes to see its beautiful colours and it shits in your eye. Unforgettable.
May 30th, 2021 04:31
dusk arising said:
Unforgettable short lived times. Like ehen a beautiful butterfly lands on your forhead, you open your eyes to see its beautiful colours and it shits in your eye. Unforgettable.
May 30th, 2021 04:31
Riding a Curve
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
How about this lass? Should I meet her? Could I meet her?!
May 30th, 2021 01:34
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
How about this lass? Should I meet her? Could I meet her?!
May 30th, 2021 01:34
Riding a Curve
Goldfinch60 said:
May that sun ray be forever with you Neville.
Andy
May 30th, 2021 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
May that sun ray be forever with you Neville.
Andy
May 30th, 2021 00:47
2 Put it Frankly Â
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write hopefully bring plenty of Monet your way.
Andy
May 30th, 2021 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write hopefully bring plenty of Monet your way.
Andy
May 30th, 2021 00:21
2 Put it Frankly Â
SureshG said:
Don’t ever go from TOULON to TOULOUSE. Trust me, it’s a mood killer. I did it once, and she never forgave me.
As they all said, loved your poem tooo.
May 29th, 2021 18:47
SureshG said:
Don’t ever go from TOULON to TOULOUSE. Trust me, it’s a mood killer. I did it once, and she never forgave me.
As they all said, loved your poem tooo.
May 29th, 2021 18:47
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