Comments received on poems by Neville
Inconsequential Gulls
SureshG said:
Not to be a downer but hidden beneath your message is the ominous winds of the demise of democracy.
October 30th, 2021 20:23
SureshG said:
Not to be a downer but hidden beneath your message is the ominous winds of the demise of democracy.
October 30th, 2021 20:23
Inconsequential Gulls
Neville said:
Hey Neil, sorry to hear that, still I guess it could have been a lot worse .. good to see you back .. and have as good a weekend as you possibly can under the circumstances ............... Neville
October 29th, 2021 11:52
Neville said:
Hey Neil, sorry to hear that, still I guess it could have been a lot worse .. good to see you back .. and have as good a weekend as you possibly can under the circumstances ............... Neville
October 29th, 2021 11:52
Inconsequential Gulls
orchidee said:
I reckon I should meet her. See ya in a week, when I\'ve recovered! lol.
October 29th, 2021 10:49
orchidee said:
I reckon I should meet her. See ya in a week, when I\'ve recovered! lol.
October 29th, 2021 10:49
Inconsequential Gulls
L. B. Mek said:
.. and all
chasing crumbs
leaching off, of
society\'s rubbish..
Gluttony, was an all consuming
evil
before Theology: ever existed!
(a great write, dear Poet)
and thank you, for letting me vent a little as well
by helping inspire my little scribbled reply
October 29th, 2021 05:47
L. B. Mek said:
.. and all
chasing crumbs
leaching off, of
society\'s rubbish..
Gluttony, was an all consuming
evil
before Theology: ever existed!
(a great write, dear Poet)
and thank you, for letting me vent a little as well
by helping inspire my little scribbled reply
October 29th, 2021 05:47
Inconsequential Gulls
Fay Slimm. said:
Methinks I know folk like gulls who crave attention by incessant mewing. Agree too with Dusk that your words spell deeper meaning than just inconsequential - good write my friend.....x
October 29th, 2021 04:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Methinks I know folk like gulls who crave attention by incessant mewing. Agree too with Dusk that your words spell deeper meaning than just inconsequential - good write my friend.....x
October 29th, 2021 04:13
Inconsequential Gulls
spilleronsheet said:
Well crafted dear poet
Especially because it’s a sweet way of satire filled with truth
Those are the great politicians we choose
Well penned
October 29th, 2021 03:21
spilleronsheet said:
Well crafted dear poet
Especially because it’s a sweet way of satire filled with truth
Those are the great politicians we choose
Well penned
October 29th, 2021 03:21
Inconsequential Gulls
Goldfinch60 said:
Your talking about MP\'s again, what a load of misconceptions and non truths spew from their beaks.
Andy
October 29th, 2021 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Your talking about MP\'s again, what a load of misconceptions and non truths spew from their beaks.
Andy
October 29th, 2021 02:04
Inconsequential Gulls
orchidee said:
Should I meet these gulls?!
Well, it sounded like \'gals\'! lol.
October 29th, 2021 01:58
orchidee said:
Should I meet these gulls?!
Well, it sounded like \'gals\'! lol.
October 29th, 2021 01:58
Inconsequential Gulls
dusk arising said:
Such a lovely metaphor for the Houses of Parliament you\'ve poetically phrased today.
Can you smell the regurgitated fish?
October 29th, 2021 01:57
dusk arising said:
Such a lovely metaphor for the Houses of Parliament you\'ve poetically phrased today.
Can you smell the regurgitated fish?
October 29th, 2021 01:57
Burnt and Bitter Oranges
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville, it is like an abstract artwork where you really have to look deeply into it to find a meaning within yourself - I like abstract works of art so thank you.
Andy
October 29th, 2021 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville, it is like an abstract artwork where you really have to look deeply into it to find a meaning within yourself - I like abstract works of art so thank you.
Andy
October 29th, 2021 00:54
Burnt and Bitter Oranges
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
This is a very interesting and intriguing read……..
’burnt and bitter oranges’……
this is something that I really like……
believe it or not…..
Thank you for sharing this challenging write.
Laura🌻
October 28th, 2021 23:27
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
This is a very interesting and intriguing read……..
’burnt and bitter oranges’……
this is something that I really like……
believe it or not…..
Thank you for sharing this challenging write.
Laura🌻
October 28th, 2021 23:27
Burnt and Bitter Oranges
SureshG said:
Me thinks you tickled the MPS’s uvula, devilishly teasing, engaging, meaning left to interpretation
October 28th, 2021 20:20
SureshG said:
Me thinks you tickled the MPS’s uvula, devilishly teasing, engaging, meaning left to interpretation
October 28th, 2021 20:20
Mouth My Name Slow
Sparrow73 said:
I love it! It is something I can completely relate to and sincerely needed to hear! The universe is so timely when we\'re willing to listen isn\'t it. Keep em coming I\'ve thoroughly enjoyed them all! I do hope that when where purging are negative thoughts that we do not mean to offend others it\'s just our way of releasing of which we cannot hang on to is all. No sweet can be appreciated without the knowledge of a bit of bitter. Thus, bittersweet.
October 28th, 2021 15:19
Sparrow73 said:
I love it! It is something I can completely relate to and sincerely needed to hear! The universe is so timely when we\'re willing to listen isn\'t it. Keep em coming I\'ve thoroughly enjoyed them all! I do hope that when where purging are negative thoughts that we do not mean to offend others it\'s just our way of releasing of which we cannot hang on to is all. No sweet can be appreciated without the knowledge of a bit of bitter. Thus, bittersweet.
October 28th, 2021 15:19
Burnt and Bitter Oranges
dusk arising said:
Mystery leads the mind to conjour a story..... plenty of meat here to construct a very strangely framed tale....
. ...... bergamot taunts the air
October 28th, 2021 14:41
dusk arising said:
Mystery leads the mind to conjour a story..... plenty of meat here to construct a very strangely framed tale....
. ...... bergamot taunts the air
October 28th, 2021 14:41
Burnt and Bitter Oranges
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - Great minds think alike they say - and this young filly\'s eyes like the uncanny when she is nearly right.......x
October 28th, 2021 13:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - Great minds think alike they say - and this young filly\'s eyes like the uncanny when she is nearly right.......x
October 28th, 2021 13:04
Burnt and Bitter Oranges
Paul Bell said:
Sounds like the mummy has been found, and her importance has been lost in time.
October 28th, 2021 13:03
Paul Bell said:
Sounds like the mummy has been found, and her importance has been lost in time.
October 28th, 2021 13:03
Burnt and Bitter Oranges
Fay Slimm. said:
Old pictures viewed in today\'s mode must have seemed to perpetuate people yet traits remembered bring back even the taste and smell of someone much missed - - at least I think that is the message behind this intriguing read - - well perhaps maybe......x
October 28th, 2021 11:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Old pictures viewed in today\'s mode must have seemed to perpetuate people yet traits remembered bring back even the taste and smell of someone much missed - - at least I think that is the message behind this intriguing read - - well perhaps maybe......x
October 28th, 2021 11:40
Burnt and Bitter Oranges
Caring dove said:
That sounds really painful … not being able to fully move away from something … almost makes me think of feeling a sense of feeling trapped . Just how I read it anyway
I can’t say I fully understand this but you seem to be trying to say a lot in just a few lines
October 28th, 2021 11:09
Caring dove said:
That sounds really painful … not being able to fully move away from something … almost makes me think of feeling a sense of feeling trapped . Just how I read it anyway
I can’t say I fully understand this but you seem to be trying to say a lot in just a few lines
October 28th, 2021 11:09
Mouth My Name Slow
SureshG said:
Wasn’t it those pints that loosened our tongues and gotten us in that ‘truth be told’ mess to start with. Well maybe them those pints, as you said, will get us out of it….
October 28th, 2021 09:55
SureshG said:
Wasn’t it those pints that loosened our tongues and gotten us in that ‘truth be told’ mess to start with. Well maybe them those pints, as you said, will get us out of it….
October 28th, 2021 09:55
Mouth My Name Slow
L. B. Mek said:
or count to 3 and allow me to create distance,
so as to step, back
into your good books
without, the hassle
of a soon-to-be regretted
bust-up, or three...
🍻
here\'s to our hard earned appreciation
for avoiding, futile confrontation!
October 28th, 2021 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
or count to 3 and allow me to create distance,
so as to step, back
into your good books
without, the hassle
of a soon-to-be regretted
bust-up, or three...
🍻
here\'s to our hard earned appreciation
for avoiding, futile confrontation!
October 28th, 2021 04:49
Enlightenment #2
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, its only when we witness
the truly good, among us
leave - behind, as many regrets
as those of us, who watched-on
as mere spectators,
we get to realise
just how fleeting, our Now
truly is..
(reads like a poignant scene from a well written novel or play)
a delightful read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
October 28th, 2021 04:43
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, its only when we witness
the truly good, among us
leave - behind, as many regrets
as those of us, who watched-on
as mere spectators,
we get to realise
just how fleeting, our Now
truly is..
(reads like a poignant scene from a well written novel or play)
a delightful read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
October 28th, 2021 04:43
Mouth My Name Slow
Goldfinch60 said:
Anger can produce so many consequential mistakes in our lives Neville.
Andy
October 28th, 2021 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Anger can produce so many consequential mistakes in our lives Neville.
Andy
October 28th, 2021 00:39
Mouth My Name Slow
SureshG said:
The friendship we endure, must strain to first recall the imperfections, and in their absence must wonder why we even ventured so…..even when beckoned by your poetic words.
October 27th, 2021 13:31
SureshG said:
The friendship we endure, must strain to first recall the imperfections, and in their absence must wonder why we even ventured so…..even when beckoned by your poetic words.
October 27th, 2021 13:31
Mouth My Name Slow
dusk arising said:
Oh i recall the days when i threw arrows at your image and mocked every utterance upon your breath.
But then i learned to voice your name so slowly that, apart from strange looks as I noised that name in a dirge of meditational transit, my mind began to see the messiah within your very soul.....
Now there\'s a story it would be difficult to live up to.
October 27th, 2021 10:16
dusk arising said:
Oh i recall the days when i threw arrows at your image and mocked every utterance upon your breath.
But then i learned to voice your name so slowly that, apart from strange looks as I noised that name in a dirge of meditational transit, my mind began to see the messiah within your very soul.....
Now there\'s a story it would be difficult to live up to.
October 27th, 2021 10:16
Mouth My Name Slow
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read, Neville.
Though we shared great times, my imperfections seem to be what is kept.
October 27th, 2021 09:32
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read, Neville.
Though we shared great times, my imperfections seem to be what is kept.
October 27th, 2021 09:32
Mouth My Name Slow
Fay Slimm. said:
Should you wish it will do that directly and without anger or pique. Another poetic success mon dear ami.........x
October 27th, 2021 08:25
Fay Slimm. said:
Should you wish it will do that directly and without anger or pique. Another poetic success mon dear ami.........x
October 27th, 2021 08:25
Mouth My Name Slow
spilleronsheet said:
A moment of heat
A moment of rush
Always makes us take the bad decisions
Especially the words chosen at that moment be so rude
That we may end up hurting others
Thank you dear poet for the message, if we can assign imperfections to others. Then we must remember no one exists without flaws.
October 27th, 2021 08:17
spilleronsheet said:
A moment of heat
A moment of rush
Always makes us take the bad decisions
Especially the words chosen at that moment be so rude
That we may end up hurting others
Thank you dear poet for the message, if we can assign imperfections to others. Then we must remember no one exists without flaws.
October 27th, 2021 08:17
Mouth My Name Slow
Caring dove said:
Interesting way with words … good poem . I guess sometimes we can forget the imperfections ,
Not good to always focus on that which we see at fault with someone ejse
October 27th, 2021 07:26
Caring dove said:
Interesting way with words … good poem . I guess sometimes we can forget the imperfections ,
Not good to always focus on that which we see at fault with someone ejse
October 27th, 2021 07:26
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