Comments received on poems by Neville
Without Closure
Doggerel Dave said:
So many questions:
Have you:
Cleaned it?
Pawned it?
Sold It ?
Good price?
Sequel definitely needed Nev, as the consensus makes plain.
September 23rd, 2021 00:24
Doggerel Dave said:
So many questions:
Have you:
Cleaned it?
Pawned it?
Sold It ?
Good price?
Sequel definitely needed Nev, as the consensus makes plain.
September 23rd, 2021 00:24
Without Closure
dusk arising said:
Well some old trinkets are just baggage after the lust has gone, the damage done, and life has well and truly moved on.....
September 22nd, 2021 13:54
dusk arising said:
Well some old trinkets are just baggage after the lust has gone, the damage done, and life has well and truly moved on.....
September 22nd, 2021 13:54
Without Closure
Fay Slimm. said:
The case of a missing lady-love and what skill in the telling when your lines open questions of fate intervening with intriguing clues. Another tale which maybe needs a sequel mon ami........ otherwise such as me will ever be sad at knowing this post is truly Without Closure. - - .good un tho. Nev.......x
September 22nd, 2021 12:46
Fay Slimm. said:
The case of a missing lady-love and what skill in the telling when your lines open questions of fate intervening with intriguing clues. Another tale which maybe needs a sequel mon ami........ otherwise such as me will ever be sad at knowing this post is truly Without Closure. - - .good un tho. Nev.......x
September 22nd, 2021 12:46
A Taste Well Shared
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words, that special person will always be with you.
Andy
September 22nd, 2021 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words, that special person will always be with you.
Andy
September 22nd, 2021 00:19
A Taste Well Shared
Doggerel Dave said:
A woody fragrance pervades this piece. Rhythmic in a quite erotic way, Nev
PS: they weren\'t gargling the stuff, were they? 😊
September 21st, 2021 18:34
Doggerel Dave said:
A woody fragrance pervades this piece. Rhythmic in a quite erotic way, Nev
PS: they weren\'t gargling the stuff, were they? 😊
September 21st, 2021 18:34
A Taste Well Shared
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Let’s hope their taste buds are aplenty with papillae and microvilli.
I’m sure the lucky one to whom this is dedicated is appreciative of your fine and delicate poem.
Laura🌻
September 21st, 2021 15:44
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Let’s hope their taste buds are aplenty with papillae and microvilli.
I’m sure the lucky one to whom this is dedicated is appreciative of your fine and delicate poem.
Laura🌻
September 21st, 2021 15:44
A Taste Well Shared
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I won\'t meet her. I will leave the two of them together.
September 21st, 2021 09:37
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I won\'t meet her. I will leave the two of them together.
September 21st, 2021 09:37
A Taste Well Shared
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Neville.
All the above, everybody should be blessed at least once with a Testable moment.
September 21st, 2021 09:22
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Neville.
All the above, everybody should be blessed at least once with a Testable moment.
September 21st, 2021 09:22
A Taste Well Shared
L. B. Mek said:
makes me feel like I\'m intruding, just by reading
how well you\'ve cultivated that sense of sacred intimacy, in such a short write, my friend
though still, as-ever
done it so subtly decadent, utilising scenic deft touches
no need for an avalanche of imagery,
just you and your masterfully unique Poetry!
September 21st, 2021 05:39
L. B. Mek said:
makes me feel like I\'m intruding, just by reading
how well you\'ve cultivated that sense of sacred intimacy, in such a short write, my friend
though still, as-ever
done it so subtly decadent, utilising scenic deft touches
no need for an avalanche of imagery,
just you and your masterfully unique Poetry!
September 21st, 2021 05:39
A Taste Well Shared
dusk arising said:
For the essence of love\'s spirit has twinned them into harmonic intimacy of spice.
September 21st, 2021 05:23
dusk arising said:
For the essence of love\'s spirit has twinned them into harmonic intimacy of spice.
September 21st, 2021 05:23
A Taste Well Shared
Fay Slimm. said:
Leaving me near speechless the appeal of these scenes Nev where closeness is felt even though distant - - - your readers will love it and hope your someone special will treasure this verse - - it goes into my list of favourites for sure...........x
September 21st, 2021 05:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Leaving me near speechless the appeal of these scenes Nev where closeness is felt even though distant - - - your readers will love it and hope your someone special will treasure this verse - - it goes into my list of favourites for sure...........x
September 21st, 2021 05:10
For Reference Purposes Only
Doggerel Dave said:
I resemble that remark, Nev.
My book case complies with the Iron Law Of the Thirds: One third, read; a third, part read; remaining third to be read...soon.
September 20th, 2021 18:05
Doggerel Dave said:
I resemble that remark, Nev.
My book case complies with the Iron Law Of the Thirds: One third, read; a third, part read; remaining third to be read...soon.
September 20th, 2021 18:05
For Reference Purposes Only
Jerry Reynolds said:
Love it, Neville.
A head twister for sure.
September 20th, 2021 10:03
Jerry Reynolds said:
Love it, Neville.
A head twister for sure.
September 20th, 2021 10:03
For Reference Purposes Only
dusk arising said:
Such words of import would surely be filed in readily available scrolls of my mind sir!
To lay them to rest elsewhere would be disrespectful, nay foolhardy.
September 20th, 2021 07:39
dusk arising said:
Such words of import would surely be filed in readily available scrolls of my mind sir!
To lay them to rest elsewhere would be disrespectful, nay foolhardy.
September 20th, 2021 07:39
For Reference Purposes Only
L. B. Mek said:
lol
is this you, at your playfully abstract, meaningfully surrealist
poetically mystical, self?
ok! I like it...
like everything else you\'ve ever penned!
a funtastic head twister, if you permit me to be so bold, my friend
September 20th, 2021 07:15
L. B. Mek said:
lol
is this you, at your playfully abstract, meaningfully surrealist
poetically mystical, self?
ok! I like it...
like everything else you\'ve ever penned!
a funtastic head twister, if you permit me to be so bold, my friend
September 20th, 2021 07:15
For Reference Purposes Only
Fay Slimm. said:
Slowing reading and finding near-at-hand special shelves for these hidden-deep romantic lines to be kept within reach and maybe peruse - to check if I\'m right in my interpretation.........x
September 20th, 2021 04:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Slowing reading and finding near-at-hand special shelves for these hidden-deep romantic lines to be kept within reach and maybe peruse - to check if I\'m right in my interpretation.........x
September 20th, 2021 04:56
For Reference Purposes Only
orchidee said:
I cannot say what that lass said to me, when I did meet her. \'Tis as the title of this poem! heehee.
September 20th, 2021 04:13
orchidee said:
I cannot say what that lass said to me, when I did meet her. \'Tis as the title of this poem! heehee.
September 20th, 2021 04:13
Someone More Golden
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Let’s think of it this way…
1kt worth of gold is nothing more than a ploy to market something as gold while being significantly cheaper; not worth pursuing…IMHO.
To quote Shakespeare…
‘All that glisters is not gold.’
I’m glad you’re simply
‘scribbling away’ and there’s
nothing to worry about.
Laura🌻
September 19th, 2021 14:55
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Let’s think of it this way…
1kt worth of gold is nothing more than a ploy to market something as gold while being significantly cheaper; not worth pursuing…IMHO.
To quote Shakespeare…
‘All that glisters is not gold.’
I’m glad you’re simply
‘scribbling away’ and there’s
nothing to worry about.
Laura🌻
September 19th, 2021 14:55
Someone More Golden
Accidental Poet said:
As long as you\'re not dismissed from these pages of MPS my good man. 👍
September 19th, 2021 10:40
Accidental Poet said:
As long as you\'re not dismissed from these pages of MPS my good man. 👍
September 19th, 2021 10:40
Someone More Golden
Michael Edwards said:
For a moment I thought you were relaying personal contemporary experience but thankfully I see it aint si my good friend - just poetic licence - by the way have you settled in yet in your new abode?
September 19th, 2021 08:02
Michael Edwards said:
For a moment I thought you were relaying personal contemporary experience but thankfully I see it aint si my good friend - just poetic licence - by the way have you settled in yet in your new abode?
September 19th, 2021 08:02
Someone More Golden
orchidee said:
They\'ll go rusty, under pretence of being golden! lol.
When I don\'t sing, they say \'Silence is golden!\'
September 19th, 2021 07:22
orchidee said:
They\'ll go rusty, under pretence of being golden! lol.
When I don\'t sing, they say \'Silence is golden!\'
September 19th, 2021 07:22
Someone More Golden
Doggerel Dave said:
Just a rehearsal for what\'s to come, Nev.
But never you care - it will be orright ...perhaps...one day....
September 19th, 2021 06:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Just a rehearsal for what\'s to come, Nev.
But never you care - it will be orright ...perhaps...one day....
September 19th, 2021 06:27
Someone More Golden
Poetic Dan said:
I know this from the core, I felt 14 again at the start of your words.
If this was truly from yours then I get no words can help you my friend!
I let this tear of silence bring the deepest of breaths
Always appreciated
With much peace and respect
Keep giving it!
September 19th, 2021 04:55
Poetic Dan said:
I know this from the core, I felt 14 again at the start of your words.
If this was truly from yours then I get no words can help you my friend!
I let this tear of silence bring the deepest of breaths
Always appreciated
With much peace and respect
Keep giving it!
September 19th, 2021 04:55
Someone More Golden
Fay Slimm. said:
Hope you are just wondering Nev. and not really experiencing the saddest exchange in the world of romance. A feel of despair to this haunt of a read.
September 19th, 2021 04:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Hope you are just wondering Nev. and not really experiencing the saddest exchange in the world of romance. A feel of despair to this haunt of a read.
September 19th, 2021 04:52
Someone More Golden
dusk arising said:
Hmm i think i begin to know all these moods Neville. For my personna adjusts to my whereabouts and the task, or lack of it, in hand. Not a split personality you understand, just conscience adjusting to the vibrations around myself.
Little bemused by your last stanza. Is this self inflicted or has someone exchanged you. I like to think you\'re describing a self improving spiritual upgrade but I\'m unsure.
September 19th, 2021 04:12
dusk arising said:
Hmm i think i begin to know all these moods Neville. For my personna adjusts to my whereabouts and the task, or lack of it, in hand. Not a split personality you understand, just conscience adjusting to the vibrations around myself.
Little bemused by your last stanza. Is this self inflicted or has someone exchanged you. I like to think you\'re describing a self improving spiritual upgrade but I\'m unsure.
September 19th, 2021 04:12
Scarper
Goldfinch60 said:
Obviously no true love involved Neville, just instant lust.
Andy
September 19th, 2021 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Obviously no true love involved Neville, just instant lust.
Andy
September 19th, 2021 00:20
Scarper
Jerry Reynolds said:
Matters not how fast you run from the crime, you still have to do the time.
Good write, Neville.
September 18th, 2021 15:46
Jerry Reynolds said:
Matters not how fast you run from the crime, you still have to do the time.
Good write, Neville.
September 18th, 2021 15:46
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