Comments received on poems by Neville
The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue
Dove said:
I guess, we are on the same theme , but
yours are so much more juicy! Lol
I meant the poem. 😀😍
March 4th, 2022 08:59
Dove said:
I guess, we are on the same theme , but
yours are so much more juicy! Lol
I meant the poem. 😀😍
March 4th, 2022 08:59
The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue
L. B. Mek said:
\'it’s never the same
But unique and refreshing
thirst quenching
And otherwise welcome
given free\'..
what a poetic escape, gift
of a read
after such a gruelling week
of negativity
and dispiriting, reality..
(had my mind, skipping back
to
those now, cobwebbed
teenage years of spontaneous, crushes
where the slightest detail
was enough, fuel
for us to daydream, free
of life\'s bruises, as safety wheel
limitations...)
March 4th, 2022 06:39
L. B. Mek said:
\'it’s never the same
But unique and refreshing
thirst quenching
And otherwise welcome
given free\'..
what a poetic escape, gift
of a read
after such a gruelling week
of negativity
and dispiriting, reality..
(had my mind, skipping back
to
those now, cobwebbed
teenage years of spontaneous, crushes
where the slightest detail
was enough, fuel
for us to daydream, free
of life\'s bruises, as safety wheel
limitations...)
March 4th, 2022 06:39
The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue
Fay Slimm. said:
So seriously sensual I could sip and savour each line - - so smoothly mmmmmmorish ..................x
March 4th, 2022 04:51
Fay Slimm. said:
So seriously sensual I could sip and savour each line - - so smoothly mmmmmmorish ..................x
March 4th, 2022 04:51
The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue
dusk arising said:
the torrid tingling of touching tongue tips tenderly mmmmm ...... rather near the top of my list in sensual matters.
Dammit my windows have steamed up.
March 4th, 2022 03:34
dusk arising said:
the torrid tingling of touching tongue tips tenderly mmmmm ...... rather near the top of my list in sensual matters.
Dammit my windows have steamed up.
March 4th, 2022 03:34
The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue
orchidee said:
Should I meet her?! lol.
March 4th, 2022 03:18
orchidee said:
Should I meet her?! lol.
March 4th, 2022 03:18
The Tale of Brulee
spilleronsheet said:
What a lovely description of one of man’s best friend…most loyal at heart….felt nostalgic about my old friend who grew up with me and my cousins…it was a German shepherd…very well crafted dear Neville and thanks for sharing and you reignited my forgotten memories
March 3rd, 2022 19:43
spilleronsheet said:
What a lovely description of one of man’s best friend…most loyal at heart….felt nostalgic about my old friend who grew up with me and my cousins…it was a German shepherd…very well crafted dear Neville and thanks for sharing and you reignited my forgotten memories
March 3rd, 2022 19:43
The Tale of Brulee
Rozina said:
Hehehe I had no idea! Until I read your comment about your dog. Very entertaining Neville.
March 3rd, 2022 18:30
Rozina said:
Hehehe I had no idea! Until I read your comment about your dog. Very entertaining Neville.
March 3rd, 2022 18:30
The Tale of Brulee
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
…and I thought you’d be writing about a
crème brûlée you’d be enjoying after your walk with your dog.😉
Enjoyed the read.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
March 3rd, 2022 16:21
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
…and I thought you’d be writing about a
crème brûlée you’d be enjoying after your walk with your dog.😉
Enjoyed the read.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
March 3rd, 2022 16:21
The Tale of Brulee
Dove said:
Awe , and I thought it was a Golden Cocker Spaniel-
Lovely imagery, sun-kissed
March 3rd, 2022 10:47
Dove said:
Awe , and I thought it was a Golden Cocker Spaniel-
Lovely imagery, sun-kissed
March 3rd, 2022 10:47
The Tale of Brulee
Rocky Lagou said:
What an image portrayed so finely! I almost saw the dog\'s tail just wagging back and forth. Very well done! ✨
March 3rd, 2022 10:14
Rocky Lagou said:
What an image portrayed so finely! I almost saw the dog\'s tail just wagging back and forth. Very well done! ✨
March 3rd, 2022 10:14
The Tale of Brulee
Poetic Dan said:
Lmao... this was brilliant!
I have to take screenshot of my photos or they won\'t load ;)
Keep up the write my friend
March 3rd, 2022 09:41
Poetic Dan said:
Lmao... this was brilliant!
I have to take screenshot of my photos or they won\'t load ;)
Keep up the write my friend
March 3rd, 2022 09:41
The Tale of Brulee
Christina8 said:
A beautiful poem about your dog, very descriptive. Loved it!
March 3rd, 2022 08:09
Christina8 said:
A beautiful poem about your dog, very descriptive. Loved it!
March 3rd, 2022 08:09
The Tale of Brulee
Fay Slimm. said:
Your pen paints her beauty so well Nev - -- a lovely read.............x
March 3rd, 2022 06:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Your pen paints her beauty so well Nev - -- a lovely read.............x
March 3rd, 2022 06:58
The Tale of Brulee
L. B. Mek said:
love the image of that last line
\'rudder\' is such an apt wording..
I remember as a child
we had a huge Dane, dense black in colour
so black, it glowed
like a moonless night sky
and every evening, when my father
commuting back home
would turn the car
on to our street, half a mile
from our door
the barking would begin
so energetic, every night
as-if
trying to pull the car along those last few yards, a little quicker..
(if you\'re not some monster of a human
and love dogs
I consider you kin..
I\'m simple minded, like that
unashamedly so!) lol
March 3rd, 2022 06:41
L. B. Mek said:
love the image of that last line
\'rudder\' is such an apt wording..
I remember as a child
we had a huge Dane, dense black in colour
so black, it glowed
like a moonless night sky
and every evening, when my father
commuting back home
would turn the car
on to our street, half a mile
from our door
the barking would begin
so energetic, every night
as-if
trying to pull the car along those last few yards, a little quicker..
(if you\'re not some monster of a human
and love dogs
I consider you kin..
I\'m simple minded, like that
unashamedly so!) lol
March 3rd, 2022 06:41
The Tale of Brulee
Doggerel Dave said:
And as the truck moved off, there would be no more laying around. The joy of a dog in a moving vehicle......
March 3rd, 2022 06:30
Doggerel Dave said:
And as the truck moved off, there would be no more laying around. The joy of a dog in a moving vehicle......
March 3rd, 2022 06:30
The Tale of Brulee
Paul Bell said:
Dogs know how to enjoy themselves, as the thirst for life shows. I just tell mines he\'s chipped, so he can take himself out and get lost and then found. lol
March 3rd, 2022 05:46
Paul Bell said:
Dogs know how to enjoy themselves, as the thirst for life shows. I just tell mines he\'s chipped, so he can take himself out and get lost and then found. lol
March 3rd, 2022 05:46
The Tale of Brulee
dusk arising said:
Is it a dog?.... is it a plane?...... is it a bird?...... It\'s Batgirl..... no.... I digress......
Well Neville once again an engmatic challenge... I\'ve read it three times and I can\'t get the image of a golden retriever laid on the back seat out of my mind. Wagging it\'s rudder of a tail.
A dog\'s tail can be the most destructive article known to mankind in the wrong circumstances.
March 3rd, 2022 04:53
dusk arising said:
Is it a dog?.... is it a plane?...... is it a bird?...... It\'s Batgirl..... no.... I digress......
Well Neville once again an engmatic challenge... I\'ve read it three times and I can\'t get the image of a golden retriever laid on the back seat out of my mind. Wagging it\'s rudder of a tail.
A dog\'s tail can be the most destructive article known to mankind in the wrong circumstances.
March 3rd, 2022 04:53
A Scatter of Moments
Goldfinch60 said:
May those moments of love come together Neville and give you total fulfilment.
Andy
March 3rd, 2022 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
May those moments of love come together Neville and give you total fulfilment.
Andy
March 3rd, 2022 01:47
A Scatter of Moments
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Love the title…
the ending words lend themselves to the cohesiveness of your entire poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
March 2nd, 2022 16:17
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Love the title…
the ending words lend themselves to the cohesiveness of your entire poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
March 2nd, 2022 16:17
A Scatter of Moments
Rocky Lagou said:
Lovely! A little memory pocket full of joy! Hope you have a great day!
March 2nd, 2022 10:25
Rocky Lagou said:
Lovely! A little memory pocket full of joy! Hope you have a great day!
March 2nd, 2022 10:25
A Scatter of Moments
Christina8 said:
So glad to know you are on the mend and writing...A beautiful tribute to someone special and so eloquently written indeed......C
March 2nd, 2022 09:25
Christina8 said:
So glad to know you are on the mend and writing...A beautiful tribute to someone special and so eloquently written indeed......C
March 2nd, 2022 09:25
A Scatter of Moments
Rozina said:
A lovely tribute with great lines. Hope you’re recovering well.
March 2nd, 2022 09:12
Rozina said:
A lovely tribute with great lines. Hope you’re recovering well.
March 2nd, 2022 09:12
A Scatter of Moments
orchidee said:
Can ya beat those moments? Which ones? Answer: any of them ya wish to recall!
What am I waffling on about?! lol.
March 2nd, 2022 08:15
orchidee said:
Can ya beat those moments? Which ones? Answer: any of them ya wish to recall!
What am I waffling on about?! lol.
March 2nd, 2022 08:15
A Scatter of Moments
Michael Edwards said:
What a great write - tears in my eyes as I know my wife of so many years is suffering and all we have is hope. Keep writing dear friend.
March 2nd, 2022 05:55
Michael Edwards said:
What a great write - tears in my eyes as I know my wife of so many years is suffering and all we have is hope. Keep writing dear friend.
March 2nd, 2022 05:55
A Scatter of Moments
dusk arising said:
Ah yes, those opioid induced hospital bed dreams....... LOL .... It\'s so good to get home though.... hope you didn\'t pick up any horrible hospital infections (I\'m still suffering from one i picked up last Oct).
Wishing you a speedy recovery.
March 2nd, 2022 05:31
dusk arising said:
Ah yes, those opioid induced hospital bed dreams....... LOL .... It\'s so good to get home though.... hope you didn\'t pick up any horrible hospital infections (I\'m still suffering from one i picked up last Oct).
Wishing you a speedy recovery.
March 2nd, 2022 05:31
A Scatter of Moments
Fay Slimm. said:
beautifully put this tribute to a special someone dear nev --- glad to know you\'re back home again and writing romance....................x
March 2nd, 2022 05:01
Fay Slimm. said:
beautifully put this tribute to a special someone dear nev --- glad to know you\'re back home again and writing romance....................x
March 2nd, 2022 05:01
Between Squalls
spilleronsheet said:
A nostalgia of beach
Yearning for the breeze
That tells a song
Beautiful dear Neville
And heal faster friend
Spring back soon
And thanks to dear Nurse
See you soon
March 2nd, 2022 00:31
spilleronsheet said:
A nostalgia of beach
Yearning for the breeze
That tells a song
Beautiful dear Neville
And heal faster friend
Spring back soon
And thanks to dear Nurse
See you soon
March 2nd, 2022 00:31
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