Comments received on poems by Neville
ScarperĀ
Accidental Poet said:
Some one night stands result in the 18 years after. Be careful Orchi, wrap that rascal. š
September 18th, 2021 11:08
Accidental Poet said:
Some one night stands result in the 18 years after. Be careful Orchi, wrap that rascal. š
September 18th, 2021 11:08
ScarperĀ
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
āScarperāā¦
When I saw this title, I immediately thought of two Italian wordsā¦
āscappareā and āscarpeā.
I thought it would be interesting to read through your poem and see the penned words associated with that interesting title.
After the read, I wondered if either one left with or without their shoes on.
Thank you for sharing your pen.
Lauraš»
September 18th, 2021 08:13
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
āScarperāā¦
When I saw this title, I immediately thought of two Italian wordsā¦
āscappareā and āscarpeā.
I thought it would be interesting to read through your poem and see the penned words associated with that interesting title.
After the read, I wondered if either one left with or without their shoes on.
Thank you for sharing your pen.
Lauraš»
September 18th, 2021 08:13
ScarperĀ
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - Well at least it was mutual that quick scarper Nev. . Scalded by guilt or was it sheer disappointment ? - methinks that sometimes can happen to those on them \" 1- night- stands \" ...............x
September 18th, 2021 06:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - Well at least it was mutual that quick scarper Nev. . Scalded by guilt or was it sheer disappointment ? - methinks that sometimes can happen to those on them \" 1- night- stands \" ...............x
September 18th, 2021 06:01
ScarperĀ
dusk arising said:
Wham Bam thank you ma\'am.
OMG let me outta here before she says i love you.
September 18th, 2021 04:46
dusk arising said:
Wham Bam thank you ma\'am.
OMG let me outta here before she says i love you.
September 18th, 2021 04:46
Blighty
dusk arising said:
Cannon fodder for old boy generals who\'d still have had \"the lads\" dressed as redcoats if they had their way.... tradition you know, look at the regimental lists of heroes dontcha know..
Might as well be a deserter, at least you\'ll be shot in somewhere clean and they\'ll be able to identify your remains. Shell shock? shoot \'em.
Very emotive writing from you. Short and punchy.
September 18th, 2021 03:51
dusk arising said:
Cannon fodder for old boy generals who\'d still have had \"the lads\" dressed as redcoats if they had their way.... tradition you know, look at the regimental lists of heroes dontcha know..
Might as well be a deserter, at least you\'ll be shot in somewhere clean and they\'ll be able to identify your remains. Shell shock? shoot \'em.
Very emotive writing from you. Short and punchy.
September 18th, 2021 03:51
Alphabetical Infidelities
L. B. Mek said:
pure literary fun!
with layers, of course
always with depth
just what I needed to cleanse my poetic pallet, lol
and for that, I thank you
Supreme Poet
September 17th, 2021 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
pure literary fun!
with layers, of course
always with depth
just what I needed to cleanse my poetic pallet, lol
and for that, I thank you
Supreme Poet
September 17th, 2021 05:26
Blighty
Fay Slimm. said:
These potent words got to my heart the first time Nev and now after this seconds they tear it open again. - - very true those lads were so often gun-fodder. Your empathy etches war\'s dreadful tragedy thru\' each and every short line mon ami ............... x
September 17th, 2021 05:22
Fay Slimm. said:
These potent words got to my heart the first time Nev and now after this seconds they tear it open again. - - very true those lads were so often gun-fodder. Your empathy etches war\'s dreadful tragedy thru\' each and every short line mon ami ............... x
September 17th, 2021 05:22
Fablon
Dove said:
I could use fabalon! Them cabinets of mine are pretty worn!
Always good to read you! if this was a metaphor for some
sticky personality, lol I say run, lol
September 16th, 2021 09:01
Dove said:
I could use fabalon! Them cabinets of mine are pretty worn!
Always good to read you! if this was a metaphor for some
sticky personality, lol I say run, lol
September 16th, 2021 09:01
Narcissist
Dove said:
Well luckily, Iāve met none! But movies portrayed them to a tee! Was that Evil Queen who stared at mirror a narcissist, ā Mirror Mirror on the wall, did Snow White steal my Neville.ā Am I not the fairest of the all, lol
September 16th, 2021 08:53
Dove said:
Well luckily, Iāve met none! But movies portrayed them to a tee! Was that Evil Queen who stared at mirror a narcissist, ā Mirror Mirror on the wall, did Snow White steal my Neville.ā Am I not the fairest of the all, lol
September 16th, 2021 08:53
Fablon
L. B. Mek said:
greedy fingers, lead to sticky mouths and cheeks
once lifeline jars, emptied and shattered
and everyone asking, who
to blame?
and wont you know it, there\'s always
one person that arrives late, and acts
so dramatically hurt and surprised, as-if
only they get effected by consequences of involuntary circumstances...
that same person, is always quick
to assign blame and hijack any narrative to insure their want\'s and needs are prioritised, at any cost..
and yet, in those rare moments
Angels: are born, from the serenity
of her dimpled smile...
and so I ask, what vulture
corrupted such potential for goodness
from such an early and critical age?!
(sorry my friend, this took me to a very personal place,
as always, I thank you
for inspiring me, with your
ever so subtle - empathetically transcendent: poetry)
September 14th, 2021 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
greedy fingers, lead to sticky mouths and cheeks
once lifeline jars, emptied and shattered
and everyone asking, who
to blame?
and wont you know it, there\'s always
one person that arrives late, and acts
so dramatically hurt and surprised, as-if
only they get effected by consequences of involuntary circumstances...
that same person, is always quick
to assign blame and hijack any narrative to insure their want\'s and needs are prioritised, at any cost..
and yet, in those rare moments
Angels: are born, from the serenity
of her dimpled smile...
and so I ask, what vulture
corrupted such potential for goodness
from such an early and critical age?!
(sorry my friend, this took me to a very personal place,
as always, I thank you
for inspiring me, with your
ever so subtle - empathetically transcendent: poetry)
September 14th, 2021 05:26
Fablon
jarcher54 said:
We don\'t call it Fablon over here stateside... but it can be just as alluring, sticky, and deceitful
September 11th, 2021 20:16
jarcher54 said:
We don\'t call it Fablon over here stateside... but it can be just as alluring, sticky, and deceitful
September 11th, 2021 20:16
Fablon
Caring dove said:
Appearances can be deceptive sometimes .... someone may appear to be one thing but be someone else
September 11th, 2021 12:09
Caring dove said:
Appearances can be deceptive sometimes .... someone may appear to be one thing but be someone else
September 11th, 2021 12:09
Fablon
myself and me said:
We are all fablon in a sense, it depends on which side has been exposed. I can\'t believe that a piece of fablon could inspire such an amazing writing.
September 11th, 2021 11:54
myself and me said:
We are all fablon in a sense, it depends on which side has been exposed. I can\'t believe that a piece of fablon could inspire such an amazing writing.
September 11th, 2021 11:54
Fablon
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Two faced love is a sticky wicket.
September 11th, 2021 07:46
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Two faced love is a sticky wicket.
September 11th, 2021 07:46
Fablon
dusk arising said:
Great analogy Neville. Fablon, she looks great at first take but the closer u get, you see the facade.... oooh and just as you say.... getting in deeper leads to just one tacky mess.
September 11th, 2021 02:54
dusk arising said:
Great analogy Neville. Fablon, she looks great at first take but the closer u get, you see the facade.... oooh and just as you say.... getting in deeper leads to just one tacky mess.
September 11th, 2021 02:54
Fablon
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - such clever imagery to get the point over Nev. Fablon makes the perfect metaphor . Two-sided natures never won suitors -
but can\'t say I blame them for preferring truth\'s face...........x
September 11th, 2021 02:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - such clever imagery to get the point over Nev. Fablon makes the perfect metaphor . Two-sided natures never won suitors -
but can\'t say I blame them for preferring truth\'s face...........x
September 11th, 2021 02:39
Narcissist
Goldfinch60 said:
One of my friends has just managed to escape from a Narcissist after twenty five years of trauma.
Andy
September 11th, 2021 00:13
Goldfinch60 said:
One of my friends has just managed to escape from a Narcissist after twenty five years of trauma.
Andy
September 11th, 2021 00:13
Narcissist
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh yes Nev, they exist - both genders. And ofttimes the male version is the more dangerous, as he tends to have more power and influence.
However, in general, narcissists are quite amusing to watch - from a distance (as much distance as possible).
September 10th, 2021 20:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh yes Nev, they exist - both genders. And ofttimes the male version is the more dangerous, as he tends to have more power and influence.
However, in general, narcissists are quite amusing to watch - from a distance (as much distance as possible).
September 10th, 2021 20:13
Narcissist
dusk arising said:
LOL we used to call it \'lead guitarist syndrome\' in the group musicians enclave of society (lol). Though a couple of lady singers i knew easily fitted the bill.
September 10th, 2021 12:03
dusk arising said:
LOL we used to call it \'lead guitarist syndrome\' in the group musicians enclave of society (lol). Though a couple of lady singers i knew easily fitted the bill.
September 10th, 2021 12:03
Narcissist
Saxon Crow said:
Ooooo I\'ve met one or two of them in my time. Never ends well.
September 10th, 2021 08:33
Saxon Crow said:
Ooooo I\'ve met one or two of them in my time. Never ends well.
September 10th, 2021 08:33
My Lotus and Me
L. B. Mek said:
I have totalled three cars in my life, yet have had only six accidents in my life, and driven enough in one year to make taxi drivers sweat, a lifetime..
having never had an accident while anyone was in the car with me..
in short, I\'m a devil alone
a gentler presence, with someone at my side..
but I do love that romance of poetic solitude, not to be mistaken with loneliness..
solitude, looking out at nature\'s vastness and feeling so insignificant and small...
with trees, as my road signs and bumps as my re-calibrating influences: in life...
September 10th, 2021 05:48
L. B. Mek said:
I have totalled three cars in my life, yet have had only six accidents in my life, and driven enough in one year to make taxi drivers sweat, a lifetime..
having never had an accident while anyone was in the car with me..
in short, I\'m a devil alone
a gentler presence, with someone at my side..
but I do love that romance of poetic solitude, not to be mistaken with loneliness..
solitude, looking out at nature\'s vastness and feeling so insignificant and small...
with trees, as my road signs and bumps as my re-calibrating influences: in life...
September 10th, 2021 05:48
Narcissist
L. B. Mek said:
I know these feeling\'s you articulate, so well my friend
only I lack the bravery to word and \'Shed\' my feeling\'s with such eloquence..
September 10th, 2021 05:38
L. B. Mek said:
I know these feeling\'s you articulate, so well my friend
only I lack the bravery to word and \'Shed\' my feeling\'s with such eloquence..
September 10th, 2021 05:38
Narcissist
Fay Slimm. said:
Sometimes a strong message such as this commendable verse contains is sometimes the means to make narcissists take a deeper look at themselves - a gurt and mighty forceful reminder Nev. - - hope it worked if it was written from experience mon ami..........x
September 10th, 2021 04:19
Fay Slimm. said:
Sometimes a strong message such as this commendable verse contains is sometimes the means to make narcissists take a deeper look at themselves - a gurt and mighty forceful reminder Nev. - - hope it worked if it was written from experience mon ami..........x
September 10th, 2021 04:19
Narcissist
Caring dove said:
Narcissists are very self absorbed .... they think everything is about them . Sometimes we give to people who cannot give much in return .
September 10th, 2021 03:46
Caring dove said:
Narcissists are very self absorbed .... they think everything is about them . Sometimes we give to people who cannot give much in return .
September 10th, 2021 03:46
My Lotus and Me
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
Alas, that Lotus number seventeen was willing to perform, but I suppose there were too many problems to do so.
Not only did I enjoy reading your interesting poem, but I also learned something knew.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
September 9th, 2021 00:13
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
Alas, that Lotus number seventeen was willing to perform, but I suppose there were too many problems to do so.
Not only did I enjoy reading your interesting poem, but I also learned something knew.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
September 9th, 2021 00:13
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