Comments received on poems by Neville
Breathe
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
by the end, I feel like reading your poem
is like a car ride, and all I need to do
to connect with all those nuances you subtly weave,
is just roll down the window and stick my arm out
dip and sway with the wind, like I too can exist
flowing within the syllables of your memories
and arrive, at the recollections of similar scenes - yearning\'s, I once took for granted in my own life...
(ah, I simply bow to your poetic supremacy!
write\'s like this, is why I consider myself a fan of your poetry)
thank you! my friend
October 18th, 2021 07:19
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
by the end, I feel like reading your poem
is like a car ride, and all I need to do
to connect with all those nuances you subtly weave,
is just roll down the window and stick my arm out
dip and sway with the wind, like I too can exist
flowing within the syllables of your memories
and arrive, at the recollections of similar scenes - yearning\'s, I once took for granted in my own life...
(ah, I simply bow to your poetic supremacy!
write\'s like this, is why I consider myself a fan of your poetry)
thank you! my friend
October 18th, 2021 07:19
Breathe
Fay Slimm. said:
Breathlessly tasting that oh so romantic scene so sensuously scribed mon ami - and am giving it best place in my list of faves.....x
October 18th, 2021 05:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Breathlessly tasting that oh so romantic scene so sensuously scribed mon ami - and am giving it best place in my list of faves.....x
October 18th, 2021 05:43
Breathe
Caring dove said:
I like this poem , especially the last few lines about the sparrows )
October 18th, 2021 03:45
Caring dove said:
I like this poem , especially the last few lines about the sparrows )
October 18th, 2021 03:45
A Formal Study of Her Knees
Fay Slimm. said:
Back for a second read and may I suggest next time a look at the elbows - they have more dimples than knees !! Ha - Love the picture of sun-cream to fore and aft of those amazing patellas..........x
October 16th, 2021 10:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Back for a second read and may I suggest next time a look at the elbows - they have more dimples than knees !! Ha - Love the picture of sun-cream to fore and aft of those amazing patellas..........x
October 16th, 2021 10:38
A Formal Study of Her Knees
Goldfinch60 said:
May those knees be forever there for you Neville.
Andy
October 16th, 2021 03:35
Goldfinch60 said:
May those knees be forever there for you Neville.
Andy
October 16th, 2021 03:35
A Formal Study of Her Knees
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - well I guess that never before have knees been so poetically reviewed and found beautiful. Big smiles at what love can inspire mon romantic ami.
October 16th, 2021 03:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - well I guess that never before have knees been so poetically reviewed and found beautiful. Big smiles at what love can inspire mon romantic ami.
October 16th, 2021 03:06
A Formal Study of Her Knees
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Did he swoon?! heehee.
October 16th, 2021 02:10
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Did he swoon?! heehee.
October 16th, 2021 02:10
Ah-Weh-Eyu - Pretty Flower
Fay Slimm. said:
The long-time abuse of such pretty flowers is etched with perfection in these lines of empathy my friend - historical treatment of nations like Seneca is outed with words that will move caring hearts - a very warm welcome-back Nev. ......x
October 15th, 2021 06:33
Fay Slimm. said:
The long-time abuse of such pretty flowers is etched with perfection in these lines of empathy my friend - historical treatment of nations like Seneca is outed with words that will move caring hearts - a very warm welcome-back Nev. ......x
October 15th, 2021 06:33
Ah-Weh-Eyu - Pretty Flower
L. B. Mek said:
ah, \'The\': Poet
is back..
all is well, then
all is well..
October 15th, 2021 05:22
L. B. Mek said:
ah, \'The\': Poet
is back..
all is well, then
all is well..
October 15th, 2021 05:22
Ah-Weh-Eyu - Pretty Flower
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Now my poem about E\'ermore!
(Do shut up now Orchi. lol).
October 15th, 2021 04:29
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Now my poem about E\'ermore!
(Do shut up now Orchi. lol).
October 15th, 2021 04:29
Ah-Weh-Eyu - Pretty Flower
Caring dove said:
Great poem , Neville )
I like your words
October 15th, 2021 03:58
Caring dove said:
Great poem , Neville )
I like your words
October 15th, 2021 03:58
The Tease
Dove said:
I’ll never look at cheesecloth the same! As always a great story
September 26th, 2021 10:30
Dove said:
I’ll never look at cheesecloth the same! As always a great story
September 26th, 2021 10:30
The Tease
Goldfinch60 said:
This can be so true in many circumstances Neville and can be hard to avoid.
Andy
September 26th, 2021 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
This can be so true in many circumstances Neville and can be hard to avoid.
Andy
September 26th, 2021 00:43
The Tease
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Teasing can be a very dangerous undertaking that can lead to an undertaker. My great grandmother recounted a story to my grandmother about a neighbor of hers that was drowned by her teaser.
Her motto:
(in Italian, of course)
—proceed with caution
(procedi con cautela)!
Thank you for sharing this noteworthy write.
Laura 🌻
September 25th, 2021 18:26
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Teasing can be a very dangerous undertaking that can lead to an undertaker. My great grandmother recounted a story to my grandmother about a neighbor of hers that was drowned by her teaser.
Her motto:
(in Italian, of course)
—proceed with caution
(procedi con cautela)!
Thank you for sharing this noteworthy write.
Laura 🌻
September 25th, 2021 18:26
The Tease
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Met this goddess in many disguises. Am a sucker for the tease.
September 25th, 2021 09:27
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Met this goddess in many disguises. Am a sucker for the tease.
September 25th, 2021 09:27
The Tease
orchidee said:
Should I meet her? Will she be too much for me?! lol.
September 25th, 2021 06:56
orchidee said:
Should I meet her? Will she be too much for me?! lol.
September 25th, 2021 06:56
The Tease
Fay Slimm. said:
What a linguistic and valid complaint about one so enticingly false to the name of vincibility yet so deserving of being called tease. - - - great stuff agen Nev.................x
September 25th, 2021 05:04
Fay Slimm. said:
What a linguistic and valid complaint about one so enticingly false to the name of vincibility yet so deserving of being called tease. - - - great stuff agen Nev.................x
September 25th, 2021 05:04
Nothing to Lose
Goldfinch60 said:
That feeling is so wonderful in knowing that all was fine in their world.
Andy
September 25th, 2021 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
That feeling is so wonderful in knowing that all was fine in their world.
Andy
September 25th, 2021 00:12
Nothing to Lose
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem.😊
When there’s
‘Nothing to Lose’,
why not indulge?!………no regrets to be had………savor the moment…………🤗
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
September 24th, 2021 17:18
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem.😊
When there’s
‘Nothing to Lose’,
why not indulge?!………no regrets to be had………savor the moment…………🤗
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
September 24th, 2021 17:18
Nothing to Lose
L. B. Mek said:
\'Know, thy Self\'
then all your choices in life, will be centred upon those principles, you hold true and dear, meaning
even your mistakes, will have a level of humble decency
that will never overextend, to indecency..
so that \'morning after\' scene of consequence
may not have to appear
as a nightmare in your dawning future\'s, realm...
(an Inspiring write, once more you have me dancing, with my fingertips
how well, you spark my imagination, dear Supreme Poet)
what a gift you choose to share, thank you!
September 24th, 2021 05:40
L. B. Mek said:
\'Know, thy Self\'
then all your choices in life, will be centred upon those principles, you hold true and dear, meaning
even your mistakes, will have a level of humble decency
that will never overextend, to indecency..
so that \'morning after\' scene of consequence
may not have to appear
as a nightmare in your dawning future\'s, realm...
(an Inspiring write, once more you have me dancing, with my fingertips
how well, you spark my imagination, dear Supreme Poet)
what a gift you choose to share, thank you!
September 24th, 2021 05:40
Nothing to Lose
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I can\'t meet her. She is with someone. lol.
September 24th, 2021 04:24
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I can\'t meet her. She is with someone. lol.
September 24th, 2021 04:24
Nothing to Lose
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I can\'t meet her. She is with someone. lol.
September 24th, 2021 04:24
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I can\'t meet her. She is with someone. lol.
September 24th, 2021 04:24
Nothing to Lose
dusk arising said:
OOh I\'ve had mornings like that. Nervousness pervades the atmosphere.... anxiety vibrates... eventually flatulence breaks the impasse.... but he\'s very forgiving... aren\'t you Neville.
Great piece which did bring back memories and how the situations resolved themselves - some better forgotten.
September 24th, 2021 03:20
dusk arising said:
OOh I\'ve had mornings like that. Nervousness pervades the atmosphere.... anxiety vibrates... eventually flatulence breaks the impasse.... but he\'s very forgiving... aren\'t you Neville.
Great piece which did bring back memories and how the situations resolved themselves - some better forgotten.
September 24th, 2021 03:20
Nothing to Lose
Fay Slimm. said:
That eventual awakening so very sensitively portrayed brought a smile to my face this morn - delighted thank yous for that - and more........x
September 24th, 2021 03:13
Fay Slimm. said:
That eventual awakening so very sensitively portrayed brought a smile to my face this morn - delighted thank yous for that - and more........x
September 24th, 2021 03:13
Without Closure
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Your words convey a message of sadness and a void that this reader feels. Perhaps ‘without closure’, there’s still hope. We can always hope.
Laura🌻
September 24th, 2021 01:37
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Your words convey a message of sadness and a void that this reader feels. Perhaps ‘without closure’, there’s still hope. We can always hope.
Laura🌻
September 24th, 2021 01:37
Without Closure
L. B. Mek said:
\'Yes, the one she
refused
Not to wear on a
date ..\'
(its like she felt trouble approaching, and still chose
to charge forth,
grimacing heart, out in front
and bared raw
with pride, tide back
in that perfectly silken hair
she, far too often
hid behind...
its like she also, knew
whatever after-story guesses
their ashes of dying embers
may someday, spew
this here, was a Love
a belonging-to, worth
fighting for: with the Faith
she\'d invested
in all her hopes, of Life...)
mystical Poetry, at its subtly woven: Finest!
thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply,
sorry if my interpretation was off the mark, I kinda let my imagination loose a little..
as always thanks for sharing
I read and learn, my friend
(oh and that book cover is gonna give me nightmares for a few days,
although admittedly not as much as those all-seeing eyes from your other cover..
they, just drill into you relentlessly 😨 ) lol
Cheers on your 5th 🥂
am already looking forward to that magical 6th! 😎
September 23rd, 2021 03:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'Yes, the one she
refused
Not to wear on a
date ..\'
(its like she felt trouble approaching, and still chose
to charge forth,
grimacing heart, out in front
and bared raw
with pride, tide back
in that perfectly silken hair
she, far too often
hid behind...
its like she also, knew
whatever after-story guesses
their ashes of dying embers
may someday, spew
this here, was a Love
a belonging-to, worth
fighting for: with the Faith
she\'d invested
in all her hopes, of Life...)
mystical Poetry, at its subtly woven: Finest!
thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply,
sorry if my interpretation was off the mark, I kinda let my imagination loose a little..
as always thanks for sharing
I read and learn, my friend
(oh and that book cover is gonna give me nightmares for a few days,
although admittedly not as much as those all-seeing eyes from your other cover..
they, just drill into you relentlessly 😨 ) lol
Cheers on your 5th 🥂
am already looking forward to that magical 6th! 😎
September 23rd, 2021 03:48
Without Closure
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a sadly emotive write Neville.
Andy
September 23rd, 2021 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a sadly emotive write Neville.
Andy
September 23rd, 2021 01:38
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