Comments received on poems by Neville
Tomodachi ya Koibito
Dove said:
Oh beat this heart of mine- if a man said “ you are a collection of sighs”
Oh beat this heart of mine
Hear my heartfelt sighs
When a man loves a woman
There’s a glow in his eyes
Oh beat this heart of mine
There’s poetry in his soul
With every word he whispers
Serenity softly flows
March 20th, 2021 09:07
Dove said:
Oh beat this heart of mine- if a man said “ you are a collection of sighs”
Oh beat this heart of mine
Hear my heartfelt sighs
When a man loves a woman
There’s a glow in his eyes
Oh beat this heart of mine
There’s poetry in his soul
With every word he whispers
Serenity softly flows
March 20th, 2021 09:07
Tomodachi ya Koibito
Neville said:
Hey .. LB .. thank you so much, not only for your heart warming visit .. but for pointing me in the direction of kazumasa oda .. I have already made good use of YouTube today ..... Neville
March 15th, 2021 07:36
Neville said:
Hey .. LB .. thank you so much, not only for your heart warming visit .. but for pointing me in the direction of kazumasa oda .. I have already made good use of YouTube today ..... Neville
March 15th, 2021 07:36
Tomodachi ya Koibito
orchidee said:
Cooeee! You beaten that egg yet?!
Totally unrelated comment to the poem - Do shut up now Orchi! lol.
March 15th, 2021 06:18
orchidee said:
Cooeee! You beaten that egg yet?!
Totally unrelated comment to the poem - Do shut up now Orchi! lol.
March 15th, 2021 06:18
Tomodachi ya Koibito
L. B. Mek said:
a delectable serving of your subtle artistry my friend, beautifully worded!
may, I in turn recommend you sound-out,
\'tokyo no sora\' by kazumasa oda
no worthier lyrics in-reply to your words can ever exist, in my humble opinion
March 15th, 2021 05:57
L. B. Mek said:
a delectable serving of your subtle artistry my friend, beautifully worded!
may, I in turn recommend you sound-out,
\'tokyo no sora\' by kazumasa oda
no worthier lyrics in-reply to your words can ever exist, in my humble opinion
March 15th, 2021 05:57
Tomodachi ya Koibito
MendedFences27 said:
What better way to honor someone than in poetry. Be she friend/lover/both, you have immortalized her in your own way. A poem of remembrance to keep a link open to the original relationship. Your own emotions on paper. Well done, - Phil A.
March 14th, 2021 19:26
MendedFences27 said:
What better way to honor someone than in poetry. Be she friend/lover/both, you have immortalized her in your own way. A poem of remembrance to keep a link open to the original relationship. Your own emotions on paper. Well done, - Phil A.
March 14th, 2021 19:26
Tomodachi ya Koibito
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Along that red-dirt road in my mind all my lovers are dear friends of mine.
March 14th, 2021 08:19
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Along that red-dirt road in my mind all my lovers are dear friends of mine.
March 14th, 2021 08:19
Tomodachi ya Koibito
Doggerel Dave said:
OK Neville. Felt fine and in many ways familiar, understood and good luck to you both.
But (and someone has to ask directly) wot about that last bleeding line??
March 14th, 2021 05:56
Doggerel Dave said:
OK Neville. Felt fine and in many ways familiar, understood and good luck to you both.
But (and someone has to ask directly) wot about that last bleeding line??
March 14th, 2021 05:56
Tomodachi ya Koibito
orchidee said:
Bit of French there? Erm, I never studied languages much! heehee.
Good write N.
March 14th, 2021 03:05
orchidee said:
Bit of French there? Erm, I never studied languages much! heehee.
Good write N.
March 14th, 2021 03:05
Tomodachi ya Koibito
Fay Slimm. said:
Love\'s reproduction brought to our eyes by such poetic wording that only your pen can achieve my friend. An intriguing peep into tender togetherness in this first of my morning\'s read..............x
March 14th, 2021 03:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Love\'s reproduction brought to our eyes by such poetic wording that only your pen can achieve my friend. An intriguing peep into tender togetherness in this first of my morning\'s read..............x
March 14th, 2021 03:00
Tomodachi ya Koibito
Goldfinch60 said:
May those friends and children be forever with us.
Andy
March 14th, 2021 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
May those friends and children be forever with us.
Andy
March 14th, 2021 02:04
Just for You
Goldfinch60 said:
That endearing love will always be there within you Neville.
Andy
March 14th, 2021 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
That endearing love will always be there within you Neville.
Andy
March 14th, 2021 01:23
Just for You
dusk arising said:
\"Nothing but the exaltation within my heart for the elevation your mere presence in my thougtful mind of you\"
oooppss sorry my mind conjoured up another line or two for your, once again, thought provoking mood piece.
March 13th, 2021 13:57
dusk arising said:
\"Nothing but the exaltation within my heart for the elevation your mere presence in my thougtful mind of you\"
oooppss sorry my mind conjoured up another line or two for your, once again, thought provoking mood piece.
March 13th, 2021 13:57
Just for You
FredPeyer said:
I too had no idea what \'leats\' meant, but thankfully orchie cleared that up.
Great poem, Neville!
March 13th, 2021 11:37
FredPeyer said:
I too had no idea what \'leats\' meant, but thankfully orchie cleared that up.
Great poem, Neville!
March 13th, 2021 11:37
Just for You
Dove said:
A very earthy love poem , I too am not sure what a leat is !
Always well penned! Sunshine is always radiant in your
Lines because they come from your soul
March 13th, 2021 10:46
Dove said:
A very earthy love poem , I too am not sure what a leat is !
Always well penned! Sunshine is always radiant in your
Lines because they come from your soul
March 13th, 2021 10:46
Just for You
Fay Slimm. said:
A tenderly poemed assurance to ever remember -- nothing comes near to hearing meant love..........x
March 13th, 2021 06:51
Fay Slimm. said:
A tenderly poemed assurance to ever remember -- nothing comes near to hearing meant love..........x
March 13th, 2021 06:51
Just for You
Doggerel Dave said:
A real heartfelt, open ended tribute, Neville You do little nuggets that linger.
PS: \'Sorry I can\'t respond to the spring is sprung poetry - don\'t make much sense to me......
March 13th, 2021 03:14
Doggerel Dave said:
A real heartfelt, open ended tribute, Neville You do little nuggets that linger.
PS: \'Sorry I can\'t respond to the spring is sprung poetry - don\'t make much sense to me......
March 13th, 2021 03:14
Just for You
orchidee said:
Yep, can\'t beat a good leat. \'Stream\' probably, to us in my part of the world.
I doubt I shall meet this gal in this fine write - she\'s all yours, I reckon.
March 13th, 2021 03:12
orchidee said:
Yep, can\'t beat a good leat. \'Stream\' probably, to us in my part of the world.
I doubt I shall meet this gal in this fine write - she\'s all yours, I reckon.
March 13th, 2021 03:12
Metro Mornings
Dove said:
So beautiful! Arc light and haloed! So Angelic the skies
March 12th, 2021 13:00
Dove said:
So beautiful! Arc light and haloed! So Angelic the skies
March 12th, 2021 13:00
Metro Mornings
Jerry Reynolds said:
\"Good by to winter\" a lovely line Neville. You all laid back under a thatched roof and me a dawn away looking for the first Crocus.
March 12th, 2021 09:30
Jerry Reynolds said:
\"Good by to winter\" a lovely line Neville. You all laid back under a thatched roof and me a dawn away looking for the first Crocus.
March 12th, 2021 09:30
Metro Mornings
L. B. Mek said:
\'Goodbye to winter for me
Darling
Since I am still a stranger
Surely …
Yet familiar\'..
(a wonderfully paced write
of self-mined positivity, cloaked within wisdom\'s reality of tempered practicality, my friend..
as always, thank you for inspiring my little scribbled reply)..
intertwined, tracks connecting our stations of life, like our season\'s
let us boldly welcome
each new chapter
of our horizon\'s dawn, by greeting it with the practised smiles
of our survival\'s resolve
gripping un-surrendered dreams
that nurture, our hope fuelled deeds..
March 12th, 2021 07:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'Goodbye to winter for me
Darling
Since I am still a stranger
Surely …
Yet familiar\'..
(a wonderfully paced write
of self-mined positivity, cloaked within wisdom\'s reality of tempered practicality, my friend..
as always, thank you for inspiring my little scribbled reply)..
intertwined, tracks connecting our stations of life, like our season\'s
let us boldly welcome
each new chapter
of our horizon\'s dawn, by greeting it with the practised smiles
of our survival\'s resolve
gripping un-surrendered dreams
that nurture, our hope fuelled deeds..
March 12th, 2021 07:00
Metro Mornings
Fay Slimm. said:
A face tells a thousand stories when dawn-wakened it begins a new day - so expertly put in these few lines as always are the reasons love survives wintery times . - - - every line has a reminder and must keep this among my faves...,,,,...,x
March 12th, 2021 03:52
Fay Slimm. said:
A face tells a thousand stories when dawn-wakened it begins a new day - so expertly put in these few lines as always are the reasons love survives wintery times . - - - every line has a reminder and must keep this among my faves...,,,,...,x
March 12th, 2021 03:52
Metro Mornings
Goldfinch60 said:
I nearly missed dawn this morning, half the day seemed to have gone when I awoke at 6:10 am.
Andy
March 12th, 2021 03:06
Goldfinch60 said:
I nearly missed dawn this morning, half the day seemed to have gone when I awoke at 6:10 am.
Andy
March 12th, 2021 03:06
Metro Mornings
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Will she wave goodbye to me? Have I even met her?! heehee.
March 12th, 2021 02:48
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Will she wave goodbye to me? Have I even met her?! heehee.
March 12th, 2021 02:48
Out of Mind
Dove said:
Love the line , the candles are weeping!
If only I could think that way!
“If I no longer see you, you no longer exist “
Seems I’m a creature of you are
Always in my thoughts and heart
March 10th, 2021 19:12
Dove said:
Love the line , the candles are weeping!
If only I could think that way!
“If I no longer see you, you no longer exist “
Seems I’m a creature of you are
Always in my thoughts and heart
March 10th, 2021 19:12
Love like a Song
Fay Slimm. said:
Am listening and truly enjoying the gently worded love-song echoing through all these very apt lines mon ami.
March 10th, 2021 11:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Am listening and truly enjoying the gently worded love-song echoing through all these very apt lines mon ami.
March 10th, 2021 11:43
Out of Mind
MendedFences27 said:
That which we have lost hurts the most. A sustained love, never equals the lost imagined one .This is the power of the mind.
The first two lines set up the imagery. Then we inject \"hope\" an undefined emotion and the work of the mind. And lastly, having set up the implausible we free what is not ours to let go. Yet the honesty of your emotions rings through to the reader and we know the words are spoken in sincerity. - Phil A.
March 9th, 2021 20:51
MendedFences27 said:
That which we have lost hurts the most. A sustained love, never equals the lost imagined one .This is the power of the mind.
The first two lines set up the imagery. Then we inject \"hope\" an undefined emotion and the work of the mind. And lastly, having set up the implausible we free what is not ours to let go. Yet the honesty of your emotions rings through to the reader and we know the words are spoken in sincerity. - Phil A.
March 9th, 2021 20:51
Out of Mind
FredPeyer said:
Neville, this is a great poem and should be hanging in every divorce lawyer\'s office!
March 9th, 2021 19:11
FredPeyer said:
Neville, this is a great poem and should be hanging in every divorce lawyer\'s office!
March 9th, 2021 19:11
Out of Mind
Doggerel Dave said:
Love free of possession - the only way (though sometimes very hard) to be. I\'ll settle for the last three stanzas.
Great Neville.
March 9th, 2021 17:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Love free of possession - the only way (though sometimes very hard) to be. I\'ll settle for the last three stanzas.
Great Neville.
March 9th, 2021 17:31
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