Magnificently Flawed
Lorna said:

Oh how I laughed.......... so funny - thank you.

October 23rd, 2021 06:02

Magnificently Flawed
spilleronsheet said:

Flaws alright
Imperfections be treated with kind
But how to tolerate those who keep converted their flaws
To act fakes all time
Well crafted dear poet
In short lines
You conveyed the masks people carry nowadays

October 23rd, 2021 03:06

Magnificently Flawed
Caring dove said:

Wow … someone with so many flaws … it sounds like the flaws are really revealing themselves .

A good poem , Neville

October 23rd, 2021 02:48

A Diamond in The Making
L. B. Mek said:

oh now for the real - real, deep poetry like this
I gotta save it for my nightly reads
so I can muse over it
delicately, in-between
conversational distractions and that distracting, clink
of expensive flavoured, melting ice cubes;
yes, I need that ambience
to be tempered, just right
to do such depthless words, justice...


October 22nd, 2021 05:21

A Diamond in The Making
Fay Slimm. said:

Good advice for a growing heart is this wise three liner. Diamonds are best when looking for value in making relationships..........x

October 22nd, 2021 03:34

A Diamond in The Making
dusk arising said:

Nice one Neville. I hate to think what my gallstones will turn out to be now that I\'ve invested in a ULEZ car.

October 22nd, 2021 03:10

Two Days into Autumn
dusk arising said:

I came home from a stay in hospital to a wonderful autumnal display on my tulip tree yesterday.
Kinda squared my wheel.... how the erstwhile taken for granted suddenly enlightens life.

October 21st, 2021 06:27

Two Days into Autumn
Accidental Poet said:

Enjoy the colors and lingering warmth N. Old man Winter awaits us. 😒

October 21st, 2021 05:18

Two Days into Autumn
orchidee said:

Good write N.
Me diary says we\'re one month and two days into Autumn!

October 21st, 2021 02:22

Two Days into Autumn
Caring dove said:

Great last line ! Nice writing )

October 21st, 2021 01:18

Ithaca
Fay Slimm. said:

Sounds like a paradise waiting for exploration - -- must go there one day and look for his footsteps - or may be for yours mon ami......x

October 20th, 2021 09:22

Ithaca
Poetic Dan said:

Thanks for the morning Google as I was not sure and now I\'ve seen its all in your head, can I come on board!

Fantastic stuff my friend

October 20th, 2021 03:34

Dirty Laugh
MendedFences27 said:

The difference between a \"laugh\" and a \"dirty laugh\" is that the latter is accepted with pleasure. To find so willing a \"laugh\" charmer is most fortunate. To reveal it here in such a poetic form is very skillful and shows how tiny things can make a moment into a memory. - Phil A.

October 19th, 2021 18:18

Dirty Laugh
L. B. Mek said:

I fell for a stunner in Amsterdam
she chased/followed me across the pond to dear old London,
but then she found the jazz bars and that alluringly gltizy, night scene
and I was left daydreaming
of could-have-been\'s
back, waiting
at the empty fishing hooks, of Amsterdam\'s: bricked-in
aesthetic rivers - of ill-fate...
(yeah, I think
we might have a common experience in our past, dear Poet
and I thank you for inspiring my little scribbled reply) lol
this plagued gift, titled Poetry
where we have to dredge-up, all our repressed - unseemly
in the name of Art...

October 19th, 2021 06:04

Dirty Laugh
Fay Slimm. said:

Part of the magic in these tantalizing lines is your uncanny ability to bring to life your chosen characters. I almost heard that special laugh which reminded of someone summers back..........x

October 19th, 2021 02:50