Comments received on poems by Neville
Cygnus RA21h46m32.24S-D32’53’
spilleronsheet said:
This is so beautiful
A swan in sky
Flying high
While I fascinate upon her flight
Who knew that swan that I see in sky
Lighting the sky at night
One day she shall descend upon heavenly earth
Soo…..beautiful dear Neville
Such unique comparison
It’s a jewel
January 30th, 2022 13:01
spilleronsheet said:
This is so beautiful
A swan in sky
Flying high
While I fascinate upon her flight
Who knew that swan that I see in sky
Lighting the sky at night
One day she shall descend upon heavenly earth
Soo…..beautiful dear Neville
Such unique comparison
It’s a jewel
January 30th, 2022 13:01
Cygnus RA21h46m32.24S-D32’53’
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Stunningly beautiful Neville,..just so stunningly gorgeous🕊 I love the ending,..it really drives it home🍻
January 30th, 2022 12:01
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Stunningly beautiful Neville,..just so stunningly gorgeous🕊 I love the ending,..it really drives it home🍻
January 30th, 2022 12:01
Cygnus RA21h46m32.24S-D32’53’
orchidee said:
Good write N. Bit of algebra too?!l
January 30th, 2022 04:49
orchidee said:
Good write N. Bit of algebra too?!l
January 30th, 2022 04:49
Cygnus RA21h46m32.24S-D32’53’
Fay Slimm. said:
What an inspiring write Nev. with such a unique title - -- Cygnus the bringer of balance can fill grieving hearts with peace for spirit lives on to gladden assurance of future reunions. Love needs no form, it is timeless and truly perpetual. Deep and powerful these positive lines today mon ami................x
January 30th, 2022 04:34
Fay Slimm. said:
What an inspiring write Nev. with such a unique title - -- Cygnus the bringer of balance can fill grieving hearts with peace for spirit lives on to gladden assurance of future reunions. Love needs no form, it is timeless and truly perpetual. Deep and powerful these positive lines today mon ami................x
January 30th, 2022 04:34
What it All Boils Down To
Rozina said:
Your description is masterful. Such a pleasure to read. I am trying to do better by reading more poems; perhaps join a course too. Thank you.
January 29th, 2022 06:25
Rozina said:
Your description is masterful. Such a pleasure to read. I am trying to do better by reading more poems; perhaps join a course too. Thank you.
January 29th, 2022 06:25
What it All Boils Down To
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville, those etchings will always be there.
Andy
January 29th, 2022 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville, those etchings will always be there.
Andy
January 29th, 2022 01:25
What it All Boils Down To
MendedFences27 said:
If poetry is a sin, we are all going to burn in hell. Probably worth it though. Since I\'m just getting back onto this hellbent wagon your poem struck a chord.
You may have explained the attraction this writing uses to possess us all. It may truly be the letters and words upon the white paper. For what other common denominator is there since the ideas are so varied and unique. So rom one \"Shackled king\" to another, Keep It Up. - Phil A.
January 28th, 2022 21:10
MendedFences27 said:
If poetry is a sin, we are all going to burn in hell. Probably worth it though. Since I\'m just getting back onto this hellbent wagon your poem struck a chord.
You may have explained the attraction this writing uses to possess us all. It may truly be the letters and words upon the white paper. For what other common denominator is there since the ideas are so varied and unique. So rom one \"Shackled king\" to another, Keep It Up. - Phil A.
January 28th, 2022 21:10
What it All Boils Down To
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Neville.
As the book says. I sin seven times a day. Or is that pee overnight? I can\'t keep up
January 28th, 2022 16:12
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Neville.
As the book says. I sin seven times a day. Or is that pee overnight? I can\'t keep up
January 28th, 2022 16:12
Double Jeopardy
Draven said:
Haha, wow, so much spoken in such few words. I love poems like these. Well done.
January 28th, 2022 14:54
Draven said:
Haha, wow, so much spoken in such few words. I love poems like these. Well done.
January 28th, 2022 14:54
What it All Boils Down To
Draven said:
Nicely written and well formatted. :)
January 28th, 2022 14:52
Draven said:
Nicely written and well formatted. :)
January 28th, 2022 14:52
What it All Boils Down To
orchidee said:
A fine poetic piece. I will like it e\'ermore. I\'ve run out of \'v\'s on me keyboard, you will notice. lol.
January 28th, 2022 08:04
orchidee said:
A fine poetic piece. I will like it e\'ermore. I\'ve run out of \'v\'s on me keyboard, you will notice. lol.
January 28th, 2022 08:04
What it All Boils Down To
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'Depicting
as it does, exquisite
yet still
inexcusable guilt
and yes, sublimely ..
Now etched
upon the minds of those
free wretches\'
(I can\'t help but wonder
how many thousands of write\'s
were binned, by impassioned obstinacy
in your strive, to accumulate
such wordsmith skill
for flawless, flow
and seamless, rhyming dexterity
in your, irresistible: Poetry!)
I simply bow, to your inking Mastery, my friend
January 28th, 2022 06:58
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'Depicting
as it does, exquisite
yet still
inexcusable guilt
and yes, sublimely ..
Now etched
upon the minds of those
free wretches\'
(I can\'t help but wonder
how many thousands of write\'s
were binned, by impassioned obstinacy
in your strive, to accumulate
such wordsmith skill
for flawless, flow
and seamless, rhyming dexterity
in your, irresistible: Poetry!)
I simply bow, to your inking Mastery, my friend
January 28th, 2022 06:58
What it All Boils Down To
spilleronsheet said:
The intense sin….the darkest crime…the love of ink stabbing the paper beside…spilling all over as the ink flows….such a grave crime but words so well stringed pleading the poet’s guilt….very skilfully crafted piece dear Neville….a thousands applaud
January 28th, 2022 06:11
spilleronsheet said:
The intense sin….the darkest crime…the love of ink stabbing the paper beside…spilling all over as the ink flows….such a grave crime but words so well stringed pleading the poet’s guilt….very skilfully crafted piece dear Neville….a thousands applaud
January 28th, 2022 06:11
What it All Boils Down To
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - you express so well the writing addition Nev. and I for one am guilty as charged. Poets world over love virgin pages for their sinful urge to leave unique marks. One for my faves as a witty reminder that I too have long needed that same daily fix.............x
January 28th, 2022 05:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - you express so well the writing addition Nev. and I for one am guilty as charged. Poets world over love virgin pages for their sinful urge to leave unique marks. One for my faves as a witty reminder that I too have long needed that same daily fix.............x
January 28th, 2022 05:15
Double Jeopardy
Rozina said:
Do unto others …..
So much said in so few words. Wonderful.
January 27th, 2022 08:39
Rozina said:
Do unto others …..
So much said in so few words. Wonderful.
January 27th, 2022 08:39
Double Jeopardy
dusk arising said:
Don\'t beat yourself up over this, she said, I\'ll gladly do that for you.
January 27th, 2022 08:25
dusk arising said:
Don\'t beat yourself up over this, she said, I\'ll gladly do that for you.
January 27th, 2022 08:25
Double Jeopardy
Buzz Bray said:
Wonderful use of language. Each word impactful. Wow!
January 27th, 2022 08:05
Buzz Bray said:
Wonderful use of language. Each word impactful. Wow!
January 27th, 2022 08:05
Double Jeopardy
L. B. Mek said:
I always feel sorry for those
that hate me
for they begin, so belatedly
or maybe, its just that
I began, so despairingly early..
(a great write!
you lead, I will strive
to follow, dear Masterful Poet)
January 27th, 2022 07:07
L. B. Mek said:
I always feel sorry for those
that hate me
for they begin, so belatedly
or maybe, its just that
I began, so despairingly early..
(a great write!
you lead, I will strive
to follow, dear Masterful Poet)
January 27th, 2022 07:07
Double Jeopardy
Paul Bell said:
Definitely, spread the beating around, and who knows, when the beating finally ends, just restart it.
January 27th, 2022 07:07
Paul Bell said:
Definitely, spread the beating around, and who knows, when the beating finally ends, just restart it.
January 27th, 2022 07:07
Conveniently Forgot
spilleronsheet said:
So true
It’s better to realise even though late
I breathed for myself
And it wasn’t granted by you
Loving thyself before than others
Thanks dear Neville for reminding these words in such gentle way
January 27th, 2022 05:51
spilleronsheet said:
So true
It’s better to realise even though late
I breathed for myself
And it wasn’t granted by you
Loving thyself before than others
Thanks dear Neville for reminding these words in such gentle way
January 27th, 2022 05:51
Double Jeopardy
spilleronsheet said:
The loose black coats and the enormous courts told a tale of the prisoner locked up twice in jail for the same mistake of waking late
Another great write dear Neville
A witty poetry you laced
A satire at the pen’s mistake
January 27th, 2022 05:49
spilleronsheet said:
The loose black coats and the enormous courts told a tale of the prisoner locked up twice in jail for the same mistake of waking late
Another great write dear Neville
A witty poetry you laced
A satire at the pen’s mistake
January 27th, 2022 05:49
Double Jeopardy
Caring dove said:
We treat others a certain way , then get angry when they do the same to us . So why treat others a certain way , if we hate it so much ?
January 27th, 2022 05:30
Caring dove said:
We treat others a certain way , then get angry when they do the same to us . So why treat others a certain way , if we hate it so much ?
January 27th, 2022 05:30
Double Jeopardy
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - -such a fun interpretation of that fashionable clause among some U.S.law-breakers - - - - am still chuckling at the scene your pen paints today Nev. - - and well if that takes your fancy am handing you the wooden spoon now................x
January 27th, 2022 05:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - -such a fun interpretation of that fashionable clause among some U.S.law-breakers - - - - am still chuckling at the scene your pen paints today Nev. - - and well if that takes your fancy am handing you the wooden spoon now................x
January 27th, 2022 05:12
Conveniently Forgot
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a well composed lament to one who may not yet get it and a belated back-hander to boot Nev. - love can be painful if it\'s one-sided - or that\'s how I see this fine piece of poemed confession............ x
January 26th, 2022 06:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a well composed lament to one who may not yet get it and a belated back-hander to boot Nev. - love can be painful if it\'s one-sided - or that\'s how I see this fine piece of poemed confession............ x
January 26th, 2022 06:21
Conveniently Forgot
Rozina said:
Partially alive until gradually building up self as a whole person again. I think the person who leaves does not \'see\' this nor care?
January 26th, 2022 04:25
Rozina said:
Partially alive until gradually building up self as a whole person again. I think the person who leaves does not \'see\' this nor care?
January 26th, 2022 04:25
Conveniently Forgot
dusk arising said:
Cor, this can be read several ways, either with a relationship or after one has split up. The last one of mine to split up gave me a huge sense of freedom to my own existence and lifestyle back.
Re-read your words a couple of times (im sure you do this ambiguous trick on purpose) and now i\'m thinking it\'s aimed at a self centred selfish lady.
Well, certainly a head scratcher of a post, which is a good thing for a dunce like me.
January 26th, 2022 04:11
dusk arising said:
Cor, this can be read several ways, either with a relationship or after one has split up. The last one of mine to split up gave me a huge sense of freedom to my own existence and lifestyle back.
Re-read your words a couple of times (im sure you do this ambiguous trick on purpose) and now i\'m thinking it\'s aimed at a self centred selfish lady.
Well, certainly a head scratcher of a post, which is a good thing for a dunce like me.
January 26th, 2022 04:11
Conveniently Forgot
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, we will always exist.
Andy
January 26th, 2022 04:03
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, we will always exist.
Andy
January 26th, 2022 04:03
Conveniently Forgot
orchidee said:
I did not \'forget\' to say good write N.
January 26th, 2022 03:58
orchidee said:
I did not \'forget\' to say good write N.
January 26th, 2022 03:58
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