Comments received on poems by Neville
Enlightenment #2
Goldfinch60 said:
So many people do not realise the things people have to do just to stay alive. Good sad words Nevillle.
Andy
October 27th, 2021 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
So many people do not realise the things people have to do just to stay alive. Good sad words Nevillle.
Andy
October 27th, 2021 01:31
Enlightenment #2
spilleronsheet said:
Nothing lasts forever
What a provoking thought
It maybe bad
But it maybe good
Nothing lasts forever
Not even our mistakes
Not even our falls
Today you might be trough
Tomorrow become a rise
Today you may be sad
But nothing lasts forever
Not even your grief
October 26th, 2021 12:19
spilleronsheet said:
Nothing lasts forever
What a provoking thought
It maybe bad
But it maybe good
Nothing lasts forever
Not even our mistakes
Not even our falls
Today you might be trough
Tomorrow become a rise
Today you may be sad
But nothing lasts forever
Not even your grief
October 26th, 2021 12:19
Enlightenment #2
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Neville,
You’re spot on with your inked words…
……. ‘without any warning, whatsoever
that nothing
lasts forever and there is no taste
at all to those last
few crumbs we each leave behind ..’ …….
Lasting forever!? …
no such thing…
and those ‘few crumbs’ are best left behind…
at least in my opinion.
Laura🌻
October 26th, 2021 11:02
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Neville,
You’re spot on with your inked words…
……. ‘without any warning, whatsoever
that nothing
lasts forever and there is no taste
at all to those last
few crumbs we each leave behind ..’ …….
Lasting forever!? …
no such thing…
and those ‘few crumbs’ are best left behind…
at least in my opinion.
Laura🌻
October 26th, 2021 11:02
Enlightenment #2
Fay Slimm. said:
Deep with sombre reflections your pen describes scenes with perfect slow tempo to show how quickly fly everyone\'s days....... food for more thought here my dear friend.
October 26th, 2021 09:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Deep with sombre reflections your pen describes scenes with perfect slow tempo to show how quickly fly everyone\'s days....... food for more thought here my dear friend.
October 26th, 2021 09:46
Enlightenment #2
dusk arising said:
Forever? Even the tales of history\'s greats fades.... I know little of my father other than the front he presented to the world... i hope my son will know the real me... that may last a few years.
Forever is for the future to judge and we have no place in it.
October 26th, 2021 09:06
dusk arising said:
Forever? Even the tales of history\'s greats fades.... I know little of my father other than the front he presented to the world... i hope my son will know the real me... that may last a few years.
Forever is for the future to judge and we have no place in it.
October 26th, 2021 09:06
Enlightenment #2
Caring dove said:
I liked this ) and so true but sad .., nothing lasts forever
October 26th, 2021 08:05
Caring dove said:
I liked this ) and so true but sad .., nothing lasts forever
October 26th, 2021 08:05
Breakfast Rituals
Goldfinch60 said:
Good romantic times in the beginning of the day Neville. Fine words.
Andy
October 26th, 2021 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Good romantic times in the beginning of the day Neville. Fine words.
Andy
October 26th, 2021 00:59
Breakfast Rituals
MendedFences27 said:
A tender moment caught and revealed in fine fashion. Sunday morning breakfasts have always meant the beginning of Family day. Gatherings that portend of visits from the children and grandchildren, now. So, it\'s lovingly started with a kiss at breakfast. Yes, your poem develops the scene beautifully and the \"fine china\" gives it a sense of importance. It reminded me of so many similar moments. Loved it. - Phil A.
October 25th, 2021 21:18
MendedFences27 said:
A tender moment caught and revealed in fine fashion. Sunday morning breakfasts have always meant the beginning of Family day. Gatherings that portend of visits from the children and grandchildren, now. So, it\'s lovingly started with a kiss at breakfast. Yes, your poem develops the scene beautifully and the \"fine china\" gives it a sense of importance. It reminded me of so many similar moments. Loved it. - Phil A.
October 25th, 2021 21:18
Breakfast Rituals
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
What a treat……
Breakfast, Lunch,
and/or Dinner…hmmm…..
I’ll dabble and nibble……………….
A very pleasing and deliciously composed poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
October 25th, 2021 13:49
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
What a treat……
Breakfast, Lunch,
and/or Dinner…hmmm…..
I’ll dabble and nibble……………….
A very pleasing and deliciously composed poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
October 25th, 2021 13:49
Breakfast Rituals
L. B. Mek said:
so like, this intoxicating feeling - here
we\'re experiencing
after finishing your beautiful poem
is what all those romance flicks and books
try to emulate and recreate...
such distilled poignancy,
amazingly transparent sensuality,
and those subtle notes of love\'s unquantifiable levels
of instinctive intimacy!
thank you,
this is such a treat, to read, dear Masterful Poet!
and I fully appreciate the imbued potential, in your poetry
to initiate the flood
of cherished images and memories
we\'re all recollecting and delighting-in, after reading it
October 25th, 2021 06:39
L. B. Mek said:
so like, this intoxicating feeling - here
we\'re experiencing
after finishing your beautiful poem
is what all those romance flicks and books
try to emulate and recreate...
such distilled poignancy,
amazingly transparent sensuality,
and those subtle notes of love\'s unquantifiable levels
of instinctive intimacy!
thank you,
this is such a treat, to read, dear Masterful Poet!
and I fully appreciate the imbued potential, in your poetry
to initiate the flood
of cherished images and memories
we\'re all recollecting and delighting-in, after reading it
October 25th, 2021 06:39
Breakfast Rituals
orchidee said:
A fine scene pictured there N.
I might try a kiss but I might swoon!
Oh, go on, Orchi, give it a try! lol.
October 25th, 2021 05:18
orchidee said:
A fine scene pictured there N.
I might try a kiss but I might swoon!
Oh, go on, Orchi, give it a try! lol.
October 25th, 2021 05:18
Breakfast Rituals
Fay Slimm. said:
Sounds great that kind of Sunday with two washing plates between cuddles........ ah - nuff said..........x
October 25th, 2021 03:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Sounds great that kind of Sunday with two washing plates between cuddles........ ah - nuff said..........x
October 25th, 2021 03:45
Breakfast Rituals
dusk arising said:
Ah, bliss..... then out came the rolling pin (the missing verse).
Such a lovely romantic scene i can\'t believe in.... not in my life.... my history.... sob..... what have i been missing all these years?
October 25th, 2021 03:27
dusk arising said:
Ah, bliss..... then out came the rolling pin (the missing verse).
Such a lovely romantic scene i can\'t believe in.... not in my life.... my history.... sob..... what have i been missing all these years?
October 25th, 2021 03:27
Breakfast Rituals
spilleronsheet said:
Sunday’s are the most required
Nice one dear poet…
October 25th, 2021 03:27
spilleronsheet said:
Sunday’s are the most required
Nice one dear poet…
October 25th, 2021 03:27
Recollections
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories will never leave your mind Neville.
Andy
October 25th, 2021 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories will never leave your mind Neville.
Andy
October 25th, 2021 00:38
Dirty Laugh
Dove said:
Dirty laugh, oh my , is that a coquettish pleasure ringing in thy ears!
Or a devilish wonder!
October 24th, 2021 18:54
Dove said:
Dirty laugh, oh my , is that a coquettish pleasure ringing in thy ears!
Or a devilish wonder!
October 24th, 2021 18:54
Magnificently Flawed
Dove said:
2-4-6-8 who do we appreciate ! Great formatting!
Hope one of the flaw,s, was she was too affectionate, lol
October 24th, 2021 18:45
Dove said:
2-4-6-8 who do we appreciate ! Great formatting!
Hope one of the flaw,s, was she was too affectionate, lol
October 24th, 2021 18:45
Recollections
Dove said:
Beautiful, elegant memories! Just like a scene from a movie
October 24th, 2021 18:41
Dove said:
Beautiful, elegant memories! Just like a scene from a movie
October 24th, 2021 18:41
Recollections
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
…absolutely
‘so much harder to forget’…
that indelible moment in time…
that I often wish IT to find me…
I applaud you for stirring within me that feeling I wish not to forget. An enjoyable read…to say the least.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
October 24th, 2021 16:40
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
…absolutely
‘so much harder to forget’…
that indelible moment in time…
that I often wish IT to find me…
I applaud you for stirring within me that feeling I wish not to forget. An enjoyable read…to say the least.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
October 24th, 2021 16:40
Recollections
dusk arising said:
Those we have love had beauty and sincerity until.... whatever happened. Such beauty remains with us, un dying, un repeatable, it just IS. Like a work of art tattooed on our soul.
I love poetry which inspires ones thoughts and memories.
October 24th, 2021 14:13
dusk arising said:
Those we have love had beauty and sincerity until.... whatever happened. Such beauty remains with us, un dying, un repeatable, it just IS. Like a work of art tattooed on our soul.
I love poetry which inspires ones thoughts and memories.
October 24th, 2021 14:13
Recollections
Lorna said:
Can\'t help it - took me straight to this:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gsALgi5yM_A
Thanks for that!
October 24th, 2021 05:17
Lorna said:
Can\'t help it - took me straight to this:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gsALgi5yM_A
Thanks for that!
October 24th, 2021 05:17
Recollections
spilleronsheet said:
So true
It’s easier to remember than to forget
Be it people or some unkind memories
I wish to forget some too
Those that caused me scars
I wish I could let go of them
To forget them
Your poetry threw me in my past which I am struggling in present too
Very touching
October 24th, 2021 04:47
spilleronsheet said:
So true
It’s easier to remember than to forget
Be it people or some unkind memories
I wish to forget some too
Those that caused me scars
I wish I could let go of them
To forget them
Your poetry threw me in my past which I am struggling in present too
Very touching
October 24th, 2021 04:47
Recollections
Fay Slimm. said:
Forgetting is not easy when pleasures of love has to end Nev. - such a sad read but so appealing are your tender recollections mon ami.........x
October 24th, 2021 02:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Forgetting is not easy when pleasures of love has to end Nev. - such a sad read but so appealing are your tender recollections mon ami.........x
October 24th, 2021 02:39
Recollections
A.H. Browning said:
“But so much harder to forget”
You speak the truth. Enjoyed.
October 24th, 2021 02:31
A.H. Browning said:
“But so much harder to forget”
You speak the truth. Enjoyed.
October 24th, 2021 02:31
Recollections
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
I\'m into too much psychology at present. a nook says things like: \'Is there a thought that causes us to remember that we forgot something?\'
And - \'Is there a thought that causes us to forget what we remembered?\'
Summat like that. I will shut up and go back to sleep now. lol
October 24th, 2021 02:11
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
I\'m into too much psychology at present. a nook says things like: \'Is there a thought that causes us to remember that we forgot something?\'
And - \'Is there a thought that causes us to forget what we remembered?\'
Summat like that. I will shut up and go back to sleep now. lol
October 24th, 2021 02:11
Magnificently Flawed
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Ahh…those first impressions can be so deceiving…so much packed within a few lines…
Another great one my dear poet.
Laura🌻
October 23rd, 2021 18:12
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Ahh…those first impressions can be so deceiving…so much packed within a few lines…
Another great one my dear poet.
Laura🌻
October 23rd, 2021 18:12
Magnificently Flawed
dusk arising said:
Not to mention the huge Gorilla swinging on her apex.
Great description of some of the time wasters out there, my radar has become finely attuned.
October 23rd, 2021 12:02
dusk arising said:
Not to mention the huge Gorilla swinging on her apex.
Great description of some of the time wasters out there, my radar has become finely attuned.
October 23rd, 2021 12:02
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