Comments received on poems by Neville
Virus
Doggerel Dave said:
Pre covid. Prophetic or what?
Poignant write on its own, without the current situation, Neville.
Covid, \'cunning\', mutable, aspires to be everything you list , if that\'s not too anthropomorphic.
This one is ready for a re-run, I think.
May 30th, 2021 07:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Pre covid. Prophetic or what?
Poignant write on its own, without the current situation, Neville.
Covid, \'cunning\', mutable, aspires to be everything you list , if that\'s not too anthropomorphic.
This one is ready for a re-run, I think.
May 30th, 2021 07:36
Mirrors Cracked
Doggerel Dave said:
Got It...and no, I\'m not gonna ask - I see too many bits of my own life and relationships in there to want to take on any of yours.
Thanks for that, Neville.
May 30th, 2021 07:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Got It...and no, I\'m not gonna ask - I see too many bits of my own life and relationships in there to want to take on any of yours.
Thanks for that, Neville.
May 30th, 2021 07:07
Riding a Curve
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve bin battered and bruised by these birds lately, ain\'t you, Neville?
Any chance better times ahead? 😊
Advice to the lovelorn? Surely you could pass one of them on who would not be too damaging to poor old orchi? 😊
May 30th, 2021 05:50
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve bin battered and bruised by these birds lately, ain\'t you, Neville?
Any chance better times ahead? 😊
Advice to the lovelorn? Surely you could pass one of them on who would not be too damaging to poor old orchi? 😊
May 30th, 2021 05:50
Riding a Curve
dusk arising said:
Unforgettable short lived times. Like ehen a beautiful butterfly lands on your forhead, you open your eyes to see its beautiful colours and it shits in your eye. Unforgettable.
May 30th, 2021 04:31
dusk arising said:
Unforgettable short lived times. Like ehen a beautiful butterfly lands on your forhead, you open your eyes to see its beautiful colours and it shits in your eye. Unforgettable.
May 30th, 2021 04:31
Riding a Curve
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
How about this lass? Should I meet her? Could I meet her?!
May 30th, 2021 01:34
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
How about this lass? Should I meet her? Could I meet her?!
May 30th, 2021 01:34
Riding a Curve
Goldfinch60 said:
May that sun ray be forever with you Neville.
Andy
May 30th, 2021 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
May that sun ray be forever with you Neville.
Andy
May 30th, 2021 00:47
2 Put it Frankly
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write hopefully bring plenty of Monet your way.
Andy
May 30th, 2021 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write hopefully bring plenty of Monet your way.
Andy
May 30th, 2021 00:21
2 Put it Frankly
SureshG said:
Don’t ever go from TOULON to TOULOUSE. Trust me, it’s a mood killer. I did it once, and she never forgave me.
As they all said, loved your poem tooo.
May 29th, 2021 18:47
SureshG said:
Don’t ever go from TOULON to TOULOUSE. Trust me, it’s a mood killer. I did it once, and she never forgave me.
As they all said, loved your poem tooo.
May 29th, 2021 18:47
2 Put it Frankly
Jerry Reynolds said:
This was so much fun, Neville. Set your alarm or you might miss a opportunity at the \"Crack of Dawn\"
May 29th, 2021 12:39
Jerry Reynolds said:
This was so much fun, Neville. Set your alarm or you might miss a opportunity at the \"Crack of Dawn\"
May 29th, 2021 12:39
2 Put it Frankly
Fay Slimm. said:
My smiles ever widen by your cleverly inventive twisting of words Nev. - another twice read verse to set me achuckle with use of Toulouses without one Lautrec - - hopin\' ya sleep tite yerself with all ya ticked boxes my naughtymost friend..............x
May 29th, 2021 04:23
Fay Slimm. said:
My smiles ever widen by your cleverly inventive twisting of words Nev. - another twice read verse to set me achuckle with use of Toulouses without one Lautrec - - hopin\' ya sleep tite yerself with all ya ticked boxes my naughtymost friend..............x
May 29th, 2021 04:23
2 Put it Frankly
Doggerel Dave said:
Didn\'t have the Monet to court her for longer? Wasn\'t Degas was it?
May 29th, 2021 04:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Didn\'t have the Monet to court her for longer? Wasn\'t Degas was it?
May 29th, 2021 04:09
2 Put it Frankly
dusk arising said:
Something tragic and heartfelt recounted here. One of those moments where the door of the \'best forgotten locker\' has opened and due venom has been levied.
May the rest of your bank holiday weekend be spent in more restful, peaceful frame of mind dear poet.
May 29th, 2021 03:34
dusk arising said:
Something tragic and heartfelt recounted here. One of those moments where the door of the \'best forgotten locker\' has opened and due venom has been levied.
May the rest of your bank holiday weekend be spent in more restful, peaceful frame of mind dear poet.
May 29th, 2021 03:34
2 Put it Frankly
Neville said:
............ I seem to be living in a world increasingly filled with ***** asterixis ...however, under the circumstances Mr. O I ****** thank thee ................. :)
May 29th, 2021 02:59
Neville said:
............ I seem to be living in a world increasingly filled with ***** asterixis ...however, under the circumstances Mr. O I ****** thank thee ................. :)
May 29th, 2021 02:59
2 Put it Frankly
orchidee said:
Ahh, marked 18+, or Fido would be barking ferociously! Meanwhile, I\'ve swooned, and he is helping to revive me. Well, he told me it was marked 18+. lol.
I saw a programme on Tourettes. One person used those words to a squirrel of all things. It looked bemused, poor creature.
Can it be helped? Or will men in white coats arrive for her soon?
May 29th, 2021 01:55
orchidee said:
Ahh, marked 18+, or Fido would be barking ferociously! Meanwhile, I\'ve swooned, and he is helping to revive me. Well, he told me it was marked 18+. lol.
I saw a programme on Tourettes. One person used those words to a squirrel of all things. It looked bemused, poor creature.
Can it be helped? Or will men in white coats arrive for her soon?
May 29th, 2021 01:55
A Box Full of Maybe’s
Trenz Pruca said:
Much more than a scribble,. A box full of maybe\'s perhaps. Thank you for the poem.
May 28th, 2021 22:34
Trenz Pruca said:
Much more than a scribble,. A box full of maybe\'s perhaps. Thank you for the poem.
May 28th, 2021 22:34
A Box Full of Maybe’s
Accidental Poet said:
A box of maybes is still better than a box of no\'s, yes? ; )
May 28th, 2021 19:42
Accidental Poet said:
A box of maybes is still better than a box of no\'s, yes? ; )
May 28th, 2021 19:42
A Box Full of Maybe’s
Dove said:
Well I hope the enjoyable days come more often, I’ll take a box of maybes and trade you for a box of chocolates! Smiles
May 28th, 2021 17:50
Dove said:
Well I hope the enjoyable days come more often, I’ll take a box of maybes and trade you for a box of chocolates! Smiles
May 28th, 2021 17:50
A Box Full of Maybe’s
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, Neville. Sometimes chance and destiny collide and for one moment it all makes sense.
May 28th, 2021 09:12
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, Neville. Sometimes chance and destiny collide and for one moment it all makes sense.
May 28th, 2021 09:12
A Box Full of Maybe’s
Doggerel Dave said:
I dunno – and as I’ve made it plain elsewhere, believe I most probably will never know…and maybe, I sometimes think, maybe that’s enlightenment… or perhaps enlightenment is the thought I may be wrong…then perhaps your position that it don’t happen all that often …
Anyway Neville....
May 28th, 2021 08:40
Doggerel Dave said:
I dunno – and as I’ve made it plain elsewhere, believe I most probably will never know…and maybe, I sometimes think, maybe that’s enlightenment… or perhaps enlightenment is the thought I may be wrong…then perhaps your position that it don’t happen all that often …
Anyway Neville....
May 28th, 2021 08:40
A Box Full of Maybe’s
L. B. Mek said:
\'life\'s like, a box of Maybe\'s
we never know
which one, we\'re meant to harvest\'..
a brilliant write my friend
lulled me into a satori observation, of my own
I think I\'m a fan of your poetry;
oh wait, I confessed that - already
and oh - so, very Proudly...!
😁😎🍻
May 28th, 2021 05:13
L. B. Mek said:
\'life\'s like, a box of Maybe\'s
we never know
which one, we\'re meant to harvest\'..
a brilliant write my friend
lulled me into a satori observation, of my own
I think I\'m a fan of your poetry;
oh wait, I confessed that - already
and oh - so, very Proudly...!
😁😎🍻
May 28th, 2021 05:13
A Box Full of Maybe’s
orchidee said:
Maybe I will like this poem. Yep, I sure do, as usual!
Maybe - I will meet one of them gals soon too.
May 28th, 2021 04:50
orchidee said:
Maybe I will like this poem. Yep, I sure do, as usual!
Maybe - I will meet one of them gals soon too.
May 28th, 2021 04:50
A Box Full of Maybe’s
Fay Slimm. said:
Bending to change can bring an awakening - - and that is no maybe my satorical friend. A write to remember for poets like me.
May 28th, 2021 04:19
Fay Slimm. said:
Bending to change can bring an awakening - - and that is no maybe my satorical friend. A write to remember for poets like me.
May 28th, 2021 04:19
A Box Full of Maybe’s
dusk arising said:
Kensho - seeing ones essence. A day to sit among natural wonders and let life begin it\'s teachings again.
May 28th, 2021 03:32
dusk arising said:
Kensho - seeing ones essence. A day to sit among natural wonders and let life begin it\'s teachings again.
May 28th, 2021 03:32
Rokhsana
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an awfully sad poem Neville, only alleged but still stoned to death, if it was a man I bet the Afghans would not have stoned him!!
Andy
May 28th, 2021 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an awfully sad poem Neville, only alleged but still stoned to death, if it was a man I bet the Afghans would not have stoned him!!
Andy
May 28th, 2021 00:19
Rokhsana
Doggerel Dave said:
Short sharp shock there, Neville... read piece first. Your comment only caused the switch.
In your words - Not everything is what it seems. Universal truth there, but in this case it certainly focused attention on something I find difficult to think about.
May 27th, 2021 20:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Short sharp shock there, Neville... read piece first. Your comment only caused the switch.
In your words - Not everything is what it seems. Universal truth there, but in this case it certainly focused attention on something I find difficult to think about.
May 27th, 2021 20:22
Rokhsana
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
a write of such empathy, displayed proudly
exemplifying: with unwavering sincerity...!
I read and learn, my friend
May 27th, 2021 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
a write of such empathy, displayed proudly
exemplifying: with unwavering sincerity...!
I read and learn, my friend
May 27th, 2021 05:26
Rokhsana
dusk arising said:
Maybe the world was not ready for true beauty. Maybe it is still not ready. Maybe injustice justifies the existence of some.
How many lines occupy the story of rokhsana, how many missing lines occupied her truth.
May 27th, 2021 03:38
dusk arising said:
Maybe the world was not ready for true beauty. Maybe it is still not ready. Maybe injustice justifies the existence of some.
How many lines occupy the story of rokhsana, how many missing lines occupied her truth.
May 27th, 2021 03:38
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