Comments received on poems by Neville
Yellow River
Fay Slimm. said:
Reading this hitherto unknown and abominable method of female birth control has been a real learning curve for this poet Nev. - - - may guilt haunt the changes made in a culture that thought so little of human life..........clearly told this shock of a piece will linger long after the read................ tearfully Fay.
September 28th, 2019 10:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Reading this hitherto unknown and abominable method of female birth control has been a real learning curve for this poet Nev. - - - may guilt haunt the changes made in a culture that thought so little of human life..........clearly told this shock of a piece will linger long after the read................ tearfully Fay.
September 28th, 2019 10:49
When Does Trust Kick In
Poetic Dan said:
Oops. Never you just try not to feed the flame of doubt, even when it\'s right you just ask do we have to scream and shout ;)
Loved every moment of this and appreciate the thoughts it gave, I think I\'ve healed a trigger but only time will tell
September 27th, 2019 18:52
Poetic Dan said:
Oops. Never you just try not to feed the flame of doubt, even when it\'s right you just ask do we have to scream and shout ;)
Loved every moment of this and appreciate the thoughts it gave, I think I\'ve healed a trigger but only time will tell
September 27th, 2019 18:52
When Does Trust Kick In
Clara said:
Trust unless they provide a reason not to trust. Great poem!
September 27th, 2019 08:41
Clara said:
Trust unless they provide a reason not to trust. Great poem!
September 27th, 2019 08:41
When Does Trust Kick In
Christina8 said:
I think trust takes some time to kick in but trust me when I say I love this poem!!
September 27th, 2019 06:20
Christina8 said:
I think trust takes some time to kick in but trust me when I say I love this poem!!
September 27th, 2019 06:20
When Does Trust Kick In
orchidee said:
Trust will never kick in, if anyone is hoping to trust me not to add water to their whisky/gin/whatever tipple....!
September 27th, 2019 01:46
orchidee said:
Trust will never kick in, if anyone is hoping to trust me not to add water to their whisky/gin/whatever tipple....!
September 27th, 2019 01:46
When Does Trust Kick In
Fay Slimm. said:
Trust kicks in from that single moment when eyes first meet and lock methinks Nev.......... otherwise none of the other could follow - much thanks for another delicious piece of gentle erotica - digested with a sigh and a nostalgic smile ............... Fay
September 27th, 2019 01:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Trust kicks in from that single moment when eyes first meet and lock methinks Nev.......... otherwise none of the other could follow - much thanks for another delicious piece of gentle erotica - digested with a sigh and a nostalgic smile ............... Fay
September 27th, 2019 01:10
When Does Trust Kick In
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust takes time to \'kick in\' but once there it is wonderful but the smallest thing in life can cause that trust to be annulled.
September 27th, 2019 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust takes time to \'kick in\' but once there it is wonderful but the smallest thing in life can cause that trust to be annulled.
September 27th, 2019 01:08
Poppies
Suresh said:
A winter wonderland, that\'s what wild poppies create in the hills of Southern California, just as your words wonderfully brought them to life.
September 27th, 2019 00:23
Suresh said:
A winter wonderland, that\'s what wild poppies create in the hills of Southern California, just as your words wonderfully brought them to life.
September 27th, 2019 00:23
Poppies
Michael Edwards said:
But not all poppy species are red. Fine write neville
September 26th, 2019 15:14
Michael Edwards said:
But not all poppy species are red. Fine write neville
September 26th, 2019 15:14
Poppies
Clara said:
I like the conflict here, what the red could signify, like post boxes and childrens\' toys and what the red in the poppy signifies...
Wonderful write.
September 26th, 2019 05:51
Clara said:
I like the conflict here, what the red could signify, like post boxes and childrens\' toys and what the red in the poppy signifies...
Wonderful write.
September 26th, 2019 05:51
Poppies
Fay Slimm. said:
A reverent but light-hearted look at poppy-red and all it pertains to and then a heart-wrenching reflection on poppy- memorial to lives lost in war - much more to your verse than comes from one read Nev - so into my favourites goes this poetic gem - thanking you too for the reminder.
September 26th, 2019 03:48
Fay Slimm. said:
A reverent but light-hearted look at poppy-red and all it pertains to and then a heart-wrenching reflection on poppy- memorial to lives lost in war - much more to your verse than comes from one read Nev - so into my favourites goes this poetic gem - thanking you too for the reminder.
September 26th, 2019 03:48
Poppies
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
It\'s not a fine day for me though. But why? well, I forgot my purple pills, and tuned in to \'Lorraine\' on telly. Why did I bore myself to death?! As in \'boredom\'. lol
September 26th, 2019 03:25
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
It\'s not a fine day for me though. But why? well, I forgot my purple pills, and tuned in to \'Lorraine\' on telly. Why did I bore myself to death?! As in \'boredom\'. lol
September 26th, 2019 03:25
Deciduous
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Neville, the conversations that go on within forests and woods can be startling.
September 26th, 2019 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Neville, the conversations that go on within forests and woods can be startling.
September 26th, 2019 00:20
These Words
marijoy said:
I’m getting acquainted with your poetry way. Modern and discernible.
September 25th, 2019 21:03
marijoy said:
I’m getting acquainted with your poetry way. Modern and discernible.
September 25th, 2019 21:03
Deciduous
marijoy said:
My friend poet Neville, I apologize for my ignorance but I did not understand your poem even though I love your words very much. Maybe because I’m not from England? Sending love ❤️
September 25th, 2019 20:49
marijoy said:
My friend poet Neville, I apologize for my ignorance but I did not understand your poem even though I love your words very much. Maybe because I’m not from England? Sending love ❤️
September 25th, 2019 20:49
Deciduous
dusk arising said:
Nice word play - good fun read. Root and branch stuff for the fine wordsmith that u are sir!
September 25th, 2019 10:44
dusk arising said:
Nice word play - good fun read. Root and branch stuff for the fine wordsmith that u are sir!
September 25th, 2019 10:44
Deciduous
Michael Edwards said:
Great write which gave me a smile. Feeling a bit de-leaved myself at the moment.
September 25th, 2019 04:05
Michael Edwards said:
Great write which gave me a smile. Feeling a bit de-leaved myself at the moment.
September 25th, 2019 04:05
Deciduous
Fay Slimm. said:
The difference between ever and naked deciduous makes needing that Veronica\'s warm love so vital methinks.... . I smiled at your word-play with that term - - - \"re-leaved\" .............intriguing nature- read Nev.
September 25th, 2019 04:02
Fay Slimm. said:
The difference between ever and naked deciduous makes needing that Veronica\'s warm love so vital methinks.... . I smiled at your word-play with that term - - - \"re-leaved\" .............intriguing nature- read Nev.
September 25th, 2019 04:02
These Words
Goldfinch60 said:
Words should be exposed to the world as yours are on this site.
September 25th, 2019 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Words should be exposed to the world as yours are on this site.
September 25th, 2019 02:43
These Words
Christina8 said:
A great write as it shows your skill as a poet in the beginning......
September 24th, 2019 14:50
Christina8 said:
A great write as it shows your skill as a poet in the beginning......
September 24th, 2019 14:50
These Words
dusk arising said:
I like it, the contrasting elite and whores at my level.
Reminds me i need a new quilt.
September 24th, 2019 12:31
dusk arising said:
I like it, the contrasting elite and whores at my level.
Reminds me i need a new quilt.
September 24th, 2019 12:31
These Words
Fay Slimm. said:
A great early write for it shows your potential to a fine degree Nev............... am delighted to read some of your very first words..
September 24th, 2019 04:02
Fay Slimm. said:
A great early write for it shows your potential to a fine degree Nev............... am delighted to read some of your very first words..
September 24th, 2019 04:02
Stashed
Goldfinch60 said:
May your memories
Forever be there for you,
To eternity.
Andy
September 24th, 2019 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
May your memories
Forever be there for you,
To eternity.
Andy
September 24th, 2019 00:38
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