Comments received on poems by Neville
Nothing but a Keepsake
Dove said:
Awe, postcards from the past are treasures
Sometimes a person likes to be a bit melancholy
and fill their days with what could have beens!
I filled mine with Fairy Tales of the past
And Fantasize what could be, why not lol
I
June 17th, 2021 00:49
Dove said:
Awe, postcards from the past are treasures
Sometimes a person likes to be a bit melancholy
and fill their days with what could have beens!
I filled mine with Fairy Tales of the past
And Fantasize what could be, why not lol
I
June 17th, 2021 00:49
Overcome
Dove said:
Lotion Motion! Very sensual, was it the tanning lotion , or was it the motion afterwards lol
June 17th, 2021 00:44
Dove said:
Lotion Motion! Very sensual, was it the tanning lotion , or was it the motion afterwards lol
June 17th, 2021 00:44
Nowhere Left to Bleed
Dove said:
Oh spill thine jewels of crimson red upon the floor
Or let them run from thine soul unto the ground
For every Precious drop that spilled before
Cannot erase the heartbreak thou’st has found
But I shall lend and ear , and listen wisely
No crazy soul shall break thy wings
Thy shall land thy naked tail wisely
And no longer shall your heart sting
🙏😀🙏😀🙏👍
Great write as always Neville
June 17th, 2021 00:39
Dove said:
Oh spill thine jewels of crimson red upon the floor
Or let them run from thine soul unto the ground
For every Precious drop that spilled before
Cannot erase the heartbreak thou’st has found
But I shall lend and ear , and listen wisely
No crazy soul shall break thy wings
Thy shall land thy naked tail wisely
And no longer shall your heart sting
🙏😀🙏😀🙏👍
Great write as always Neville
June 17th, 2021 00:39
Nothing but a Keepsake
L. B. Mek said:
(this is such an enticingly, contemplative write
and thanks for inspiring
my little scribbled reply, dear poet)
what\'s truly scary
is how abundant and universal
those keepsake postcards are..
I wonder, if regret is actually
a necessary element of existence
does everything, regret?
the Sun, too tired to stay and greet the Moon
a little longer
the Moon, too busy getting ready to meet the Sun
a little earlier;
and everything else, in-between
imitating that same futile frustration
in our happenstance dance, of belated realisation\'s
fated consequence..
June 15th, 2021 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
(this is such an enticingly, contemplative write
and thanks for inspiring
my little scribbled reply, dear poet)
what\'s truly scary
is how abundant and universal
those keepsake postcards are..
I wonder, if regret is actually
a necessary element of existence
does everything, regret?
the Sun, too tired to stay and greet the Moon
a little longer
the Moon, too busy getting ready to meet the Sun
a little earlier;
and everything else, in-between
imitating that same futile frustration
in our happenstance dance, of belated realisation\'s
fated consequence..
June 15th, 2021 04:39
Nothing but a Keepsake
Goldfinch60 said:
Some memories are treasured beyond time.
Andy
June 15th, 2021 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Some memories are treasured beyond time.
Andy
June 15th, 2021 00:48
Nothing but a Keepsake
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
So many keepsakes after a while.
You dusted off a good one.
June 14th, 2021 16:04
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
So many keepsakes after a while.
You dusted off a good one.
June 14th, 2021 16:04
Nothing but a Keepsake
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
You are remembering that saved faded postcard to remind you of living in the here and now. The past is over.
Appreciate today and all the days you’ll be gifted with…
and live to the fullest henceforth.
Another wonderful “scribble”.😉
Laura🌻
June 14th, 2021 15:50
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
You are remembering that saved faded postcard to remind you of living in the here and now. The past is over.
Appreciate today and all the days you’ll be gifted with…
and live to the fullest henceforth.
Another wonderful “scribble”.😉
Laura🌻
June 14th, 2021 15:50
Nothing but a Keepsake
Saxon Crow said:
Ahhhh memories of regret. So bittersweet. Nicely penned Nev
June 14th, 2021 14:13
Saxon Crow said:
Ahhhh memories of regret. So bittersweet. Nicely penned Nev
June 14th, 2021 14:13
Nothing but a Keepsake
Fay Slimm. said:
What might have been is covered here with veils of maybe and faded postcards but the moments of here and now seem so comfortably right in this small celebration of glorious togetherness. A tender read dear Nev.......x
June 14th, 2021 13:38
Fay Slimm. said:
What might have been is covered here with veils of maybe and faded postcards but the moments of here and now seem so comfortably right in this small celebration of glorious togetherness. A tender read dear Nev.......x
June 14th, 2021 13:38
Nothing but a Keepsake
SureshG said:
We sigh to remember what could have been, that your words say it so softly
June 14th, 2021 12:32
SureshG said:
We sigh to remember what could have been, that your words say it so softly
June 14th, 2021 12:32
Nothing but a Keepsake
dusk arising said:
\"Memories light the corners of my mind, misty water coloured.....\"
Such poetry as these memories have planted. We reap their rich harvest here on MPS. Today yours flowers beautifully.
June 14th, 2021 11:44
dusk arising said:
\"Memories light the corners of my mind, misty water coloured.....\"
Such poetry as these memories have planted. We reap their rich harvest here on MPS. Today yours flowers beautifully.
June 14th, 2021 11:44
Overcome
L. B. Mek said:
\'each tiny pearl of salt laden lotion shifted
and swirled, in a perfectly decreasing cyclic motion\'
oh, ok - yeah, that
erm, washing machine
tumble and bubble, and its contents
instinctive friction
of pulsating, spontaneous symphony
a replayed metaphorical rendition
of their owners
once skin-tingling: mutually symbiotic attraction
as their serendipity\'s, beginning..
(funtastically, funtabolously
...erm, fun?)..
A steamy read, you know
for us who like a bit of washing machine
vivacious: tremble...
Ahem! lol
June 14th, 2021 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'each tiny pearl of salt laden lotion shifted
and swirled, in a perfectly decreasing cyclic motion\'
oh, ok - yeah, that
erm, washing machine
tumble and bubble, and its contents
instinctive friction
of pulsating, spontaneous symphony
a replayed metaphorical rendition
of their owners
once skin-tingling: mutually symbiotic attraction
as their serendipity\'s, beginning..
(funtastically, funtabolously
...erm, fun?)..
A steamy read, you know
for us who like a bit of washing machine
vivacious: tremble...
Ahem! lol
June 14th, 2021 04:59
Overcome
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot? Hot over there? Winter here, hasn\'t got over 20 degrees C all week. Too cold to do much.... Could do an Oates I suppose.....not ready to go yet....
June 13th, 2021 19:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot? Hot over there? Winter here, hasn\'t got over 20 degrees C all week. Too cold to do much.... Could do an Oates I suppose.....not ready to go yet....
June 13th, 2021 19:16
Overcome
SureshG said:
After reading several of your recent posts, I have come to a conclusion that I’m jealous of you, your experiences and your talent.
June 13th, 2021 13:22
SureshG said:
After reading several of your recent posts, I have come to a conclusion that I’m jealous of you, your experiences and your talent.
June 13th, 2021 13:22
Overcome
Fay Slimm. said:
Sensually as any and hotter than this scorching Sunday - - ah yes - I remember it well................x
June 13th, 2021 10:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Sensually as any and hotter than this scorching Sunday - - ah yes - I remember it well................x
June 13th, 2021 10:07
Overcome
dusk arising said:
Disgracefully good!
You\'ve phrased this so well here to take your reader on their own sensual journey without revealing a thing. You\'re at it again pesky Neville.
June 13th, 2021 09:06
dusk arising said:
Disgracefully good!
You\'ve phrased this so well here to take your reader on their own sensual journey without revealing a thing. You\'re at it again pesky Neville.
June 13th, 2021 09:06
Overcome
Saxon Crow said:
It\'s hot out there already without you turning up the heat Nev!
June 13th, 2021 07:12
Saxon Crow said:
It\'s hot out there already without you turning up the heat Nev!
June 13th, 2021 07:12
Seizing Moments
Fay Slimm. said:
A quick second read of this truly engaging piece highlights a different subject in my view Nev. - - secret indeed is the moment when even fierce winds cannot expose it - - so with this second comment I think a good title could have been Your Secret - - whatever - - tis still good stuff...........x
June 13th, 2021 03:19
Fay Slimm. said:
A quick second read of this truly engaging piece highlights a different subject in my view Nev. - - secret indeed is the moment when even fierce winds cannot expose it - - so with this second comment I think a good title could have been Your Secret - - whatever - - tis still good stuff...........x
June 13th, 2021 03:19
Seizing Moments
Doggerel Dave said:
And tomorrow \"The answer is blowin\' in the wind\"
Sorry Neville - I just couldn\'t get it out of my mind....
June 12th, 2021 19:51
Doggerel Dave said:
And tomorrow \"The answer is blowin\' in the wind\"
Sorry Neville - I just couldn\'t get it out of my mind....
June 12th, 2021 19:51
Seizing Moments
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good twist, Neville. A bit of clever poetic kiss and tell.
June 12th, 2021 16:52
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good twist, Neville. A bit of clever poetic kiss and tell.
June 12th, 2021 16:52
Seizing Moments
Goldfinch60 said:
Tomorrow is waiting for us and it will be wonderful.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 12:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Tomorrow is waiting for us and it will be wonderful.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 12:33
Seizing Moments
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Yes, let’s seize those moments
that gratify us…
in the now!
Let’s live for today…
for we don’t know what
tomorrow will bring!
Your penned “scribble”,
as you call it,
has been a very satisfying read.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
June 12th, 2021 12:01
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Yes, let’s seize those moments
that gratify us…
in the now!
Let’s live for today…
for we don’t know what
tomorrow will bring!
Your penned “scribble”,
as you call it,
has been a very satisfying read.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
June 12th, 2021 12:01
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