Comments received on poems by Neville
Groundhog Day
Suresh said:
If she\'s still there, then she dost remember for she has similar experiences to share with you.
December 5th, 2020 12:50
Suresh said:
If she\'s still there, then she dost remember for she has similar experiences to share with you.
December 5th, 2020 12:50
Groundhog Day
orchidee said:
I expect she does remember. And should I meet her? lol.
December 5th, 2020 12:30
orchidee said:
I expect she does remember. And should I meet her? lol.
December 5th, 2020 12:30
Groundhog Day
dusk arising said:
If she has as much about her, character wise, as you do sir then... daft question.... and from me a ridiculous comment for she, would have to have as much depth as your good self otherwise there would be no \'she\'.
... I don\'t care!! I know what i meant. LOL
December 5th, 2020 11:46
dusk arising said:
If she has as much about her, character wise, as you do sir then... daft question.... and from me a ridiculous comment for she, would have to have as much depth as your good self otherwise there would be no \'she\'.
... I don\'t care!! I know what i meant. LOL
December 5th, 2020 11:46
In the End
Dove said:
Amen! Blessings to you and yours!
May you journey many more miles
December 4th, 2020 13:29
Dove said:
Amen! Blessings to you and yours!
May you journey many more miles
December 4th, 2020 13:29
My Lady Was a Poem
Dove said:
Beautiful!!! Love every word! Best wishes to u
December 4th, 2020 13:28
Dove said:
Beautiful!!! Love every word! Best wishes to u
December 4th, 2020 13:28
Some Words Are Too Heavy
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully simple but exponentially insightful, I imagine one could return to these words at different landmark\'s of a life and find them equally: an avenue of solace, or a heart wrenching incision - unfurling, those nightmare\'s kept bubbling just beneath the veneer of our clown smiles
December 3rd, 2020 06:42
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully simple but exponentially insightful, I imagine one could return to these words at different landmark\'s of a life and find them equally: an avenue of solace, or a heart wrenching incision - unfurling, those nightmare\'s kept bubbling just beneath the veneer of our clown smiles
December 3rd, 2020 06:42
In the End
Suresh said:
..as do we have birth,
which is sure to follow,
so let\'s celebrate life.......
November 30th, 2020 05:37
Suresh said:
..as do we have birth,
which is sure to follow,
so let\'s celebrate life.......
November 30th, 2020 05:37
In the End
Fay Slimm. said:
Back for a second read of your 757 on shared truth of humanity\'s common endings Nev. which has revealed even deeper the need for struggling humanity to grasp awareness and feel more oneness -- - it inspired me to post a piece yesterday on nature\'s lessons with its continual changes from dark to light every day - - maybe death brings the same chance of renewal for humans to enjoy living in other dimensions. Your words certainly compel an on-going ponder..........x
November 29th, 2020 03:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Back for a second read of your 757 on shared truth of humanity\'s common endings Nev. which has revealed even deeper the need for struggling humanity to grasp awareness and feel more oneness -- - it inspired me to post a piece yesterday on nature\'s lessons with its continual changes from dark to light every day - - maybe death brings the same chance of renewal for humans to enjoy living in other dimensions. Your words certainly compel an on-going ponder..........x
November 29th, 2020 03:58
In the End
PoeticBiscuit said:
Yet if we spend too much time thinking of the end, do we ever truly allow our life to begin?
-PB
November 29th, 2020 02:27
PoeticBiscuit said:
Yet if we spend too much time thinking of the end, do we ever truly allow our life to begin?
-PB
November 29th, 2020 02:27
My Lady Was a Poem
RDS said:
A warm embrace of love through life. Nicely woven sentiments of memory and immediacy bringing the tender intimacy you shared to great realisation. Thanks for sharing Neville.
J
November 28th, 2020 15:52
RDS said:
A warm embrace of love through life. Nicely woven sentiments of memory and immediacy bringing the tender intimacy you shared to great realisation. Thanks for sharing Neville.
J
November 28th, 2020 15:52
In the End
RDS said:
Pithy.
Only that spectre at the end of the road is given immortal existence.
J
November 28th, 2020 15:40
RDS said:
Pithy.
Only that spectre at the end of the road is given immortal existence.
J
November 28th, 2020 15:40
In the End
orchidee said:
If it was a less serious theme - all ya gotta be afraid of is my guinea pigs. They are very fierce - probably.
\'How do you know a guinea pig is well?\' Answer: \'It is eating!\' (always nearly!).
November 28th, 2020 14:38
orchidee said:
If it was a less serious theme - all ya gotta be afraid of is my guinea pigs. They are very fierce - probably.
\'How do you know a guinea pig is well?\' Answer: \'It is eating!\' (always nearly!).
November 28th, 2020 14:38
In the End
Christina8 said:
I like this little tidbit....Some people are so afraid of death I often wonder, whats the greatest cause of death nowadays? Life! I\'ve shared that with them with a puzzled look.....C
November 28th, 2020 10:32
Christina8 said:
I like this little tidbit....Some people are so afraid of death I often wonder, whats the greatest cause of death nowadays? Life! I\'ve shared that with them with a puzzled look.....C
November 28th, 2020 10:32
My Lady Was a Poem
L. B. Mek said:
\'My lady
was a poem
just waiting to happen
On the lips of her lovers
and in the
prayers of disciples
She was
a flurry of words
unhurried, yet spoken\'
well I have long since proclaimed my biased opinions of your write\'s, my oh so talented Poet: I\'m a fan, but when you deliver such write\'s of simplistic mastery, who can blame me,
Brilliant!
November 28th, 2020 07:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'My lady
was a poem
just waiting to happen
On the lips of her lovers
and in the
prayers of disciples
She was
a flurry of words
unhurried, yet spoken\'
well I have long since proclaimed my biased opinions of your write\'s, my oh so talented Poet: I\'m a fan, but when you deliver such write\'s of simplistic mastery, who can blame me,
Brilliant!
November 28th, 2020 07:00
In the End
L. B. Mek said:
Indeed!
if all fails: we of existence are aligned by the unfailing truth of our involuntary birth and the sobering reality of our unavoidable death...
November 28th, 2020 06:46
L. B. Mek said:
Indeed!
if all fails: we of existence are aligned by the unfailing truth of our involuntary birth and the sobering reality of our unavoidable death...
November 28th, 2020 06:46
In the End
Fay Slimm. said:
There is no escape from this bit of truth. as your three liner powerfully pinpoints dear friend so a mantra like \" try to love every moment\" makes good sense to an incurable romantic like me - - - wishing you stress-free house moving..........x.
November 28th, 2020 03:40
Fay Slimm. said:
There is no escape from this bit of truth. as your three liner powerfully pinpoints dear friend so a mantra like \" try to love every moment\" makes good sense to an incurable romantic like me - - - wishing you stress-free house moving..........x.
November 28th, 2020 03:40
In the End
orchidee said:
As one said - St Augustine I think - \'Give me patience, Lord - but not yet!\' Doh!
Another thing held in common by mankind - They don\'t like my singing! Awww. lol.
November 28th, 2020 03:02
orchidee said:
As one said - St Augustine I think - \'Give me patience, Lord - but not yet!\' Doh!
Another thing held in common by mankind - They don\'t like my singing! Awww. lol.
November 28th, 2020 03:02
In the End
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Morning Neville - Always up *Bright & Early* on a Saturday - No work til Monday ! Your SUPAHAIKU is very true - especially in these pandemical days. There is *A Time to be BORN & A Time to DIE* WE have no choice over the former - BUT - WE do - by our lifestyle influence the latter. Im 32 (An Essex Girl) so statistically Im only one-third through my Life ! And there is much I still want to do & places I want to go ! However should DEATH come today - Im ready & I have NO REGRETS - AMEN.
Love - Peace & Joy - to YOU & YOURS
Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
November 28th, 2020 01:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Morning Neville - Always up *Bright & Early* on a Saturday - No work til Monday ! Your SUPAHAIKU is very true - especially in these pandemical days. There is *A Time to be BORN & A Time to DIE* WE have no choice over the former - BUT - WE do - by our lifestyle influence the latter. Im 32 (An Essex Girl) so statistically Im only one-third through my Life ! And there is much I still want to do & places I want to go ! However should DEATH come today - Im ready & I have NO REGRETS - AMEN.
Love - Peace & Joy - to YOU & YOURS
Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
November 28th, 2020 01:58
My Lady Was a Poem
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville and words that I can very much empathise with.
Andy
November 28th, 2020 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville and words that I can very much empathise with.
Andy
November 28th, 2020 01:28
In the End
dusk arising said:
Grrr at arithmetic in poetry.
Let us be thankful that our deaths are to be individual happenings and not as the result advancing before machine gun fire or in the wrong kind of communal shower.
There but for the grace......
November 28th, 2020 00:34
dusk arising said:
Grrr at arithmetic in poetry.
Let us be thankful that our deaths are to be individual happenings and not as the result advancing before machine gun fire or in the wrong kind of communal shower.
There but for the grace......
November 28th, 2020 00:34
My Lady Was a Poem
PoeticBiscuit said:
Truly a breathtaking poem that I feel many could relate to. The way it flowed and radiated the love you two had was a pleasant touch. Very much enjoyed this write Neville, keep it up.
-PB
November 27th, 2020 16:16
PoeticBiscuit said:
Truly a breathtaking poem that I feel many could relate to. The way it flowed and radiated the love you two had was a pleasant touch. Very much enjoyed this write Neville, keep it up.
-PB
November 27th, 2020 16:16
My Lady Was a Poem
dusk arising said:
Your muse is showing.
What wonderful things love does to us ..... to leave us with reminiscences which mature into the finest emotions of love recalled. Coloured maybe with a touch more romance from these years of distance but non the less our finest hours shared with the most memorable beings.
A beautiful reminiscence from your mind today Neville.
November 27th, 2020 05:49
dusk arising said:
Your muse is showing.
What wonderful things love does to us ..... to leave us with reminiscences which mature into the finest emotions of love recalled. Coloured maybe with a touch more romance from these years of distance but non the less our finest hours shared with the most memorable beings.
A beautiful reminiscence from your mind today Neville.
November 27th, 2020 05:49
My Lady Was a Poem
Fay Slimm. said:
Once a minion of written memory and although now aged this lady will live as a whisperer of treasured nostalgia to one who saw what her essence reflected - - another peep into your masterful use of words Nev.that compel every reader to look deeper and perceive extra meanings - - - surely the mark of an exceptional story teller..........x
November 27th, 2020 05:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Once a minion of written memory and although now aged this lady will live as a whisperer of treasured nostalgia to one who saw what her essence reflected - - another peep into your masterful use of words Nev.that compel every reader to look deeper and perceive extra meanings - - - surely the mark of an exceptional story teller..........x
November 27th, 2020 05:40
Me & my Singing Bowl
L. B. Mek said:
you have a seemingly innate ability to tease at the risqué borderline while maintaining a decorum of respect and humility, not an easy feat my friend, lol
as ever, a good read
November 27th, 2020 03:04
L. B. Mek said:
you have a seemingly innate ability to tease at the risqué borderline while maintaining a decorum of respect and humility, not an easy feat my friend, lol
as ever, a good read
November 27th, 2020 03:04
Me & my Singing Bowl
Goldfinch60 said:
Singing and dancing for you shows love forever.
As for \'stroking the rim\'
https://youtu.be/iXcaQm6Tn6I
Andy
November 27th, 2020 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Singing and dancing for you shows love forever.
As for \'stroking the rim\'
https://youtu.be/iXcaQm6Tn6I
Andy
November 27th, 2020 01:39
Me & my Singing Bowl
Michael Edwards said:
Aaaaah. And now it\'s Dawn. Does Dawn sing and dance?
November 27th, 2020 00:33
Michael Edwards said:
Aaaaah. And now it\'s Dawn. Does Dawn sing and dance?
November 27th, 2020 00:33
Me & my Singing Bowl
Christina8 said:
Sounds fun....I really enjoyed this sensuous poem!!...C
November 26th, 2020 19:11
Christina8 said:
Sounds fun....I really enjoyed this sensuous poem!!...C
November 26th, 2020 19:11
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