Comments received on poems by Neville
Somewhere Between Trees
Dove said:
Awe every road has its treasure
Every memory a golden nugget
May both be everlasting,
November 11th, 2020 19:12
Dove said:
Awe every road has its treasure
Every memory a golden nugget
May both be everlasting,
November 11th, 2020 19:12
Somewhere Between Trees
L. B. Mek said:
intriguing concept and stylistically creative in execution,
pondering those what-if\'s we\'ve all yearned to answer at one point or another,
an innovative meditation, on a timeless topic
November 10th, 2020 04:20
L. B. Mek said:
intriguing concept and stylistically creative in execution,
pondering those what-if\'s we\'ve all yearned to answer at one point or another,
an innovative meditation, on a timeless topic
November 10th, 2020 04:20
Somewhere Between Trees
Goldfinch60 said:
Our paths of life can compare with the paths of nature and that is why I compare my golden moments with the wonder of Autumn, the most golden time of the year.
Andy
November 10th, 2020 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Our paths of life can compare with the paths of nature and that is why I compare my golden moments with the wonder of Autumn, the most golden time of the year.
Andy
November 10th, 2020 01:26
Somewhere Between Trees
MendedFences27 said:
Trees, begin to blossom in Springtime, flourish in Summer, shed their adornments in Autumn, and bear the weight of snow in Winter. A life lived \"between trees\" can follow this same path of development.
Your poem reads like a fallen leaf, something shed to prepare for the colder season. There is a lot of symbolism in trees and leaves, and now, in the pathways beneath them. I sensed a lot of emotion in this poem. as though of a life changing. Life\'s \" Point A and B\" which we all follow often is strewn with too many \"leaves.\" - Phil A
November 9th, 2020 14:49
MendedFences27 said:
Trees, begin to blossom in Springtime, flourish in Summer, shed their adornments in Autumn, and bear the weight of snow in Winter. A life lived \"between trees\" can follow this same path of development.
Your poem reads like a fallen leaf, something shed to prepare for the colder season. There is a lot of symbolism in trees and leaves, and now, in the pathways beneath them. I sensed a lot of emotion in this poem. as though of a life changing. Life\'s \" Point A and B\" which we all follow often is strewn with too many \"leaves.\" - Phil A
November 9th, 2020 14:49
Nevafar
Dove said:
Awe, but alas they were promising words, hopefully
Truthful at the time spoken! Fate lies in the moment
Time challenges all our dear goodbyes,
Nice write my friend
November 9th, 2020 12:35
Dove said:
Awe, but alas they were promising words, hopefully
Truthful at the time spoken! Fate lies in the moment
Time challenges all our dear goodbyes,
Nice write my friend
November 9th, 2020 12:35
Somewhere Between Trees
dusk arising said:
The golden years. For some there may just golden days but gold is gold and never loses it\'s value as a treasure.
To look back on such wealth..... sigh!
November 9th, 2020 09:58
dusk arising said:
The golden years. For some there may just golden days but gold is gold and never loses it\'s value as a treasure.
To look back on such wealth..... sigh!
November 9th, 2020 09:58
Somewhere Between Trees
Fay Slimm. said:
The golden and treasured moments of love seep through every short line of this tender write......... another wee gem of a remembered time.......... maybe............. x
November 9th, 2020 07:21
Fay Slimm. said:
The golden and treasured moments of love seep through every short line of this tender write......... another wee gem of a remembered time.......... maybe............. x
November 9th, 2020 07:21
Nevafar
L. B. Mek said:
words that capture the essence of yearning within lost love\'s regret,
emotive writing at its elegant best
November 9th, 2020 07:15
L. B. Mek said:
words that capture the essence of yearning within lost love\'s regret,
emotive writing at its elegant best
November 9th, 2020 07:15
Nevafar
Goldfinch60 said:
May that hope become reality and she returns.
Andy
November 9th, 2020 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
May that hope become reality and she returns.
Andy
November 9th, 2020 01:42
Nevafar
Neville said:
Aye, the French woman was kind of special, how on earth did you guess... and thank you muchly for noticing my friend......
Neville
November 8th, 2020 16:27
Neville said:
Aye, the French woman was kind of special, how on earth did you guess... and thank you muchly for noticing my friend......
Neville
November 8th, 2020 16:27
Nevafar
orchidee said:
Oooh, I gotta meet her - this French lass! Will it so me any good?
November 8th, 2020 10:17
orchidee said:
Oooh, I gotta meet her - this French lass! Will it so me any good?
November 8th, 2020 10:17
Nevafar
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah --- \"I will come back\" How compelling the sounds of those words from a lover - this emotive read smacks of long lonely waiting but with a lifting last line - hope can open doors long thought closed.
November 8th, 2020 09:05
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah --- \"I will come back\" How compelling the sounds of those words from a lover - this emotive read smacks of long lonely waiting but with a lifting last line - hope can open doors long thought closed.
November 8th, 2020 09:05
Nevafar
dusk arising said:
Somethings are said and linger. They tease hope when time should have erased it. Encourage the romance of daydreams until her indoors shouts at us in indignation.
Then along comes flippin schwarzenegger with his \"I\'ll be back\" and makes a nonsense of our romancing.
Lovely atmospheric romantic poem Neville. I wonder what/who she\'s doing now.
November 8th, 2020 09:02
dusk arising said:
Somethings are said and linger. They tease hope when time should have erased it. Encourage the romance of daydreams until her indoors shouts at us in indignation.
Then along comes flippin schwarzenegger with his \"I\'ll be back\" and makes a nonsense of our romancing.
Lovely atmospheric romantic poem Neville. I wonder what/who she\'s doing now.
November 8th, 2020 09:02
Unity of Opposites
dusk arising said:
Opposites are often closer than is apparent in the sphere of human affairs. Yet the ego strives to differ and succeed.
A tranquil peace comes with the compromise you suggest. So long as the genie (ego) is kept in the bottle.
November 7th, 2020 05:50
dusk arising said:
Opposites are often closer than is apparent in the sphere of human affairs. Yet the ego strives to differ and succeed.
A tranquil peace comes with the compromise you suggest. So long as the genie (ego) is kept in the bottle.
November 7th, 2020 05:50
Unity of Opposites
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A good write.
Well opposites attract.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during lockdown.
FineB
November 7th, 2020 04:04
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A good write.
Well opposites attract.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during lockdown.
FineB
November 7th, 2020 04:04
Unity of Opposites
Fay Slimm. said:
Relatable words on how easy co-existence can be achieved my friend and what it means to any relationship - - something to ponder in these times of quick opposition that the unity of opposites is a beautiful thing when realized ......... inspiring thoughts in this small nugget of wisdom - -here\'s wishing your good self a peaceful weekend...........x
November 7th, 2020 03:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Relatable words on how easy co-existence can be achieved my friend and what it means to any relationship - - something to ponder in these times of quick opposition that the unity of opposites is a beautiful thing when realized ......... inspiring thoughts in this small nugget of wisdom - -here\'s wishing your good self a peaceful weekend...........x
November 7th, 2020 03:32
Unity of Opposites
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
No reason why I should get chalk and cheese mixed up, but I did.
That sandwich tasted chalky, and me snooker cue smelt cheesy!
November 7th, 2020 03:04
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
No reason why I should get chalk and cheese mixed up, but I did.
That sandwich tasted chalky, and me snooker cue smelt cheesy!
November 7th, 2020 03:04
Unity of Opposites
Goldfinch60 said:
Co-existence should always be applied then the world would be a better place.
Andy
November 7th, 2020 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Co-existence should always be applied then the world would be a better place.
Andy
November 7th, 2020 01:54
Roosting
Dove said:
Awe! Cutenesses galore! and this little birdie needs a fur coat,
November 4th, 2020 20:52
Dove said:
Awe! Cutenesses galore! and this little birdie needs a fur coat,
November 4th, 2020 20:52
Roosting
Fay Slimm. said:
The voice of a she-bird calling from below the auditory level means the male is in for a winter treat - or so methinks........ or maybe tis a hen roosting and not wanting disturbance...........x
November 4th, 2020 13:46
Fay Slimm. said:
The voice of a she-bird calling from below the auditory level means the male is in for a winter treat - or so methinks........ or maybe tis a hen roosting and not wanting disturbance...........x
November 4th, 2020 13:46
Roosting
Michael Edwards said:
Another lock in - it\'s times like this that I wish I were a free range chicken.
love the write.
November 3rd, 2020 11:50
Michael Edwards said:
Another lock in - it\'s times like this that I wish I were a free range chicken.
love the write.
November 3rd, 2020 11:50
Roosting
L. B. Mek said:
what a welcome song to Winter,
even within frozen bitterness remains the remnant sweetness: of cherished existence...
good read
November 3rd, 2020 07:05
L. B. Mek said:
what a welcome song to Winter,
even within frozen bitterness remains the remnant sweetness: of cherished existence...
good read
November 3rd, 2020 07:05
Little Shepherdesses
L. B. Mek said:
good enough to make me look-up meaning of \'shepherdesses\',
a slide within words to classic literature time\'s,
some may argue its moral compass when choosing to view some aspects through modern day \'all knowing\' glasses of herd mentality, judicial PC morality indexes, maybe...
I though, read your write as a melancholic nod to those classic wordsmiths: who sang their reality with such wonderous creativity,
a unique demonstration of modern mindset\'s utilising Poetry\'s inherited tools and skills, to create works that celebrate its mesmeric legacy,
great write
November 2nd, 2020 05:52
L. B. Mek said:
good enough to make me look-up meaning of \'shepherdesses\',
a slide within words to classic literature time\'s,
some may argue its moral compass when choosing to view some aspects through modern day \'all knowing\' glasses of herd mentality, judicial PC morality indexes, maybe...
I though, read your write as a melancholic nod to those classic wordsmiths: who sang their reality with such wonderous creativity,
a unique demonstration of modern mindset\'s utilising Poetry\'s inherited tools and skills, to create works that celebrate its mesmeric legacy,
great write
November 2nd, 2020 05:52
Little Shepherdesses
Goldfinch60 said:
The innocence of childhood is shown in your words Neville, if only that innocence would progress into their older lives.
Andy
November 2nd, 2020 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
The innocence of childhood is shown in your words Neville, if only that innocence would progress into their older lives.
Andy
November 2nd, 2020 01:41
Little Shepherdesses
Michael Edwards said:
All the paths I have walked through natures realm and I\'ve yet to see shepherdesses but I live in hope. Love the write Neville
November 1st, 2020 13:19
Michael Edwards said:
All the paths I have walked through natures realm and I\'ve yet to see shepherdesses but I live in hope. Love the write Neville
November 1st, 2020 13:19
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