Comments received on poems by Neville
Carbonito de Sophie
Dove said:
Oh to be lost in a fairytale
where dreams come true
On the wings of a dove
dulce tones of “ I love you “
Lavender scented skies
But alas away she flew
Awesome little nursery rhyme,!
For the young at heart
December 12th, 2020 07:38
Dove said:
Oh to be lost in a fairytale
where dreams come true
On the wings of a dove
dulce tones of “ I love you “
Lavender scented skies
But alas away she flew
Awesome little nursery rhyme,!
For the young at heart
December 12th, 2020 07:38
Vermeil
Poetic Dan said:
I needed this to see what\'s right in front of me!
So much more passion in your words, leaves me blissfully thoughtless!
Thank you!
December 9th, 2020 16:29
Poetic Dan said:
I needed this to see what\'s right in front of me!
So much more passion in your words, leaves me blissfully thoughtless!
Thank you!
December 9th, 2020 16:29
Vermeil
Suresh said:
You have so preciously captured the permanence of one laid over the other, as only your words could
December 9th, 2020 04:57
Suresh said:
You have so preciously captured the permanence of one laid over the other, as only your words could
December 9th, 2020 04:57
Swansong
RDS said:
Nice view Neville, slightly darkly through a funnily dry lens! I should think about writing a will. Thanks
J
December 8th, 2020 14:05
RDS said:
Nice view Neville, slightly darkly through a funnily dry lens! I should think about writing a will. Thanks
J
December 8th, 2020 14:05
Vermeil
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a gentle old-fashioned tribute to sentimentality when politeness wins over unveiled vermeil- skin. Intriguing again my friend - - - - but I like it. immensely..............x
December 8th, 2020 07:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a gentle old-fashioned tribute to sentimentality when politeness wins over unveiled vermeil- skin. Intriguing again my friend - - - - but I like it. immensely..............x
December 8th, 2020 07:12
Vermeil
L. B. Mek said:
oh you clever Poet:
is this commentary on him perceiving her as his \'second skin\', untameable electric attraction fusing their fantasies into one murky reality,
or is this her perception of self - her worth, as a self-demeaning take on aesthetic beauty while underneath it all she considers herself as mere decorative silver, when she yearns to have been born into the world of all things \'real\' gold...
brilliantly subtle, truly an insightful write pondering intricacies that play out in our moment\'s of vulnerable intimacy,
or I\'m just reading too much into things as usual, lol
a Brilliant write either way!
December 8th, 2020 05:47
L. B. Mek said:
oh you clever Poet:
is this commentary on him perceiving her as his \'second skin\', untameable electric attraction fusing their fantasies into one murky reality,
or is this her perception of self - her worth, as a self-demeaning take on aesthetic beauty while underneath it all she considers herself as mere decorative silver, when she yearns to have been born into the world of all things \'real\' gold...
brilliantly subtle, truly an insightful write pondering intricacies that play out in our moment\'s of vulnerable intimacy,
or I\'m just reading too much into things as usual, lol
a Brilliant write either way!
December 8th, 2020 05:47
Swansong
L. B. Mek said:
lol, this is so relatable to us scribblers, what W B Yeats took a page to unravel, you uncoiled within two stanzas my friend,
Brilliant!
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-35118
December 8th, 2020 05:02
L. B. Mek said:
lol, this is so relatable to us scribblers, what W B Yeats took a page to unravel, you uncoiled within two stanzas my friend,
Brilliant!
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-35118
December 8th, 2020 05:02
Vermeil
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville, (this is where I get thrown out of MPS for heresy) I find the (very well constructed) poem a bit sus - or rather the interpretations placed upon it by your esteemed correspondents.
I believe it\'s about the \'him\' glowing in self satisfaction at his smoothly (but thin) polished exterior.
Regards, Dave
December 8th, 2020 03:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville, (this is where I get thrown out of MPS for heresy) I find the (very well constructed) poem a bit sus - or rather the interpretations placed upon it by your esteemed correspondents.
I believe it\'s about the \'him\' glowing in self satisfaction at his smoothly (but thin) polished exterior.
Regards, Dave
December 8th, 2020 03:32
Vermeil
orchidee said:
I not met any gals named Vermeil, I must admit! She sounds like an eloquent lass, as expressed here.
A tapestry clinging... see, I\'m nicking Gold\'s words. The unforgivable sin of plagiarism!
December 8th, 2020 02:38
orchidee said:
I not met any gals named Vermeil, I must admit! She sounds like an eloquent lass, as expressed here.
A tapestry clinging... see, I\'m nicking Gold\'s words. The unforgivable sin of plagiarism!
December 8th, 2020 02:38
Vermeil
Goldfinch60 said:
The gold in your words flows like a tapestry clinging to the world.
Andy
December 8th, 2020 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
The gold in your words flows like a tapestry clinging to the world.
Andy
December 8th, 2020 02:26
Swansong
Goldfinch60 said:
That swansong is within all of us but we still have too much to do to sing it yet.
Andy
December 8th, 2020 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
That swansong is within all of us but we still have too much to do to sing it yet.
Andy
December 8th, 2020 01:54
Carbonito de Sophie
Poetic Dan said:
Looking through the looking glass does funny things, like when it\'s mushroom season! Then Alice finds the reason....
Couldn\'t help myself! Great stuff good sir carry on
December 7th, 2020 16:41
Poetic Dan said:
Looking through the looking glass does funny things, like when it\'s mushroom season! Then Alice finds the reason....
Couldn\'t help myself! Great stuff good sir carry on
December 7th, 2020 16:41
Swansong
Michael Edwards said:
Have you swans sing
On water or wing
And if you have heard
This elegant bird
Is it rock, pop, or swing
That you’ve heard this bird sing.
December 7th, 2020 13:24
Michael Edwards said:
Have you swans sing
On water or wing
And if you have heard
This elegant bird
Is it rock, pop, or swing
That you’ve heard this bird sing.
December 7th, 2020 13:24
Swansong
orchidee said:
But you\'ll be back tomorrow, surely.
And now, nor a swansong - in an old TV series, my Mum said that my Gran used to say, if anyone got shot or injured etc: \'The b****r will be back next week!\' Ooohh!
December 7th, 2020 09:59
orchidee said:
But you\'ll be back tomorrow, surely.
And now, nor a swansong - in an old TV series, my Mum said that my Gran used to say, if anyone got shot or injured etc: \'The b****r will be back next week!\' Ooohh!
December 7th, 2020 09:59
Swansong
Poetic Dan said:
I have plenty of thoses, I used to not want to hear now I\'ve learnt to hold on to that tear!
A few little lines made my head explode, now that\'s a captain of a poetic soul!
Thanks for sharing!
December 7th, 2020 09:54
Poetic Dan said:
I have plenty of thoses, I used to not want to hear now I\'ve learnt to hold on to that tear!
A few little lines made my head explode, now that\'s a captain of a poetic soul!
Thanks for sharing!
December 7th, 2020 09:54
Swansong
dusk arising said:
It\'s a surprise i\'ve lasted this long. Long enough to admit, I like your style a lot but today you\'ve confused me
December 7th, 2020 09:37
dusk arising said:
It\'s a surprise i\'ve lasted this long. Long enough to admit, I like your style a lot but today you\'ve confused me
December 7th, 2020 09:37
Swansong
Fay Slimm. said:
Don\'t we all have that same illusion mon ami ? The inevitable occurs and we have to surrender as these few lines impressively prove with solemn yet an ever so slight wry humour. - or maybe that is just me .............. x
December 7th, 2020 08:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Don\'t we all have that same illusion mon ami ? The inevitable occurs and we have to surrender as these few lines impressively prove with solemn yet an ever so slight wry humour. - or maybe that is just me .............. x
December 7th, 2020 08:48
Carbonito de Sophie
L. B. Mek said:
Beautifully worded, almost as simplistic in wording as those child fairy tales you mention,
though even at a mere glance these reads so deep, sadly without context I can only guess, but for some reason, I imagine someone like the late Princess Diana, will relate with your words (may she R.I.P. - that\'s if \'they\' would ever let her, to begin with)...
December 7th, 2020 06:01
L. B. Mek said:
Beautifully worded, almost as simplistic in wording as those child fairy tales you mention,
though even at a mere glance these reads so deep, sadly without context I can only guess, but for some reason, I imagine someone like the late Princess Diana, will relate with your words (may she R.I.P. - that\'s if \'they\' would ever let her, to begin with)...
December 7th, 2020 06:01
Carbonito de Sophie
Christina8 said:
What a sweet little poem....loved it ! x
December 6th, 2020 21:37
Christina8 said:
What a sweet little poem....loved it ! x
December 6th, 2020 21:37
Carbonito de Sophie
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful little bird done justice here - a member of the bullshit - err sory - bushtit family.
December 6th, 2020 14:46
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful little bird done justice here - a member of the bullshit - err sory - bushtit family.
December 6th, 2020 14:46
Carbonito de Sophie
dusk arising said:
Well if ever there were a short poem to muse upon.....
........ flights of fancy take me.....
December 6th, 2020 06:32
dusk arising said:
Well if ever there were a short poem to muse upon.....
........ flights of fancy take me.....
December 6th, 2020 06:32
Carbonito de Sophie
Fay Slimm. said:
A sagaciously delicate verse with such clever usage of word-definitions ........... and methinks Bulgaria has a really good publicity agent in you my dear Nev. - - -great stuff...........x
December 6th, 2020 03:53
Fay Slimm. said:
A sagaciously delicate verse with such clever usage of word-definitions ........... and methinks Bulgaria has a really good publicity agent in you my dear Nev. - - -great stuff...........x
December 6th, 2020 03:53
Carbonito de Sophie
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. A cute little birdie - probably friends with my cute furry piggies.
December 6th, 2020 03:23
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. A cute little birdie - probably friends with my cute furry piggies.
December 6th, 2020 03:23
Carbonito de Sophie
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful bird Neville matched only by your words.
Andy
December 6th, 2020 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful bird Neville matched only by your words.
Andy
December 6th, 2020 03:01
Groundhog Day
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories are with you Neville and they will be with her as well, she may well feel the same.
Andy
December 6th, 2020 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories are with you Neville and they will be with her as well, she may well feel the same.
Andy
December 6th, 2020 01:31
Groundhog Day
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d rather not comment on how closely I identify with that work of yours - including, but definitely not only, the early lines relating to ageing...
Thanks for for being so succinct there . Any more and this post might have been very different....
Regards Dave
December 5th, 2020 22:34
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d rather not comment on how closely I identify with that work of yours - including, but definitely not only, the early lines relating to ageing...
Thanks for for being so succinct there . Any more and this post might have been very different....
Regards Dave
December 5th, 2020 22:34
Groundhog Day
Fay Slimm. said:
The passing of things and of those held so dear makes love and togetherness even more needed as this tribute to seeing the truth of comings and goings artfully discloses my friend. Feelings of Déja Vu become clearer when moments of \"pulsing and probing\" are virtually over - - maybe. Another depth here of your avid perception and so impressively well expressed.........x
December 5th, 2020 16:59
Fay Slimm. said:
The passing of things and of those held so dear makes love and togetherness even more needed as this tribute to seeing the truth of comings and goings artfully discloses my friend. Feelings of Déja Vu become clearer when moments of \"pulsing and probing\" are virtually over - - maybe. Another depth here of your avid perception and so impressively well expressed.........x
December 5th, 2020 16:59
Groundhog Day
Michael Edwards said:
If she doesn\'t remember then she\'s not worthy - but I bet she does.
December 5th, 2020 16:14
Michael Edwards said:
If she doesn\'t remember then she\'s not worthy - but I bet she does.
December 5th, 2020 16:14
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