Comments received on poems by Neville
Famous Last Words
Suresh said:
No comment, I cannot compete with thee.
Enjoyable read thou.
June 6th, 2019 12:37
Suresh said:
No comment, I cannot compete with thee.
Enjoyable read thou.
June 6th, 2019 12:37
Famous Last Words
SerenWise said:
Really cool poem, as a history masters student I appreciate a good historical write ;)
June 6th, 2019 11:53
SerenWise said:
Really cool poem, as a history masters student I appreciate a good historical write ;)
June 6th, 2019 11:53
Famous Last Words
dusk arising said:
Verily i sayeth unto thee W.T.F.
Naa wot i meen innit?
June 6th, 2019 08:17
dusk arising said:
Verily i sayeth unto thee W.T.F.
Naa wot i meen innit?
June 6th, 2019 08:17
Famous Last Words
orchidee said:
Was ye with me, and others, in 1066? I mucked it all up ya know. They say that I said to Harold \'Look up Sir, at the vital moment - and he did!
My famous last words have not been said yet. They will be \'I\'m gonna stop singing!\' Meaning I\'m gonna sing until then. Oh no! lol.
June 6th, 2019 07:16
orchidee said:
Was ye with me, and others, in 1066? I mucked it all up ya know. They say that I said to Harold \'Look up Sir, at the vital moment - and he did!
My famous last words have not been said yet. They will be \'I\'m gonna stop singing!\' Meaning I\'m gonna sing until then. Oh no! lol.
June 6th, 2019 07:16
Famous Last Words
Fay Slimm. said:
By thunder I feeleth those shaftes and lances as ancient battle commences - - a great war lord was Vortiger -- bravo for using archaic words Nev - a linguistic delight for the likes of me to read.
I always did love to read and decipher historical language.
June 6th, 2019 04:40
Fay Slimm. said:
By thunder I feeleth those shaftes and lances as ancient battle commences - - a great war lord was Vortiger -- bravo for using archaic words Nev - a linguistic delight for the likes of me to read.
I always did love to read and decipher historical language.
June 6th, 2019 04:40
Penang White Coffee
kevin browne said:
Reminds me of \'A Brimful Of Asha\' by an Indian music band called \'Cornershop\' and it actually means that \'a brimful of asha\' that you\'ve spilled some coffee on a spinning 45 vinyl deck. Nice work.
June 6th, 2019 01:56
kevin browne said:
Reminds me of \'A Brimful Of Asha\' by an Indian music band called \'Cornershop\' and it actually means that \'a brimful of asha\' that you\'ve spilled some coffee on a spinning 45 vinyl deck. Nice work.
June 6th, 2019 01:56
Penang White Coffee
Suresh said:
Never took that ride, but reminds me of many a train ride in India and the movie Bhowani Junction.
Rushing to get the snacks at the various stations, nervous not the miss the train, as it is taking too long, or calling the vendor for a cup of hot tea in the mutka (earthenware), adding its own flavor.
Very enjoyable poem
June 5th, 2019 11:32
Suresh said:
Never took that ride, but reminds me of many a train ride in India and the movie Bhowani Junction.
Rushing to get the snacks at the various stations, nervous not the miss the train, as it is taking too long, or calling the vendor for a cup of hot tea in the mutka (earthenware), adding its own flavor.
Very enjoyable poem
June 5th, 2019 11:32
Penang White Coffee
dusk arising said:
Some people will travel to who knows where just to sample that once mentioned rarity. Then home to shop doorway sleepers, carbon emissions, and global commercial warfare.
June 5th, 2019 08:08
dusk arising said:
Some people will travel to who knows where just to sample that once mentioned rarity. Then home to shop doorway sleepers, carbon emissions, and global commercial warfare.
June 5th, 2019 08:08
Penang White Coffee
Lorna said:
Wow.. and I love the idea of white coffee.........
June 5th, 2019 07:27
Lorna said:
Wow.. and I love the idea of white coffee.........
June 5th, 2019 07:27
Penang White Coffee
Michael Edwards said:
I quite fancy that journey - malaysia here I come. As for the poem it is simply superb - although only stanzas long it still manages to capture two different ideas in simple terms and leaves the reader both thinking about the journey itself and wondering about the story behind the visit - who why when.
June 5th, 2019 06:18
Michael Edwards said:
I quite fancy that journey - malaysia here I come. As for the poem it is simply superb - although only stanzas long it still manages to capture two different ideas in simple terms and leaves the reader both thinking about the journey itself and wondering about the story behind the visit - who why when.
June 5th, 2019 06:18
Penang White Coffee
Goldfinch60 said:
That romance however brief will always be with you.
June 5th, 2019 03:15
Goldfinch60 said:
That romance however brief will always be with you.
June 5th, 2019 03:15
Penang White Coffee
Fay Slimm. said:
What could be better than the lure of romance as reason for recording that visit ......sweet mystery always scents your love-poetry Neville. - - - such an engaging read again..............
June 5th, 2019 02:15
Fay Slimm. said:
What could be better than the lure of romance as reason for recording that visit ......sweet mystery always scents your love-poetry Neville. - - - such an engaging read again..............
June 5th, 2019 02:15
Wanting to be Wanted
Suresh said:
Me thinks, she thinks, she\'s grossly misunderstood - but isn\'t that what they all feel, for they never see in themselves being massively self centered - that is so poetically exclaimed here.
June 4th, 2019 15:42
Suresh said:
Me thinks, she thinks, she\'s grossly misunderstood - but isn\'t that what they all feel, for they never see in themselves being massively self centered - that is so poetically exclaimed here.
June 4th, 2019 15:42
Everywhere I Look
Goldfinch60 said:
It is dreadful that there are people out there that do this, they just do not care of the hurt and frustration they cause. The person is a bully in some respects and as you are aware all bullies are cowards!
June 4th, 2019 15:16
Goldfinch60 said:
It is dreadful that there are people out there that do this, they just do not care of the hurt and frustration they cause. The person is a bully in some respects and as you are aware all bullies are cowards!
June 4th, 2019 15:16
Everywhere I Look
Michael Edwards said:
If I knew his name I\'d get him for you.
June 4th, 2019 13:27
Michael Edwards said:
If I knew his name I\'d get him for you.
June 4th, 2019 13:27
Everywhere I Look
Suresh said:
There are always those that take a short cut, and regrettably in the age of new mediums, their number is increasing geometrically - in all walks of life. Even more train is that they are gaining momentum because of the internet.
June 4th, 2019 13:22
Suresh said:
There are always those that take a short cut, and regrettably in the age of new mediums, their number is increasing geometrically - in all walks of life. Even more train is that they are gaining momentum because of the internet.
June 4th, 2019 13:22
Everywhere I Look
orchidee said:
Well, I only sing (99% of the time), so it can\'t be me! (heehee). It\'s a pain though. Is it a case of \'You know who you are, you....\'. (all what I wrote yesterday. oohh!).
June 4th, 2019 07:52
orchidee said:
Well, I only sing (99% of the time), so it can\'t be me! (heehee). It\'s a pain though. Is it a case of \'You know who you are, you....\'. (all what I wrote yesterday. oohh!).
June 4th, 2019 07:52
Everywhere I Look
dusk arising said:
I never sensed anything was going on...blimey i am so detached and naive.
Wherever one goes as an individual on the web there seems to be a prat lurking with a chip on their shoulder waiting to amuse themselves by being negative about ones input. Sometimes they may have an appreciative audience of one or two like-minded similarly \'chipped\' sad individuals but gladly 99% of people see them for the inadequate souls they truly are.
June 4th, 2019 07:51
dusk arising said:
I never sensed anything was going on...blimey i am so detached and naive.
Wherever one goes as an individual on the web there seems to be a prat lurking with a chip on their shoulder waiting to amuse themselves by being negative about ones input. Sometimes they may have an appreciative audience of one or two like-minded similarly \'chipped\' sad individuals but gladly 99% of people see them for the inadequate souls they truly are.
June 4th, 2019 07:51
Arbeit Macht Frie
Lorna said:
For \"Nazis\" substitute \"Corporations\" and you have it in a nutshell.
June 4th, 2019 06:46
Lorna said:
For \"Nazis\" substitute \"Corporations\" and you have it in a nutshell.
June 4th, 2019 06:46
Everywhere I Look
Lorna said:
Goodness gracious you think he\'d have something better to do ... there is so much \"bogus\" out there I am outraged for you..... kind of sad on his part really...... he can\'t do it himself so he steals... here\'s a phrase I just love: \"A never was posing as a has been\"............
June 4th, 2019 05:54
Lorna said:
Goodness gracious you think he\'d have something better to do ... there is so much \"bogus\" out there I am outraged for you..... kind of sad on his part really...... he can\'t do it himself so he steals... here\'s a phrase I just love: \"A never was posing as a has been\"............
June 4th, 2019 05:54
Everywhere I Look
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful push in the right direction for someone who has left the road of guaranteed success to speed toward literary disintegration. Hope these forthright lines are heeded my friend.
June 4th, 2019 04:46
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful push in the right direction for someone who has left the road of guaranteed success to speed toward literary disintegration. Hope these forthright lines are heeded my friend.
June 4th, 2019 04:46
Arbeit Macht Frie
Suresh said:
One of my brevity yet to post:
If one enjoys their work, then are they always at play! UHH......
June 3rd, 2019 16:23
Suresh said:
One of my brevity yet to post:
If one enjoys their work, then are they always at play! UHH......
June 3rd, 2019 16:23
Arbeit Macht Frie
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
āArbeit Macht Frieā...
My work does set me free! I find that teaching (lecturer) is very rewarding! I choose the subject, time, and location!
I enjoyed the read!
~Laura~
June 3rd, 2019 15:12
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
āArbeit Macht Frieā...
My work does set me free! I find that teaching (lecturer) is very rewarding! I choose the subject, time, and location!
I enjoyed the read!
~Laura~
June 3rd, 2019 15:12
Arbeit Macht Frie
dusk arising said:
Three words to remind us all of tryranny and madmen. Work in that instance only free\'d one of ones mortal coil.
WE should not forget, regardless of our race, creed or religion.
A very sobering piece.
June 3rd, 2019 02:17
dusk arising said:
Three words to remind us all of tryranny and madmen. Work in that instance only free\'d one of ones mortal coil.
WE should not forget, regardless of our race, creed or religion.
A very sobering piece.
June 3rd, 2019 02:17
Arbeit Macht Frie
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Neville. I feel that I have been fortunate in my working life in that on the whole I enjoyed it. I can look back on it from my retirement with no regrets.
June 3rd, 2019 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Neville. I feel that I have been fortunate in my working life in that on the whole I enjoyed it. I can look back on it from my retirement with no regrets.
June 3rd, 2019 02:14
Arbeit Macht Frie
Fay Slimm. said:
Work has a freedom agreed but labouring to sheer exhaustion which was the aim in prison camps rings with sadistic slavery.. You nail the results in this needed reminder that some things must not be forgotten. Potent write my friend.
June 3rd, 2019 02:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Work has a freedom agreed but labouring to sheer exhaustion which was the aim in prison camps rings with sadistic slavery.. You nail the results in this needed reminder that some things must not be forgotten. Potent write my friend.
June 3rd, 2019 02:14
Arbeit Macht Frie
Michael Edwards said:
The fruits of my endeavours contain the seeds of my childrens aspirations - fine write Neville.
June 3rd, 2019 01:57
Michael Edwards said:
The fruits of my endeavours contain the seeds of my childrens aspirations - fine write Neville.
June 3rd, 2019 01:57
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