Comments received on poems by Neville
What Do I Want From You
Michael Edwards said:
When love departs - thankfully I married my first love and we are still together and still in love but nonetheless I recognise this fine write.
December 7th, 2018 04:33
Michael Edwards said:
When love departs - thankfully I married my first love and we are still together and still in love but nonetheless I recognise this fine write.
December 7th, 2018 04:33
What Do I Want From You
Fay Slimm. said:
So many intimate memories belong to those left alone when love goes away - - a poignant feel to this read Neville.
December 7th, 2018 04:02
Fay Slimm. said:
So many intimate memories belong to those left alone when love goes away - - a poignant feel to this read Neville.
December 7th, 2018 04:02
What Do I Want From You
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Erm is this about Polo mints? heehee.
December 7th, 2018 03:38
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Erm is this about Polo mints? heehee.
December 7th, 2018 03:38
No Pillow Required
Goldfinch60 said:
Very passionate write, certainly no pillow is required.
December 7th, 2018 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very passionate write, certainly no pillow is required.
December 7th, 2018 02:25
No Pillow Required
Michael Edwards said:
Yes a great write - we are waiting for that Part 2.
December 6th, 2018 13:51
Michael Edwards said:
Yes a great write - we are waiting for that Part 2.
December 6th, 2018 13:51
No Pillow Required
orchidee said:
I\'m always swooning. Maybe it should change to 50+ , for me anyway! lol. I\'ve a got an 18+ \'watchdog\'. Fido. He barks to warn me of anything swoony. He reads the poems first, of course! Much more of this from me and we\'ll all go barmy. lol.
December 6th, 2018 11:45
orchidee said:
I\'m always swooning. Maybe it should change to 50+ , for me anyway! lol. I\'ve a got an 18+ \'watchdog\'. Fido. He barks to warn me of anything swoony. He reads the poems first, of course! Much more of this from me and we\'ll all go barmy. lol.
December 6th, 2018 11:45
No Pillow Required
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow my hubby always prefers me to pillows so this creative imaginative poem of love reminds me of that and it is fantastic to read. Kudos.
Pleez do add a comment/thoughts/ review on my newest poem too.
December 6th, 2018 07:29
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow my hubby always prefers me to pillows so this creative imaginative poem of love reminds me of that and it is fantastic to read. Kudos.
Pleez do add a comment/thoughts/ review on my newest poem too.
December 6th, 2018 07:29
Cova
Michael Edwards said:
Well I do like this one a lot - an honest unpretentious write .
December 5th, 2018 04:34
Michael Edwards said:
Well I do like this one a lot - an honest unpretentious write .
December 5th, 2018 04:34
Cova
Fay Slimm. said:
You write of beguiling memories so well Neville - - I am intrigued with multi-linguistic Cova myself after this read. Thanks for sharing her.
December 5th, 2018 03:17
Fay Slimm. said:
You write of beguiling memories so well Neville - - I am intrigued with multi-linguistic Cova myself after this read. Thanks for sharing her.
December 5th, 2018 03:17
A Little Indiscretion
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
I agree with sylviasearcher. Bruises take quite a while to heal, especially those of the heart.
Nicely written though. :-)
December 4th, 2018 14:53
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
I agree with sylviasearcher. Bruises take quite a while to heal, especially those of the heart.
Nicely written though. :-)
December 4th, 2018 14:53
A Little Indiscretion
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful reminder of what love can do to one or another of parting partners - - telling it as it is sometimes renews a forgotten time of happy union - - hope this poignant appeal hit the right mark Neville and the duo are now now makin\' whoopee again !! An engaging read .
December 4th, 2018 13:40
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful reminder of what love can do to one or another of parting partners - - telling it as it is sometimes renews a forgotten time of happy union - - hope this poignant appeal hit the right mark Neville and the duo are now now makin\' whoopee again !! An engaging read .
December 4th, 2018 13:40
A Little Indiscretion
orchidee said:
You\'ll get me swooning with that \'familiar\' stuff! heehee.
December 4th, 2018 02:39
orchidee said:
You\'ll get me swooning with that \'familiar\' stuff! heehee.
December 4th, 2018 02:39
A Little Indiscretion
Neville said:
thank you sylviasearcher.. interesting is good and will do for me.. I guess these words, now captured here will likely remain long after I am gone and forgotten, and if so.. I will be happy..
December 4th, 2018 02:32
Neville said:
thank you sylviasearcher.. interesting is good and will do for me.. I guess these words, now captured here will likely remain long after I am gone and forgotten, and if so.. I will be happy..
December 4th, 2018 02:32
A Little Indiscretion
sylviasearcher said:
Interesting?
I\'m not convinced of how the words will remain \'long after you are forgotten’
It seems some ‘bruises’ never truly fade?
December 4th, 2018 02:26
sylviasearcher said:
Interesting?
I\'m not convinced of how the words will remain \'long after you are forgotten’
It seems some ‘bruises’ never truly fade?
December 4th, 2018 02:26
Long Shadows
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories so well portrayed in your wonderful words.
December 4th, 2018 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories so well portrayed in your wonderful words.
December 4th, 2018 01:13
Beautiful Bruises
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Intimacy in the raw. I\'m speechless.
Your memories of a loved one are incomparable. Maybe you\'ll meet up with her again. :-)
December 3rd, 2018 16:16
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Intimacy in the raw. I\'m speechless.
Your memories of a loved one are incomparable. Maybe you\'ll meet up with her again. :-)
December 3rd, 2018 16:16
Long Shadows
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
A sensual memory of a loved one is always a great read, Neville.
Your heart-felt poem flowed like the River Thames. A wonderful write and a pleasure to read. :-)
December 3rd, 2018 16:12
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
A sensual memory of a loved one is always a great read, Neville.
Your heart-felt poem flowed like the River Thames. A wonderful write and a pleasure to read. :-)
December 3rd, 2018 16:12
Long Shadows
orchidee said:
Yes, enough to bring on a swoon for me. Then again, what doesn\'t bring on a swoon for me?! I shall not recover from \'erotica\' for at least a month! heehee. I should get out more, as they say! lol.
December 3rd, 2018 15:04
orchidee said:
Yes, enough to bring on a swoon for me. Then again, what doesn\'t bring on a swoon for me?! I shall not recover from \'erotica\' for at least a month! heehee. I should get out more, as they say! lol.
December 3rd, 2018 15:04
Long Shadows
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh tender the gentle erotica used here to depict a memory never forgotten - a gem of a read Neville.
December 3rd, 2018 09:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh tender the gentle erotica used here to depict a memory never forgotten - a gem of a read Neville.
December 3rd, 2018 09:50
Long Shadows
sylviasearcher said:
It\'d strange I always read something very different in the words you have marked as erotic...
I really liked how the words lingered and paused on the thoughts in my mind
December 3rd, 2018 06:33
sylviasearcher said:
It\'d strange I always read something very different in the words you have marked as erotic...
I really liked how the words lingered and paused on the thoughts in my mind
December 3rd, 2018 06:33
Long Shadows
sylviasearcher said:
It\'d strange I always read something very different in the words you have marked as erotic...
I really liked how the words lingered and paused on the thoughts in my mind
December 3rd, 2018 06:33
sylviasearcher said:
It\'d strange I always read something very different in the words you have marked as erotic...
I really liked how the words lingered and paused on the thoughts in my mind
December 3rd, 2018 06:33
Autumn
Neville said:
indeed, I am a very good listener.. and thank you so much for your delightful written response to these words of mine.. much appreciated and blooming true.. Neville
December 3rd, 2018 04:51
Neville said:
indeed, I am a very good listener.. and thank you so much for your delightful written response to these words of mine.. much appreciated and blooming true.. Neville
December 3rd, 2018 04:51
Autumn
sylviasearcher said:
O the season of mists and mellow fruitfulness! I always thought her a liar and a thief!
But she is honest about her deception!
Stealing summer\'s dream, bringing fruitfulness to fill our bellies before the onset of desolate winter.
To quote my favourite poet twice...
Indeed I think in autumn
Now more than ever seems it rich to die.
Sorry waffling.
I\'m very good at waffling!
But are you still listening?
Ps you write well.
December 3rd, 2018 02:34
sylviasearcher said:
O the season of mists and mellow fruitfulness! I always thought her a liar and a thief!
But she is honest about her deception!
Stealing summer\'s dream, bringing fruitfulness to fill our bellies before the onset of desolate winter.
To quote my favourite poet twice...
Indeed I think in autumn
Now more than ever seems it rich to die.
Sorry waffling.
I\'m very good at waffling!
But are you still listening?
Ps you write well.
December 3rd, 2018 02:34
Beautiful Bruises
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write of a passed love, those memories will never fade.
December 3rd, 2018 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write of a passed love, those memories will never fade.
December 3rd, 2018 00:59
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