Comments received on poems by Neville
Enlightenment
sylviasearcher said:
I was enlightened at the moment you said you would have kept your mouth shut 😵
January 21st, 2019 08:07
sylviasearcher said:
I was enlightened at the moment you said you would have kept your mouth shut 😵
January 21st, 2019 08:07
Enlightenment
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Some calls their partners dinosaurs these days, if they won\'t have e-mails or mobile phones!
January 21st, 2019 05:43
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Some calls their partners dinosaurs these days, if they won\'t have e-mails or mobile phones!
January 21st, 2019 05:43
Painfully Yours
sylviasearcher said:
Intriguing.
I knew I sensed something about one of Keats\'s poems hidden deep within a thought this spurned in me....
It\'s often forgotten and you may think my response a queer one.
How is it, Shadows! that I knew ye not?
How came ye muffled in so hush a mask?
Was it a silent deep-disguisèd plot
To steal away, and leave without a task
My idle days? Ripe was the drowsy hour;
The blissful cloud of summer-indolence
Benumb’d my eyes; my pulse grew less and less;
Pain had no sting, and pleasure’s wreath no flower:
O, why did ye not melt, and leave my sense
Unhaunted quite of all but—nothingness?
January 21st, 2019 02:54
sylviasearcher said:
Intriguing.
I knew I sensed something about one of Keats\'s poems hidden deep within a thought this spurned in me....
It\'s often forgotten and you may think my response a queer one.
How is it, Shadows! that I knew ye not?
How came ye muffled in so hush a mask?
Was it a silent deep-disguisèd plot
To steal away, and leave without a task
My idle days? Ripe was the drowsy hour;
The blissful cloud of summer-indolence
Benumb’d my eyes; my pulse grew less and less;
Pain had no sting, and pleasure’s wreath no flower:
O, why did ye not melt, and leave my sense
Unhaunted quite of all but—nothingness?
January 21st, 2019 02:54
Painfully Yours
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
‘Practice makes perfect’...
...and all may be attainable!
A fascinating read...
to say the least!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
January 20th, 2019 23:46
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
‘Practice makes perfect’...
...and all may be attainable!
A fascinating read...
to say the least!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
January 20th, 2019 23:46
Painfully Yours
Michael Edwards said:
Not sure I could manage all women these days so I\'ll not bother with the pain - nice one N
January 20th, 2019 11:29
Michael Edwards said:
Not sure I could manage all women these days so I\'ll not bother with the pain - nice one N
January 20th, 2019 11:29
Painfully Yours
Neville said:
It can mean anything you so wish orchidee thanks
January 20th, 2019 10:13
Neville said:
It can mean anything you so wish orchidee thanks
January 20th, 2019 10:13
Painfully Yours
orchidee said:
This could be swoony in one sense. Is this the \'pain\' sense you meant? lol
January 20th, 2019 09:05
orchidee said:
This could be swoony in one sense. Is this the \'pain\' sense you meant? lol
January 20th, 2019 09:05
Painfully Yours
Neville said:
I think I should thank you, so I shall.. thank you...
January 20th, 2019 05:56
Neville said:
I think I should thank you, so I shall.. thank you...
January 20th, 2019 05:56
Painfully Yours
dusk arising said:
To attract game one learns to play the game.
January 20th, 2019 05:48
dusk arising said:
To attract game one learns to play the game.
January 20th, 2019 05:48
Before Leaving
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
An excellent write which I enjoyed reading! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
January 19th, 2019 08:00
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
An excellent write which I enjoyed reading! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
January 19th, 2019 08:00
My Lady Pleases Me This Way
dusk arising said:
The eye of the beholder sees as it sees.
What is it which makes one persons heart race yet leaves another cold. Individuality! Lovely poem revealing for you some of the things which turn you on - yet would not stir many others.
Enigma that is woman again arises in your work.
January 18th, 2019 13:44
dusk arising said:
The eye of the beholder sees as it sees.
What is it which makes one persons heart race yet leaves another cold. Individuality! Lovely poem revealing for you some of the things which turn you on - yet would not stir many others.
Enigma that is woman again arises in your work.
January 18th, 2019 13:44
My Lady Pleases Me This Way
Goldfinch60 said:
She would please me that way Neville.
January 18th, 2019 13:34
Goldfinch60 said:
She would please me that way Neville.
January 18th, 2019 13:34
My Lady Pleases Me This Way
Fay Slimm. said:
The read set my senses a-tingle dear Neville so I suspect your verse classification be jus\' right !! Good work again.
January 18th, 2019 10:58
Fay Slimm. said:
The read set my senses a-tingle dear Neville so I suspect your verse classification be jus\' right !! Good work again.
January 18th, 2019 10:58
My Lady Pleases Me This Way
orchidee said:
Heehee! But yes, I might meet her, without the ciggies. Is she Fag-ash Lil, as they say?
January 18th, 2019 10:53
orchidee said:
Heehee! But yes, I might meet her, without the ciggies. Is she Fag-ash Lil, as they say?
January 18th, 2019 10:53
My Lady Pleases Me This Way
Michael Edwards said:
She would please me if it wasn\'t for the stale cigarette smell on her breathe. Fine write.
January 18th, 2019 06:26
Michael Edwards said:
She would please me if it wasn\'t for the stale cigarette smell on her breathe. Fine write.
January 18th, 2019 06:26
Turquoise
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Neville, colours as with life can be seen differently through different peoples eyes.
January 18th, 2019 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Neville, colours as with life can be seen differently through different peoples eyes.
January 18th, 2019 01:24
Turquoise
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I was gonna write something similar. Erm, I held me breath for 24 hours (???), and someone said that too: \'You\'re the strangest shade of blue\'. Pity I can\'t write it now, due to a small fact - I\'m dead. lol.
January 17th, 2019 10:48
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I was gonna write something similar. Erm, I held me breath for 24 hours (???), and someone said that too: \'You\'re the strangest shade of blue\'. Pity I can\'t write it now, due to a small fact - I\'m dead. lol.
January 17th, 2019 10:48
Turquoise
Michael Edwards said:
Is orange red or is it yellow?
Is turquoise blue or is it green?
Well it all depends depends on the predominant pigment. If both pigments are of equal tonal value then it could be argued that they are colours in their own right but since neither are primary colours are they really colours at all? You should see the debates on the art websites along these lines - oh the trials and tribulations of being an artist. Anyway it\'s a fine write Neville.
January 17th, 2019 10:38
Michael Edwards said:
Is orange red or is it yellow?
Is turquoise blue or is it green?
Well it all depends depends on the predominant pigment. If both pigments are of equal tonal value then it could be argued that they are colours in their own right but since neither are primary colours are they really colours at all? You should see the debates on the art websites along these lines - oh the trials and tribulations of being an artist. Anyway it\'s a fine write Neville.
January 17th, 2019 10:38
Turquoise
dusk arising said:
Loves dance, loves game, poignant when we have to follow someone elses rules.
January 17th, 2019 09:04
dusk arising said:
Loves dance, loves game, poignant when we have to follow someone elses rules.
January 17th, 2019 09:04
Turquoise
Fay Slimm. said:
The colour of blue in your write called Turquoise gave me a walk down memory lane Neville - - a strange shade indeed when love has to be hidden - a beguiling read.
January 17th, 2019 05:49
Fay Slimm. said:
The colour of blue in your write called Turquoise gave me a walk down memory lane Neville - - a strange shade indeed when love has to be hidden - a beguiling read.
January 17th, 2019 05:49
Turquoise
sylviasearcher said:
Oh this is a beautiful piece.
I had a discussion the other day about how green was turquoise.
I had to accept in the end it was blue.
January 17th, 2019 05:35
sylviasearcher said:
Oh this is a beautiful piece.
I had a discussion the other day about how green was turquoise.
I had to accept in the end it was blue.
January 17th, 2019 05:35
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