Countless Indiscretions
sylviasearcher said:

I made my mind up. Don\'t ask though.

It flowed like you were trying to gently persuade.

January 31st, 2019 02:35

Countless Indiscretions
psychofemale said:

nice one :) thank you for sharing

January 30th, 2019 17:57

Countless Indiscretions
orchidee said:

Is this a poem about flying lessons? I dunno these things. I\'ve lost the plot of the poem I reckon! lol.

January 30th, 2019 12:45

Countless Indiscretions
Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

As I said in another comment, I DO enjoy your writings...and this is no exception!
No declarations on your part, I know!
I must be honest and say some are relatable; but as you stated, “Regardless of those...”
All’s well on the home front!😉

~Laura~


January 30th, 2019 12:25

Countless Indiscretions
Neville said:

intriguing is good enough for me.. many thanks my friend.... Neville

January 30th, 2019 11:20

Might She by Chance be a Witch
Fay Slimm. said:

Another shared moment of question and answer with sensuous phrasing to catch a witch-lady perhaps - - hope her spell lasts forever with happiest endings

January 28th, 2019 17:32

Might She by Chance be a Witch
orchidee said:

Ooh what\'s she up in this fine write N? I got no eye of newt or wing of bat for ya, if she is a witch!

January 28th, 2019 07:05

Might She by Chance be a Witch
dusk arising said:

Bewitched by her femininity you have been sir! And such a wonderful spell to fall beneath, and to rise beneath, each again and again.
One such told me women disliked her though i found her quite exciting. Never a broom nor housework found her, there must have been magic afoot.
An lovely entertaining read today which took me places of yesteryear.

January 28th, 2019 05:04

Might She by Chance be a Witch
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write about a very special lady to you Neville. Are you still bewitched by her?

January 28th, 2019 04:12

What We Got
sylviasearcher said:

Thought provoking.

At first I read this like a person comparing himself to another, differing perspectives that cannot be reconciled. Though the I seemed supreme. The I seemed worthy. The I had something to lose.

Then I read it like a conversation between self and societal norms and judgements. How society tries to bend people to fit preconceived ideas and notions, until individuation is gone and then there is nothing left of the self.

Then of course I thought of two inner voice fighting amongst themselves.

Thought-provoking.

January 28th, 2019 04:08

What We Got
dusk arising said:

As the psychiatrist told me \'speaking to your second personality, i\'d get out now whilst you still can\'.
I asked him for a second opinion.

January 27th, 2019 14:17

What Happened to the Painter
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

How we long for the days before we know
Ignorance truly is bliss
well captured Neville loving your work
ndrew

January 27th, 2019 07:57

What We Got
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Well Neville great wrte made me think of Joni Mitchells song Clouds Very reflective and hard hittings but different times.. Well done you

January 27th, 2019 06:26

What We Got
orchidee said:

A fine write Neville. OK - I\'ll still want ya. I won\'t leave ya. I\'ll stay and sing to ya, mind ya. Would ya rather I left?!

January 27th, 2019 03:08

When They Took Away the Tumour
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write, your love shines through your words Neville.

January 27th, 2019 02:36