Comments received on poems by Neville



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Goldfinch60 said:

Like Michael, mine are written on screen except when I am in the Coffee Bar where I write them in a notebook ready to type out.
I do have a file on the computer called \'Ideas for Poems\' where I have started poems and not completed them, I migh soon have to get an external drive to kep them on.

December 12th, 2018 01:23

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Michael Edwards said:

I write all mine on screen although I do gather ideas and word associations which come to me from time to time in a notebook. Anyway this worked out pretty darn good.

December 11th, 2018 10:42

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orchidee said:

And yes, now you\'ve filled this page!
Answer: Erm, nope. I economise on rubbish. Never throw out a poem. Are they THAT good?! heehee.

December 11th, 2018 07:13

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sylviasearcher said:

Unwritten yet known
Treasures evading capture
Sensed by me alone

???

December 11th, 2018 07:08

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Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

Well...
your pen certainly filled this page!
Blank page...no more!
I truly enjoyed the read!
Thank you for sharing!

~Laura~



December 11th, 2018 06:53

A Very Special Day
Goldfinch60 said:

Those Special Days are so wonderful, as I get older those special days seem to increase.

December 11th, 2018 01:19

A Very Special Day
sylviasearcher said:

Hope you have a special birthday! 😊

December 10th, 2018 07:16

A Very Special Day
Lorna said:

Great day share for us all Neville - happy birthday!

December 10th, 2018 07:08

A Very Special Day
orchidee said:

I thought ya was gonna write about ya birthday, with that title - today?! lol.

December 10th, 2018 06:57

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Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - the blissful feeling of sexual contentment this read with its honest journey through passion\'s abandon tells an intriguing tale in well chosen phrases - if only a chair could talk eh Neville ? A haunting piece of gentle erotica.

December 9th, 2018 04:14

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LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Very very nice work here...it is EROTIC AND PUT TOGETHER TASTEFULLY ALL AT ONCE...AWESOME JOB

December 9th, 2018 03:52

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sylviasearcher said:

The last two lines are very powerful

December 9th, 2018 02:54

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orchidee said:

What\'s going on there?! lol.

December 9th, 2018 02:38

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Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful passionate, sensual words Neville.

December 9th, 2018 02:34

How Far Do You Really Want to Go
Goldfinch60 said:

Another good intriguing write Neville, that passion is there.

December 9th, 2018 01:58

How Far Do You Really Want to Go
Michael Edwards said:

Enjoyed this and especially the bit of mystique in the last line.

December 8th, 2018 11:29

How Far Do You Really Want to Go
orchidee said:

Same thing happened to me, despite me saying I only wanted to go as far as the shops on a No.7 bus! heehee. Swoon!

December 8th, 2018 08:27

A Travelling Man
sylviasearcher said:

I think I know a girl just like that, except the baking bread...

December 7th, 2018 08:54

Appetite for Words
sylviasearcher said:

I think I have this relentless appetite for words...

December 7th, 2018 08:47

What Do I Want From You
sylviasearcher said:

The repetition works well to create a sense of longing. Though I don\'t think I have experienced the things you write of. Beyond the folly of my own imagination.

December 7th, 2018 07:12

What Do I Want From You
Michael Edwards said:

When love departs - thankfully I married my first love and we are still together and still in love but nonetheless I recognise this fine write.

December 7th, 2018 04:33

What Do I Want From You
Fay Slimm. said:

So many intimate memories belong to those left alone when love goes away - - a poignant feel to this read Neville.

December 7th, 2018 04:02

What Do I Want From You
orchidee said:

A fine write N. Erm is this about Polo mints? heehee.

December 7th, 2018 03:38

No Pillow Required
Goldfinch60 said:

Very passionate write, certainly no pillow is required.

December 7th, 2018 02:25

No Pillow Required
Michael Edwards said:

Yes a great write - we are waiting for that Part 2.

December 6th, 2018 13:51

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orchidee said:

I\'m always swooning. Maybe it should change to 50+ , for me anyway! lol. I\'ve a got an 18+ \'watchdog\'. Fido. He barks to warn me of anything swoony. He reads the poems first, of course! Much more of this from me and we\'ll all go barmy. lol.

December 6th, 2018 11:45

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🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow my hubby always prefers me to pillows so this creative imaginative poem of love reminds me of that and it is fantastic to read. Kudos.

Pleez do add a comment/thoughts/ review on my newest poem too.

December 6th, 2018 07:29

No Pillow Required
sylviasearcher said:

My senses found it very satisfying

December 6th, 2018 04:32

No Pillow Required
sylviasearcher said:

Good

December 6th, 2018 04:07

Cova
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good intriguing write - what might have been.

December 6th, 2018 00:47



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