Comments received on poems by Neville



Let’s Call That Day a Week
orchidee said:

If you\'re gonna talk about those things, I\'m gonna swoon! heehee.

June 18th, 2019 01:49

Let’s Call That Day a Week
Goldfinch60 said:

May that one more day be willed with wonder joy and love.

June 18th, 2019 01:28

Let’s Call That Day a Week
Michael Edwards said:

Just keep talking - if only our politicians would just do that - better still if only they only would set aside all self-denial. Keep talking but more importantly keep listening.

June 18th, 2019 01:05

Out of Sight
Goldfinch60 said:

Those thought will be forever with you though.

June 18th, 2019 00:14

Out of Sight
Suresh said:

Those words composed are out of sight
Those words composed are true delight

You have been doing this for quite some time.

June 17th, 2019 14:44

Out of Sight
Michael Edwards said:

Another original write Neville - good work.

June 17th, 2019 10:32

Out of Sight
dusk arising said:

Were we all able to read each others thoughts then your writing would be other worldly.
Sadly your words carry the truth.

Oh the joys of springtime.

June 17th, 2019 05:50

Out of Sight
orchidee said:

You can write to me! I\'ll even pay for the stamp. You can think of me too. Just don\'t think of my singing! lol.

June 17th, 2019 05:02

Out of the Blue
Goldfinch60 said:

In life you need to let go of that which has hurt you as the good in life will always outweigh the bad.

June 17th, 2019 00:07

Out of the Blue
SerenWise said:

Very elegantly written

June 16th, 2019 23:46

Out of the Blue
dusk arising said:

I\'ll quote some famous words to respond to your fine sweet and sour words today:-
“When you are joyous, look deep into your heart and you shall find it is only that which has given you sorrow that is giving you joy.”
― Kahlil Gibran, The Prophet

June 16th, 2019 08:59

Out of the Blue
orchidee said:

A fine write Neville.

June 16th, 2019 08:17

On Being Human
FineB said:

Hello Neville,

An awesome poem and incredibly vivid.

Being human is a complicated aspect of life itself.

Keep on writing
FineB

June 16th, 2019 03:02

Old Poets
Goldfinch60 said:

Those words of poets live for ever in the minds of those who read them. Reading your words Neville consigns them to the glory of history, never to be forgotten.

June 16th, 2019 00:28

Versal Law
Suresh said:

Eroticism requires no translation,
whether written, spoken or acted,
where two bodies are entangled,
silence is its own composition

June 15th, 2019 15:46

Old Poets
Suresh said:

So now we shall read you in publications only - though we graduated in the same year, agewise, I have a long way to go before even be called a poet

June 15th, 2019 12:31

Old Poets
dusk arising said:

Life - a history lesson.

Without a history, whats to write about.

Long may you make more history Neville.

June 15th, 2019 10:56

Old Poets
orchidee said:

Was ya around in 1066?!

June 15th, 2019 09:23

Old Poets
kevin browne said:

I\'ll have to agree with Michael, your poetry is quite exciting. I pretend to be a poet, but up against the immortals I am just a whisperer with a pen.

June 15th, 2019 08:51

Old Poets
Michael Edwards said:

Regardless of age you\'re a real poet Neville.

June 15th, 2019 08:07

Before I Go Blind
Goldfinch60 said:

Very intriguing write, may they all come within you sight but be careful of seizing the sun it is a little warm.

June 14th, 2019 23:55

Before I Go Blind
kevin browne said:

Provoking indeed. With such deepness and with such few words has opened up a whole new lot of worlds to dwell upon for people who read this bewildering piece.

June 14th, 2019 18:36

Before I Go Blind
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

I daren\'t look too hard... there may be nothing to see...
Great write intriguing yes
I hope you get your moons most fairest daughter

June 14th, 2019 12:37

Before I Go Blind
dusk arising said:

But have u ever dabbled in the rings of saturn? Or the perverse pleasures of Uranus.
Best sampled before one is accompanied by an obligatory white stick.

June 14th, 2019 10:58

Before I Go Blind
Suresh said:

I keep reading, but can\'t get into your mindset......
Blindness for sure, if stare directly at the sun,
but then 😟😟😟

June 14th, 2019 10:18

Before I Go Blind
Fay Slimm. said:

Your write for once mystifies me - - I can see the sad state before blindness sets in but those final two lines - well please educate me mon ami - - or am I so naive as to miss the obvious....... x Fay

June 14th, 2019 04:52

Once an Item
Goldfinch60 said:

Those memories both good and bad will be with you although they may be altered with time.
The line \"Today’s rust was yesterdays chrome\" was very telling.

June 14th, 2019 00:30

Once an Item
orchidee said:

I gotta remember stuff from about 1066 at least. I woz there!

June 13th, 2019 14:15

Once an Item
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha - - that\'s memory getting fainter the longer it\'s not useful methinks my friend - - lips on lips can fade into oblivion - - - yet sometimes the taste remains...............Fay

June 13th, 2019 08:33

Once an Item
Fay Slimm. said:

Some unique phrasing and more than good rhyming in this strong reminder Nev. - - Once an item though now rusted memory resurrects many moments to chew over again. Love the pathos in those two last lines ........ Fay

June 13th, 2019 07:48



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